Thoughts of Guilt: Chapter 19: A Visitor

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I hope you guys enjoy this chapter.  Not much will happen, but it sets up at the end for the next chapter.  Which btw will be posted late Thursday night if not earlier.  Yes two chapters in one week.  I've felt in a writing mood and thought I should get as much as I can get done while I'm still it this mood.


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Thoughts of Guilt


Chapter 19


A Vistor


          “Would you stop that, Jarl,” Cazi replied.  “You’re creeping me out with that face because with Star Scream’s fire barely lighting the room, you look very spooky.”


          I stood there in thought and did not hear anything.


          Annabeth waved her left hand in front of my face, “You-who.  Jarl.”


          I did not flinch.


          “I know what will snap him out of it,” Cazi said. “I think he’s dead.”


          I then answered, “I’m not dead.”


          “See I told ya,” Cazi replied.


          “What’s the matter?” asked Annabeth.


          “I was just in deep though and blocked everything out just now,” I started, “Remember that vial I was telling you about when guys first got back?”


          They both replied, “Yeah.”


          “Well,” I started to explain.  “The vial had that peculiar smell I or even Stoick had never smelled before; and you know that is saying something.  I kept going over in my head what it could be on our way here.  The only thing I could think of that is liquid, clear, found in very small amounts, and have what look to be salt particles floating around in itself were… tears.”


          It took a couple of seconds then Annabeth got the same look I got when I realized it.


          Cazi sighed, “Now you’re doing it Annabeth.  With the two of you and this cave, you’re creeping me out.”


          “Sorry,” Annabeth replied.  “I just realized what Jarl just realized when he realized the connection.”


          “Now you’re creeping me out because both came to the same conclusion moments after each other,” Cazi said.  “Could you please let me in on it; because I don’t get it?”


          I chuckled, “Okay.  The smell I smelled from the vial is the same smell I just now smelled next to Anora here…. By the way, your ‘creep-ed out’ face looked just as ‘creepy’….. Here smell this.”


          I then took out of my pocket the vial I still had with me from the crime scene.  I uncorked it and held it out for them to smell it.


          “Do you get it now, Cazi?” I questioned.


          “I don’t know,” she replied.  “I don’t smell anything.  All I smell is the scent that Anora’s eyes give off an-…”


          “Ah ha,” I said pointing at Cazi.  “You can do the ‘creepy’ look too.”


          Cazi rolled her eyes at me and quipped, “Must be catchy then.”


          “So what does this mean?” asked Annabeth.


          “What do you think it means?” I countered.


          “Are you saying,” Annabeth deducted.  “That the thing that killed Vlarrin was this liquid in this vial,” she said pointing to the vial.  “And the liquid in the vial is a sample of Anora’s poisonous tears?”


          I replied, “Your reaction… both of you gals’ reaction proved that.”


          I corked back the vial and put it back in my inside left pocket of my tunic.


          Cazi then asked, “So now that we know this, what clue does this give to the murder of Vlarrin?”


          I stood there for another few thoughtful moments and then responded, “Assuming that my father is innocent,” then I said under my breath.  “Which I know he is…”  Then continued, “Someone else who was close to Vlarrin wanted him killed because he knew too much about something and they didn’t want any witnesses.  My top suspect would be that man I saw with Vlarrin in ship with those crates of jewels and gold; or even Vlarrin’s cousin Hawk.”


          Annabeth looked like she had just thought of something and then told us, “If it were Hawk, maybe he found out about what Vlarrin was up to, wanted to cut himself in, Vlarrin wanted no part of it, they fought or something, and then Hawk was out to get his cousin.  So once he got Vlarrin out of the way, he could cut himself in and take his place.”


          “Could be…” I added.


          Annabeth then said, “We need to get back to Berk so we tell Stoick about this.  There is for sure going to be a trial.  So, Jarl, your testimony about that man with Vlarrin in the ship could shed a different light on the whole murder.”


          “But,” I then said saddened, “Our testimony about my dad going out to meet that one ship the night we saw the other ship that I went on the next morning, could show that my dad has been acting strange and been doing things that could put people’s trust in him in jeopardy.  For one thing, the whole village has noticed the unusually behavior that my dad has been having and will say that this is what has been going on; as well as saying that he was getting back at Vlarrin because of my accident with my saddle because of Ohmarr.”


