The Mysterious Frozen Fire - Chapter 9: Capture and Rescue

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Since I now average longer chapters (word count wise) this will be a longer chapter for this story.  Books do have longer chapters than others.  I was going to split the chapter up into two parts, but I decided it would make it not smooth and maybe choppy in certain cases.  It also would be too short (in my opinion) for a two parter.

So this will be the longest complete chapter I have done in either fan-fiction I have written.


Note: In the last chapter when I said to split up into groups of six, six, and five; it should have said seven, seven, and eight.


The Mysterious Frozen Fire


Chapter 9


Capture and Rescue


          I looked around the blood stains to see if there were any other splotches.  Hiccup swung the torch slowly across the floor to see if there were any more fresh blood stains.  There were not.  So in this case I had to pick which of the three additional tunnels to enter and see if there was any trace of my sister Asvord.  I took the team that I picked out down the one that was directly to your right if you had just walked in through the tunnel we took to get to this war room.  I told the other two groups to take the other two tunnels.  If either group had not found my sister, the agreed time was to regroup back in this war room in one hour.  We split off into our groups and took off down the tunnels.


          “And be careful guys,” I said right before we left.  “We don’t know what is down these tunnels.  For all we know there may be traps in the tunnels that would try and keep intruders out.  Even though we are not intruders, the traps don’t know that.  Be careful.”


          In my group were the following people: my little sister Elsa, then Cazi, Annabeth, Hattori, Ashley, Meen, and Hiccup.


          As we progressively went through the tunnel, the pathway’s width was increasing.  At the start it was only wide enough for a two people side-by-side; now we could all stand next to each other and there still be enough room.  We all stopped when we came to a small pool of water that was level with the ground we were standing on.  There were also a few holes in the ground that were letting in a lot of cold air from the outside.  The holes ranged from a foot to a yard in diameter.  The light in the tunnel, at this point, was considerably lighter than from the start.  There was light coming in from the holes that reflected on the water with additional water coming from what I am guessing, the end of the tunnel; which was about fifty yards ahead of us with a bend in the tunnel to the left.  The ceiling was also taller than before.  Before it was only about six feet tall, now it was a little less than two times as much.


          One other thing, the light in here made the feel of the tunnel rather eerie and spooky because of the light blue or gray reflection of the water pool bouncing of the sides and ceiling of the tunnel.  It was still relatively dark in the tunnel, but the reflections from the pool of water made not as dark as it actually was.  We could also hear the wind howling from outside.  Hiccup did not need his torch anymore, so he looked around for a holder for it on one of the walls.  Once he did that, he returned to the group.


          Elsa was about ready to just walk across the pool, but I grabbed her from doing so.


          “Remember what I said before we split up into our groups?” I told Elsa.


          “Yeah,” she replied.  “About there being…” she trailed off as she looked at the pool of water in understanding.


          Cazi knelt down, picked up a pebble, and threw it into the center of the pool.  There was a loud, “Ker-sploosh” made by the pebble.


          “Good thing you didn’t walk across the pool,” Cazi stated.  “The pool is a lot deeper than it lets on to be.”


          Hattori had gone to check the sides of the tunnels and came back to report, “There is no way in walking on the edges of the pool.  There would be absolutely no room to have any footing to walk across there.”


          We all started thinking of a way to get across when Annabeth pointed out, “Look at the walls of the tunnel next to the sides of the pool.  They are wet.”


          I walked over to the edge of the pool and wiped my hand across the wall.  When I examined my hand, I found it to be wet.


          Hiccup then responded when he saw my hand, “It is still wet.  In these temperatures, water splashes should freeze in only a few minutes.”


          Ashley then suggested, “Then that would mean someone has gone through here and somehow splashed some of the water on the sides of the walls.”


          “Agreed,” responded Hattori.  “Not only that but whomever it was, was just here not more than a few minutes ago.”


          Meen then questioned, “But who could it be?”


          My friends were debating who it was for a couple of minutes, in the mean time I was quickly trying to figure out a way to get across the pool.  By the time my friends were done talking after only three minutes, I had figured a couple of ways that could work.


          To test my theories, I requested the help of Hattori.


          “Could you hold out your hands so I can step on them and you boost me up?” I asked Hatt.


          “Sure,” he replied.  “Where do you want the boost?”


          I stated, “Over here.”


          “What are you trying to do, Jarl?” asked Cazi as she looked quite puzzled.  It would be too far to run and jump to the circle in the center, so why not just walk across the sections of rock that are sticking up out of the water and get to that circle stone section in the center of the pool?”


          “Go and put a large rock on them and see what will happen,” I said as I walked over to the middle of the tunnel floor, right in front of the pool.


          Cazi did so.  When she saw what happened, she knew right of the bat that walking across the “steps” on the pool of water, was not the right choice.  When Cazi put the large rock on one of the nearest rock “steps”, the “step” tipped over and splashed into the pool.


          “As you can see, that would not be a very good option,” I stated as I was figuring out the exact place where I wanted to be boosted up.  “One person may get across before they would fall in, what if there were more than one in our case.”


          “That would make sense,” Cazi agreed.  “So the only other way to get across…”


          “Is to go across the ceiling,” I said at the same time I pushed off Hattori’s hands to jump up and grab on to a rock that was sticking out from another that was hanging down from the ceiling.  This rock looked like one of the cross supporting beams in The Great Hall.


          My grip on the rock could not be any larger because the edge of the rock had a lip only my finger tips could rest on.  While studying this rock-beam before I had jumped on it, the rock-beam that stretched the length of the pool, the width of it was only two feet.  Taking this into consideration, I moved my grip one hand at a time to both sides of the rock-beam in as far as I could.


