Thoughts of Guilt: Chapter 7: A Secret Revealed

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In this chapter I had to revise a little bit about what I did in my preview for this book about the History of Hyrith's dragon.  So that might be a little different, just to let you know.


This chapter is a longer one, but I had some much I wanted to add in this chapter that I did not want to cut it somewhere that would make it feel choppy.  So this is just a longer chapter than most of mine.

(Even though most of my chapters are long anyway XD)


I hope you guys enjoy this chapter!


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Thoughts of Guilt


Chapter 7


A Secret Revealed


          After a few minutes had gone by, Asvord, Annabeth, and I arrived at The Great Hall.  The commotion from the feast is loud enough that we could hear it all the way at the foot of the stairs.  I motioned to Fredrick to go find the other dragons of my friends who were probably nearby the Hall.  Once up the stairs, we entered the Hall to see and hear the feasting going on.  It was so loud Asvord and Annabeth did not hear me when I said, “I wonder where our friends are at?”


          Before I could ask it again, we all saw a wave in the back from my mother showing us where they were at.  By the time we got to the back of The Great Hall, it did not seem as loud.  The conversations from the other vikings were inaudible because so many were going on at the same time that you could not make any of it out.  You had to be right next to the person to hear what they were saying.  As I said before, the back of the Hall was as bad.  While I was walking back, several vikings and other friends of the family stopped and said that they were glad to hear and now see I was alright; some of which included Stoick and Gobber.


          “He’s alive!” Thoreous said with a teasing, but yet mocking in a way tone.


          I acknowledged Thoreous with a hand shake and pat on the back.  Everybody started to stand up, but I just motioned them to sit back down as I sat down too.  We were all sitting around a large, round table where all of my friends had been sitting there along with also my mother.  Everybody asked how I was and how I was feeling, I replied that I was rather sore in my legs and still had a bruise on my head which did not hurt unless touched.  Other than that I was fine.


          After I had answered their questions, “Now time for me to ask a question:  So who ended up in the Top 3, yesterday?”


          Cazi “choked” on her drink and started, “Oh I am so mad right now.  So mad.”


          “What?” I quizzed.  “About the race?  Sorry, but I was in ‘deep’ thought the last lap and didn’t know what happened.”


          Everyone chuckled.


          Tory added, “At least your sense of humor is still intact.”


          Asvord added herself, “I don’t know if that is such a good thing.”  She winked me.  I just shook my head.


          Cazi continued, “After I had just missed you while on Electic I stopped and immediately looked back for you.  I saw Annabeth come out of nowhere and go after you, Jarl.  So I knew you would be fine.  I looked back up the track and saw Ohmarr look back but continue on with the black sheep.  I was so mad.  I wanted Ohmarr to lose so bad now, that I chased out after him in hopes that I could knock the black sheep out of his grasp.  Knocking the sheep out of his hands was small beans compared to what I really wanted to do to that guy.  It took me nearly the whole lap to catch up with him, all the while trying to have Electic shoot him out of the sky, within the rules of Dragon Racing.  I slowed him down quite a bit, though was still unable to get a ‘hit’ on him.  The pink Nadder passed us while half way through the last lap.  I finally caught up to him, but was running out of time.  I got one good hit on his Zippleback, but all that did was get him off balance only for a moment before scoring the black sheep.”


          I started thinking out loud, “So if Ohmarr scored the black sheep, he ended up with, uh…”


          “Twelve points,” Hattori answered.  “I had no clue what had happened behind me.  I just thought everything was fine and continued on with the race.  I knew I was ahead of everybody else, so I could at least score one more sheep in case you, Jarl, or Cazi scored a sheep; in which case we would have been tied.  I never liked ties so I wanted to be sure I was ahead of you two, so I scored my sheep and I ended up with eleven.”


          I asked the question, “So who got the last spot in the Top 3.”


          “Brace yourself,” Cazi said, still with a disgusted tone.  “The girl on the pink Deadly Nadder did.”


          “What?” I said shocked.  “But how.. what…-”


          “I’ll tell you what happened,” Cazi said.  “Because I was hounding Ohmarr to drop the black sheep, I didn’t pick up any sheep on the last lap.  I could have picked one up and scored one before Ohmarr scored his; but I was so mad at Ohmarr that I didn’t bother with the other sheep and just hounded him to drop the black sheep.”


          I guessed the rest, “So you ended up with nine, I still had nine, and the girl scored one more which gave her nine.  So the tie was broken because the girl got more than you did in the last round?”


          “Yes,” Cazi replied.  “I scored thirteen in the last round by a black sheep.  The girl with the pink Nadder had fourteen, but did not score the black sheep as another family member did.  So all of her sheep were regular sheep and practically blew out her family in the ‘sheep scored column’.”