          As much as I did not want it to be there, doubt started crawling in when I thought about this: Doubt about what my father has been doing… Did he actually…..


          “On the topic of ‘Berk’,” Cazi said changing the subject because she knew what I was starting to think.  “Why not we try and get out of this spooky cave so we can get back to Berk?”


          “Yeah, but we can’t go anywhere in this storm,” I said.  “Not until the storm blows through will we be able to get out… and safely fly home.”


          Cazi then asked, “So how long will that take?”


          I shook my head, “I don’t know.  Could take an hour… Could take until tomorrow.”


          “Tomorrow?!” Cazi looked despondent.  “What are supposed to do for food, because in a few hours it will be time for the evening meal?”


          “Well,” I replied, a little relieved at what I was about to say.  “Thankfully I never unpacked my saddlebags when I first got back.  I still had the snacks and food in my one saddlebag from our trip to The Golden Isles.”


          Annabeth then questioned, “What about our dragons?  They’ll need some fish or something too.”


          “I know,” I replied.  “You said you were going to look for something to start a fire.  Could you look while you find the wood for a possible stream of some kind in the cave?”


          “Sure,” she answered.  “Though I don’t know if there would be one in here, but I’ll look.”


          “I think there is one,” I said as I recalled.  “On our way to find Anora, I saw a stream cutting through the forest and it looked like it went over this way.”


          While Annabeth was gone, I walked over to Fredrick to get my saddlebags.  I unhooked them from the saddle and put them over my shoulder.  The term “cavern” I think of something massive.  The cavern we are in was not large by any shape of the imagination, yet there was enough room for all of our dragons: Fredrick, Anora, Star Scream, and Sparklebolt; with room left to spare for Cazi, Annabeth, and I to move around in.  The cavern we are in is probably the smallest size of a cavern you can measure.


          I walked to the center and sat my saddlebags across a small, flat rock that was probably stone.  I started to look through my saddlebags to see what I could come up with for something to eat.  I then remembered I saw some old wood lying in the corridor of the cave we ran through a little bit ago; so I went after it.  I brought it back at the same moment Annabeth came back with what she found.  She had in her arms a few twigs and boards like the ones I found.  We laid them in the middle of cavern and asked Star Scream to do the honors.  Although, Cazi said that Sparklebolt could give off a spark that Star Scream could keep his breath low so that we do not blow ourselves up or plaster ourselves against the sides of the cave from the blast.


          Sparklebolt provided the spark and Star Scream gave off the fire to start the wood burning.  Fredrick and Anora used their bodies to shield the campfire from the draft in the cave so that the fire could have a chance to get going.


          Annabeth said she actually did see a pretty good sized stream further in a little ways that and some small perch fish swimming in it.


          “With a fish for each of us, the snacks I brought with me, and the water in the canteen, we should have a good enough meal to hold us over,” I stated.


          “That sound good and all,” responded Cazi.  “But what are you going to use for fishing equipment?”


          I dug into my other saddlebag and pulled out two bolas.


          “I said they were small perch,” teased Annabeth.


          I was about to do something with the bolas when Fredrick started walking towards tunnel that Annabeth had come from, “Where are you going?” I asked.


          Now he ignored me.  The three of us just stared at each other.  A minute later we heard my thunderdrum shoot something.  We ran into the cave and found Fredrick had in his mouth nine perch fish.  Three of those were probably for us, while the other six would be two each for the dragons.


          “Or we could just shoot them out of the stream,” I said.


          Fredrick walked by me with the face as, “Why take all the time to fish them out, just shoot them out.”


          Cazi then noticed, “Is it just me or does it feel as cold in here as it does outside?”


          We all agreed.


          The three of us then laughed about what Fredrick did.  Cazi and Annabeth followed Fredrick back into the other cavern.  Being curious about what Cazi noticed, I stopped for a moment to study the other smaller cavern that the stream was cutting through.  The cavern was about the same size; both being oval-ish.  I saw that there was a little bit of light coming from the stream on the right side of the cavern.  There is a small tunnel that the stream is flowing through.  I bet at one point this tunnel was not here, but over time there were cracks in the tunnel wall outside that sooner or later the water cut out for itself a tunnel and then created a stream.