          I looked down and saw that I was about a third of the way there to the center platform.  To actually get across, I kept my arms in an “L” shape and started a small, gentle swing back and forth to get some momentum going.  After that, every time I swung forward I would “hop” with my upper body so my hands would move ahead on the lip.  I did this six more times, before I felt my grip starting to give out. I looked down and saw that I was about three-fourths the way there, but still there was about a three yard gap to clear.  I swung back and forth three times building up my swing each time and then let go on the third time swing forward.  I barely landed on the center platform.


          “Okay great Jarl,” Cazi stated.  “Now how are we supposed to get over?”


          “I was hoping I would figure that out once I got over here,” I said.


          Just then there was a rumbling noise from below.  From the depths of the pool of water came to the top the path that was to allow someone to cross.  And that we did.


          When we all got a cross I decided to look down one of the holes in the ground.  I saw that we were directly above our dragons.


          Annabeth then suggested, “Maybe this tunnel will lead to our dragons below.”


          “Hey look,” Meen said.  She pointed down near one of the holes in the ground.  “Blood.”


          “We must be on the right track,” Hiccup said.  “Come on let see where this tunnel takes us.”


          We all started running ahead, while jumping over holes as they came up and at the same time dodging stalagmites and stalactites that were scattered throughout the tunnel floor and ceiling.  We took the left bend we came to it to find the tunnel suddenly stopped and dropped off below.  I nearly slipped off the edge if Annabeth had not have caught my arm.


          “Thanks,” I said.


          “Your welcome,” Annabeth replied.  “So where did the person go that those blood stains come from?”


          “I don’t know and I hope it’s not…”


          I was cut off by a muffled scream above.


          Meen quickly questioned, “Where did the scream come from?”


          “Above, but how do we get up there?” asked Elsa.


          Hattori stated, “Use our dragons from below.”


          I immediately put my pointer finger and thumb of my left hand in my mouth; and whistled.  I taught this to my dragon, Fredrick, to come to the whistle as fast as he could.  I saw below my thunderdrum’s head bolt up and quickly figure out where it came from.  Everyone else followed suit in calling there dragons.  I was the first to get on my dragon and fly out the tavern area, where the dragons were going to spend the night, and get above topside above ground.


          It was still snowing and blowing.  The rate at which the wind was blowing was faster than the snowflakes could reach the ground.  The snowflakes seemed falling horizontal, not vertical.  Visibility was not great at all, but I was able to see enough of The Great Hall to see that I was about ten to twenty yards away or so from it.


          Since I did not have my winter gear on, I was getting cold very fast.  I landed nearby and tried to figure out where the scream came from.  My other friends joined me thereafter.


          I motioned to my friends to stay quiet as I thought I heard something.  Sure enough it was a loud grunt coming from the forest.  This part of the forest was thick, so flying through it would not be the best option.


          My friends, Elsa, and I ran through the forest in the direction I heard the grunt.  Just then we heard another scream, this time it was not as loud, but sounded much clearer than the muffled one as before.  We ran into the forest with our dragons close behind.  We ran just a few minutes before we were then halted because the ground cut off and went straight down into a small cove.  Even with the blizzard, we could see two dragons and two vikings down in the cove fighting each other.


          “Hey guys this cove is the same one where I started training Toothless for the first time,” exclaimed Hiccup to be heard over the loud wind.


          “That nadder,” I spoke loudly too, to be heard over the gusting, howling wind.  “That’s Spiker, Asvord’s dragon!  We’ll have to do this the old fashioned way because we have now weapons to defend ourselves!”


          Now we could all use are dragon as there was plenty of room for that now.  Fredrick saw that Asvord and Spiker were in trouble so he immediately started flying off.  Even though Fredrick did not have his saddle on, that did not stop me from mounting him as he flew by.  The blizzard suddenly picked up intensity and made visual contact with the mysterious dragon and other viking very difficult.  However, I could still see the color markings of Spiker.


          Without me even giving a signal to do so, Fredrick fired a more-than-normal sonic blast at the other dragon.  This knocked it back far enough that I lost sight of it from the gusting snowfall.  I jumped off my dragon in mid-flight while he was about ten feet off the ground to go help my sister.  I landed in some soft snow.  The other viking was still fighting Asvord, but did not pay any heed to me.  So I ran and tackled this viking.  We rolled several times in the snow; and when we stopped I was on top of the viking and saw that it was a woman.


          The woman I saw in the closet in the Hall.


          My hesitation in recognizing the woman cost me as she kicked me off of her and I went flying back several feet landing on some larger rocks, sticking up out of the snow.  When I tried to stand, I grabbed my left side as I must have injured it when I landed just now.  I looked back to where my friends were and Hiccup, Meen, Hattori, and Ashley took off on their dragons to go chase the other mysterious dragon down.  Annabeth and Cazi came down on their dragons to help out with the woman.


          Fredrick came over to help me up, while Cazi and Annabeth fought with the woman.  This gave Asvord the chance to escape and get out of harm’s way.  I mounted Fredrick and flew over to Asvord and Spiker’s position.  As I flew over I saw that Cazi and Annabeth worked well together with each other as well as their dragons.  Looked to me as if this was not the first skirmish they had been in.  The other woman viking was very nimble and dodged every shot that Cazi’s Skrill or Annabeth’s Stormcutter shot at her.  When that did not work, I saw Star Scream purposefully miss the woman with a blast that knocked up a smoke screen of snow.  Following this, Cazi jumped off Electic and did a somersault dive in mid-air to land on top of the other woman; capturing her in the process.


