Thoughts of Guilt: Chapter 12, Part 1: True Champions Can Overcome

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This chapter was taking longer than I though and was probably the longest chapter I would have.  So that being said.  I broke the chapter up into two parts.  The first part is posted here, with the second part which will be posted tomorrow.  I don't have the second part done, so that is why they will be two separate threads.

 

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Thoughts of Guilt

 

Chapter 12, Part 1

 

True Champions Can Overcome

 

 

          I still did not have my race saddle fixed, so my regular saddle would have to do.  I would lose a little speed, but it should not matter much.  My racing saddle was lighter so it would not be as burdensome to Fredrick during the race.  Fredrick might just ware down a little faster is all.

 

          I was about ready to fly away when my mother yelled to me to stop for a second, “Wait Jarl!”

 

          “What?” I replied.

 

          “You don’t know where the meeting will be taking place,” she said.

 

          “Oh yeah,” I answered.  “That would be kind of important.”

 

          She told me that the meeting is supposed to be at the Academy.  So with that, I flew off in the direction of the Academy.  By the time I got there, I could see inside the ring that all the other racers were there, but Stoick was not.  I flew through the opening and landed by Ohmarr, intentionally.

 

          “What are you doing here?” he asked.

 

          “What?” I said.  “Can’t a guy come and see what’s going on without someone asking why?”

 

          Hatt, Explod, Jack, and Ashley came over to see me.  We exchanged greetings and then Hatt asked me the same question that Ohmarr asked me.

 

          I simply said, “Maybe I was flying earlier.”

 

          Just then Stoick was flying in on Toothless with Hiccup at the helm.  Stoick said as soon as they landed, “Good we’re all here.”

 

          Ohmarr looked confused and I never took my eyes off him because I wanted to see his reaction.  Ohmarr then stated, “How could we be all here, the one girl with the pink Nadder isn’t here yet.”

 

          Stoick answered, “She isn’t supposed to be here.”

 

          Ohmarr was about to say something else and then it struck him as you all get out.  I started grinning.  Then Ohmarr started to rather plead, “Oh no.  Bu.. But… censored.. How.. How can that be?”

 

          Stoick explained what happened to the girl with the pink Nadder to everyone.  They were all glad I would get a second chance at the race which I should have been in, in the first place.  Ohmarr just looked disgusted and disappointed.  Stoick then had Hiccup talk about the extra prize for one of the riders.

 

          I then whispered to Ohmarr, “Don’t look so happy.”  I chuckled and started listening to Hiccup.

 

          “Have you all noticed how hard it is sometimes to throw a sheep in your bins?”

 

          We all nodded our heads.

 

          “Well,” Hiccup continued.  “I have a new challenge for you guys.  If you haven’t noticed already, but each race there have been subtle changes to the race to keep each of you ready for a different race.  Now there will be a 5-point sheep in the race.”

 

          Everyone gasped and got all excited.

 

          “Don’t get too excited yet.  Even though it is a 5-point sheep, you have to throw it into a smaller bin that is underneath and to the front of all the bins.  However, this sheep will be launched at the same time as the black sheep.  You can either go for the 3-point black sheep or the 5-point sheep.  You’ll have to make the choice between the two.”

 

          “Man this is going to be a whale of a race,” declared Explod.

 

          “But,” Hiccup said.

 

          “Oh, there is always a ‘but’ with something this good,” replied Jack.

 

          Hiccup chuckled, “If you grab the 5-point sheep but miss its bin with the sheep… you will be deducted 5 points.  And in case of a tie, if you do miss, the points will be deducted from your previous round score to.  But if one of you does score the 5-point sheep, then I will make them a custom Gronckle Iron saddle.”

 

          “Ooo,” said Hatt.  “It must be one difficult shot… the risk, the reward, and the prize.”

 

          Hiccup agreed, “Once you see the bin, you’ll see why.”

 

          Stoick said that the rules are the same as the semifinals, but for the 5-point sheep to be scored, you must score it before the black she is scored.  After that, Stoick said for us to mount our dragons and go to the starting line as the race is very close to the drop of the flag.

 

          “Oh one more thing,” Hiccup mentioned.  “There are a few more sheep for this race.  They are also spread out more.  So they will be all over the track, and not just in the same area.”

 

          “Good to know,” We all said, or something similar to that.

 

          We all mounted our dragons and flew out with a feel of extra excitement and tension building; because with such a sheep, anyone could win.  But who wants to risk their points.

 

          Ohmarr got on his dragon looking perturbed, he uttered roughly to his Zippleback, “Come on, Ace.”

 

          When we neared the start/finish line, we saw that there was a big crowd already gathered; bigger even than the other day.  Hiccup was a little bit behind us, as he had to drop off his father, but he then showed us the bin.  The “bin” was more of a basket suspended by four ropes lain on the bottom going across the track.  The basket was about four feet below the main bins and bout five yards in front of them.

 

          We all agreed the shot, if made, is worth the points and the risk; because since the basket is suspended, the sheep could bounce out.

 

          Stoick then called all of the racers to get to the starting line.