          When I looked back the upstream tunnel, which was the tunnel to the right of where the others were, I saw that about thirty yards out there was an opening to the outside.  As I poked my head over to see, I felt the draft in my face so this is where the coldness of the cave was coming from.  I also took notice of the shade of light coming from outside.  Because it was still storming outside, the light outside was very dull.  I could see the rain coming down, or rather still dripping down across the face of the tunnel entrance.  So the temperature outside could be felt inside the cave.  Even though it was storming, I could still feel a little bit of warmth as the rain itself was warm.  But since heat rises, any heat that was in the cave would always try to find a way to escape.  So that is why caves are normally cold.


          I went back into the other cave and saw the girls had already started working on cooking the fish.  I got out a little of the yak jerky and the snacks I got; of which included some muffins, berries, and three apples.  The three apples were for Asvord, Elsa, and me, but since they are not here and Cazi and Annabeth make two with me being the third, it all works out.


          By the time we fixed the meal, cooked the fish, and ate the meal, it was a couple of hours later.  Now it was getting darker, than it already was, and the dragons looked tired.


          “Why don’t we turn in?” suggested Annabeth.


          We all agreed, even though we were not that tired, we still got ready anyhow.


          “What do you suppose we use for pillows?” asked Cazi.


          “I know it isn’t the most comfortable,” I stated as I walked back to my dragon.  “But using dragon’s saddle propped up against them is good enough.”


          I unsaddled Fredrick while the girls unsaddled their dragons as well.  Fredrick looked like he was ready to go to sleep as he obliged and curled up after I unsaddled him.  We all lay on the ground trying to go to sleep.  I slept in to the left of the tunnel we came in, Cazi to the right of it, and then Annabeth to the right of her.  Annabeth took her saddle and plainly but it on the ground and slept between her two dragons.


          Before I passed out, I started thinking about whether or not my father was guilty.  The thoughts of that ran through my head.


          I then had a dream about finding out my dad actually did it and every time I would find some new proof that he did, more would show up that would contradict it.  Berk started turning against me.  Then when my friends and my family started to, I knew it was a dream.  They were surrounding me to close in on me.  They got close enough that I felt something hit me on the head….


          I woke up to find that my head had fallen off the saddle and hit the ground.  I sat up to rub my head noticing the fire was barely even lit.


          “It must be several hours since I went to sleep,” I thought.  “Because that fire was a lot larger than that.”


          I then felt Fredrick adjust behind me and brought his head over to my knee.  I saw his eyes start to open and heard a growl.


          “Sorry to wake you I-,” I realized that that was not what he was angry about for he was looking on the other side of the cave.  I then saw what Fredrick saw.  There was a shadowy figure on four legs coming.  It seemed to be headed toward my saddle bags on the other side.


          “Psst,” I whispered.  “Caz.  Ann.  Wake up.”


          They stirred for a few seconds and looked up.  They too saw the figure.  Annabeth was the closest to it.


          “Don’t make any sudden moves,” softly spoke as to not censored the intruder.  I did not know what it was, so I slowly reached inside my pocket for my knife.


          “Annabeth?” I asked.


          She replied in a whisper, “Yeah?”


          “Have Star Scream give a low blast of fire on the campfire,” I stated as all the dragons were now aware of the shadowy figure.


          “Now,” I queued.


          Star Scream gave a short blast to the campfire, and then we all stood up in a defensive stance.  When Star Scream “shed some light on the matter”, we all saw that it was a dragon; a young hatchling to be more specific.


          The dragon started to do its roar before its blast, but ended up sneezing.  What came out of its mouth looked to be liquid.  The dragon kept sneezing until it had sneezed five times.


          “Aw,” Annabeth said.  “I think it is cold from the rain outside.”


          We started to walk towards the hatchling and saw that it started to “protect” my saddlebag, but then it gave up.  I reached in and pulled out some of the dried up yak jerk that I left in there.  It opened its jaw and lay down.


          Cazi then said, “It’s hungry.  I wonder where its mother is.”


          “Maybe it got separated,” Annabeth stated as I gave it the jerky.