          While that was going on I had flown over to Asvord, still holding my left side, and checked on her.


          “Are you alright Asvord?” I asked quickly.


          “Yes,” she replied, but weakly.  “Who is that woman?  Where did she-e c-come...,” Asvord started to faint as she tried standing up from her lying position.


          Asvord fell forward into my arms and I set her down on the ground.  I checked her chest.  She was still breathing, but very faintly.  I quickly examined her for injuries.  I did not find any until I saw on her back near the bottom of her right shoulder blade that she had a very bad sword wound.  This must have been the blood trail that my friends and I saw before.


          I quickly took her over my shoulder and put her on Fredrick.  Using hand signals, I motioned to my dragon to fly to The Great Hall on his own while I held my sister on the dragon.


          We arrived at the front doors in less than three minutes.  There was quite a bit of snow in front of the door, but I fire stream was shot over me by Spiker to melt the snow.  Fredrick landed on the top step to allow easier access to the doors.


          I quickly dismounted and picked up my sister and entered The Great Hall.


          “Help, someone get Gothi, my sister has been wounded!” I ordered.


          There came over right was Stoick and Gobber.  Stoick took my sister and carried her over into a room to the right.  Right after that did Gothi come over and enter the room.


          I was going to go in there with her, but Gobber stopped me, “It will be best if you wait and let Gothi do her work.  I’ll tell you the very moment I hear of some news.”


          My mother came over and asked what was wrong.  I broke the news to her daughter was injured fighting a woman that suspected of stealing the gold locket-necklace.  Mother wanted to go over, same as I did, but I stopped her, “Gobber said that he’ll tell us the exact moment he hears some news.”


          Mother than sat down and fought back some tears, “How did this happen?”


          I then retold the account of the past hour.


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Here are links to the chapters of my fan-fic series.  The books go in chronological order.


The Clue of the Missing Socks.

Chapters 1 and 2                         Chapter 3                                       Chapter 4

Chapter 5                                      Chapter 6                                        Chapter 7

Chapters 8 and 9                        Chapter 10                                     Chapter 11

Chapters 12 and 13                     Chapters 14, 15, and 16             Chapter 17

Chapter 18                                    Chapter 19                                      Chapter 20

Chapter 21 and 22                      Chapter 23                                     Chapter 24 and 25

Chapter 26 - There is a hidden surprise.  Can you find it?

Chapter 27                                   Chapter 28, Part 1                         Chapter 28, Part 2

Chapter 29                                   Chapter 30                                       Chapter 31

Chapter 32                                   Chapter 33                                       Chapter 34

Chapter 35                                   Chapter 36                                       Chapter 37

Chapter 38                                   Chapter 39                                       Chapter 40

Chapter 41                                   Chapter 42                                       Chapter 43

Chapter 44                                   Chapter 45, Parts 1 and 2


The Mysterious Frozen Fire

Chapter 1         Chapter 2         Chapter 3         Chapter 4         Chapter 5         Chapter 6

Chapter 7         Chapter 8         Chapter 9         Chapter 10       Chapter 11       Chapter 12

Chapter 13       Chapter 14       Chapter 15        Chapter 16       Chapter 17       Chapter 18  

Chapter 19       Chapter 20      Chapter 21        Chapter 22, Part 1       Chapter 22, Part 2 

Chapter 22, Part 3

Epilogue/Preview for my Third Story!


Thoughts of Guilt

Chapters 1 and 2          Chapters 3 and 4          Chapter 5          Chapter 6          Chapter 7

Chapter 8          Chapter 9          Chapter 10          Chapter 11          Chapter 12, Part 1

Chapter 12, Part 2          Chapter 13         Chapter 14         Chapter 15         Chapter 16

Chapter 17 and 18         Chapter 19         Chapter 20         Chapter 21         Chapter 22

Chapter 23         Chapter 24         Chapter 25         Chapter 26         Chapter 27

Chapter 28         Chapter 29         Chapter 30         Chapter 31         Chapter 32

Chapter 33         Chapter 34         Chapter 35         Chapter 36 and 37

Chapter 38, Part 1         Chapter 39, Part 2         Chapter 40, Part 3         Chapter 41

Chapter 42, Parts 1 and 2         Chapter 43         Chapter 44

Chapter 45, Part 1         Chapter 45, Part 2


On the Edge of Mystery

Chapter 1          Chapter 2         Chapter 3        Chapters 4 & 5    Chapter 6, Parts 1 and 2   

Chapter 7          Chapter 8         Chapter 9            Chapter 10       Chapter 11        Chapter 12

Chapter 13        Chapter 14       Chapter 15          Chapter 16        Chapter 17       Chapter 18

Chapter 19        Chapter 20       Chapter 21          Chapter 22       Chapter 23      Chapter 24

Chapter 25        Chapter 26       Chapter 27         Chapter 28        Chapter 29 Parts 1 and 2 

Chapter 30       Chapter 31       Chapter 32 and 33                         Chapter 34 Parts 1 and 2 

Chapter 35 Part 1         Chapter 35 Part 2        Chapter 35 Part 3        Chapter 36