 

          Stoick quieted the crowd and then spoke, “Okay.  So here we are.  Here is the race we have been wanted to see and have been working for since the start.  Six racers that have proved their skill and proved their dragon’s worth.  The objective is simple:  Once I wave this commemorative flag, score as many sheep as you can until the black sheep lap,” he paused for a second.  “Racers!  Get to your marks!”

 

          The crowd roared!

 

          We all lined up with our respective bins and waited for Stoick to wave the flag; Jack’s bin is on the left, followed by Ashley’s, then Ohmarr’s, mine, Hatt’s, and then Explod’s.  Why is it that Ohmarr and I are always next to each other?  The flag that Stoick is holding is red with the white Academy’s symbol on it.

 

          I just realized that this is the first moment I have had for the past fifteen minutes to catch my breath; the calm before the storm.  I closed my eyes and then looked over to where my family would usually sit.  I saw my whole family cheering along with some of my friends.  I then chuckled to myself, “I hadn’t even said, ‘Hi,’ to my sisters yet today.”

 

          I then refocused myself on the race.  The crowd began to quiet down again as Stoick raised the flag.  Except for the wings of our dragons there was complete silence.

 

          “Ready! … Set! … … GO!” Stoick exclaimed.

 

          All of the dragons took off for the first turn.  By now since it being the final race, we know the track quite well.  Everybody quickly got in single line as we would stay closer together much better when we come around after the warm-up lap.  Ashley had one of her best starts and is out to an early lead.  Explod did as well, but snuck in front of Hatt in third.  Ohmarr was right on Hatt’s tale followed by Jack behind him.  I was in last, due to my dragon’s acceleration.

 

          We all flew around the track and back to the start/finish line.

 

          Now the fun begins!

 

          Once we crossed the line, everybody seemed to break formation and go every which way.  Each racer had their specific line and racing style that suited them.  However, I stayed as close behind Hatt as I could.

 

          The first three laps seemed very hectic, and then we all settled down and got into a rhythm of the race; which by the way is very important, especially on a track like this.  It is a longer track, but its turn count is high: Nine.

 

          After Lap Five, six if you include the warm-up lap, it was business as usually.  Everyone had scored a sheep every lap, so everyone had a score of five; although, the racing order had changed and was more strung out.  Explod had taken the lead, Ashley is four Nadder length from him, third would still be Hatt who was only two Nightmare lengths from Ashley, followed by me three thunderdrum lengths from Hatt, then Ohmarr in fifth one and a half Zippleback lengths back, and then Jack was three Nadder lengths behind him.  Jack’s royal blue dragon is still on the younger side so Nightwing is still developing and getting older.  This being the case, his dragon does not have the same type speed as a fully grown Deadly Nadder.  However, if he races a near flawless race, he could be a contender.

 

          How I got by Ohmarr was the move I can pull off on Turns One and Two; that full, sweeping barrel roll.  Ohmarr had gone wide on Turn Two to grab a sheep; but in a race this close with everybody scoring a sheep on every lap, track position is more important.

 

          After three more laps, the score had the same result: Everyone still tied but at now nine.  I had a feeling when Hiccup said, “A few more sheep,” that this race was going to be of the longer variety.  So grabbing that spot from Ohmarr for track position was very important.

 

          Now on Lap Ten, Ohmarr somehow caught up to me.  Do not know how he did, but he did.  I looked back to see he had a determined face on and also did not look very happy.  As I was flying through the first farm section of these two farm sections that are connected by a bridge starting on my side going up to the Northwest, I flew down to grab a sheep a few hundred yards to the right and lower down the hill before the bridge.  Ohmarr for some reason stayed right behind me, and said, “I hope you are hungry, because after this lap you’ll be eating my dust!”

 

          I usually ignored him when he tried to trash talk, but this remark sounded different.

 

          After I grabbed the sheep and started heading back up, Ohmarr had Ace jump to the outside and banked left to pass me.  Though when I dug into my left saddle stirrup to tell Fredrick to go left to block… my stirrup gave way and I fell to the ground.

 

          Fredrick and I were both caught by surprise.  As soon as I fell, I hit the ground tumbling towards the cliff.  I was able to stop myself before I fell off the cliff, the sheep I had grabbed had bounced on the ground and away from the cliff, but Fredrick flew off the edge.

 

          “Fredrick!” I screamed.

 

          I looked over the edge and I saw him finally regain his balance and was able to straighten out right before he hit the water below.  He still had his saddle on, but as I looked behind me, the stirrups had broken off… or rather tampered with that they came lose.  Thank goodness my stirrups and saddle are on two separate synchs.

 

          We had to be up from sea level a good three hundred feet or more.  Fredrick started flying back up towards me, but up going away from me.  He flew above me then banked right until he came back around and was coming back my way.