          “Man,” I finished with the end of the subject.  “That was overall a bummer of a race.  Me getting a DNF, Ohmarr actually ‘winning’ a race for a change, Cazi not getting the last spot because she was mad at Ohmarr, which I probably would have done the same thing in your place, and an unknown getting the last spot for the Championship race.  Man,” I just shook my head.


          “Well to change subjects, slightly,” I began again.  “How’d the race go after the second semifinal?”


          Garth spoke up first, “They ended up postponing it until another day, because of your accident, Jarl.  Nobody felt like racing after that.  So they thought about doing before the Championship race tomorrow.”


          “Hmm, okay,” I replied.


          Just then a thunderous hammering noise came to our ears.


          Bang, bang, bang!


          “Okay, alright everyone, settle down for a second,” ordered Stoick from the central part of the Hall.  “First and foremost, I’d like everyone to know that Jarl Mollerson is here with us tonight.”


          Stoick paused for a moment to point me out; a round of applause with some hoots, hollers, and cheers ensued.  I gave a wave to everyone in acknowledgment.


          “We were so glad to hear that you were going to be alright, Jarl,” proclaimed Stoick.  “We are now overjoyed that you could make it tonight this soon after the accident.”


          Some more cheers came.


          “But alas, here we are,” Stoick continued.  “Except for the accident, we have seen some excellent Dragon Racing.  I have listened to a lot of friends and neighbors and I have come to the conclusion that this has been some of the best Dragon Racing Berk has seen.  But before the Championship race, this in between day is not only for the rest and the preparation for dragon and rider, but also as a celebration for some of the best racing.  Have fun tonight and let’s eat!”


          A huge cheer followed as several vikings got up from their seats to walk over and get in line for their food.  As some of my friends had gotten up too, I saw Annabeth grab Cazi’s arm and said something to her.  I could not quite hear what exactly she said, but if I read her lips right she was going to tell her what has been wrong with her.  As she and Cazi were walking away, she actually looked at me and told me to follow.  I gave a slight nod upward to let her know I was coming.


          As I was walking over to follow them, mother stopped me and asked, “Where’s your father, I thought he was coming with you guys?”


          “He was,” I answered.  “But he said he something to attend to first.”


          “Okay,” she replied.  Something did not seem right, but I could not put my finger on it.


          I caught back up to Cazi and Annabeth who and exited the Hall through a side door where the dragons are usually located when their riders enter the Hall.  Cazi was next to Electic and Annabeth was next to Star Scream, both the dragons were next to each other.  So in which case, Cazi and Annabeth were next to each other too.  I walked over to my dragon as well, who happened to be over there too next to the Skrill and Stormcutter.


          “I just told Cazi, in a condensed version, what has been going on, Jarl,” Annabeth told me as soon as I got over to them.  “I want to eventually tell everyone else, but I was wondering if you two could keep a secret for now as I want you two to help me figure this out.”


          “Sure, Annabeth,” Cazi responded.  “I’m just glad it was not something I did or you did or something like that that was getting in between us.”


          “Sure,” I agreed.


          “Great.  Could we start tomorrow morning?” Annabeth said, with a smile and a happier tone, a tone I have not heard for a long time because of what she has been going through.


          I answered, “That’ll be fine.  I’m not in the Championship race, so it will be fine; although I want to see the race, the race won’t be until later tomorrow afternoon.”


          Cazi sighed big and said, “I’m glad we finally know at least what’s wrong.  I was getting very agitated about this.”


          Electic nodded and shifted his weight on his feet, but in doing so knock over some nearby crates next to The Great Hall’s outside wall.  This startled him to the point he flies away.


          Cazi chuckled and then “smiled”, “Heh, Heh… I ‘love’ my dragon,” her smiled then disappeared as she said it sarcastically.  Looked like to me this was not the first time this has happened with her and Electic.


          All three of us entered back into The Great Hall and found the rest of our friends had their meal and was about ready to start.


          “Hey you guys!  Hurry and get your meals,” urged Cullan.  “Hyrith was about ready to start telling where he has been.”


          Hyrith stated, “Yeah, it’s going to be the best story you’ve heard in a long time.  I guarantee it.”


          “Alright then,” I answered.


          The three of us, Cazi, Annabeth, and I, walked as quickly as we could, without running as there was not enough room, to the feast line.  Oh, food for thought, pardon the pun, if you ever go running through a crowded Great Hall and trip over someone’s leg, a Hall fight will result from it.  Not a fun thing to go through, especially when you are the one that is trying not to get hit, but ends up getting hit then hits back and just makes the fight worse.


