Work in Progress Story...but I need your guy's Opinions :D

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RipleyAVP
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It's me Ripley again. I've been in the process of making a story n my main character I've known since I was a little girl and her wip story is on my Deviantart page..but I've been having some writers block...until now.

 

I bought HTTYD2 Blueray DVD the other day and ever since then I've had the inspiration come back to me. Now my story is Fantasy related, and In a way in the Viking Era. But based in a Kingdom Called 'Red Arrow' ruled by these strange underarm-winged wolf-like creatures called 'Vulmaene'.

I've gone through so much editing and restarts and character developments..but the way the Vulmaene look is kinda..well plain.

 

I had an Idea! Instead of them just being winged wolf like animals..maybe add a bit of the Dragon DNA into them, like a Hybrid!

But...it's the look of them that I'm having trouble on. It needs to be different. Unique, and strange to the eye. But very catching and mesmerizing!

My Deviantart page is in the Link

http://ethelwulf18.deviantart.com/

and the few chapters I have are there and may be re-edited after I figure out more to put and fix into it

 

Please! I'd love for your Opinions, requests, I'f you'd like to draw them Go ahead :D I'd really love some help

:)

 

This is my Main Character

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--My OC Dragons--

 

Dragon Name:

-Creep, the Xeno-Fury(Fan-made)-

 

 

 

 

-Ulric, the Skrill-

-Jabbawocky, the Nightfury-

Draimier, the Stormcutter

 

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Age:

-21 years-

 

 

Species:

-Xeno-Fury(Xenomorph-Nightfury)

 

 

Apereance:

(This lineart was made by the most awesomest person NightmareRebuff!!!)

 

 

 

Personality:

-A bit of an oddball, a little quite for his own good, curious but extremely cautious, stubborn and hard-headed

 

 

Hobbies:

-Creeping on others :3, Sneaking around, getting into things you normaly don't want a dragon to get into, stealing small objects and then putting them in random places

 

 

 

Extra:

-Watch your back...else he be creepin'

 

 

 

*Abilities*:

-Acidic Plasma Shot

-Acidic Blooded

-Is capable of climbing surfaces

-Being half of something else, Creep(And all like him) Are not controlled by Alpha Dragons, but can still feel the power of them. A Xeno-fury, however, can be controlled by an actual 'Queen' of their species.

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*Fluff Abilities*:

-Acidic eye socket(and other green parts) glow in dim or no light. 

-Has two long sets of tubes on his back(not shown) that are capable of producing a black tar-like substance, which hardens into a thick rubbery substance over time.

 

 

 

*Disadvantages*:

-Cannot be near fire and can become extremely wounded by Fire Class dragon's flame(any species in that class)

-Acidic blood is compressed inside the exo-skeleton of Creep, injuring him will create a quick burst of burning acid.

-Not as fast as a normal Nightfury because of the exo-skeleton creating drag, but still close in line.

-Because of the dome-shaped head, Xeno-fury's cannot see as they have no physical eyes. They have thermal vision to help with knowing where others are, and the ability to pick up objects from constant sound(like echolocation)

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---There are currently 5 Xeno-fury's in existance. Why not add to the small population? Click the link below!---

http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/introducing-xeno-fury

 

List:

1.) Creep, belongs to Me

2.) Skurd, belongs to NightmareRebuff

3.) Deathmaw, belongs to WolfLight

4.) Luna, belongs to Lucy Shadow

5.) Blood, belongs to mesaprncss

 

 

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-RipleyAVP of Vigilante

 

-Made by   -

created by kimbenoso

 

 

 

Friend Code:

AN26NV

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My Dragons(In-game):

Toothless: Titan Night Fury

 

Xenno: Titan Monsterous Nightmare

Scrape: Teen Monsterous Nightmare

 

Grid: Titan Whispering Death

Dread: Adult Whispering Death

Uriz: Teen Whispering Death

Gargier: Baby Whispering Death

 

QueenDrum: Adult Thunderdrum

Bruiser: Baby Thunderdrum

 

RipleyAVP: Titan Deadly Nadder

Snowdrift: Teen Deadly Nadder

Coal: Baby Deadly Nadder

Gemcrusher: Baby Deadly Nadder

 