          We then saw Fredrick, Sparklebolt, and Star Scream come over.  The hatchling seemed to shy away and get defensive.  However, when it saw Anora, it seemed to perk up.  It then ran over to Anora and started rubbing on her.  Anora seemed like she knew the poor thing.  Then Annabeth, Cazi, and I looked at each other and all came to the same conclusion:  This is why Anora came to this island or did not mind staying here.  This hatchling is hers.


          “But this hatchling looks nothing like Anora and doesn’t even have the same amour as Anora has,” she observed.


          Cazi and I tried to show our hands for it to touch them, but the only one it seemed to gravitate towards, besides Anora, was Annabeth; probably because Annabeth smelled more like Anora than we all did or because Anora is Annabeth’s dragon.


          I then remembered, “Well dragons will take in dragons not their own, or even dragons of not even their kind.  So Anora must have either helped hatch or found and

started raising this dragon as her own.”


          I gave the new dragon the rest of the dried jerky and then some Dragon Nip.  After the Dragon Nip was eaten, it let out a somewhat “happy” scream.


          I gasped, “That’s the ‘siren’ that warned me about the incoming tree.”

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Tis getting really good!!!!



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More clues, more mysteries. Where will this lead??? =D



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Clan: The Phantom Family

Gender: Male


Nadder: The Golden Nadder (Aka: Sun Rose) - Female -


  Sun Rose was my first dragon in the academy. She was actually from the Golden Isles, collected by Johan when he saw her (in egg form), hanging off a cliff. He caught her, and took her to Berk. She was my main dragon, and still is, in the races. She also helped out in leveling up the others, by helping them do the quests untill the very end, so they would get the XP.


Really Playful, Loyal, Doesn't like night time.

Likes to Eat:

Eggs, Eggs, and more Eggs.

Favorite thing to Do:

Play with the other Dragons, her favorite game is Fetch the Chicken!

Intresting Fact:

Every year, she flies away for 1 month, as she also likes to spend time on her own.

The Golden Nadder/Sun Rose by AniuRavenwolf! Thanks!

Thunderdrum: Sonarus (Aka: Sonus) - Male - 


  My second dragon, Sonarus was sorta of a pain. Since from when he was born, he was very wild and crazy, and even more hyper. He loved to jump on people's shoulders and roar in their ears, then run away for me to apolagize. Sonus now loves to steal my sheep, and hide them in the forest, but he is always there where I need him to be. He's BFFs with Thunder Quake, and, oh yeah, he is protective of me.


Wild, Crazy, Protective, and Loyal (Most of the time).

Likes to Eat:

Perch (I still don't understand why.)

Favorite thing to do:

Hide my sheep and pretend he didn't do it.

Intresting Fact:

He said he hates to play Thunder Run...but I can tell he's faking. How? I just know. :)

Whispering Death: Thunder Quake (Aka: Da King, Da Racing Champ) - Male -


  I found his egg in the tunnels, and Hiccup let me keep him. When he hatched, he looked at me for one second, and then, well, decided he wanted to be free. He jumped out of the stables, and started slithering to the forest. I chased him, freeing him from bushes, rescuing him from drowning, and TRYING to feed him when he was hungry. One day, a wild smokebreath appeared, and for some reason, Da King thought he was, "The King", and decided to take him on. He started dealing blows to it, but the smokebreath won in the end. Before it laid the final blow, though. I jumped and used myself as a human sheild. It hurt, but I was fine. I called in Sonarus, and he saved us. He put his trust in me, and I have helped him ever since.


Brave, doesn't know his limits...yet.

Likes to eat:

Sheep Steak.

Favorite thing to do:

Drill underground, and camp there, with me trying to find him. Also, play fighting with Sonarus.

Intresting Fact:

Well, he's trying to become a titian wing, but it ain't going to well so far.

By Wutend Bonfire. Thanks!

Scauldron: Waterspout (Aka: Spouty, The Heir of Frost and Pyra) - Female -


  One day, I went to Johan's ship. There, I found an egg with a burn and ice on it. This was Frost and Pyra's lost egg! I quickly traded it with Johan, and then I found out that she was sick. I ran home, and placed her on the hearth. 3 days passed. Nothing. Thinking she was dead, I sadly sighed, and put my hand on her egg. Suddenly, a bright golden glow spread around her, and she was born!