          Cazi, Annabeth, and I got our meals and headed back over to our friends table.


          “Whoa, Jarl,” Tory said as I sat down her on my right.  “I hope Hyrith’s story is that long,” she added pointing to my plates.


          On my plates were three chicken drumsticks; two perch fish sandwiches with cabbage, tomatoes, and my family’s special sauce; a couple slices of yak meat; two big helpings of corn; some mashed potatoes with brown gravy; green beans; and two apples.


          “Well I haven’t eaten in over day yah know,” I replied.  “But I usually get both my firsts and my seconds at once so I don’t have to get up a second time; especially since Hyrith is going to start.”


          Jack then stood up, “That’s actually a good idea.  Be right back.”


          I chuckled as Thoreous, Pat, Meen, Sapp, Meen, and Garth followed him.


          “And the suspense greatens,” said Hyrith “mysteriously”.


          A few minutes later they all returned.  I looked down at my food, paused for a second, and started eating.


          “Are you all ready for my story?” Hyrith asked.


          Every replied, “Yes,” or nodded.


          Hyrith began by saying, “I found nothing!”


          Everyone looked up at Hyrith, including me, and just stared at him with several of us with our fork still in our hand about to take a bite.


          Hyrith started to smile and laugh, “I’m joking.  I couldn’t resist doing that you guys were so waiting for my story; I just had to do it.”


          Everyone was like, “Okay, alright, you got us… Now continue with the real story!”


          Hyrith started with telling why he left Berk in the first place.  The reason he left was because of The Golden Isles.  Something has always bugged him and his family about that place.  Ever since Hyrith was gifted by his father a golden nugget that turned out to be a Deadly Nadder egg, the whole family has wondered about that place.  Hyrith got the “nugget” egg while he was very young, but when it hatched it was quite a surprise to him.  Since Berk had yet to make peace with the dragons, Hyrith scared the golden dragon Deadly Nadder away.  The dragon kept coming back though, but only for one month out of the year.  And every time it would come back, it was always at sunrise.  The Deadly Nadder would keep avoiding capture or being killed by the vikings of Berk, and then would leave.  Every year the dragon kept getting bigger and older as did Hyrith.


          When peace was finally made with the dragons, Hyrith and his family wondered if the golden Deadly Nadder would come back; as it had not come back for a few years.  A couple days after the defeat of the Red Death, The Golden Isle’s Golden Nadder came back.  But this time, it was not attempted at being captured, Hyrith ended up training it.  He got pointers from Astrid and a few others in the process.  Hyrith was about ready to name his dragon, after training it some, and named, “Sunny”.  Hyrith was trying to think of a better name for his dragon, until one day Astrid pointed it out to him that his Nadder was a girl, not a boy.  So Hyrith named The Golden Nadder, “Sun Rose”.  Their favorite game together was, “Catch the Chicken”; though sometimes the chicken would not make it past one game.


          Mostly everyone knew the story about how Hyrith got Sun Rose, but some did not know so that is why he told it again.  While he retold that story, some other vikings, including Hiccup and some of the others and come over to listen.  Hyrith officially began tell his story here, “A couple of weeks after Sun Rose had come back the first time after the Red Death.. uh, well death, she wanted to leave again… but while I was still on her.  I had been training her for those weeks and we were out on a training flight when she tried to take off with him.  My dragon attempted several times to leave, some attempts even without me.  It was decided by my family, mostly by me strongly suggesting it, that I leave and let Sun Rose take me where she wants to go.  That was about two years ago.”


          I thought to myself, “I thought it was three or four… guess I was wrong.  Time seems to fly faster sometimes.”


          Hyrith continued, “I had always thought she was trying to go back to The Golden Isles, and I was right.  It took us nearly the whole day and into the night after I left Berk to reach her destination; which turned out to be The Golden Isles.  When I landed on what seemed like the main island, Sun Rose flew off as soon as I got off.  I knew she would just leave me there, so I knew she’d be back.  Good thing I grabbed my shield before Sun Rose flew off with everything else.”


          Everyone who was listening chuckled and laughed some.  By now a larger crowd had gathered, among which was Stoick and my mother.  Hyrith realized who was listening and paused for a second.  I do not know if he was fazed by it or actually maybe even liked it.  Hyrith gave me a glancing look with the eyes.  I then wondered if he was going to reveal something that I actually knew as he has told me before, but wanted me to keep it secret.