 

          I realized what he was doing and started running up the hill towards the bridge.  I looked back to see Fredrick diving down through the channel at an angle that would take him slightly over the bridge.  I sprinted up the hill.  By now he was only thirty yards from the bridge.  I started running across the bridge where I guessed the point where my path and Fredrick’s would intersect.  When Fredrick was nearly over me, I was about half way over the bridge; but while in stride, I my right foot and pushed off with my left foot to jump into the air.  I turned by body by how I swung my arms when I jumped to turn and reach up with both hands.  Right at the last second, Fredrick rolled upside down.  We timed it perfectly as when I reached up, I grabbed the front edge of my saddle that bends up, kind of like the front of Astrid’s racing saddle, and took off with Fredrick.

 

          There was a big jerk, that I then had to hold onto the saddle horn, but I had a solid grab on the saddle.  Fredrick then rolled back up right.

 

          Fredrick then pushed forward.  He seemed quite angry and was more determined then I have ever felt him before.  Within a few seconds we were already at top speed, but it seemed like Fredrick was a different dragon as he pushed himself even faster.

 

          We lost the sheep, but we were back in the race.  When we finally got back and crossed the start/finish line, we were in last place, and way behind the others.

 

          I flew over the line and the crowd seemed to gasp as they saw I did not score a sheep.

 

          I then leaned down to tell something in Fredrick’s ear, “Somebody may not want us to win, but let’s show him we don’t go down without a fight!”

 

          I said that as we entered Turn One.  But then it seemed like Fredrick went into a zone as he dove bombed Turn Two so hard that when he leveled to glide out over the sea near the docks, a water-trail was left behind.

 

          I said the myself, “People can win races and become Champions.  But true champions are people that can overcome anything!”

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Really well done, I hope you continue this quality of writing in the future I'm finally back from vancouver

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Where the heck were me and W
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Jarl was rushed because

Jarl was rushed because because he found out at the last second that he was in the race.

 

Also, I needed to devote more time to the race.  But I did say Jarl looked back to see his family and his friends-which would include you and Annabeth.  The family races were the quarterfinals, this is the final race.

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Hmmm

Still didn't get to see my family race and you said I would....

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When did I say that?

When did I say that?

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In one of the

In one of the many pms I sent you like during the time of chapter 5,6,or 7

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Need a new subject I do, yes. Any ideas have you? Hmm?

I went back through the pms, and did not find where I said I would include what you said.

 

The way I am writing my book is different then how most people do it.  I have an overall idea to the story, but how I get to that point is ever changing.  So how I read a new book I haven't read before, is basically how I am writing the book.  I'm letting the story develop on its own while keep the chapters at an average around 2,000 words.  I never said I add it, but I didn't say I wouldn't add it.

The family races were in the quarterfinals and have already taken place.  I had you in Jarl's semifinal race.  And you will be with Jarl and Annabeth with a few other friends when they go to track down Anora the next day; which atm is looking to be Chapter 14.

I read all of your suggestions and see how they would fit with the story.  I may add them, I may not add them.  I may add them in a slightly different way then you had said.  But I read all of your suggests and try to add them all to the story.  Sometimes the suggestions might not fit well in one part of the story, so I may be saving them for later.  I just don't know.  I don't like to do too much of "suddenly" adding a part with no build up, backstory, or hint.  I let the story develop as I write it and I let it take its time to develop on its own.

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censored BUM BUMMMMM!!!

Did Ohmarr tamper with the stirrup? Find out in the next chapter (I hope). XD

Sorry for not commenting sooner. Me and my friend are currently stressing over something that was supposed to be posted on the forum my 3... still working on it. =|

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Greenstreak, a Chiropan pip, and Hoarfrost, the blizzard Chiropan. This is actually a creative species, and really has the potential to grow into something amazing. Thanks to NightmareRebuff! =D

Keldia, Backbiter, Smothershawl, Soulreaper, Blackout, Paladin, Crossbones, Bloodcry, Panicdash, Mimicscale, Helreaper, Ispy, Jin Jundao, and Emberpride.

(All dragons above are made by NightmareRebuff!) 

My Wocky Jabberjaw from chameishida! His name is Bloodhound! Thanks!

Daredevil the Pebble-Shooting Speed Demon by xXHallaXx. Thanks!

Tealrammer by RaxForax. Kudos to you my friend!

My Windsong, Timelaspe, or in other words, "Blue". 

Toxinrage, my Insectoid Scythelimb

 

Neontaze and Nightshredder,

my Alien Luminglows

Lovestuck,

my Siren Flashbang

 

Clan: The Phantom Family

Gender: Male

Dragons:

Nadder: The Golden Nadder (Aka: Sun Rose) - Female -

Bio:

  Sun Rose was my first dragon in the academy. She was actually from the Golden Isles, collected by Johan when he saw her (in egg form), hanging off a cliff. He caught her, and took her to Berk. She was my main dragon, and still is, in the races. She also helped out in leveling up the others, by helping them do the quests untill the very end, so they would get the XP.

Personalty:

Really Playful, Loyal, Doesn't like night time.

Likes to Eat:

Eggs, Eggs, and more Eggs.

Favorite thing to Do:

Play with the other Dragons, her favorite game is Fetch the Chicken!

Intresting Fact:

Every year, she flies away for 1 month, as she also likes to spend time on her own.