Likes to act cute, loyal, and sometimes very overprotective.

Likes to eat:


Favorite thing to do:

Spit at my face, and act innocent.

Intresting fact:

She is my main dragon when it comes to quests and Fan-Fics.

Waterspout by TildenWolfGirl, themasterplan47 and Dustydaybreak. She looks really awesome! =D

Gronkle: Meatball (Aka: Tomato, Cheese Head, Ball Boy) - Male -


  I found him in the forest, as a baby. He was crying and whimpering, but I picked him up. He looked at me, and tried to smile. He then yawned, and fell to sleep. I figured he was lost or abandoned, so I took him in. He is addicted to any red or yellow rocks, and will do anything to get them.


Friendly and Playful

Favorite Food:

Yellow and Red Rocks

Favorite Thing to do:

Sleep, Eat, Sleep, Eat, Sleep, Eat...

Intresting Fact:

He has a quartz tooth in the way back, for he broke it while trying to eat my diamonds.

Nightmare: Greek Fire (Aka: Greek Flame, Comet) - Male -


  A relative of Hookfang, with all his personalities. Need I say more?


Aggressive, sometimes a Bully, and secretly cares for us.

Favorite Food:


Favorite thing to do:

Disobey me...

Intresting fact:

He is Hookfang's mother's brother's son.

Thunderdrum: Eagle Ray (Aka: Booma, Sea Dream, Pearl) - Female -


  On new year's eve, I found out that Sonarus was missing! I asked the others to search for him, but he was not found! Depressed, I sadly went home, hoping that he was safe. In the morning, I set out with Waterspout, hoping to find Sonarus. After 5 hours of searching, I spotted something green, and something blue side by side. I patted Waterspout on the side, and we dove in. To my suprise, it was Sonarus and another Thunderdrum! Studying them for a bit, I found out that the blue one was Sonarus's mate! I tamed her, and since then, we had a new addition to my family.


Playful, Loyal to Sonarus and Me

Favorite Food:

Grilled perch with tomato toppings

Favorite thing to do:

Stick with Sonarus

Intresting Fact:

Some say she's a relative of Thornado...

Zippleback: Sunrise and Sunset (Aka: Dawn and Dusk, Pimp and Pump)

- Male -


  Kinda weird... Ok, so, I went to trader Johan's eggs, and found a dragon egg chest. I asked him could I buy it, since I had just enough gems. So, he said yes, and I got a rumblehorn! Yay! One of my most favorite dragons! Excitedly, I took it home, and put it in the hearth. Later on, I checked on it, and hatched it... then, to my surprise, a baby zippleback popped out! What?! I looked at it, it looked at me, and it was silent for a few minutes. Ok... weirdness attack. Whatever, he's still a baby dragon. I held it, and it's left head turned toward the sunrise in the distance. So I called the left one Sunrise. We played for a bit, then the sun was setting! This time, the right head turned toward it, and I named it Sunset.


Playful, Shy, Obedient

Favorite Food:

Sunrise: Squid, Sunset: Octopi

Favorite thing to do:

Turn toward the sunrise/sunset, depending on the head

Intresting fact:

Some people call him Pinky or Purple Butt. He tends to kill people like that... so DON'T!

Nadder: The Silver Nadder (Aka: Moonstone, Silverstar, Diana) - Female -


  So that's why Sun Rose leaves one a year, she's going to visit her sister, Mooonstone. How did I know this? I saw it myself. When she left, me and Thunderquake went to she where she went every year (Yeah, kinda like a stalker, but who knows if she goes mental and starts killing everything? Actually, TMI), she flew into a cave. I waited until night, and suddenly, a silver nadder appeared, and flew out. It came back at dawn, and after it went in, Sun Rose went out. They did this, then I couldn't take it anymore. I need to find out who this dragon is. I crept in, and the Silver Nadder shreiked, then flashed it's wings at my face. Startled, I stepped back. It snarled, and backed away. I decided another plan. When I saw Sun Rose, I signaled her to come to me. She first, well, was startled, then frightned. After face-palming myself, I tossed a fish on teh ground. She ate it, and after gaining her trust, I stepped in the cave with Sun Rose, and soon enough, I found out that this new dragon was Sun Rose's sister, and I took her home.