          Hyrith went on, “There was what looked to be a rather large village nearby.  By the time I entered the village, it felt like it was three times as large as Berk.  The village was deserted, but seemed like it had just been used.  I kept walking through the village and found a central building that looked to be in the town’s square, or in this case, circle.  I entered the building and found it to be similar to The Great Hall, but not quite.  It was smaller, though taller at the same time.  I searched the building and found some books about dragons in a side room.  You will not believe what I found it the first book I picked up?”


          If the phrase “books about dragons” did not get everybody’s attention, the next thing that Hyrith diffidently did.  Hyrith waited for some suspenseful-ness moments and answered his own question, “When I turn the first cover then the first page of the first book I picked out, there was a drawing of what looked to me to be a Night Fury.”


          Everybody gasped and was shocked by what Hyrith just said.  I tried to act the same way as to not draw attention to myself as… as I actually knew this already.


          Hiccup came closer and spoke up very clearly to ask the question that was on everyone’s mind, “Wah.. wait a minute.  Are you saying that on these Golden Isles.. is.. is a book about Night Furies?”

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2 things:

1) you said I "gagged" on my grink. I think you meant "choked". :)

2) Electic didnt fly away becuase of the noise, but it was hilarious anyway



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Yeah, I couldn't think of

Yeah, I couldn't think of another word.

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Electic shocked my subject

Although I would gag if ibsaw something disgusting


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This chapter's pretty good! I would like to point some things out though, just FYI.

Some of the things are incorrect, but you don't have to explain them, it's fine. It'll just not be in the universe of my fan-fics. =3

It's ok. It's sorta my fault, since I didn't tell you in the first place.

1.) Sun Rose as found on the cliff of the golden isles. Johan picked it up, and Hyrith found it out in the hatchery

2.) Hyrith was 15 when he arrived at berk. He left the Golden Isles when he was 12, which was "Journey to Berk."

3.) Hyrith arrived after Drago's defeat. He's new, and he doesn't really know the stories of Berk, like for instance, the Screaming Death, which he met after the incident and named it "Banshee", not knowing that it was the same dragon that attacked Berk. In other words, Stoick was dead.

4.) The reason why Sun Rose left was because she went to visit her sis, Moonstone. Also, Sun Rose LEAVES for only a month, not stays for only a month.

5.) Technically, the Nightfury thing is true, but they won't be in large numbers. It's the Shadefuries that are sort of common, the ancestor of the Nightfury. (The Nightfury is a subspecies of the Shadefury, because some Shadefuries broke off from the order of the queen and started having families on their own, resulting the evolution of the Nightfury.)

6.) Hyrith's family is dead. Every single member of the Golden Isles apart from Hyrith are dead, because of the queen's charge on The Golden Isles. Hyrith lived on the Golden Isles before the attack of the Shadows.

7.) More of a special note than a change: There are a diverse species of draogns that live near the Golden Isles, like the Eggknapper, Balodoid, Razorclaw, Stormbreaker, Buzzkill, those sort of things. The dragons on berk wern't that common there, for instance, the Zippleback is considered rare in those parts.


Overall, AWESOME STORY AND CLIFFHANGER =3, but just some minor changes in detail. ;)

Again, you don't have to change the story if you already did the mistake. It'll mess up your story, and I don't like that. Good luck! ;)



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My Windsong, Timelaspe, or in other words, "Blue". 

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Neontaze and Nightshredder,

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Clan: The Phantom Family

Gender: Male


Nadder: The Golden Nadder (Aka: Sun Rose) - Female -


  Sun Rose was my first dragon in the academy. She was actually from the Golden Isles, collected by Johan when he saw her (in egg form), hanging off a cliff. He caught her, and took her to Berk. She was my main dragon, and still is, in the races. She also helped out in leveling up the others, by helping them do the quests untill the very end, so they would get the XP.


Really Playful, Loyal, Doesn't like night time.

Likes to Eat:

Eggs, Eggs, and more Eggs.

Favorite thing to Do:

Play with the other Dragons, her favorite game is Fetch the Chicken!

Intresting Fact:

Every year, she flies away for 1 month, as she also likes to spend time on her own.

The Golden Nadder/Sun Rose by AniuRavenwolf! Thanks!

Thunderdrum: Sonarus (Aka: Sonus) - Male - 


  My second dragon, Sonarus was sorta of a pain. Since from when he was born, he was very wild and crazy, and even more hyper. He loved to jump on people's shoulders and roar in their ears, then run away for me to apolagize. Sonus now loves to steal my sheep, and hide them in the forest, but he is always there where I need him to be. He's BFFs with Thunder Quake, and, oh yeah, he is protective of me.


Wild, Crazy, Protective, and Loyal (Most of the time).

Likes to Eat:

Perch (I still don't understand why.)

Favorite thing to do:

Hide my sheep and pretend he didn't do it.