The Golden Nadder/Sun Rose by AniuRavenwolf! Thanks!

Thunderdrum: Sonarus (Aka: Sonus) - Male - 

Bio:

  My second dragon, Sonarus was sorta of a pain. Since from when he was born, he was very wild and crazy, and even more hyper. He loved to jump on people's shoulders and roar in their ears, then run away for me to apolagize. Sonus now loves to steal my sheep, and hide them in the forest, but he is always there where I need him to be. He's BFFs with Thunder Quake, and, oh yeah, he is protective of me.

Personality:

Wild, Crazy, Protective, and Loyal (Most of the time).

Likes to Eat:

Perch (I still don't understand why.)

Favorite thing to do:

Hide my sheep and pretend he didn't do it.

Intresting Fact:

He said he hates to play Thunder Run...but I can tell he's faking. How? I just know. :)

Whispering Death: Thunder Quake (Aka: Da King, Da Racing Champ) - Male -

Bio:

  I found his egg in the tunnels, and Hiccup let me keep him. When he hatched, he looked at me for one second, and then, well, decided he wanted to be free. He jumped out of the stables, and started slithering to the forest. I chased him, freeing him from bushes, rescuing him from drowning, and TRYING to feed him when he was hungry. One day, a wild smokebreath appeared, and for some reason, Da King thought he was, "The King", and decided to take him on. He started dealing blows to it, but the smokebreath won in the end. Before it laid the final blow, though. I jumped and used myself as a human sheild. It hurt, but I was fine. I called in Sonarus, and he saved us. He put his trust in me, and I have helped him ever since.

Personality:

Brave, doesn't know his limits...yet.

Likes to eat:

Sheep Steak.

Favorite thing to do:

Drill underground, and camp there, with me trying to find him. Also, play fighting with Sonarus.

Intresting Fact:

Well, he's trying to become a titian wing, but it ain't going to well so far.

By Wutend Bonfire. Thanks!

Scauldron: Waterspout (Aka: Spouty, The Heir of Frost and Pyra) - Female -

Bio:

  One day, I went to Johan's ship. There, I found an egg with a burn and ice on it. This was Frost and Pyra's lost egg! I quickly traded it with Johan, and then I found out that she was sick. I ran home, and placed her on the hearth. 3 days passed. Nothing. Thinking she was dead, I sadly sighed, and put my hand on her egg. Suddenly, a bright golden glow spread around her, and she was born!

Personality:

Likes to act cute, loyal, and sometimes very overprotective.

Likes to eat:

Salmon

Favorite thing to do:

Spit at my face, and act innocent.

Intresting fact:

She is my main dragon when it comes to quests and Fan-Fics.

Waterspout by TildenWolfGirl, themasterplan47 and Dustydaybreak. She looks really awesome! =D

Gronkle: Meatball (Aka: Tomato, Cheese Head, Ball Boy) - Male -

Bio:

  I found him in the forest, as a baby. He was crying and whimpering, but I picked him up. He looked at me, and tried to smile. He then yawned, and fell to sleep. I figured he was lost or abandoned, so I took him in. He is addicted to any red or yellow rocks, and will do anything to get them.

Personallity:

Friendly and Playful

Favorite Food:

Yellow and Red Rocks

Favorite Thing to do:

Sleep, Eat, Sleep, Eat, Sleep, Eat...

Intresting Fact:

He has a quartz tooth in the way back, for he broke it while trying to eat my diamonds.

Nightmare: Greek Fire (Aka: Greek Flame, Comet) - Male -

Bio:

  A relative of Hookfang, with all his personalities. Need I say more?

Personallity:

Aggressive, sometimes a Bully, and secretly cares for us.

Favorite Food:

Honey...

Favorite thing to do:

Disobey me...

Intresting fact:

He is Hookfang's mother's brother's son.

Thunderdrum: Eagle Ray (Aka: Booma, Sea Dream, Pearl) - Female -

Bio:

  On new year's eve, I found out that Sonarus was missing! I asked the others to search for him, but he was not found! Depressed, I sadly went home, hoping that he was safe. In the morning, I set out with Waterspout, hoping to find Sonarus. After 5 hours of searching, I spotted something green, and something blue side by side. I patted Waterspout on the side, and we dove in. To my suprise, it was Sonarus and another Thunderdrum! Studying them for a bit, I found out that the blue one was Sonarus's mate! I tamed her, and since then, we had a new addition to my family.

Personallity:

Playful, Loyal to Sonarus and Me

Favorite Food:

Grilled perch with tomato toppings

Favorite thing to do:

Stick with Sonarus

Intresting Fact:

Some say she's a relative of Thornado...

Zippleback: Sunrise and Sunset (Aka: Dawn and Dusk, Pimp and Pump)

- Male -

Bio:

  Kinda weird... Ok, so, I went to trader Johan's eggs, and found a dragon egg chest. I asked him could I buy it, since I had just enough gems. So, he said yes, and I got a rumblehorn! Yay! One of my most favorite dragons! Excitedly, I took it home, and put it in the hearth. Later on, I checked on it, and hatched it... then, to my surprise, a baby zippleback popped out! What?! I looked at it, it looked at me, and it was silent for a few minutes. Ok... weirdness attack. Whatever, he's still a baby dragon. I held it, and it's left head turned toward the sunrise in the distance. So I called the left one Sunrise. We played for a bit, then the sun was setting! This time, the right head turned toward it, and I named it Sunset.