The Secret Symbol

Chapter 1    Chapter 2    Chapter 3    Chapter 4    Chapter 5

Chapter 6    Chapter 7     Chapter 8    Chapter 9    Chapter 10

Chapter 11    Chapter 12    Chapter 13    Chapter 14    Chapter 15

Chapter 16    Chapter 17    Chapter 18    Chapter 19    Chapter 20

Chapter 21   Chapter 22   Chapter 23   Chapter 24 and 25

Chapter 26    Chapter 27    Chapter 28    Chapter 29 and 30

Chapter 31    Chapter 32    Chapter 33    Chapter 34    Chapter 35

Chapter 36    Chapter 37    Chapter 38    Chapter 39

Chapter 40 and 41    Chapter 42    Chapter 43, 44, 45, and 46


The Legend of Shadow Mountain

Chapter 1    Chapter 2    Chapter 3    Chapter 4    Chapter 5

Chapter 6    Chapter 7    Chapter 8    Chapter 9    Chapter 10

Chapter 11    Chapter 12    Chapter 13    Chapter 14    Chapter 15

Chapter 16   Chapter 17    Chapter 18    Chapter 19    Chapter 20

Chapter 21    Chapter 22    Chapter 23    Chapter 24    Chapter 25

Chapter 26    Chapter 27    Chapter 28    Chapter 29    Chapter 30

Chapter 31    Chapter 32    Chapter 33    Chapter 34    Chapter 35

Chapter 36    Chapter 37    Chapter 38    Chapter 39    Chapter 40

Chapter 41    Chapter 42    Chapter 43    Chapter 44    Chapter 45 & 46

Chapter 47    Chapter 48    Chapter 49    Chapter 50    Chapter 51


Teaser "Trailer" for Book 8 - Conquest of the Truth


The Crimson Storm

Chapters 1 and 2     Chapter 3    Chapter 4    Chapter 5    Chapter 6

Chapter 7    Chapter 8    Chapter 9    Chapters 10 and 11    Chapter 12

Chapter 13    Chapter 14    Chapter 15    Chapter 16    Chapter 17    Chapter 18

Chapter 19    Chapter 20    Chapter 21    Chapter 22    Chapter 23

Chapter 24    Chapter 25 and 26    Chapter 27    Chapter 28    Chapter 29

Chapter 30    Chapter 31    Chapter 32    Chapter 33    Chapter 34

Chapter 35 and Epilogue

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Meet Feng Yuhuang, or the Phoenix Jade Emperor. The Year of the Rooster is here! THANKS SO MUCH NIGHTMARE! =D

Greenstreak, a Chiropan pip, and Hoarfrost, the blizzard Chiropan. This is actually a creative species, and really has the potential to grow into something amazing. Thanks to NightmareRebuff! =D

Keldia, Backbiter, Smothershawl, Soulreaper, Blackout, Paladin, Crossbones, Bloodcry, Panicdash, Mimicscale, Helreaper, Ispy, Jin Jundao, and Emberpride.

(All dragons above are made by NightmareRebuff!) 

My Wocky Jabberjaw from chameishida! His name is Bloodhound! Thanks!

Daredevil the Pebble-Shooting Speed Demon by xXHallaXx. Thanks!

Tealrammer by RaxForax. Kudos to you my friend!

My Windsong, Timelaspe, or in other words, "Blue". 

Toxinrage, my Insectoid Scythelimb


Neontaze and Nightshredder,

my Alien Luminglows


my Siren Flashbang


Clan: The Phantom Family

Gender: Male


Nadder: The Golden Nadder (Aka: Sun Rose) - Female -


  Sun Rose was my first dragon in the academy. She was actually from the Golden Isles, collected by Johan when he saw her (in egg form), hanging off a cliff. He caught her, and took her to Berk. She was my main dragon, and still is, in the races. She also helped out in leveling up the others, by helping them do the quests untill the very end, so they would get the XP.


Really Playful, Loyal, Doesn't like night time.

Likes to Eat:

Eggs, Eggs, and more Eggs.

Favorite thing to Do:

Play with the other Dragons, her favorite game is Fetch the Chicken!

Intresting Fact:

Every year, she flies away for 1 month, as she also likes to spend time on her own.

The Golden Nadder/Sun Rose by AniuRavenwolf! Thanks!

Thunderdrum: Sonarus (Aka: Sonus) - Male - 


  My second dragon, Sonarus was sorta of a pain. Since from when he was born, he was very wild and crazy, and even more hyper. He loved to jump on people's shoulders and roar in their ears, then run away for me to apolagize. Sonus now loves to steal my sheep, and hide them in the forest, but he is always there where I need him to be. He's BFFs with Thunder Quake, and, oh yeah, he is protective of me.


Wild, Crazy, Protective, and Loyal (Most of the time).

Likes to Eat:

Perch (I still don't understand why.)

Favorite thing to do:

Hide my sheep and pretend he didn't do it.

Intresting Fact:

He said he hates to play Thunder Run...but I can tell he's faking. How? I just know. :)

Whispering Death: Thunder Quake (Aka: Da King, Da Racing Champ) - Male -


  I found his egg in the tunnels, and Hiccup let me keep him. When he hatched, he looked at me for one second, and then, well, decided he wanted to be free. He jumped out of the stables, and started slithering to the forest. I chased him, freeing him from bushes, rescuing him from drowning, and TRYING to feed him when he was hungry. One day, a wild smokebreath appeared, and for some reason, Da King thought he was, "The King", and decided to take him on. He started dealing blows to it, but the smokebreath won in the end. Before it laid the final blow, though. I jumped and used myself as a human sheild. It hurt, but I was fine. I called in Sonarus, and he saved us. He put his trust in me, and I have helped him ever since.


Brave, doesn't know his limits...yet.

Likes to eat:

Sheep Steak.

Favorite thing to do:

Drill underground, and camp there, with me trying to find him. Also, play fighting with Sonarus.