Intresting Fact:

He said he hates to play Thunder Run...but I can tell he's faking. How? I just know. :)

Whispering Death: Thunder Quake (Aka: Da King, Da Racing Champ) - Male -


  I found his egg in the tunnels, and Hiccup let me keep him. When he hatched, he looked at me for one second, and then, well, decided he wanted to be free. He jumped out of the stables, and started slithering to the forest. I chased him, freeing him from bushes, rescuing him from drowning, and TRYING to feed him when he was hungry. One day, a wild smokebreath appeared, and for some reason, Da King thought he was, "The King", and decided to take him on. He started dealing blows to it, but the smokebreath won in the end. Before it laid the final blow, though. I jumped and used myself as a human sheild. It hurt, but I was fine. I called in Sonarus, and he saved us. He put his trust in me, and I have helped him ever since.


Brave, doesn't know his limits...yet.

Likes to eat:

Sheep Steak.

Favorite thing to do:

Drill underground, and camp there, with me trying to find him. Also, play fighting with Sonarus.

Intresting Fact:

Well, he's trying to become a titian wing, but it ain't going to well so far.

By Wutend Bonfire. Thanks!

Scauldron: Waterspout (Aka: Spouty, The Heir of Frost and Pyra) - Female -


  One day, I went to Johan's ship. There, I found an egg with a burn and ice on it. This was Frost and Pyra's lost egg! I quickly traded it with Johan, and then I found out that she was sick. I ran home, and placed her on the hearth. 3 days passed. Nothing. Thinking she was dead, I sadly sighed, and put my hand on her egg. Suddenly, a bright golden glow spread around her, and she was born!


Likes to act cute, loyal, and sometimes very overprotective.

Likes to eat:


Favorite thing to do:

Spit at my face, and act innocent.

Intresting fact:

She is my main dragon when it comes to quests and Fan-Fics.

Waterspout by TildenWolfGirl, themasterplan47 and Dustydaybreak. She looks really awesome! =D

Gronkle: Meatball (Aka: Tomato, Cheese Head, Ball Boy) - Male -


  I found him in the forest, as a baby. He was crying and whimpering, but I picked him up. He looked at me, and tried to smile. He then yawned, and fell to sleep. I figured he was lost or abandoned, so I took him in. He is addicted to any red or yellow rocks, and will do anything to get them.


Friendly and Playful

Favorite Food:

Yellow and Red Rocks

Favorite Thing to do:

Sleep, Eat, Sleep, Eat, Sleep, Eat...

Intresting Fact:

He has a quartz tooth in the way back, for he broke it while trying to eat my diamonds.

Nightmare: Greek Fire (Aka: Greek Flame, Comet) - Male -


  A relative of Hookfang, with all his personalities. Need I say more?


Aggressive, sometimes a Bully, and secretly cares for us.

Favorite Food:


Favorite thing to do:

Disobey me...

Intresting fact:

He is Hookfang's mother's brother's son.

Thunderdrum: Eagle Ray (Aka: Booma, Sea Dream, Pearl) - Female -


  On new year's eve, I found out that Sonarus was missing! I asked the others to search for him, but he was not found! Depressed, I sadly went home, hoping that he was safe. In the morning, I set out with Waterspout, hoping to find Sonarus. After 5 hours of searching, I spotted something green, and something blue side by side. I patted Waterspout on the side, and we dove in. To my suprise, it was Sonarus and another Thunderdrum! Studying them for a bit, I found out that the blue one was Sonarus's mate! I tamed her, and since then, we had a new addition to my family.


Playful, Loyal to Sonarus and Me

Favorite Food:

Grilled perch with tomato toppings

Favorite thing to do:

Stick with Sonarus

Intresting Fact:

Some say she's a relative of Thornado...

Zippleback: Sunrise and Sunset (Aka: Dawn and Dusk, Pimp and Pump)

- Male -


  Kinda weird... Ok, so, I went to trader Johan's eggs, and found a dragon egg chest. I asked him could I buy it, since I had just enough gems. So, he said yes, and I got a rumblehorn! Yay! One of my most favorite dragons! Excitedly, I took it home, and put it in the hearth. Later on, I checked on it, and hatched it... then, to my surprise, a baby zippleback popped out! What?! I looked at it, it looked at me, and it was silent for a few minutes. Ok... weirdness attack. Whatever, he's still a baby dragon. I held it, and it's left head turned toward the sunrise in the distance. So I called the left one Sunrise. We played for a bit, then the sun was setting! This time, the right head turned toward it, and I named it Sunset.