Sig and Roy: Titan Hideous Zippleback

Eye and Less: Baby Hideous Zippleback

 

Boultrae: Titan Gronckle

Agriel: Baby Gronckle

 

Ulric: Titan Skrill

 

Floki: Adult Rumblehorn

Charlie: Baby Rumblehorn

 

Singe: Adult Hobblegrunt

Haunteir: Baby Hobblegrunt

Nava: Baby Hobblegrunt

 

Sorner: Adult Raincutter

 

Marrow:Adult Boneknapper

 

BarnOwl: Adult Stormcutter

Draimier: Adult Stormcutter

Erigorth: Teen Stormcutter

 

Fly Leaf: Adult Changewing

Maja: Baby Changewing

 

Enya: Adult Fireworm Queen

Arendal: Baby Fireworm Queen

 

Sculd: Adult Scauldron

 

Flurescent: Adult Flightmare

Light: Adult Flightmare

 

Flare: Adult Typhoomerang

 

Yellp: Adult Screaming Death

 

Sashi: Adult Tide Glider

 

Mistchiev: Adult Scuttleclaw

Jasmine: Baby Scuttleclaw

Mishka: Adult Sand Wraith

 

SweetPain: Adult Sweet Death

 

Anythest: Adult Woolly Howl

 

Scorch: Adult Smothering Smokebreath

 

Glacier: Adult Shivertooth

 

Eiryin: Adult Speed Stinger

 

Blaze: Teen Snow Wraith

 

Cute: Teen Grapple Grounder

 

Strippe: Titan Razorwhip

Alonzoe: Baby Razorwhip

 

DeathStar: Teen Deathsong

 

CursedFang: Teen Devilish Dervish

 

Icespear: Teen Groncicle

 

Shaid: Adult Timberjack

 

Swampdweller: Baby Prickleboggle

 

Game Grump: Baby Hotburple

 

Eirthe: Baby Mudraker

 

Rillex: Adult Armorwing

 

Voilette: Adult Singetail

 

Mosse: Adult Eruptodon

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This is a very cool idea. I

This is a very cool idea. I just checked out your stories, and I really like them btw. I have been working on a dragon hybrid that you might be interested in using. I am not a very good artist, but you can use the photos I attached and edit the idea, icorporating wolf-like qualities into making wolf-dragon hybrids. If you do end up using them, could you just mention NadderForever? 

These are close-up's of the face. You may notice a few odd things that I would like to tell you about. The ears have flaps in front of them for a reason; swimming. The dragon, as I mentioned before, is a hybrid of two dragons, the Night Fury and a rare Sea dragon (that I made up). This particular dragon, when underwater, can close the ears so water doesn't get it. The same can be done with the nostils.

You may also notice that the pupils of the dragon are white, not black. That is another water adaption. She has a separate set of eyelids, clear ones, under her real ones. She closes the eyelid when underwater to protect her Night-Fury like eye because Night furies are not water dragons. The white pupil can see regularly out of water, but in water with the eyelids down she can see for miles in murky water. The combination of the white pupil and the eyelid make for an excellent pair of glasses! 

She also, unlike the nightfury, has 2 rows of small spikes down her back. This steadies her flight and her swim. 

It is a lot like the nighfury, with a few notable differences. The body is just as flexible, and the wings are positioned similarly, however the neck is longer, the tail is skinnier and the end it different, and the feet are not stubs. The legs are also more closly related to that of a wolf's, compared to toothless at least. It also has small horns. 

You probably will not use a saddle, but if you do, here it is. Padded with sheep fur, extra comfortable for the rider and the dragon. As you can see in the top right, the saddle is specailly designed for the two rows of spikes, and doesn't hurt the dragon. The extra hooks also don't hurt the stability! 

Here you can see how the ears work, how her feet work, what her tail looks like, and how her eyes look. 

You can see how her ears close to seal the water out. 

 The feet are very peculiar, unlike any other dragon. To see the movement of how they work, spread your thumb and two fingers on a flat surface and lift them up. They kinda curl up, right? Now open them back up and place them back down. Repeat. That repetitive motion is how it works. The three dots in the bottom left is the foot print she leaves. Only her toes touch the floor. These feet are from the water dragon parent, and don't work out too well for her as a mostly-land dragon. All the wieght on the tiny feet make her very sore, so she actually spends a lot of her time in the air when she isn't sleeping of course. 