Intresting Fact:

Well, he's trying to become a titian wing, but it ain't going to well so far.

By Wutend Bonfire. Thanks!

Scauldron: Waterspout (Aka: Spouty, The Heir of Frost and Pyra) - Female -


  One day, I went to Johan's ship. There, I found an egg with a burn and ice on it. This was Frost and Pyra's lost egg! I quickly traded it with Johan, and then I found out that she was sick. I ran home, and placed her on the hearth. 3 days passed. Nothing. Thinking she was dead, I sadly sighed, and put my hand on her egg. Suddenly, a bright golden glow spread around her, and she was born!


Likes to act cute, loyal, and sometimes very overprotective.

Likes to eat:


Favorite thing to do:

Spit at my face, and act innocent.

Intresting fact:

She is my main dragon when it comes to quests and Fan-Fics.

Waterspout by TildenWolfGirl, themasterplan47 and Dustydaybreak. She looks really awesome! =D

Gronkle: Meatball (Aka: Tomato, Cheese Head, Ball Boy) - Male -


  I found him in the forest, as a baby. He was crying and whimpering, but I picked him up. He looked at me, and tried to smile. He then yawned, and fell to sleep. I figured he was lost or abandoned, so I took him in. He is addicted to any red or yellow rocks, and will do anything to get them.


Friendly and Playful

Favorite Food:

Yellow and Red Rocks

Favorite Thing to do:

Sleep, Eat, Sleep, Eat, Sleep, Eat...

Intresting Fact:

He has a quartz tooth in the way back, for he broke it while trying to eat my diamonds.

Nightmare: Greek Fire (Aka: Greek Flame, Comet) - Male -


  A relative of Hookfang, with all his personalities. Need I say more?


Aggressive, sometimes a Bully, and secretly cares for us.

Favorite Food:


Favorite thing to do:

Disobey me...

Intresting fact:

He is Hookfang's mother's brother's son.

Thunderdrum: Eagle Ray (Aka: Booma, Sea Dream, Pearl) - Female -


  On new year's eve, I found out that Sonarus was missing! I asked the others to search for him, but he was not found! Depressed, I sadly went home, hoping that he was safe. In the morning, I set out with Waterspout, hoping to find Sonarus. After 5 hours of searching, I spotted something green, and something blue side by side. I patted Waterspout on the side, and we dove in. To my suprise, it was Sonarus and another Thunderdrum! Studying them for a bit, I found out that the blue one was Sonarus's mate! I tamed her, and since then, we had a new addition to my family.


Playful, Loyal to Sonarus and Me

Favorite Food:

Grilled perch with tomato toppings

Favorite thing to do:

Stick with Sonarus

Intresting Fact:

Some say she's a relative of Thornado...

Zippleback: Sunrise and Sunset (Aka: Dawn and Dusk, Pimp and Pump)

- Male -


  Kinda weird... Ok, so, I went to trader Johan's eggs, and found a dragon egg chest. I asked him could I buy it, since I had just enough gems. So, he said yes, and I got a rumblehorn! Yay! One of my most favorite dragons! Excitedly, I took it home, and put it in the hearth. Later on, I checked on it, and hatched it... then, to my surprise, a baby zippleback popped out! What?! I looked at it, it looked at me, and it was silent for a few minutes. Ok... weirdness attack. Whatever, he's still a baby dragon. I held it, and it's left head turned toward the sunrise in the distance. So I called the left one Sunrise. We played for a bit, then the sun was setting! This time, the right head turned toward it, and I named it Sunset.


Playful, Shy, Obedient

Favorite Food:

Sunrise: Squid, Sunset: Octopi

Favorite thing to do:

Turn toward the sunrise/sunset, depending on the head

Intresting fact:

Some people call him Pinky or Purple Butt. He tends to kill people like that... so DON'T!

Nadder: The Silver Nadder (Aka: Moonstone, Silverstar, Diana) - Female -


  So that's why Sun Rose leaves one a year, she's going to visit her sister, Mooonstone. How did I know this? I saw it myself. When she left, me and Thunderquake went to she where she went every year (Yeah, kinda like a stalker, but who knows if she goes mental and starts killing everything? Actually, TMI), she flew into a cave. I waited until night, and suddenly, a silver nadder appeared, and flew out. It came back at dawn, and after it went in, Sun Rose went out. They did this, then I couldn't take it anymore. I need to find out who this dragon is. I crept in, and the Silver Nadder shreiked, then flashed it's wings at my face. Startled, I stepped back. It snarled, and backed away. I decided another plan. When I saw Sun Rose, I signaled her to come to me. She first, well, was startled, then frightned. After face-palming myself, I tossed a fish on teh ground. She ate it, and after gaining her trust, I stepped in the cave with Sun Rose, and soon enough, I found out that this new dragon was Sun Rose's sister, and I took her home.


Quiet and silent, Doesn't go along with others apart from Sun Rose and me, Hardly makes a sound, Doesn't like day time, Doesn't like to play, Really Independent (not really loyal)

Favorite Food:


Favorite thing to do:

Stay at home and sleep in the day, flies out at night to do stuff

Intresting Fact:

Is Sun Rose's alter-ego, everything is almost 100% different. Can't beleive she's Sun Rose's sister...

Chilling Horror: Backbiter (Aka: Backstab, Nightmare, Geostar) - Male - 


Eh... might write it, might not. Depends on my mood. XD


Loyal, Feirce, Sometimes playful, Jealous of Waterspout

Favorite Food:

Roasted Lamb

Favorite thing to do:

Fight me

Intresting Fact:

My first fan dragon...