Playful, Shy, Obedient

Favorite Food:

Sunrise: Squid, Sunset: Octopi

Favorite thing to do:

Turn toward the sunrise/sunset, depending on the head

Intresting fact:

Some people call him Pinky or Purple Butt. He tends to kill people like that... so DON'T!

Nadder: The Silver Nadder (Aka: Moonstone, Silverstar, Diana) - Female -


  So that's why Sun Rose leaves one a year, she's going to visit her sister, Mooonstone. How did I know this? I saw it myself. When she left, me and Thunderquake went to she where she went every year (Yeah, kinda like a stalker, but who knows if she goes mental and starts killing everything? Actually, TMI), she flew into a cave. I waited until night, and suddenly, a silver nadder appeared, and flew out. It came back at dawn, and after it went in, Sun Rose went out. They did this, then I couldn't take it anymore. I need to find out who this dragon is. I crept in, and the Silver Nadder shreiked, then flashed it's wings at my face. Startled, I stepped back. It snarled, and backed away. I decided another plan. When I saw Sun Rose, I signaled her to come to me. She first, well, was startled, then frightned. After face-palming myself, I tossed a fish on teh ground. She ate it, and after gaining her trust, I stepped in the cave with Sun Rose, and soon enough, I found out that this new dragon was Sun Rose's sister, and I took her home.


Quiet and silent, Doesn't go along with others apart from Sun Rose and me, Hardly makes a sound, Doesn't like day time, Doesn't like to play, Really Independent (not really loyal)

Favorite Food:


Favorite thing to do:

Stay at home and sleep in the day, flies out at night to do stuff

Intresting Fact:

Is Sun Rose's alter-ego, everything is almost 100% different. Can't beleive she's Sun Rose's sister...

Chilling Horror: Backbiter (Aka: Backstab, Nightmare, Geostar) - Male - 


Eh... might write it, might not. Depends on my mood. XD


Loyal, Feirce, Sometimes playful, Jealous of Waterspout

Favorite Food:

Roasted Lamb

Favorite thing to do:

Fight me

Intresting Fact:

My first fan dragon...

Base by NightmareRebuff


Typhoomerang: Topspin (Aka: Big guy, Wirlwind, FOOOM) - Male -


  This one is a sad one... So there was this typhoomerang that I knew very well. We met in a forest, and even though we were friends, I didn't tame him. Dunno why I didn't, he was awesome. So, a few months late, he found a mate and they had a baby typhoomerang. Then suddenly, his mate died. I felt very sorry for him, and because he had to feed the baby, he left the baby typhoomerang with me. We formed a bond, but in the Chilling Horror month, he went to get some fish... and never came back. I waited for days, and I fed the baby myself with some perch. My friend never came back, so I chose to adopt the baby myself. At night, he would have terrible nightmares, and he would go to my room and sleep with me. He had a serios fear of Backbiter, and I was sorta heartbroken that even though Backbiter wanted to play with Topspin and wanted to stick with him, Topspin always was scared of him and either attacked or flew away. But I know, that one day, the nightmares will pass, and the two dragons will grow to respect each other. My typhoomerang... my Topspin.


Always cautious, Defensive, Always on the lookout, Active

Favorite Food:

Eel... I can finally use them!

Favorite thing to do:

Just anything that doesn't involve Backbiter or sitting around

Intresting Fact:

He kills eels for sport... I hate that.

Sandwraith: Sandstorm (Aka: Puppy Dragon, He-who-burrows) - Male -


  It's funny how a fishing trip can befriend a dragon. So I was spending some time on my own (Raising a ton of dragons is tough, I need a break), and I was fishing and camping out on the beach. I just caught a bunch of halbut and salmon, and I was frying a salmon. *Growl* Huh? I looked up, then left and right. I then felt the ground move, and I looked down. Two eyes stared back up... "YAH! WHAT ON EARTH?!" I jumped back. At that time, I never knew what a sandwraith was. I'm new here, ok? The sandwraith exploded form the sand, and looked at me. Silence for a few seconds... then he wadled to my basket of fish and started eating everything like he didn't care. "Hey! That's my fish!" He didn't listen, and ate all of it. He then turned, and studied me. He looked like a nightfury, so I was intrigued. He then jumped and flopped on me and started licking my face. "You're like toothless!" I laughed, and he licked some more. "Hey, boy! Stop it!" He kept on licking me, and he soon decided that follow me was a better option than chilling in the sand waiting for who-knows-what to go over him. Smart kid.


Playful, Smart, Seems to always be hungry

Favorite Food:

Salmon (DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO FISH FOR ONE?! *shouts at Sandstorm, he licks me and wadles away.)

