Book 6 - Mystery of Shadow Mountain - Chapter 7: Dragon Basketball
Sorry for the delay, but college. Nuff said.
Hope you enjoy the chapter!
Hey, HTTYYD. I just wanted to post, saying this chapter is a jolt to me. Know why? Because this was the first chapter of any of your stories I read. I clicked on this chapter when it first came out and started reading over it, but then I decided I should probably start at the beginning....the very beginning. Since then, I've read through the many amazing adventures of Jarl and friends. Thanks for the grand adventures. Keep writing these legends.
Yes, I've really enjoyed the series. Is it hard for you to believe you've been doing this for three long years? And have there been any times where you thought you might end it? You mentioned your building up to book eight. If I remember right, you meantioned somewhere that it was like this serie's HTTYD2. I'm looking forward to it.
I'll definitely have a few suggestions when I finally catch up. I would put them forth now, but, since I'm not fully caught up, I'd hate to make a suggestion only to read the very next chapter and see it became a reality.
You meantioned the term 'OC'. I have read it since I joined the Forum, but I still don't know what it stands for. Could you explain?
Whoever suggested Vixxen to you, give them a high five. She's my second favorite villain in your story (that's original).
Yeah, once I catch up, I'll give a review (though, if you haven't finished this story when I catch up, I'll probably wait until your done to give my review). It will probably consist of my favorite book to least favorite, parts I liked, and maybe one or two other things. After that, with your permission, I'll PM you my suggestions.
That's it for now. See you again wherever the answer is to the Mystery of Shadow Mountain. (Great title, by the way.)
Sorry for the late response. I got caught up in the End of Summer stuff and kinda...um....forgot. (He he. -Rubs neck awkwardly-).
Your story of how you fell in love with writing is awesome. I used to really, REALLY, hate writing. But then I took a creative writing class, wrote a long story, and can't stop writing now. To me, writing is like a video game, but you make the land, and the story, and the characters, and everything else. (Maybe more people would write if we told them it was a new style of video game...)
It's a shame they took away that 'reads' function. It sounds like a really good idea for fan-fic writers. I bet they took it away because people would click on their own page a ton to make it look like it was really good when it wasn't good at all.
Your comment about "The case of the Missing Socks" is true. That's part of what first got me reading. You did a pretty good job transitioning that line into an actual story.
Thanks for explaining what an OC was. I figured the C meant Character, but I wasn't sure.
Oh, While I'm thinking about it, I read chapter 33 today. But the link in your thread was acting up and wouldn't open it. I had to go through your history to find it. I admit, it could just be my tech acting up, but thought I'd give you a heads up in case it was the link itself.
Good luck someday with publishing these stories. I would advise that, before you do, just reread your stories to fix any plot holes (like, in the original, you have a part where Alvin and Dagur work together, but it doesn't match the timeline.) It would be awesome to see a HTTYD fan-fic become canon.
You know how The Lord of the Rings is broken into three smaller books with different names? I was curious what your Series Name was? We know the individual book names, but I don't remember if you gave the series a name yet.
Before wrapping this post up, I have two questions. 1. Have you ever considered killing a character off? I know that's a weird question, but, considering you've faked killing both Annabeth and Asvord off, I'm just curious if it's ever crossed your mind?
2. (FOR ANY CASUAL READERS READING THIS IN THE FUTURE, THIS CONTAINS A MINOR SPOILER!)
My second question is, could you clear up Annabeth's past for me? She's had so many twists and turns in her history that I honestly can't keep up. You probably explained it well, but I misunderstood something, or reading different parts after a few months have made me forget. Here's the order of events I think it went in.
1. Set adrift by Dagur.
2. Lands on another island where taken in (you made one statement once that made it sound like she was taken in by royalty. There was some comment when Annabeth and Dawn were catching up where you mentioned a castle, or something along the lines.)
3. Dawn leaves Alvin and somehow gets to the same place as Annabeth and is taken in by same family.
4. There's a gap of time here where Annabeth trains her Stormcutter and Anora, she Also meets Cazi and they become friends (Even though it's probably been stated, could you remind me how they became friends? Did they grow up on the same island?).