Base by NightmareRebuff


Typhoomerang: Topspin (Aka: Big guy, Wirlwind, FOOOM) - Male -


  This one is a sad one... So there was this typhoomerang that I knew very well. We met in a forest, and even though we were friends, I didn't tame him. Dunno why I didn't, he was awesome. So, a few months late, he found a mate and they had a baby typhoomerang. Then suddenly, his mate died. I felt very sorry for him, and because he had to feed the baby, he left the baby typhoomerang with me. We formed a bond, but in the Chilling Horror month, he went to get some fish... and never came back. I waited for days, and I fed the baby myself with some perch. My friend never came back, so I chose to adopt the baby myself. At night, he would have terrible nightmares, and he would go to my room and sleep with me. He had a serios fear of Backbiter, and I was sorta heartbroken that even though Backbiter wanted to play with Topspin and wanted to stick with him, Topspin always was scared of him and either attacked or flew away. But I know, that one day, the nightmares will pass, and the two dragons will grow to respect each other. My typhoomerang... my Topspin.


Always cautious, Defensive, Always on the lookout, Active

Favorite Food:

Eel... I can finally use them!

Favorite thing to do:

Just anything that doesn't involve Backbiter or sitting around

Intresting Fact:

He kills eels for sport... I hate that.

Sandwraith: Sandstorm (Aka: Puppy Dragon, He-who-burrows) - Male -


  It's funny how a fishing trip can befriend a dragon. So I was spending some time on my own (Raising a ton of dragons is tough, I need a break), and I was fishing and camping out on the beach. I just caught a bunch of halbut and salmon, and I was frying a salmon. *Growl* Huh? I looked up, then left and right. I then felt the ground move, and I looked down. Two eyes stared back up... "YAH! WHAT ON EARTH?!" I jumped back. At that time, I never knew what a sandwraith was. I'm new here, ok? The sandwraith exploded form the sand, and looked at me. Silence for a few seconds... then he wadled to my basket of fish and started eating everything like he didn't care. "Hey! That's my fish!" He didn't listen, and ate all of it. He then turned, and studied me. He looked like a nightfury, so I was intrigued. He then jumped and flopped on me and started licking my face. "You're like toothless!" I laughed, and he licked some more. "Hey, boy! Stop it!" He kept on licking me, and he soon decided that follow me was a better option than chilling in the sand waiting for who-knows-what to go over him. Smart kid.


Playful, Smart, Seems to always be hungry

Favorite Food:

Salmon (DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO FISH FOR ONE?! *shouts at Sandstorm, he licks me and wadles away.)

Favorite thing to do:

Act majestic

Intresting fact:

First dragon I knew nothing about in the beginning.

Seashocker: Aquashock and Waterskiz (Aka: Zapduo) - Male - 


  So, a few days ago, I received a present. Not sure who sent it, or why, but I got it. It was wraped in colored leather, and when I opened it, I found an egg. I couldn't tell the species though. It was colored in multicolors, with "Thanks Hyrith" written in bright yellow paint. I shrugged. The only way to find out the species is to hatch it. When I picked it up, I was shocked. No, not the suprised shock. The lightning shock. I fumbled with it, and Telsabeam jumped from the roof. I think she sensed it was a skirll, so I shuddered. I don't have anything against skrills, just after Telsabeam almost burned down my house becasue she saw a fly, I've been a bit careful with her. I do not need another crazy lightning-maniac shooting around my house. I ploped it down on the hearth, and after a few minutes, it shook. I picked it up, and took it to the lavepit for it to hatch. It never did. It just shook, but it never came out. Just before Telsabeam was about to crack it open, Waterspout stared at the egg, and shot a small stream of water. The water touched it, then it cracked. Puzzled, I dipped my hand in water, and touched the egg. Where I touched, it cracked. Then, I actually figured out something. I took the egg to the sea, and placed it under the water. It shuddered, then a seashocker was born. I was extremly happy, and I thought all my dragon were too. Well, except Telsabeam. She grumbled a sign of disappointment, and wadled away. XD


Aquashock is agressive and fierce. Extremly loyal, and will attack anything that he thinks is harming me.

Waterskiz is playful and wild. He loves doing tricks, and is usually the reason why they have so much scars. For some reason, he's addicted to shrimp.

They both work together as a team, probabily because they know that if they argue, they won't go anywhere.

Favorite Food:

Aquashock: Squid

Waterskiz: Shrimp :\

Favorite thing to do:

Bounce on the waves, SO FUN WHEN RIDING THEM!!!

Intresting Fact:

Read the Bio


Serpentfang: Ispy (Aka: Mr. See it all, Rare Jewel, Allseer) - Male -


Find here:

Personality: He is a wise dragon, but extremly curious as well. He also is trying to find the ones like him... (PUTTING HIM IN A FAN-FIC!!! "We Are Not Alone." Trailer in sig.)

Favorite Food:

Tea leaves. ???

Favorite thing to do:

Look at far away things

Intresting Fact:

He can see anything, as long as there is nothing blocking the thing from his sight. 

And a bunch more. Mostly cause I'm to lazy to put them in my sig. XD


- Areslam

- Cazi the Conqueror

- typhoomerangmaster338

- Storm

- httyyd

- Sleepyraccoon

- NightmareRebuff

- SefarWarrior

- themasterplan47

- Frostfire Markson

(Neospark is originally black, but he was war paint all over his body. He is the oldest of the bunch, and is the only Titianwing in the team.)

