Uncontroled, Chapter 1

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((This is the story of my RP character from wings of durnover welll actually Wing.))

There was a knock on the door disrupting the silence of the sleeping Potenta household.

Footsteps echoed though the house as a servant opened the door.

A man dressed in fine robes stumbled in... “I must meet with the lord”.

A few minutes later a he was seated in front of the fire with Lord Potenta sitting across from him.

“What is it speak quickly I'm losing precious sleep here.”He said sharply.

“I, I have a message from the prophet, It concerns your daughter.” The strange Man stammered before continuing, “First fire then Ice, to all behold an endless might. That is all I will be going now.” He swept out of the room leaving Lord Potenta befuddled.

The next day there was an execution and the Prophet was no more.

 

((Ok In this section Storm is 8 1/2))

“Ma Please I'm not three any more I can get dressed without all of these handmaids” Storm complained.

“No Storm today is important we have finally stopped the most evil force in this land, so you will look your best” Her mother scolded before walking out.

A few hours later Storm sat on a raised platform, she listened to her parents give a long boring speech.

A man was led onto the stage in front of them, she waited eagerly wondering what was going on.

He was lead over to a funny structure with a rope hanging from it, a man in black walked forwards and placed it around his neck.

She watched in horror as the man let out a silent scream.

After that she ran and didn't stop for what seemed all eternity.

 

((Please only positive criticism, I will be posting more if this is enjoyed.))

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Hmm... Backstory huh?

I like it! And btw, it was not off topic. It'll help me more so keep writing on Storm's backstory! ;)

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Thanks.

hanks I will start on the next bit so stay tuned :)

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Yay!

That's good! Keep writing. ;)

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thanks

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Ic...

If you could introduce the fox after reading my post, it'll be great. I'm writing it now so you can go read it. Ruby's stuck on the ship until Rock replies..

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okie dokie lokie

Sure I should tell you though that the fox was raised by Storm after it's mother was shot after that she relised it onto the island they are currently on so maybe It was he mother who gave them their powers?

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Yep

I wrote that meen only sensed a bit of her powers in that fox, that it's just a descendent of Aiedail. 

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Thanks.

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;p

Just to make the story flow better and also, I have to go for riding lessons now. Think I'll be back in about two hours. See ya! ;)

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kk

KK have fun ;)

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I'm pretty sure I will! Thanks! XD