5. Village gets attacked by fake-Berserkers (who are really working for the villain of the third book). Dagur is there, though he didn't start the battle (could you also further explain how Dagur was there. Annabeth shows up in book two after fleeing from her island. The events of book two take place a month or two after the first story, and the first story takes place at the series final of Defender of Berk where Dagur was captured.)
6. Annabeth gets handed the necklace thing from the villain of the third book. Annabeth gives a piece of it to Anora.
7. Annabeth is separated from her family, Anora gets captured, most of her family killed, Dawn escapes somehow. Then Annabeth escapes on her stormcutter and flees to Berk.
8. Everything after is known to us.
Thank you if you explain this. Again, you've probably already explained all this before perfectly, but I missed something.
That's all I got for now. Talk soon hopefully and I should be all caught up in two-weeks max (hopefully being the key word here).
Nice series name. It definitely fits the stories. If you ever have your doubts about the title, just remember that there's a multimillion grossing series called Harry Potter.
I know this sounds bad, but it's pretty cool that you've considered killing characters off. It must be tough though. You have to decided whether you want to, then decide on how, then ask the creature of the character if you can, then you'd have to write it, and then hope your readers don't go bereserk. That takes good effort. If you ever do kill someone off, I wish you luck on doing it (in the books, of course).
You mentioned you've already killed one character off, but never said who or what killed them. Which character would this be? (Note: I just finished chapter 37 of this book, so no spoilers.)
Thank you for explaining Annabeth's backstory. This is something that has been plaguing me for a good while. Now it all makes sense. THE MYSTERIES OF THE CHOSMOS HAVE BEEN UNLOCKED! (Okay, maybe it's not that huge, but I'm still really greatful).
Before I go on, I just want to say one thing. Since starting to talk to you here, I've found new respect for you and your series. You are trying to get through college and write a series at the same time. But not just any series, a fan-fic that you try to get out the same time each week. You are writing a mystery, but are also creating it as you go. You are trying to incorporate other people's charecters, have it make sense, and make the character's creatures happy. You are also trying to tie it to the HTTYD series, day by day! And your trying to make it funny! And throw in a romance! And battles! And morals! To say I'm not impressed would be a lie.
Okay, I do have a few more questions:
1. One of my favorite things in the series was Jarl's sword-staff-bow. It was a really cool idea and fun in fights. However, I could never imagine it right. Could you describe how it folds, how the string works, and how it can unattatch to make two swords. Does it fold around like Heather's axe, or does it fold in half like a briefcase? If you have a drawing, it would be happily welcomed. (Also, if you choose to describe it, please use very simple terms. I'm not good with using long, descriptive words. And please compare things too, like "it has a doorway-like hinge on...".)
2. Another question that has been bugging me for a while is....what happened to Michah (I think that's how you spell his name)? When you introduced Dawn in "The Secret Symbol", you also introduced a charecter named Michah. He was a boy who got into nearly constant arguments with Dawn. Then, suddenly, *poof* he was gone without a trace, almost like he never existed. Did he fly into the sunset, or did the person who suggested him decide to take him back?
I'm also going to make a quick suggestion for you to think about. This doesn't have to do with your story, but more as background info. You've introduced a lot of characters over time, each with different looks and backstories, and, for the slow paced reader like me, we tend to have trouble remembering everything. Would you consider making a side thread with character profiles? You know, hight, eye color, hair color, dragons, a brief history, and such stuff. This would be helpful because characters like Meen, who you probably descriped in the first book, we have kinda forgot what they look like by book six. Just something for you to consider.
That's all I got for now. Talk soon.
-Lack Lunason
Hello again, HTTYYD. Sorry for the lateness of this reply. Things came up and, seeing how I was so close to the end of book 6, I figured I'd go ahead and finish it first. So, yes, I am fully caught up. I plan on replying to your previous post here, then posting my overall thoughts and comments on the thread for the final chapter, then PMing you my suggestions (though it may take me a day or two to get all of this done).
So, let's get to this reply, shall we?
First off, I'm glad that you won't go all Game Of Thrones on us. I haven't seen the show either, and I don't really want to. I think killing off one or two characters can actually be good for a story, but killing off dozens of people just isn't the way to go.
And, speaking of killing characters off, you actually (and sadly) have me kinda excited. Ever since you mentioned you have previously considered offing somebody, I've been trying to think who would be the most likely character, and in what ways it could happen. (Yeah, I'm a sick mind...)