Personallity:

Playful, Shy, Obedient

Favorite Food:

Sunrise: Squid, Sunset: Octopi

Favorite thing to do:

Turn toward the sunrise/sunset, depending on the head

Intresting fact:

Some people call him Pinky or Purple Butt. He tends to kill people like that... so DON'T!

Nadder: The Silver Nadder (Aka: Moonstone, Silverstar, Diana) - Female -

Bio:

  So that's why Sun Rose leaves one a year, she's going to visit her sister, Mooonstone. How did I know this? I saw it myself. When she left, me and Thunderquake went to she where she went every year (Yeah, kinda like a stalker, but who knows if she goes mental and starts killing everything? Actually, TMI), she flew into a cave. I waited until night, and suddenly, a silver nadder appeared, and flew out. It came back at dawn, and after it went in, Sun Rose went out. They did this, then I couldn't take it anymore. I need to find out who this dragon is. I crept in, and the Silver Nadder shreiked, then flashed it's wings at my face. Startled, I stepped back. It snarled, and backed away. I decided another plan. When I saw Sun Rose, I signaled her to come to me. She first, well, was startled, then frightned. After face-palming myself, I tossed a fish on teh ground. She ate it, and after gaining her trust, I stepped in the cave with Sun Rose, and soon enough, I found out that this new dragon was Sun Rose's sister, and I took her home.

Personallity:

Quiet and silent, Doesn't go along with others apart from Sun Rose and me, Hardly makes a sound, Doesn't like day time, Doesn't like to play, Really Independent (not really loyal)

Favorite Food:

Chicken

Favorite thing to do:

Stay at home and sleep in the day, flies out at night to do stuff

Intresting Fact:

Is Sun Rose's alter-ego, everything is almost 100% different. Can't beleive she's Sun Rose's sister...

Chilling Horror: Backbiter (Aka: Backstab, Nightmare, Geostar) - Male - 

Bio:

Eh... might write it, might not. Depends on my mood. XD

Personality:

Loyal, Feirce, Sometimes playful, Jealous of Waterspout

Favorite Food:

Roasted Lamb

Favorite thing to do:

Fight me

Intresting Fact:

My first fan dragon...

Base by NightmareRebuff

 

Typhoomerang: Topspin (Aka: Big guy, Wirlwind, FOOOM) - Male -

Bio:

  This one is a sad one... So there was this typhoomerang that I knew very well. We met in a forest, and even though we were friends, I didn't tame him. Dunno why I didn't, he was awesome. So, a few months late, he found a mate and they had a baby typhoomerang. Then suddenly, his mate died. I felt very sorry for him, and because he had to feed the baby, he left the baby typhoomerang with me. We formed a bond, but in the Chilling Horror month, he went to get some fish... and never came back. I waited for days, and I fed the baby myself with some perch. My friend never came back, so I chose to adopt the baby myself. At night, he would have terrible nightmares, and he would go to my room and sleep with me. He had a serios fear of Backbiter, and I was sorta heartbroken that even though Backbiter wanted to play with Topspin and wanted to stick with him, Topspin always was scared of him and either attacked or flew away. But I know, that one day, the nightmares will pass, and the two dragons will grow to respect each other. My typhoomerang... my Topspin.

Personality:

Always cautious, Defensive, Always on the lookout, Active

Favorite Food:

Eel... I can finally use them!

Favorite thing to do:

Just anything that doesn't involve Backbiter or sitting around

Intresting Fact:

He kills eels for sport... I hate that.

Sandwraith: Sandstorm (Aka: Puppy Dragon, He-who-burrows) - Male -

Bio:

  It's funny how a fishing trip can befriend a dragon. So I was spending some time on my own (Raising a ton of dragons is tough, I need a break), and I was fishing and camping out on the beach. I just caught a bunch of halbut and salmon, and I was frying a salmon. *Growl* Huh? I looked up, then left and right. I then felt the ground move, and I looked down. Two eyes stared back up... "YAH! WHAT ON EARTH?!" I jumped back. At that time, I never knew what a sandwraith was. I'm new here, ok? The sandwraith exploded form the sand, and looked at me. Silence for a few seconds... then he wadled to my basket of fish and started eating everything like he didn't care. "Hey! That's my fish!" He didn't listen, and ate all of it. He then turned, and studied me. He looked like a nightfury, so I was intrigued. He then jumped and flopped on me and started licking my face. "You're like toothless!" I laughed, and he licked some more. "Hey, boy! Stop it!" He kept on licking me, and he soon decided that follow me was a better option than chilling in the sand waiting for who-knows-what to go over him. Smart kid.

Personality:

Playful, Smart, Seems to always be hungry

Favorite Food:

Salmon (DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO FISH FOR ONE?! *shouts at Sandstorm, he licks me and wadles away.)