Favorite thing to do:

Act majestic

Intresting fact:

First dragon I knew nothing about in the beginning.

Seashocker: Aquashock and Waterskiz (Aka: Zapduo) - Male - 


  So, a few days ago, I received a present. Not sure who sent it, or why, but I got it. It was wraped in colored leather, and when I opened it, I found an egg. I couldn't tell the species though. It was colored in multicolors, with "Thanks Hyrith" written in bright yellow paint. I shrugged. The only way to find out the species is to hatch it. When I picked it up, I was shocked. No, not the suprised shock. The lightning shock. I fumbled with it, and Telsabeam jumped from the roof. I think she sensed it was a skirll, so I shuddered. I don't have anything against skrills, just after Telsabeam almost burned down my house becasue she saw a fly, I've been a bit careful with her. I do not need another crazy lightning-maniac shooting around my house. I ploped it down on the hearth, and after a few minutes, it shook. I picked it up, and took it to the lavepit for it to hatch. It never did. It just shook, but it never came out. Just before Telsabeam was about to crack it open, Waterspout stared at the egg, and shot a small stream of water. The water touched it, then it cracked. Puzzled, I dipped my hand in water, and touched the egg. Where I touched, it cracked. Then, I actually figured out something. I took the egg to the sea, and placed it under the water. It shuddered, then a seashocker was born. I was extremly happy, and I thought all my dragon were too. Well, except Telsabeam. She grumbled a sign of disappointment, and wadled away. XD


Aquashock is agressive and fierce. Extremly loyal, and will attack anything that he thinks is harming me.

Waterskiz is playful and wild. He loves doing tricks, and is usually the reason why they have so much scars. For some reason, he's addicted to shrimp.

They both work together as a team, probabily because they know that if they argue, they won't go anywhere.

Favorite Food:

Aquashock: Squid

Waterskiz: Shrimp :\

Favorite thing to do:

Bounce on the waves, SO FUN WHEN RIDING THEM!!!

Intresting Fact:

Read the Bio


Serpentfang: Ispy (Aka: Mr. See it all, Rare Jewel, Allseer) - Male -


Find here:

Personality: He is a wise dragon, but extremly curious as well. He also is trying to find the ones like him... (PUTTING HIM IN A FAN-FIC!!! "We Are Not Alone." Trailer in sig.)

Favorite Food:

Tea leaves. ???

Favorite thing to do:

Look at far away things

Intresting Fact:

He can see anything, as long as there is nothing blocking the thing from his sight. 

And a bunch more. Mostly cause I'm to lazy to put them in my sig. XD


- Areslam

- Cazi the Conqueror

- typhoomerangmaster338

- Storm

- httyyd

- Sleepyraccoon

- NightmareRebuff

- SefarWarrior

- themasterplan47

- Frostfire Markson

(Neospark is originally black, but he was war paint all over his body. He is the oldest of the bunch, and is the only Titianwing in the team.)

(Snowspear is the second oldest, and she is an albino. She has one red and one blue eye, but no one knows why.)


(Emerald's color comes after his dad, who is a wooly howl. He doesn't really love to show himself, since he doesn't really "fit in" to anywhere, since he's bright green.)

Emerald by Scorpio Kardia! Thanks! So cute!

The Guardian of Berk by Hattori. Thanks! It's EPIC!

Sea Splitter, by DragonLover43, a Snoggletog gift. Have a merry Snoggletog! =D


Alpha and Shadow

  "Hyrith and his friends set off embark on a quest to save Berk from the upcoming evil that threatens the destruction of Berk. They face challenges, death, loss, rage, and fear, but do they have what it takes to win in the end?"


  Areslam as Wolf Hofferson

  Skrilltheskrill as Jasmine

  Cazi the Conqueror as Axtar

  typhoomerangmaster338 as Ak the Insane

  Diamond Racer as Diamond Rider

~The Dragons:

~Part 1:

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~Part 6:

~Part 7:

~Part 8:

~Part 9:

~ Part 10:

Journey to Berk (Not out Yet)

  "A flashback from the past, Hyrith tells the Aplha Riders about his journey from The Golden Isles to Berk. He, alone, with no dragon, sets out to find a home, where he can safely live. Along the way, he creates friendships, but also enemies. This is his story..."



  "You took everything I have... and now let me return the favor."

  "Drago, I might not be the one you are looking for, but I bet you will find me equally amusing."

  "If the chicken lady is gonna kill stuff, let her be. If big guy wants to break mountains, let him be. If the sword gal wants to fight, let her be. If I want to shoot stuff, let me be. If Hyrith wants to kill stuff... well, don't let him."







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~ Part 4:

The Elements Are Against Us (Later on)

  "After the defeat of Nexus, her brothers and sisters are arroused by her death. After being locked in slumber for thousands of years, Huo Lin is the first to wake and sends messengers to his sibiling, and soon, all of the elements on earth is against Hyrith and his friends..."


  I live to see the world of vikings burn, and all who stand in my way shall perish...

  "We're the final Valkyries left. Valrora... she was shot down. She never made it."

  Xeon. Choose wisely. Give me the orb, or your friends will suffer. Slowly, so I can see them crumble under my shadow.









  Xeon (The Guardian of Berk)

We Are Not Alone, A Chinese and Western Crossover (Later on)

5 months after Hyrith disappeared...

  "Who's there?" Jin sat up on his bed. It was 12 in the night, and most of the academy was asleep. The footsteps sounded louder this time. Jin pushed away the covers, and put on his combat glove. As soon as his hand slipped in, a small flame sparked in his palm. The footsteps stopped, and a creaking sound was heard. Silence. He waited for a while, and figuring that there was nothing, slipped off his glove and pulled the covers over his head.

  "AHHHHHHH!" A scream peirced the cold air, and Jin fell out of his bed. In a hurry, he shoved the glove over his hand, and opened the door. He lit his glove, and the flame ignited in his hand. Across the balcony, a hooded dark figure stepped out of a room. Jin stood in a battle stance. The flame in his palm grew into a fireball, and Jin shouted to the figure.

  "Who are you? Take off the hood!"

  The hooded man turned to Jin, and removed his hood, revealing an old man with a long white, whispy beard. The fireball died down. "Master Zhang?"

  "Yes, my young student. Why are you here? You should be in your room sleeping, not outside watching the snow fall."

  "I woke up because of the scream. Did you hear it too? Did someone get hurt?"

  "That was the reason I came, young one. Go to bed, the final practices starts tomorrow. Do you want to get the blade or not?"

  "Yes master, but safety is more important. Mind if I investigate with you?"

  JIn bowed, and the old master smiled. "Jin, investigate this floor. I'll take the top and bottom floors. Meet after 5 minutes." Jin looked at his old master. He was not usually that kind, but Jin shook that thought out of his mind. He needed to see if someone was hurt.


  "Found anything yet?" Master Zhang glared at Jin, and he looked into the final room. Another sleeping student. "Nothing, master." Master Zhang looked at him, and smiled. "Well, I think it's settled. Let's have a seat, shall we?" Jin shrugged. The master jumped, and sat on the railing. Jin climed up to him.

 "Anything, Master?"

 "Nothing yet, child. Forget this. It's a good night to be alive, is it?"

 "Yes, I agree. You checked every room?"

 "Every room, youngling. How about you-" A howl penetrated the air. A Howler flew towards Master Zhang, and the yellow and black dragon growled. Wait. Jin looked at the Howler, and noticed something. That was Dai Pow, Icarus's dragon. He never submitted to anyone, not even the master, except Icarus. Dai Pow circled Master Zhang. He glared at him, and then glared at Zhang.  He kneeled, and Zhang grumbled under his breath. "Curses. Stupid howler." He then looekd at Jin. "Let me see Dai Pow first." He jumped off the railing, and Jin looked as he kneeled and clasped the wingless dragon's head, speaking some words. JIn nudged myself over, then he felt something. JIn looked down, and he saw blood on the railing, where the master's hand was. Sticky, freash blood. 

   The last room...

  Jin shoved past the master, and to the final room. He didn't check it, since it was the room the master came out of. Jin ran past, and saw a stream of blood running from under the door. He slammed it open, and he gasped in shock. 

 Mei Hua layed dead in her bed, a large bloody gash in the middle of her chest. Her mouth was open in shock. Jin ran to her, and noticed that the blood was freash. Impossible! The master just was in here! Master Zhang would never commit such a crime! A hand then went over Jin's shoulder, sending a chill up his spine. The master glared at him, his mouth curing into a evil grin. Shocked, Jin tried to speak. "What? How? WHY?!" The master smiled. "Yes, Jin. I am the one. Sorry, but I can't have any witnesses." Suddenly, Master Zhang's form flickered, and instead of the Master from before, a red haired boy, stood in his place. He suddenly jabbed his palm at Jin's chest. A blade then shot out, coming out of Jin's back. Jin gasped, and he fell to the ground. His vision slowly filled with black dots, and he thought his last thought.











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I wanted to make own spin on

I wanted to make own spin on your character, if that was alright.  I knew there was probably going to be some things that wasn't right from your own stories.  But I hope you like them anyway.

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It's ok. =3

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Master Jedi am I, no do I not need subject. Who am I?