Thank you tons for explaining the bows to me. I can picture it a lot clearer now. It seems like you put a lot of thought into it. I do find it kinda funny (in a good way) that you got the idea for it from American Ninja Warrior.
Thanks also for the drawing of Jarl. It helps me imagine him (you have no idea how long I believed him to be blond). The Deadly Nadder colors are cool. I do have two questions about the drawing. 1) Is Jarl really 25? I was under the impression he was 19-20. Have I been living a lie? 2) Why does Jarl have the Triforce from 'The Legend of Zelda' on his chest?
Feel free to tell me about the World Building class you mentioned.
Thanks for explaining about Michah. Now you got me wondering if he'll come back as a villain, or if he will have a key piece of some mystery.
I'm glad you liked my idea about a character info page. I think it would be a great way to help keep your fans informed, and also a way to interest and advertise to a new audience. Let me know when you start because I'll definitely want to check it out.
Oh, a quick thing I want to mention. The link in your signature for the final chapter wouldn't load right for me. Again, it could just be my device, but I figured I should give you a heads up.
I have one final question before I head. I have things I've been writing and may eventually consider posting in Forum. When I do, I think I'll try to organize the links in my sig like yours. So my question is; how do you put links into your chapter titles. Whenever I put a link, it comes out as a jumble of letters, dashes, and numbers. How do you get it to say 'Chapter 9'? Is there some button that allows you to put a link inside of something you write, or what?
Gosh, I hope I made the last paragraph clear and not the ramblings of a dimwit.
Anyway! I'll be heading. I'll try to post my series review later today, but no promises. See you around!
-Lack Lunason
This is just a quick little response. I wanted to thank you for posting the video about the links. I wasn't expecting it to be you doing the video, but that was a nice surprise. It kinda felt like a behind the scenes of your signature/story. I will probably be using this info in the next month or so because I'm considering....do something (insert dramatic music here).
Again, thank you for your help!
-L.L.
I slowly take the gem and say, “Thank you?”
The gem itself is about two or three inches wide, a spherical shape, and white in the center while pink on the outside. The gem is an already nicely cut and very beautiful; quite heavy too. I went back to the cabinet to grab the case the gem was in previously. I close the case over the gem and attach it to my belt, checking it a few times to make sure it is securely attached.
The captain questions, “What will you do with me now?”
As I am about to open my mouth, Cazi yells out from above, “Jarl-la-Beth, get up here.”
Annabeth and I just look at each other. One for what Cazi called us and two for, “What is wrong now?”
The two of us run up to the deck only to nearly get blasted by…
After shielding my eyes with my arms and being knocked to the ground, I then look back east, “Vixxen!”
Vixxen and Ragnarok flew overhead and are coming back around.
Annabeth declares as she calls Anora over, “At least it is just one dragon and rider, granted its Vixxen and her Snow Wraith.”
I call Fredrick over as Cazi exclaims, “That is the least of our problems.”
“What’s wrong now?” I question, frustrated.
Cazi points in the near horizon a small fleet of Vixxen Vikings coming out from the cover of a sea stack, “We did not see them before. These guys attacked us before we could sweep the area.”
“Ahh!” I cried out in frustration. “We can’t take them all on, we have to let them go.”
“Where are we going to retreat?” Annabeth looked at me with the obvious unasked question.
Quickly thinking of an idea, I said, “Go due west.”
With that, we all launched into the air and head west. Oddly enough, Vixxen did not care to let us escape. Fighting a little bit on our way out, we retreated to the west.
Beyond ear shot, Dawn states, “We cannot go back to Mystery yet, or they will see us going to the island and will probably investigate.”
“You are right,” I reply. “Reason why we are going due west. We must keep going until we are totally out of sight. Even then, we need to make sure we are not tailed and reveal we have an outpost.”
We then fly for about an hour, probably a little less than that, but we believe we go far enough not to be seen to return to our Edge of Mystery. Throughout the trip, we kept a keen eye out to see if we were tailed. Being tailed by a ship would be quite difficult as we are flying fast, yet not at top speed. The only possible way we could successfully be tailed is if someone did so by dragon. With hardly any clouds today, tailing someone by dragon would be basically impossible.
Turning back Mystery, we fly further south to come up on our outpost from the southeast. This will insure that if Vixxen and her vikings are still there, then they will not know that we have returned to Mystery. The entire trip took about two hours.