Favorite thing to do:

Act majestic

Intresting fact:

First dragon I knew nothing about in the beginning.

Seashocker: Aquashock and Waterskiz (Aka: Zapduo) - Male - 

Bio:

  So, a few days ago, I received a present. Not sure who sent it, or why, but I got it. It was wraped in colored leather, and when I opened it, I found an egg. I couldn't tell the species though. It was colored in multicolors, with "Thanks Hyrith" written in bright yellow paint. I shrugged. The only way to find out the species is to hatch it. When I picked it up, I was shocked. No, not the suprised shock. The lightning shock. I fumbled with it, and Telsabeam jumped from the roof. I think she sensed it was a skirll, so I shuddered. I don't have anything against skrills, just after Telsabeam almost burned down my house becasue she saw a fly, I've been a bit careful with her. I do not need another crazy lightning-maniac shooting around my house. I ploped it down on the hearth, and after a few minutes, it shook. I picked it up, and took it to the lavepit for it to hatch. It never did. It just shook, but it never came out. Just before Telsabeam was about to crack it open, Waterspout stared at the egg, and shot a small stream of water. The water touched it, then it cracked. Puzzled, I dipped my hand in water, and touched the egg. Where I touched, it cracked. Then, I actually figured out something. I took the egg to the sea, and placed it under the water. It shuddered, then a seashocker was born. I was extremly happy, and I thought all my dragon were too. Well, except Telsabeam. She grumbled a sign of disappointment, and wadled away. XD

Personality:

Aquashock is agressive and fierce. Extremly loyal, and will attack anything that he thinks is harming me.

Waterskiz is playful and wild. He loves doing tricks, and is usually the reason why they have so much scars. For some reason, he's addicted to shrimp.

They both work together as a team, probabily because they know that if they argue, they won't go anywhere.

Favorite Food:

Aquashock: Squid

Waterskiz: Shrimp :\

Favorite thing to do:

Bounce on the waves, SO FUN WHEN RIDING THEM!!!

Intresting Fact:

Read the Bio

 

Serpentfang: Ispy (Aka: Mr. See it all, Rare Jewel, Allseer) - Male -

Bio:

Find here: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/introducing-oriental-serpentfang

Personality: He is a wise dragon, but extremly curious as well. He also is trying to find the ones like him... (PUTTING HIM IN A FAN-FIC!!! "We Are Not Alone." Trailer in sig.)

Favorite Food:

Tea leaves. ???

Favorite thing to do:

Look at far away things

Intresting Fact:

He can see anything, as long as there is nothing blocking the thing from his sight. 

And a bunch more. Mostly cause I'm to lazy to put them in my sig. XD

Friends:

- Areslam

- Cazi the Conqueror

- typhoomerangmaster338

- Storm

- httyyd

- Sleepyraccoon

- NightmareRebuff

- SefarWarrior

- themasterplan47

- Frostfire Markson

(Neospark is originally black, but he was war paint all over his body. He is the oldest of the bunch, and is the only Titianwing in the team.)

(Snowspear is the second oldest, and she is an albino. She has one red and one blue eye, but no one knows why.)

 

(Emerald's color comes after his dad, who is a wooly howl. He doesn't really love to show himself, since he doesn't really "fit in" to anywhere, since he's bright green.)

Emerald by Scorpio Kardia! Thanks! So cute!

The Guardian of Berk by Hattori. Thanks! It's EPIC!

Sea Splitter, by DragonLover43, a Snoggletog gift. Have a merry Snoggletog! =D

Fan-Fics:

Alpha and Shadow

  "Hyrith and his friends set off embark on a quest to save Berk from the upcoming evil that threatens the destruction of Berk. They face challenges, death, loss, rage, and fear, but do they have what it takes to win in the end?"

Starring:

  Areslam as Wolf Hofferson

  Skrilltheskrill as Jasmine

  Cazi the Conqueror as Axtar

  typhoomerangmaster338 as Ak the Insane

  Diamond Racer as Diamond Rider

~The Dragons: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/alpha-and-shadow-httyd-story-role-play-story

~Part 1: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/united-alpha-and-shadow-part-1-remember-roleplay-more-fan-fic

~Part 2: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/ambush-alpha-and-shadow-part-2

~Part 3: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/escape-alpha-and-shadow-part-3

~Part 4: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/survival-and-serpents-alpha-and-shadow-part-4

~Part 5: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/reinforcements-alpha-and-shadow-part-5-6th-alpha-riderdiamond-rider-aka-diamond-racer

~Part 6: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/three-kings-alpha-and-shadow-part-6

~Part 7: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/alpha-shadow-alpha-and-shadow-part-7-wolf-and-jasmine

~Part 8: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/disturbing-discovery-alpha-and-shadow-part-8-ak-and-axtar-and-get-comfy-its-really-long

~Part 9: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/dark-secrets-alpha-and-shadow-part-9-includes-origin-nightfury

~ Part 10: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/it-ends-today-alpha-and-shadow-part-10-finale-fun-facts-and-more-come

Journey to Berk (Not out Yet)

  "A flashback from the past, Hyrith tells the Aplha Riders about his journey from The Golden Isles to Berk. He, alone, with no dragon, sets out to find a home, where he can safely live. Along the way, he creates friendships, but also enemies. This is his story..."

