Critique for my drawing

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I recently did a drawing of my Nightwing OC Voidwalker and I was wondering if anyone could give me some critique on it. I want to improve as an artist and this could really help me out. I'm always open for constructive criticism so hit me up if you want to talk to me about something that could use some work. 


For this drawing, I used the image of a Nightwing inside a book as a reference. [not mine just for example]

I'm also probably going to make some digital art of the drawing at some point, I just haven't gotten around to it.


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    Nice!  I would add some

    Nice!  I would add some stormy clouds though, or a drop off cliff with him overlooking the valley below.  

    Drawing tip; use a blending stump, which is a cylindrical drawing tool, tapered at the ends and usually made of tightly rolled felt.  Ive used q-tips or rolled paper before too. The shading really brings out the reality in drawings.

    Use diferent values of pencils (thats the darkness, lightness, softness, or hardness of the graphite or (lead)).  This also helps with realness in drawings.  think of where the light source is coming from and shade the oppisite! 

    Try to keep your drawings centered on the paper, unless you have one drawing on one side and one on the other.  This focuses your veiwers to the drawing more.  Just be free with it.  Feel the picture and then draw that feeling!  None the less, It's awesome! Keep it up!


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