(Snowspear is the second oldest, and she is an albino. She has one red and one blue eye, but no one knows why.)


(Emerald's color comes after his dad, who is a wooly howl. He doesn't really love to show himself, since he doesn't really "fit in" to anywhere, since he's bright green.)

Emerald by Scorpio Kardia! Thanks! So cute!

The Guardian of Berk by Hattori. Thanks! It's EPIC!

Sea Splitter, by DragonLover43, a Snoggletog gift. Have a merry Snoggletog! =D


Alpha and Shadow

  "Hyrith and his friends set off embark on a quest to save Berk from the upcoming evil that threatens the destruction of Berk. They face challenges, death, loss, rage, and fear, but do they have what it takes to win in the end?"


  Areslam as Wolf Hofferson

  Skrilltheskrill as Jasmine

  Cazi the Conqueror as Axtar

  typhoomerangmaster338 as Ak the Insane

  Diamond Racer as Diamond Rider

~The Dragons:

~Part 1:

~Part 2:

~Part 3:

~Part 4:

~Part 5:

~Part 6:

~Part 7:

~Part 8:

~Part 9:

~ Part 10:

Journey to Berk (Not out Yet)

  "A flashback from the past, Hyrith tells the Aplha Riders about his journey from The Golden Isles to Berk. He, alone, with no dragon, sets out to find a home, where he can safely live. Along the way, he creates friendships, but also enemies. This is his story..."



  "You took everything I have... and now let me return the favor."

  "Drago, I might not be the one you are looking for, but I bet you will find me equally amusing."

  "If the chicken lady is gonna kill stuff, let her be. If big guy wants to break mountains, let him be. If the sword gal wants to fight, let her be. If I want to shoot stuff, let me be. If Hyrith wants to kill stuff... well, don't let him."







~ Part 1:

~ Part 2:

~ Part 3:

~ Part 4:

The Elements Are Against Us (Later on)

  "After the defeat of Nexus, her brothers and sisters are arroused by her death. After being locked in slumber for thousands of years, Huo Lin is the first to wake and sends messengers to his sibiling, and soon, all of the elements on earth is against Hyrith and his friends..."


  I live to see the world of vikings burn, and all who stand in my way shall perish...

  "We're the final Valkyries left. Valrora... she was shot down. She never made it."

  Xeon. Choose wisely. Give me the orb, or your friends will suffer. Slowly, so I can see them crumble under my shadow.









  Xeon (The Guardian of Berk)

We Are Not Alone, A Chinese and Western Crossover (Later on)

5 months after Hyrith disappeared...

  "Who's there?" Jin sat up on his bed. It was 12 in the night, and most of the academy was asleep. The footsteps sounded louder this time. Jin pushed away the covers, and put on his combat glove. As soon as his hand slipped in, a small flame sparked in his palm. The footsteps stopped, and a creaking sound was heard. Silence. He waited for a while, and figuring that there was nothing, slipped off his glove and pulled the covers over his head.

  "AHHHHHHH!" A scream peirced the cold air, and Jin fell out of his bed. In a hurry, he shoved the glove over his hand, and opened the door. He lit his glove, and the flame ignited in his hand. Across the balcony, a hooded dark figure stepped out of a room. Jin stood in a battle stance. The flame in his palm grew into a fireball, and Jin shouted to the figure.

  "Who are you? Take off the hood!"

  The hooded man turned to Jin, and removed his hood, revealing an old man with a long white, whispy beard. The fireball died down. "Master Zhang?"

  "Yes, my young student. Why are you here? You should be in your room sleeping, not outside watching the snow fall."

  "I woke up because of the scream. Did you hear it too? Did someone get hurt?"

  "That was the reason I came, young one. Go to bed, the final practices starts tomorrow. Do you want to get the blade or not?"

  "Yes master, but safety is more important. Mind if I investigate with you?"

  JIn bowed, and the old master smiled. "Jin, investigate this floor. I'll take the top and bottom floors. Meet after 5 minutes." Jin looked at his old master. He was not usually that kind, but Jin shook that thought out of his mind. He needed to see if someone was hurt.


  "Found anything yet?" Master Zhang glared at Jin, and he looked into the final room. Another sleeping student. "Nothing, master." Master Zhang looked at him, and smiled. "Well, I think it's settled. Let's have a seat, shall we?" Jin shrugged. The master jumped, and sat on the railing. Jin climed up to him.

 "Anything, Master?"

 "Nothing yet, child. Forget this. It's a good night to be alive, is it?"

 "Yes, I agree. You checked every room?"

 "Every room, youngling. How about you-" A howl penetrated the air. A Howler flew towards Master Zhang, and the yellow and black dragon growled. Wait. Jin looked at the Howler, and noticed something. That was Dai Pow, Icarus's dragon. He never submitted to anyone, not even the master, except Icarus. Dai Pow circled Master Zhang. He glared at him, and then glared at Zhang.  He kneeled, and Zhang grumbled under his breath. "Curses. Stupid howler." He then looekd at Jin. "Let me see Dai Pow first." He jumped off the railing, and Jin looked as he kneeled and clasped the wingless dragon's head, speaking some words. JIn nudged myself over, then he felt something. JIn looked down, and he saw blood on the railing, where the master's hand was. Sticky, freash blood. 

   The last room...

  Jin shoved past the master, and to the final room. He didn't check it, since it was the room the master came out of. Jin ran past, and saw a stream of blood running from under the door. He slammed it open, and he gasped in shock. 