 

SPOILER QUOTES:

  "You took everything I have... and now let me return the favor."

  "Drago, I might not be the one you are looking for, but I bet you will find me equally amusing."

  "If the chicken lady is gonna kill stuff, let her be. If big guy wants to break mountains, let him be. If the sword gal wants to fight, let her be. If I want to shoot stuff, let me be. If Hyrith wants to kill stuff... well, don't let him."

Starring:

  Hyrith

  Aurora

  Thumin

  Clinton

  Mari

~ Part 1: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/i-meet-deranged-chicken-lady-who-might-be-psyco-journey-berk-part-1

~ Part 2: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/i-dont-think-drago-wanted-his-arm-anyway-journey-berk-part-2

~ Part 3: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/i-meet-blue-haired-lady-and-juggernaut-i-totally-dont-ship-journey-berk-part-3

~ Part 4: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/nature-has-weirdest-color-schemes-all-time-part-1-journey-berk-part-4

The Elements Are Against Us (Later on)

  "After the defeat of Nexus, her brothers and sisters are arroused by her death. After being locked in slumber for thousands of years, Huo Lin is the first to wake and sends messengers to his sibiling, and soon, all of the elements on earth is against Hyrith and his friends..."

SPOILER QUOTES:

  I live to see the world of vikings burn, and all who stand in my way shall perish...

  "We're the final Valkyries left. Valrora... she was shot down. She never made it."

  Xeon. Choose wisely. Give me the orb, or your friends will suffer. Slowly, so I can see them crumble under my shadow.

Starring:

  ???

  ???

  ???

  ???

  ???

  ???

  ???

  Xeon (The Guardian of Berk)

We Are Not Alone, A Chinese and Western Crossover (Later on)

5 months after Hyrith disappeared...

  "Who's there?" Jin sat up on his bed. It was 12 in the night, and most of the academy was asleep. The footsteps sounded louder this time. Jin pushed away the covers, and put on his combat glove. As soon as his hand slipped in, a small flame sparked in his palm. The footsteps stopped, and a creaking sound was heard. Silence. He waited for a while, and figuring that there was nothing, slipped off his glove and pulled the covers over his head.

  "AHHHHHHH!" A scream peirced the cold air, and Jin fell out of his bed. In a hurry, he shoved the glove over his hand, and opened the door. He lit his glove, and the flame ignited in his hand. Across the balcony, a hooded dark figure stepped out of a room. Jin stood in a battle stance. The flame in his palm grew into a fireball, and Jin shouted to the figure.

  "Who are you? Take off the hood!"

  The hooded man turned to Jin, and removed his hood, revealing an old man with a long white, whispy beard. The fireball died down. "Master Zhang?"

  "Yes, my young student. Why are you here? You should be in your room sleeping, not outside watching the snow fall."

  "I woke up because of the scream. Did you hear it too? Did someone get hurt?"

  "That was the reason I came, young one. Go to bed, the final practices starts tomorrow. Do you want to get the blade or not?"

  "Yes master, but safety is more important. Mind if I investigate with you?"

  JIn bowed, and the old master smiled. "Jin, investigate this floor. I'll take the top and bottom floors. Meet after 5 minutes." Jin looked at his old master. He was not usually that kind, but Jin shook that thought out of his mind. He needed to see if someone was hurt.

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  "Found anything yet?" Master Zhang glared at Jin, and he looked into the final room. Another sleeping student. "Nothing, master." Master Zhang looked at him, and smiled. "Well, I think it's settled. Let's have a seat, shall we?" Jin shrugged. The master jumped, and sat on the railing. Jin climed up to him.

 "Anything, Master?"

 "Nothing yet, child. Forget this. It's a good night to be alive, is it?"

 "Yes, I agree. You checked every room?"

 "Every room, youngling. How about you-" A howl penetrated the air. A Howler flew towards Master Zhang, and the yellow and black dragon growled. Wait. Jin looked at the Howler, and noticed something. That was Dai Pow, Icarus's dragon. He never submitted to anyone, not even the master, except Icarus. Dai Pow circled Master Zhang. He glared at him, and then glared at Zhang.  He kneeled, and Zhang grumbled under his breath. "Curses. Stupid howler." He then looekd at Jin. "Let me see Dai Pow first." He jumped off the railing, and Jin looked as he kneeled and clasped the wingless dragon's head, speaking some words. JIn nudged myself over, then he felt something. JIn looked down, and he saw blood on the railing, where the master's hand was. Sticky, freash blood. 

   The last room...

  Jin shoved past the master, and to the final room. He didn't check it, since it was the room the master came out of. Jin ran past, and saw a stream of blood running from under the door. He slammed it open, and he gasped in shock. 