The tail is from the Water Dragon too. However, the water dragon had this design going all the way down the tail, not just at the end. The night fury parent made it so it was only at the end for her. 

Her eyes, as already described, have an extra eyelid. The entire regular eyelid, marked by the large scales on top of her eyes, is plated with tough scales becuase the only reason she would need to use her regular ones is because she is flying or swimming thorugh debree, and needs to protect her eyes. 

 

And that is my dragon! 

You don't have to use it, but if you use any of my ideas, would you please give me credit? Just NadderForever is fine. I hope this inspired you!

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Welcome to My Sig!

 

Scroll down to learn more about me and my

 

fantastic dragons!

 

 

I'm very interesting I promise!

 

Nice to meet you! I am...

-a secret santa present from lxNightxFuryxl

 

 

^Thats me!^

 

 

 
 
^My very official Dragon Training Liscense!^
 
Created by me, if you would like a Liscense pm me!
 
 
 
 
 

My Dragons!

 

 

(You should read the info underneath each one, it's interesting!)

 

1st dragon: Sherbert, Female, Deady Nadder

She's the big sis, the leader of the team. You've never met quite a Nadder like her! She's the oldest, and she knows it too. She keeps all my other dragons in check, while also training them with me. She speaks dragon of course, so she communucates what she knows with the others to make my job as a trainer a lot easier. She's my best friend and my dragon soul. I've never had a more dependable friend. 

 

2nd dragon: Black Cloud, Male, Skrill

Black Cloud is determined to the end. Ever since Yohann started selling skrills, I knew I wanted one, and after I saved for a LONG time, I knew that was the right choice. He's my most powerful and trusted of the team. He was also turning into a promised racer, until a recent search-and-rescue accident, where he lost his tail to one of Drago's forgotten traps. He's recovering, but he may never be able to fly again. 

 

3rd dragon: Pebble Tooth, Male, Whispering Death

Pebble Tooth is a good friend. He's a weird little dude, and he spends most of his time, that's right, in the water. For some reason, my dragon only is in the dirt when he has to be and the rest of the time he's getting the dirt off. He's the nutball of the group, and he thinks it's so funny to tunnel underground then pop up and scare my other dragons. Now I have to teach him to mind...

 

4th dragon: Bean, Male, Gronckle

Now, Gronckles aren't my favorite. I really only got him to complete the dumb quest. (don't tell him that). But I've actually come to love his undying loyalty and his constant need to either snuggle, eat, or take a nap. He reminds me a lot of myself. Natually, he's the glue of the crew, his love and caring for others only getting stronger as days go by. 

 

5th dragon: Kaya, Female, Sand Wraith 

Kaya is the newest recruit. She is quite the character! I didn't know what to expect when I bought her, Sand Wraith's are so rare. But she has grown to love my other dragons as they have grown to love her. She is known as the baby of the team, but she is quickly losing her softness, and she is determined to lose the title of baby. She's determined, and my best racer. She's still young, and has a lot to learn, but she really looks up to Sherbert. I know with Shebert as her mentor, Kaya will be a great dragon!

 

She will probably be my last dragon, unless an amazing species comes out. I'd personally rather have a small team of great dragons than train so many dragons I don't remember their names! 

^A pic I made of my dragons! + My OC Maja
 
 
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Very proud member of this fine clan!!!!

Created by me, PM me if you are interested in a banner for your clan! 

 

 

This banner was created by the incredible talented and creative Ambusher Sauri

 
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"Ohana means family, and family means nobody 

gets left behind or forgotten."-Lilo and Stitch

 

Clan Dragon!

Created by our leader, 1flower, (Spyroed). 

 

 

The Forgotten Racers

Proud Member

complete with our clan colors! ;-)

 

 

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Toothless Love:
(I don't own any of these gifs!)

^Borrowed from Treesbane, I thought it was cool!

 

!!!!!ADOPTABLES BELOW!!!!!