 Mei Hua layed dead in her bed, a large bloody gash in the middle of her chest. Her mouth was open in shock. Jin ran to her, and noticed that the blood was freash. Impossible! The master just was in here! Master Zhang would never commit such a crime! A hand then went over Jin's shoulder, sending a chill up his spine. The master glared at him, his mouth curing into a evil grin. Shocked, Jin tried to speak. "What? How? WHY?!" The master smiled. "Yes, Jin. I am the one. Sorry, but I can't have any witnesses." Suddenly, Master Zhang's form flickered, and instead of the Master from before, a red haired boy, stood in his place. He suddenly jabbed his palm at Jin's chest. A blade then shot out, coming out of Jin's back. Jin gasped, and he fell to the ground. His vision slowly filled with black dots, and he thought his last thought.











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The way to get across the cave pool was really creative! & I didn't think this chapter was overly long.




OK... you have been warned...


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The Adventures of Elsa Jade!


My name is Elsa Jade (otherwise known as SefarWarrior). The Adventures of Elsa Jade tells the stories of how I became a dragon tamer and met these dragons...

Chapter 1          Chapter 2          Chapter 3          Chapter 4 (part 1)          Chapter 4 (part 2)

Chapter 5          Chapter 6          Chapter 7          Chapter 8                        Chapter 9

Chapter 10        Chapter 11       Chapter 12        Chapter 13

The first dragon I tamed was a female Chilling Horror...

 (all 3 pics by goldenfury360 (aka Hyrith))


She chose me as her rider, and that's when I became a dragon trainer.


This is Fáfnir (adopted from nevealpar). He is young, energetic, and loves playing with furry animals. He has poison in his teeth and can shape shift into any horse. I met him on a secret island I discovered, and we became friends for life... after I almost died...

(above drawing by DuskDaybreak)


Meet Enigma and his little sister Stellar! Enigma is a highly intelligent dragon who loves music and solving riddles. Although he isn't normally very social, he loves Stellar and would do anything to protect her. Stellar is a feisty, lovable dragon who enjoys showing off her glowing spikes, drawing pictures, and dressing up (her tail isn't actually injured; the prosthetic is her Toothless costume) :)

                          Stellar by Autumn5467                                                      Enigma     by Reiraku

Fire and Ice as a Frost Fury, by StellaMontague

Ingo, my Paranoid Sandskitter from NightmareRebuff

Peacock, my Windsong from goldenfury360 (aka Hyrith)


Luminara, adopted from no6nialovec12345

The next addition to my dragon friends was Faramir. I was helping Stellar practice her night flying, when we were attacked by a wild Boneknapper and had to crash land in the forest. Stellar was uninjured, but we could hear the dragon looking for us. We knew it would find us soon unless we found a place to hide. That was when Stellar seemed to sense something else in the forest. She gave a low purring growl - a plea for help, I thought - and gradually, through the dark mist of the forest, I saw another Night Fury approaching. He was dark green, and the dark green mist he created around himself was perfect camouflage. He led us to his secret lair, a forest cave hidden behind a waterfall, where we stayed hidden until it was safe. He and Stellar became such good friends that when it was time to leave, Stellar refused to go unless her new friend came with us. He and I were both happy to agree, and the three of us flew back home. I named him Faramir because of his hidden cave (which is now our secret hideout), and also because he was so brave and selfless.

 by SoulStereo

Faramir & Stellar by DuskDaybreak


This is Nod, the Woodland Sprite I adopted from DuskDaybreak. He lives in Faramir's forest cave, where he can stay close to his natural habitat while I train him. He is lively, imaginative, and has a great sense of humor. Although he sometimes tends to be a little sarcastic, he usually is trying to be funny rather than insulting. He's very independent and loves exploring the forest. His reckless antics are a constant source of worry for the less impulsive Faramir.


 (free lineart base found here, the rest is by me)


 by me

(made by me with the Night Fury Maker)

Paradox, adopted from mesaprncss

RNF(RoboticNightFury), adopted from Kowwa                         by OwlyDragons


(made by me with the Night Fury Maker)

Toothless: left blinkie by DuskDaybreak, right blinkie by NightmareRebuff :)

Sefarva blinkie by DuskDaybreak

Sefarva by Chocolate24

This awesome picture (above) is by httyyd!

I'm not a psycopath; I'm a high-functioning sociopath.

With your number.  ;)

- Sherlock Holmes

(I found this pic of Mara Jade online, and added Dreamworks images of the dragons.)


I am a



"To defeat the darkness out there, you must defeat the darkness inside yourself."

- Coriakin, Voyage of the Dawn Treader


This is because I have a Whispering Death named Thrawn. Because, let's be honest, if Thrawn were a dragon he'd probably be a Whispering Death. The dragon is a Dreamworks image; the pic of Thrawn is from the cover art of Outbound Flight by Timothy Zahn.


Note: All glitter text is by puppyllover. Unless otherwise stated, all photomanipulations by me.

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Thank you.   The way in which

Thank you.


The way in which Jarl got across the beam was just like a contestant in American Ninja Warrior.  There is an obstical on Stage 2 in the finals that the contestant has to use his arms to hold on to a board above and work his way across.  Here is a Video of where I got the Idea from: Click Here for it. The specific place is a minute into the video.


There will be more things like this in this story to come.

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Joined: 09/09/2014
Whoa that's awesome!

I think I remember seeing that on TV... I love the ninja moves :)

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Cazi the Conquerer
Supreme Viking Champion
Joined: 10/22/2014

You never cease to amaze me



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Thanks for all the comments.

The awesomeness will continue as there will be twists a surprising developments in the coming chapters.

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Here is the link to my next chapter: