roleplay-chapter 1-dragons

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kollabee
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((this is my first roleplay(in a forum)but im curently in one and i wanted to make one of my own first if you are writing(not in the role play) do this(( on each side))

 

if you just joind do somthing like this

 

name:anna gold blond hair and blue eyes one of her legs are gone

dragon:half tail a tail wing nadder ((they have wing things on there tail like toothles.you can make up your own dragon as long as its a dragon school of dragons have and you add somthing to them that makes them diffrent.and other people can use them)) one half of her tail hase a gap she got in a fire.hicup taut her how to make a fake tail.

favrite weapon:arrow spetial tecnick:she can ride her dragon and shoot

perseality:mostly shy but once she knows you you can hardly remember she was shy.good at drawing,paiting

you can make up anything you want your peorson to

 

now ill let you start :D

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Buuut we allready have a

Buuut we allready have a role-play! ^^;

So in case ya' wanna have fun in that one- just go and register your OC! ^^

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Inna [In-ah] (level 10) (friend code: ZNG17): The sarcastic racer. 

Dragon

Rosethorn [Rose-thorn] (level 20)- Mud- coated nadder

Clan

Clan Jormungandr-"We encompass the earth! Without each other, we will fall apart!"

kollabee
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((there can be more than one

((there can be more than one role play any way that one is so caonfusing.if your gonna chat here plz let it be for this role play not fighting))

 

anna looked around her room.then she relized.....she wasnt in her room,she was in the infermery along whith other people.anna tried to sit up but she aced to much."ouch,why am i here again?"then it all hit her.the huge fight.she remember her home being torn to bits and having to come to berk.

kollabee
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((i know people are reading

((i know people are reading this,soooo why arnt you entering :D))

 

anna looked around trying to see who was saved,she saw many people she new,but she couldnt

find her parents."nurse, were are my parents?"anna asked as a nurse walked by her bed."oh!your awake,are you hungry or anything,do you have a friend you would like us to move by you!"anna wondered why she was being so kind.she heard her stomack growl and relized how hungry she was."well if i could have some food.and if you could help me sit up."rose ansered.the nurse help her sit up and put a box behind her and some pillows to rest on."ill be right back whith some food."and whith that the nurse walked off.

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((Because most of the people who roleplay are already in the one that Rock created a long, long time ago. A roleplay into which a lot of work and creativity has gone. It's not as confusing as it first seems, you just have to actually read it.

Also, if you intend to continue with a second roleplay, the most respectful thing you could do is make something original. A roleplay that doesn't copy the title and format, to a T, of the one Rock created. 

Another tip - Try to write a tad better. People won't join a roleplay if they can't tell what's happening. Proper punctuation, capitalisation where it's appropriate, paragraphing; also add some more depth to your posts, some creativity, detail; and you need a plot. I've been roleplaying for nearly 10 years, and I've seen it all. a roleplay without a plot never gets very far, often dissolving into a chaos of god-modding, fighting between players, whining, and a complete destruction of what the roleplay was meant to be.

And one last thing: be patient. People have lives, and a single roleplay on a children's game site is low on the list of priorities. You cannot expect multiple posts every single day - if you do, you'll end up very, very disappointed. OFten there will be a small surge of posting, and then nothing but one or two over the next week or week and a half. Rome wasn't built in a day, and a story is not made in one, either.))

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Shadowclaw does have a point...

((It's not that people don't want to roleplay, it's just that anyone who does is likely already participating in the big one. It's been going on since roughly July or August and includes many of the forum's most respected members, and there are hundreds of pages of it that got archived when we moved over here from the old forum. So yeah, it's probably a bit confusing if you don't already know what's going on, like opening a book halfway through or walking into a movie an hour late.

 

The best advice I can give is to maybe watch and wait for a bit to see where the story's going. Read the thread all the way through, so you know what's going on and how the various participants conduct themselves. And as Shadow said, work on typing engaging and easily readable posts that other people will want to read. We like new participants, but to be honest, we can't have them coming in and pulling the whole RP sideways. It's a collaborative thing, much like real life - you can't predict what other people will do, and you've gotta be able to roll with the punches and work with what's already there.))

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Kollabee, how can we trust

Kollabee, how can we trust you to make a Role-play- when you can't even write "I" correctly.

I know that it's hard to keep up in the RP but that why you should read the last posts and about understand what going on. Don't jump in too quickly as well tho- noone ever does anything without a reason.

Also- like they said, make sure the reader can understand what you are saying. Since you don't have much experience here please try to practice in a few smaller RP's or try to write a several small stories- that's how I practice.

Also- try to add more detail to your characters, for example: one Anna's leg is gone- at least tell us how it happened. In case you want it to be "unknown" say: LIRP that way meaning: Learn In Role Play. When you mentioned that Anna's dragon has tail gone- let us know how, and I am not sure if nadders can have a fake, I mean- she has those spikes, and the tail by the way is not something you can do in a few seconds without lots of experience- in case Anna has it, make sure to let us know so it doesn't get confusing.

Also- like I said before- you Godmoded both of your characters, Halftail has tail like Toothless? It is not possible for a nadder. Keep in mind that a RP like this won't go far.

I am in RP's for three years now and I am still one of the worse role-players around- so be patient, and more literate, don't godmode, keep it realistic. :3