As soon as we got back we check with the rest.
Hyrith reports, “Vixxen and her small band of ships left and returned to wherever they came from about a half hour ago. There are no more signs of them in the area.
“Good,” I declared. “Any one up for some fun for a change?”
This perks everyone up, Elsa asks, “What do you have in mind?”
“I was going to ask you guys that,” I say.
Cazi grunts, “Well, where’s the fun in that? You said if we were up for fun as if you had an idea.”
“I have a few,” I reply. “But I am curious if there is anything you guys want to do.”
Hannah then punches her left palm with her right fist, “Crack a few knuckles over some Hunter heads?”
Dawn chimed in, “Wrap a sword around their faces?”
I chuckle, “Other than kicking Dragon Hunter butts, what do you want to do for fun?”
Cazi questions, “There’s another type of fun?”
I roll my eyes but cannot help but smile, “Yes, there is another type of fun.”
Annabeth steps in, “I have a suggestion.”
Hannah then asks with not too much anticipation, “What?”
Annabeth simply declares, “Dragon Basketball.”
Hannah opens her mouth to say something, but when Annabeth’s suggestion finally hit her, she stopped.
“Please,” Annabeth says. “Contain your excitement, one at a time.”
We all chuckle.
“Let me explain,” Annabeth states.
Hannah adds, “Please do.”
“Well,” begins Annabeth. “Dragon Basketball. Fairly self-explanatory. It is a new game I thought of when thinking of how the Twins toss sheep around in their infamous dodge sheep. Not to be confused with their dodge rock game. A lot less violence in Dragon Basketball, though if your competitive, it may become… spirited rivalry amongst friends.”
Cazi quips, “That just describes our everyday lives.”
“I know, but moving on,” Annabeth continues. “The objective of Dragon Basketball is simple: Score more points than the other team.”
Dawn folds her arms and says, “Knowing you guys know, what are the rules?”
“I’m getting to that,” Annabeth goes on to say. “The rules of Dragon Basketball are the following: No more than five riders and dragons on the field at all times; one rider and dragon counts as one. Counting how many we have here at Mystery, we can have two teams of seven, with two substitutions. There will always be a defensive team and an offensive team. The offensive team is trying to score on the opponents’ team basket. Obviously, the opponent is trying to defend their basket. Each basket is worth one point. Either the dragon or the rider can catch the basketball, but once one catches it, they can only have the ball for five seconds before they have to pass or shoot. You cannot pass it to your dragon or the dragon to you to restart the counter. Be honest about the counter, zero to five. When someone scores, then the defending team gets to inbound the ball and then go to the other side and try and score. If the ball misses, then everyone can go for the rebound to either score or fast break down to the other side, depending on what team gets the ball. If the ball goes out of bounds, whichever team touches it last before going out of bounds, the other team gets the ball.”
“Say if Snotlout were playing,” Hannah spoke. “While in going for the ball, mind you, what would happen if I… oh… I don’t know… happened to take his helmet instead?”
Annabeth nods as she says, “Glad you asked that though surprised you didn’t say, ‘head.’-”
Hannah interrupts while saying under her breath, “I was going to, but thought that would be less violent-y.”
Cazi raised her left eye brow and echoed, “Violent-y?”
“Anyway,” Annabeth got our attention back to the question. “There are fouls in this game in which the team being fouled gets to shoot one free shot from a certain distance from the basket. Three players from each team; defending, offensive, defending and offensive, defending, offensive will be how they will line up; will then go for a rebound as soon as the foul shot is shot. What are the fouls exactly? Well, use your common sense to determine what is a foul. Anything excessively aggressive or what Hannah just described, that would be a foul. I know, what you cannot do in Dragon Racing, is the same here; it is just you are more stationary most of the time with bursts of movement. If you basically run over someone or their dragon, then that is a foul and a turnover. A turnover is when the offensive team turns to the ball over to the other team via knocking the ball out of bounds, an offensive foul, or throwing it to the other team.”
I declare, “Sounds like you’ve put a lot of thought into this. Though I have to ask, how much of this did you think of before and how much did you just make up here on the spot.
Annabeth grinned, “Some of it and the main idea I thought of before. The rest I had kind of thought about but not really hashed out. What I just said should really be common sense about any sport, just with specifics to that particular sport.”
“I do have one comment I would like to add,” I said.
“Shoot,” Annabeth stated.
“Very punny,” I noted. “To have a shot right underneath the basket be the same value of something further out, I think there should be a reward for the skill it would take to shoot from farther out. Say, two points from beyond foul shot range while anything further in is still one point.”
Nodding, Annabeth responds, “That sounds fair. What does everyone think? Do you agree with that and while we are here, do you agree with the rules?”
Taking a few moments, everyone thought and then replied with a few yes’s, yup’s, and yeah’s.
“Then let’s get our dragons and go out to the field that cleared out,” Annabeth said. Then on our way over to the stable, she added, “Oh, and if you, your dragon, or both are getting or are tired, you can call for a substitution from the extra two on your team.”
Within about ten minutes, after getting our dragons, we flew in nearer the middle of the island. We came upon a rectangle like clearing that is surrounded by trees on all side. On the rectangle are dug out lines for the out of bounds and foul shot. The size of the clearing is about fifty yards long and thirty yards wide. Upon landing, Annabeth quickly measured out an extended skill shot for the two points. Once that was done, Annabeth shows off the baskets.
“Here are the baskets,” Annabeth shows off, using her hands, the northern bucket in a tree a little over twenty feet off the ground.
Dawn states, “How do you expect us to get the ball back after making a basket?”
“Well,” Annabeth replies. “The team that got scored on goes up and takes the ball.”
Garth steps forward from behind the group, “And here is the ball.”
Garth passes me the ball for testing. The ball is about a foot and a half to two feet in diameter.
The moment I caught the ball I noticed a few things, “Is it full of air?”
Garth replies and explains, “Yes. The ball is a leather ball interlined with tar. There is a needle sized hole on one side to insert regular air, no need for compressed air. Try bouncing it on the ground.”
I did so and the ball came back up to me, “Wow, this is really cool. Maybe there could one day be a sport with just vikings running around throwing this thing around.”
“But doing it with dragons, is much more fun,” Annabeth said.
I retort, “Doing anything with dragons makes it doubly fun, anyway.”
“True,” Annabeth said.
“Alright,” Cazi said rubbing her hands together. “Who’s picking what teams?”
Dawn folds her arms and says, “I think we already know which two vikings want to be on the same team.”
“Who us?” Annabeth said genuinely surprised. “Me be on Jarl’s team? Why would I want to do that?” Cazi looks confused. “I want to beat his team. How can I beat him if he is on my own team?”
Eyeing Annabeth, I speak, “Okay, okay. I see how it is. You sa going down.”
“Yeah,” Annabeth responds. “Down right into the winning column. Bam.”
I smile and close my eyes, “I walked into that one.”
Getting impatient, Hannah asks, “Are we going to pick teams or not.”
Getting down to business, Annabeth and I are voted team captains. We each picked one person to be on our team. Annabeth picks Cazi first. I then pick Asvord first.
“Why would you pick me?” she asks, a bit disappointed. “I would have wanted to beat you.”
“Exactly,” I said while thinking about my next pick; Annabeth’s second pick is Dawn. “Having Annabeth on the other team is bad enough.”
“What did you say?” Annabeth asks.
“Oh, just something you probably overheard anyway and just wanted to see if I actually meant it. Because you already know the answer to the question,” I answer and then pick, “Elsa.”
Annabeth then picks Hannah.
As I pick Garth, I then remark, “I see we are keeping it all in the family for the start.”
The rest of the team is filled out as follows: Annabeth’s final picks are Abbie, Hyrith, and Angie. My final picks are Meen, Explod, and Ali. We also pick team names. Annabeth’s team name is, “Electric Firestorms.” My team name is, “Thundering Sonics.”
The positions are Point, Wings, Center, and Runner.
Starting five for Annabeth: Annabeth takes Point, Cazi and Angie take the Wings which flank the Point on both sides, Hannah takes Runner, and Hyrith takes Center.
Starting five for my team: I take Point mainly so I can defend Annabeth, Asvord and Explod take Wings, Garth takes Runner, and Meen takes center.
After a few hours of playing, I would like to say it was a competitive game, but most of the time was spent trying to get used to the game, even for Annabeth. We had to fine tune a few things as we played. We also lost track of the score. At point one point after I threw the ball in the direction of Asvord, who cut to the basket, Asvord twirled Spiker to slammed the ball into the basket causing the bottom to fall out. We found this made retrieving the ball a lot easier.
When we realized we had lost track of the score and we all were getting tired, Annabeth said the next shot a team makes, they win the game. Playing tight defense on Annabeth and Anora, she outlet passes the ball to Angie. I sag down a bit to help on that side of the defense as Angie had been driving to the basket the entire game. However, Angie passed the ball back up to Annabeth. Caught off guard, I chase the ball. Annabeth has Anora run forward for a drive. I maneuver Fredrick to defend the drive, but Annabeth had Anora flap her wings once to pull back for a jumper. Fredrick instinctively extends his left wing in hopes of blocking the shot… Barely even touched the basket… However, it went through the basket.
All that work and Annabeth still gets the shot off.
I then declare, “Even in a sport she just created, she still beats me.”
Asvord shakes her head, “Out of all the things you are good at and win, if Annabeth is your opponent, I am asking for a trade to the other team.”
I could not help but chuckle.
We all agreed that was fun and we need to do that more often. Everyone likes Dragon Basketball so much that we decided to do another game tomorrow.
With the day winding down, we did our own things until supper was ready. There, at one point, came an explosion from Garth’s Lab. Nothing out of the ordinary, but Garth relays that a project he was working for the past couple of weeks just went up in smoke. He will have to start from scratch. A few hours later we all met at the Clubhouse when Asvord originally said supper would be ready.
Ananbeth, Cazi, and Dawn are the last to arrive to supper. They are arguing with each other.
“Alright,” I said breaking up the noise. “Who took out Snotlout’s head?”
Cazi replies, “If only.”
Annabeth sighs, “It is alright, I guess. We really should be arguing.”
“Yeah,” Dawn says. “Because it wasn’t my fault.”
“Well,” Cazi adds. “It wasn’t my fault.”
Annabeth chimes in again, “It wasn’t my fault, Dawn is the one who ran in to me.”
“I was pushed by yours truly standing over there,” Dawn points at Cazi.
“I did not do anything,” Cazi answers. “Can I help it if your dragon gets spooked at static electric shock from a Skrill?”
“Enough!” I demand. “What happened?”
“After whatever happen that these two muttonheads described,” Annabeth explains. “I was nearly pushed off a sea stack.”
I immediately ask, “Are you alright.”
“I’m fine,” came her reply. “My two swords… eh… not so much.” Annabeth then whistled as she lowered her hands from a high point in the air down about two feet and then made a splashing sound.
“They’re at the bottom of the ocean?” I question.
“Yup,” Annabeth said. “Nothing we can do about it now, I guess. Let’s just eat supper. At least that is one thing Asvord cannot mess up.”
Asvord came in and said, “Well, she can.”
“What?!” came everyone’s responses. “She can forget to keep Smoky out of the kitchen before he eats everything that was cooking. No supper tonight.”
The whole crew started to grumble. I tried to cheer them up with the thought of playing Dragon Basketball tomorrow. But they all mulled off and went to their huts to eat some of their own snacks.
As they walked off, I thought, “Why is everything all of a sudden going wrong?”
It is getting late and we all decided to get ready for bed. Turns out, I will not mention any names but their names rhymes with “A sword,” they forgot to fill the water for the water basin and drinking water, so we have nothing to clean up before bed. Checking the rain barrels outside, they are surprisingly empty too. Surprisingly because it just rained recently.
We turned in anyway and got in the bed.
For some reason I could not sleep, but I had worked out the entire day and felt tired. I stayed awake until the moon came out. When it reached overhead of the clubhouse, the moonlight from the above window shone through my room and a glare of light appears out of the corner of my eye.
Getting out of bed to investigate, I see that it is the gem that we took from Vixxen’s Captain of the one ship. Only part of the gem let off a glare. Turning around to see it in better moonlight, I notice the glare moving from one side of the gem to the other side. Repeating the process, I see that the glare is staying in one place almost as if it is pointing at something, regardless of how I turn the gem. Then it dawned on me.
“Is this gem pointing to something on Mystery?” I ask myself. “I know we don’t know about everything there is on Mystery, but could this really be connected?”