Quiet and silent, Doesn't go along with others apart from Sun Rose and me, Hardly makes a sound, Doesn't like day time, Doesn't like to play, Really Independent (not really loyal)

Favorite Food:


Favorite thing to do:

Stay at home and sleep in the day, flies out at night to do stuff

Intresting Fact:

Is Sun Rose's alter-ego, everything is almost 100% different. Can't beleive she's Sun Rose's sister...

Chilling Horror: Backbiter (Aka: Backstab, Nightmare, Geostar) - Male - 


Eh... might write it, might not. Depends on my mood. XD


Loyal, Feirce, Sometimes playful, Jealous of Waterspout

Favorite Food:

Roasted Lamb

Favorite thing to do:

Fight me

Intresting Fact:

My first fan dragon...

Base by NightmareRebuff


Typhoomerang: Topspin (Aka: Big guy, Wirlwind, FOOOM) - Male -


  This one is a sad one... So there was this typhoomerang that I knew very well. We met in a forest, and even though we were friends, I didn't tame him. Dunno why I didn't, he was awesome. So, a few months late, he found a mate and they had a baby typhoomerang. Then suddenly, his mate died. I felt very sorry for him, and because he had to feed the baby, he left the baby typhoomerang with me. We formed a bond, but in the Chilling Horror month, he went to get some fish... and never came back. I waited for days, and I fed the baby myself with some perch. My friend never came back, so I chose to adopt the baby myself. At night, he would have terrible nightmares, and he would go to my room and sleep with me. He had a serios fear of Backbiter, and I was sorta heartbroken that even though Backbiter wanted to play with Topspin and wanted to stick with him, Topspin always was scared of him and either attacked or flew away. But I know, that one day, the nightmares will pass, and the two dragons will grow to respect each other. My typhoomerang... my Topspin.


Always cautious, Defensive, Always on the lookout, Active

Favorite Food:

Eel... I can finally use them!

Favorite thing to do:

Just anything that doesn't involve Backbiter or sitting around

Intresting Fact:

He kills eels for sport... I hate that.

Sandwraith: Sandstorm (Aka: Puppy Dragon, He-who-burrows) - Male -


  It's funny how a fishing trip can befriend a dragon. So I was spending some time on my own (Raising a ton of dragons is tough, I need a break), and I was fishing and camping out on the beach. I just caught a bunch of halbut and salmon, and I was frying a salmon. *Growl* Huh? I looked up, then left and right. I then felt the ground move, and I looked down. Two eyes stared back up... "YAH! WHAT ON EARTH?!" I jumped back. At that time, I never knew what a sandwraith was. I'm new here, ok? The sandwraith exploded form the sand, and looked at me. Silence for a few seconds... then he wadled to my basket of fish and started eating everything like he didn't care. "Hey! That's my fish!" He didn't listen, and ate all of it. He then turned, and studied me. He looked like a nightfury, so I was intrigued. He then jumped and flopped on me and started licking my face. "You're like toothless!" I laughed, and he licked some more. "Hey, boy! Stop it!" He kept on licking me, and he soon decided that follow me was a better option than chilling in the sand waiting for who-knows-what to go over him. Smart kid.


Playful, Smart, Seems to always be hungry

Favorite Food:

Salmon (DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO FISH FOR ONE?! *shouts at Sandstorm, he licks me and wadles away.)

Favorite thing to do:

Act majestic

Intresting fact:

First dragon I knew nothing about in the beginning.

Seashocker: Aquashock and Waterskiz (Aka: Zapduo) - Male - 


  So, a few days ago, I received a present. Not sure who sent it, or why, but I got it. It was wraped in colored leather, and when I opened it, I found an egg. I couldn't tell the species though. It was colored in multicolors, with "Thanks Hyrith" written in bright yellow paint. I shrugged. The only way to find out the species is to hatch it. When I picked it up, I was shocked. No, not the suprised shock. The lightning shock. I fumbled with it, and Telsabeam jumped from the roof. I think she sensed it was a skirll, so I shuddered. I don't have anything against skrills, just after Telsabeam almost burned down my house becasue she saw a fly, I've been a bit careful with her. I do not need another crazy lightning-maniac shooting around my house. I ploped it down on the hearth, and after a few minutes, it shook. I picked it up, and took it to the lavepit for it to hatch. It never did. It just shook, but it never came out. Just before Telsabeam was about to crack it open, Waterspout stared at the egg, and shot a small stream of water. The water touched it, then it cracked. Puzzled, I dipped my hand in water, and touched the egg. Where I touched, it cracked. Then, I actually figured out something. I took the egg to the sea, and placed it under the water. It shuddered, then a seashocker was born. I was extremly happy, and I thought all my dragon were too. Well, except Telsabeam. She grumbled a sign of disappointment, and wadled away. XD


Aquashock is agressive and fierce. Extremly loyal, and will attack anything that he thinks is harming me.

Waterskiz is playful and wild. He loves doing tricks, and is usually the reason why they have so much scars. For some reason, he's addicted to shrimp.

They both work together as a team, probabily because they know that if they argue, they won't go anywhere.

Favorite Food:

Aquashock: Squid

Waterskiz: Shrimp :\

Favorite thing to do:

Bounce on the waves, SO FUN WHEN RIDING THEM!!!

Intresting Fact:

Read the Bio


Serpentfang: Ispy (Aka: Mr. See it all, Rare Jewel, Allseer) - Male -


Find here:

Personality: He is a wise dragon, but extremly curious as well. He also is trying to find the ones like him... (PUTTING HIM IN A FAN-FIC!!! "We Are Not Alone." Trailer in sig.)

Favorite Food:

Tea leaves. ???

Favorite thing to do:

Look at far away things

Intresting Fact:

He can see anything, as long as there is nothing blocking the thing from his sight. 

And a bunch more. Mostly cause I'm to lazy to put them in my sig. XD


- Areslam

- Cazi the Conqueror

- typhoomerangmaster338

- Storm

- httyyd

- Sleepyraccoon

- NightmareRebuff

- SefarWarrior

- themasterplan47

- Frostfire Markson

(Neospark is originally black, but he was war paint all over his body. He is the oldest of the bunch, and is the only Titianwing in the team.)

(Snowspear is the second oldest, and she is an albino. She has one red and one blue eye, but no one knows why.)


(Emerald's color comes after his dad, who is a wooly howl. He doesn't really love to show himself, since he doesn't really "fit in" to anywhere, since he's bright green.)

Emerald by Scorpio Kardia! Thanks! So cute!

The Guardian of Berk by Hattori. Thanks! It's EPIC!

Sea Splitter, by DragonLover43, a Snoggletog gift. Have a merry Snoggletog! =D


Alpha and Shadow

  "Hyrith and his friends set off embark on a quest to save Berk from the upcoming evil that threatens the destruction of Berk. They face challenges, death, loss, rage, and fear, but do they have what it takes to win in the end?"


  Areslam as Wolf Hofferson

  Skrilltheskrill as Jasmine

  Cazi the Conqueror as Axtar

  typhoomerangmaster338 as Ak the Insane

  Diamond Racer as Diamond Rider

~The Dragons:

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Journey to Berk (Not out Yet)

  "A flashback from the past, Hyrith tells the Aplha Riders about his journey from The Golden Isles to Berk. He, alone, with no dragon, sets out to find a home, where he can safely live. Along the way, he creates friendships, but also enemies. This is his story..."



  "You took everything I have... and now let me return the favor."

  "Drago, I might not be the one you are looking for, but I bet you will find me equally amusing."

  "If the chicken lady is gonna kill stuff, let her be. If big guy wants to break mountains, let him be. If the sword gal wants to fight, let her be. If I want to shoot stuff, let me be. If Hyrith wants to kill stuff... well, don't let him."







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The Elements Are Against Us (Later on)

  "After the defeat of Nexus, her brothers and sisters are arroused by her death. After being locked in slumber for thousands of years, Huo Lin is the first to wake and sends messengers to his sibiling, and soon, all of the elements on earth is against Hyrith and his friends..."


  I live to see the world of vikings burn, and all who stand in my way shall perish...

  "We're the final Valkyries left. Valrora... she was shot down. She never made it."

  Xeon. Choose wisely. Give me the orb, or your friends will suffer. Slowly, so I can see them crumble under my shadow.