 Mei Hua layed dead in her bed, a large bloody gash in the middle of her chest. Her mouth was open in shock. Jin ran to her, and noticed that the blood was freash. Impossible! The master just was in here! Master Zhang would never commit such a crime! A hand then went over Jin's shoulder, sending a chill up his spine. The master glared at him, his mouth curing into a evil grin. Shocked, Jin tried to speak. "What? How? WHY?!" The master smiled. "Yes, Jin. I am the one. Sorry, but I can't have any witnesses." Suddenly, Master Zhang's form flickered, and instead of the Master from before, a red haired boy, stood in his place. He suddenly jabbed his palm at Jin's chest. A blade then shot out, coming out of Jin's back. Jin gasped, and he fell to the ground. His vision slowly filled with black dots, and he thought his last thought.

 Icarus

Starring:

  Brinaiir

  ???

  ???

  ???

  ???

  ???

  ???

  ???

 
 
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Intense race!

I figured Ohmarr would be cheating somehow. But Jarl's not going down without a fight :)

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The Adventures of Elsa Jade!

 

My name is Elsa Jade (otherwise known as SefarWarrior). The Adventures of Elsa Jade tells the stories of how I became a dragon tamer and met these dragons...

Chapter 1          Chapter 2          Chapter 3          Chapter 4 (part 1)          Chapter 4 (part 2)

Chapter 5          Chapter 6          Chapter 7          Chapter 8                        Chapter 9

Chapter 10        Chapter 11       Chapter 12        Chapter 13

The first dragon I tamed was a female Chilling Horror...

 (all 3 pics by goldenfury360 (aka Hyrith))

 

She chose me as her rider, and that's when I became a dragon trainer.

 

This is Fáfnir (adopted from nevealpar). He is young, energetic, and loves playing with furry animals. He has poison in his teeth and can shape shift into any horse. I met him on a secret island I discovered, and we became friends for life... after I almost died...

(above drawing by DuskDaybreak)

 

Meet Enigma and his little sister Stellar! Enigma is a highly intelligent dragon who loves music and solving riddles. Although he isn't normally very social, he loves Stellar and would do anything to protect her. Stellar is a feisty, lovable dragon who enjoys showing off her glowing spikes, drawing pictures, and dressing up (her tail isn't actually injured; the prosthetic is her Toothless costume) :)

                          Stellar by Autumn5467                                                      Enigma     by Reiraku

Fire and Ice as a Frost Fury, by StellaMontague

Ingo, my Paranoid Sandskitter from NightmareRebuff

Peacock, my Windsong from goldenfury360 (aka Hyrith)

 

Luminara, adopted from no6nialovec12345
 

The next addition to my dragon friends was Faramir. I was helping Stellar practice her night flying, when we were attacked by a wild Boneknapper and had to crash land in the forest. Stellar was uninjured, but we could hear the dragon looking for us. We knew it would find us soon unless we found a place to hide. That was when Stellar seemed to sense something else in the forest. She gave a low purring growl - a plea for help, I thought - and gradually, through the dark mist of the forest, I saw another Night Fury approaching. He was dark green, and the dark green mist he created around himself was perfect camouflage. He led us to his secret lair, a forest cave hidden behind a waterfall, where we stayed hidden until it was safe. He and Stellar became such good friends that when it was time to leave, Stellar refused to go unless her new friend came with us. He and I were both happy to agree, and the three of us flew back home. I named him Faramir because of his hidden cave (which is now our secret hideout), and also because he was so brave and selfless.

 by SoulStereo

Faramir & Stellar by DuskDaybreak

 

This is Nod, the Woodland Sprite I adopted from DuskDaybreak. He lives in Faramir's forest cave, where he can stay close to his natural habitat while I train him. He is lively, imaginative, and has a great sense of humor. Although he sometimes tends to be a little sarcastic, he usually is trying to be funny rather than insulting. He's very independent and loves exploring the forest. His reckless antics are a constant source of worry for the less impulsive Faramir.

 

 (free lineart base found here, the rest is by me)

 

 by me

(made by me with the Night Fury Maker)

Paradox, adopted from mesaprncss

RNF(RoboticNightFury), adopted from Kowwa                         by OwlyDragons

 

(made by me with the Night Fury Maker)

Toothless: left blinkie by DuskDaybreak, right blinkie by NightmareRebuff :)

Sefarva blinkie by DuskDaybreak

Sefarva by Chocolate24

This awesome picture (above) is by httyyd!

I'm not a psycopath; I'm a high-functioning sociopath.

With your number.  ;)

- Sherlock Holmes

(I found this pic of Mara Jade online, and added Dreamworks images of the dragons.)

 

I am a

 

 

"To defeat the darkness out there, you must defeat the darkness inside yourself."

- Coriakin, Voyage of the Dawn Treader

 

This is because I have a Whispering Death named Thrawn. Because, let's be honest, if Thrawn were a dragon he'd probably be a Whispering Death. The dragon is a Dreamworks image; the pic of Thrawn is from the cover art of Outbound Flight by Timothy Zahn.

 

Note: All glitter text is by puppyllover. Unless otherwise stated, all photomanipulations by me.

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