My adorable adopted baby Gronckle Pedro! by catiedragons
 

Name: Una (White Wave)

Species: Titain Wing Tide Glider X Sliquifier

Gender: Female

Personality: Shy

Bio: Out pops this cute little girl! She isn't quite sure of her position with you, and fires her

icey cold water all over you, making you laugh. She then edges closer to you making sure

that you aren't going to harm her. She jumps right into your arms and finds a comfortable

spot sleeping in your hands.

Bio and Dragon by Scoubidous. 

 

Meet Santa:      

And Christmas:  

Credit goes to toothless572

 

Read below it's very interesting! 

Santa (male) and Christmas (female) are brother and sister, and I adopted them from 

Sirenemoon. They are both super sweet, and I decided they should put their amazing personalities to good use! 

Santa is a really steady flyer and is amazing with kids, adults, teenagers, and every other

form of viking you can find. So I talked to Hiccup, and now Santa's job is to teach new

members of the school how to fly a dragon! (He loves his new job and is very good at it!) 

Christmas is so compassionate and loving! You can never catch her in a bad mood, and she

has a talent of overlooking the differences we have and finding the good in all of us. So, I

decided she would best serve our injured vikings as one of the very first therapy dragons!

She spends her time in the infirmary, whether she is playing catch, chasing lights, or

curling up and snoozing.

(She is very good at her job too!) 

This is Acid, my Arizontia. 

creds to Golden Scarlet

 

My terrible terror, Nicholas! Creds to SadoMazoCat

 

This is adopted Nighty Fury, Eden. 

creds to Slyler Smile

 

 
 
My Celestial Soul, a new dragon species created by kimbenoso . Thanks!

 

 

 

And this is Spice! He's my special little Terrible Terror. Allthough he is blind, my other

dragons treat him just the same. 

creds to skyleaf

 

And this is Bluestar! She is a little nervous around other vikings because her family was killed

in the dark ages. But I beleive, with a proper reintroduction to vikings, she won't be very

skiddish anymore. Once you get to know her, she is fun and playful.

 

^This is Cobra, my adopted wolf by MidnightMare. He is a strong-hearted, strong-willed,

and strong-souled wolf, which completely contradicts the other side of his personality which is

that he is go-lucky and care-free. He's quite the character.  

 

 

 

 

^Both made by Sleepyraccoon. Thank You!

^This is my amazing legendary Night Fury named Olleander. I won't bore you with the very

long story it took to get her, but she's amazingly fast, dangerous, and commands respect

from all who meet her. Creds to kimbenoso, for the amazing work on her. Her special

talent is this venom-like acid she can inject into her victims like a snake! But she is loyal,

and she will remain that way.

 

And this Nightinggale, a Night Flurence adopted from Wutend Bonfire. Some backround information, they are very happy and over-trusting creatures. They are nocturnal scavengers,

but they are very graceful and are always there when you need them to be. 

 

 

 

 

^This awesome Fluddlebeak was make by GreenCheekedGroot. His name is Bark, mostly

because these things are going fast and I had to thing of a name fast cause I really

wanted him!

 

 

 

Meet Maja, my Night Fury. 

 
If you are coloring Maja for me, reference below:
 
 

 

^ The Officail Maja!!!!! ^

Lineart by SongOfTheHorse, Coloring by me!!!

 

This is the original Maja. I owe this work to Treesbane, for creating her. Thank you!

Creds to SkyLeaf

 

Creds to Scoubidous
 
creds to mesaprncss
 
^creds to Autumn5467
 
 

^Creds to Duckei

 

 requested by NadderForever by Skypeoplephoenix732

 

Creds to Skypeoplephoenix732

 

 

This, no offence to the other works, has to be my favorite so far. LOOK IT HOW CUTE!!!

*cough* ok I'm done spazzing creds to the amazing and talented Skrilltheskrill

 

 

 

 

     

    By the talented Shedinn. Thanks!

    Gifs of my Fav Disney Character, Stitch!

     

     

     

     

     
     
     


     
     
     
     
     
     

     

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    RipleyAVP
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    You have helped me alot,

    You have helped me alot, especially with the scale designs. There are 4 Species of Vulmaene so the scales will all be different from each individual and each species. Thankyou for the Help amd I will credit you :D

     

    And wonderful drawings! You should get a Deviantart account

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    I have one, but i never

    I have one, but i never really use it. Glad I could help!