  Xeon (The Guardian of Berk)

We Are Not Alone, A Chinese and Western Crossover (Later on)

5 months after Hyrith disappeared...

  "Who's there?" Jin sat up on his bed. It was 12 in the night, and most of the academy was asleep. The footsteps sounded louder this time. Jin pushed away the covers, and put on his combat glove. As soon as his hand slipped in, a small flame sparked in his palm. The footsteps stopped, and a creaking sound was heard. Silence. He waited for a while, and figuring that there was nothing, slipped off his glove and pulled the covers over his head.

  "AHHHHHHH!" A scream peirced the cold air, and Jin fell out of his bed. In a hurry, he shoved the glove over his hand, and opened the door. He lit his glove, and the flame ignited in his hand. Across the balcony, a hooded dark figure stepped out of a room. Jin stood in a battle stance. The flame in his palm grew into a fireball, and Jin shouted to the figure.

  "Who are you? Take off the hood!"

  The hooded man turned to Jin, and removed his hood, revealing an old man with a long white, whispy beard. The fireball died down. "Master Zhang?"

  "Yes, my young student. Why are you here? You should be in your room sleeping, not outside watching the snow fall."

  "I woke up because of the scream. Did you hear it too? Did someone get hurt?"

  "That was the reason I came, young one. Go to bed, the final practices starts tomorrow. Do you want to get the blade or not?"

  "Yes master, but safety is more important. Mind if I investigate with you?"

  JIn bowed, and the old master smiled. "Jin, investigate this floor. I'll take the top and bottom floors. Meet after 5 minutes." Jin looked at his old master. He was not usually that kind, but Jin shook that thought out of his mind. He needed to see if someone was hurt.


  "Found anything yet?" Master Zhang glared at Jin, and he looked into the final room. Another sleeping student. "Nothing, master." Master Zhang looked at him, and smiled. "Well, I think it's settled. Let's have a seat, shall we?" Jin shrugged. The master jumped, and sat on the railing. Jin climed up to him.

 "Anything, Master?"

 "Nothing yet, child. Forget this. It's a good night to be alive, is it?"

 "Yes, I agree. You checked every room?"

 "Every room, youngling. How about you-" A howl penetrated the air. A Howler flew towards Master Zhang, and the yellow and black dragon growled. Wait. Jin looked at the Howler, and noticed something. That was Dai Pow, Icarus's dragon. He never submitted to anyone, not even the master, except Icarus. Dai Pow circled Master Zhang. He glared at him, and then glared at Zhang.  He kneeled, and Zhang grumbled under his breath. "Curses. Stupid howler." He then looekd at Jin. "Let me see Dai Pow first." He jumped off the railing, and Jin looked as he kneeled and clasped the wingless dragon's head, speaking some words. JIn nudged myself over, then he felt something. JIn looked down, and he saw blood on the railing, where the master's hand was. Sticky, freash blood. 

   The last room...

  Jin shoved past the master, and to the final room. He didn't check it, since it was the room the master came out of. Jin ran past, and saw a stream of blood running from under the door. He slammed it open, and he gasped in shock. 

 Mei Hua layed dead in her bed, a large bloody gash in the middle of her chest. Her mouth was open in shock. Jin ran to her, and noticed that the blood was freash. Impossible! The master just was in here! Master Zhang would never commit such a crime! A hand then went over Jin's shoulder, sending a chill up his spine. The master glared at him, his mouth curing into a evil grin. Shocked, Jin tried to speak. "What? How? WHY?!" The master smiled. "Yes, Jin. I am the one. Sorry, but I can't have any witnesses." Suddenly, Master Zhang's form flickered, and instead of the Master from before, a red haired boy, stood in his place. He suddenly jabbed his palm at Jin's chest. A blade then shot out, coming out of Jin's back. Jin gasped, and he fell to the ground. His vision slowly filled with black dots, and he thought his last thought.











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And Chapter 20 will be up

And Chapter 20 will be up tonight!

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Subject do I need why Hmm? Above them can be a Jedi Master, No?

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Btw, side note, I took a tally of the "reads" or "hits" for The Mysteryious Frozen Fire and the number was almost 12,000 reads!  Thank you all so much!  :D  (The official number was: 10,864 reads, with just the chapters.  Including the epilogue it was 11,194 reads.)