SoD Fan-Fiction Club - Announcement Thread

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Want a 150-250 scene about your viking a dragon? Limitless requests available HERE.

Want a longer story about your viking and dragon?? Limited requestes available HERE.

Want a chance to win a three-shot, or one-shot? Contest available until December 14 HERE.

Want to be part of a Fan Fiction club? Information HERE.

Want to read a Snotlout x OC Fan Fiction? You can try Horizon or Sage.

Want a non-romance Fan Fiction? You can try the Fosters and the Fostered.

 

      

 

 

 

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But you can reply to this thread.

 

If you haven't recieved your member card, don't panic. I'm in exam/end of essay season, so i can't make them until i'm done. I shall get the rest out after my last exam (Dec. 16!)

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Our second read is...

Crossroads: A New Beginning and a Forgotten Past

 

Due date for this read is January 24, 2017.

 

Discussion thread has been posted. Please leave your thoughts on there! If offering critique, please make sure it's constructive!

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There will be a link below of HTTYD 2 put to the song Centuries (Fall Out Boys). It's a condensed version of the whole movie and worth the watch.

Events!

Big Update Scavenger Hunt. Hints dropped daily.

Speed Stinger Race Track Idea!

Use this link to share your support and feedback! Let's make it possible to race on Speed Stingers!

 

Check out my fan fics

-Big Challenges (Finished. Please Comment, and read the sequel as well!)

-A Hidden Life (Sequel to Big Challenges.)

-Last and First

-First Generation (Daughter of Hiccup and Astrid)

-Great Ocean Gems

-A World of Discoveries

-Being Me

-The Black Cowl (Also a roleplay. PM me if you wish to join.)

-Twice the Twins, Twice the Fun

-The Dragonsblood Curse (With special thanks to Scensoredearchers) 

-First Friends 

-Last Remnant

-A Different Angle (A Big Hero 6 fan fic)

-Living a Lie 

-Middle (A Big Hero 6 Fan Fic)

-Welcome to Our Family 

-April Heist (A Big Hero 6 Fan Fic. Graphic Description. Reader's Discretion Advised.)

-A Cyber Kitty Named Wisdom (A Big Hero 6 Fan Fic)

- Gobber's Daughter 

- Adventurous Appreciation

- Bond Between

Please comment and give feedback on them. I value your opinion.

I'm moving some of my fan fictions over to Wattpad. Here's a link to my profile.

Also, if you like reading fan fiction. Please join the Fan Fiction Club

I also have a blog for my fan fic character. Link is at the bottom of my signature (Only available to those living in the United States and Canada. Sorry.)

My favorite reads:

Toothless' Kingdom (Dragonmic14), http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/toothlesss-kingdom

Hiccup and Astrid: A Family at Last! (NightFuryLover)

 

Also, if you'd like an uncensored version of my fanfictions, here's the link to Bond Between on Wattpad

 

Link I promised about the condensed version of HTTYD 2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JJ8T2-p0W9s

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Spiker. (Whispering Death bouncie courtesy of Hattori!)

(Gronckle edits by Skypeoplephoenix.)

Here's a little side project I was almost finished. I just need to get the racing banners I recently lost due to a glitch back so I can complete it.

I recently created a blog for Nina, so if you're interested, here's the link: http://ninahaddocklife.blogspot.ca

Here are my adopted dragons.

Noche, from Smidvarg's Night Terrors. Thanks snowflake!

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^ By the AMAZING TosiLohi! (I know right? Awesome! -squeel- )

CloudStream welcomes you to my siggy!

She protects the art here, so dont try and take anything! :) 

 

 

Thanks SOO much to Rebell for making my Profile Picture dragon edit!!!

 

Hello! I am jenniemkitty! I'm always open to chat, but may not get back to you super quickly. I am a bit of a goofball sometimes...so you have been warned. =-)

(warning:this siggy is long. Prepare yourselves.)

(another warning: bit of an art hoarder E)

 

 

My Q&A 

(click the words)

 

A Muggle's Guide to Conquering Evil Sorceres, a Harry Potter

Roleplay!

2+ spots open!

(Roleplay tittle is a link btw)

 

A little about me:

 

I am crazy about...

How to train your dragon

How to train your dragon 2

Race to the edge (yeah I know, this and all of the above are ovious, but still, I can hardly leave them out of this list can I?)

Harry Potter (i am completly nuts about this and have always been, and if you are too, i always love to talk to other Potterheads! =-) More about Harry potter stuff down lower, about half of the way down & at the bottom in the funny's)

Rangers Apprentice (not many people have heard about this book seiries, but it is Awesome! )

A Matter of Perspective by Squiid (read it read it read it read it!! AAAAAAAAAA! Its Viggo's perpective during RTTE! It fills in the gaps that we don't get the answers too, and really people just read it!

 

Pet Peves:

Judgeing other people

swearing

insulting (on purpose, sometimes people do it on accident, but as long as they apoligize they should be forgiven.)

harassing

I may get mad if you do these. 

 

 

- questions and chatting are welcome

- harrassing is not

- one important thing u should know is that there are many untrue rumors about Mormons on the internet.

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Im a part of...

 

Sunwing Voagers!

Thunderclan warriors!

 

My Viking OC

 

More about my viking soonish...

 

Name: Geveda

Apearence: scroll down a little and you'll see the artwork!

 Personality in a nutshell:

- friendly

- compasionate

-loyal, but it takes time for her to become loyal to others/trust others

- weird,but in a good way

- (sometimes strange) sense of humor

- avoids harm to others when possible

-  can be somewhat socially akward

- tends to talk to much 

Long version:

Personality: freindly, but socialy akward, loyal, compasionet, weird but in a good way, its part of her charm, with a sense of humor that sometimes leaves her standing akwardly when no one gets it. She is a very loyal person, and will not switch to the opsoing team, give away information, or help them if she is on the side she knows is good. However, while she is very loyal, it takes some time to for her to trust someone, and until then is figuring out if they are a good person to trust. There are reasons, however, that will get  her to break the rules, for example, going off to free trapped and caged dragons from dragon hunters despite being told not too (thats how she met CloudStream). She hates any kind of serious harm to people, which is why her arrows (more about them later on in siggy) only freeze the targets, not hurt. She also will try to get people to aviod injuring others when possible.

^ This awesome drawing was done by Fireflash! Thank you sooo much!

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^ By Alina Wildfire! Thank youuuuuu!

 

 

^ by Katarile! Thank you! Your art is awesome! =)

Main Weapon

A large bow with flightmare frost balls tipped on the end of her arrows. The balls are flightmare frost coated in some hard substance (differs depending on the purpose). When they hit something, they burst open and freeze whatever it is touching 

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Dragon Art!!!

 

CloudStream

My Woolly Howl (and my favorite, don't tell the others!)

  

 

 

 

          

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                                                                                            ^ Thanks so much to Arrowalker for this amazing dragon! ^^

 

 ^ This drawing is made by Alexadragonfire! Thank you!!! (skillz!)

Thanks SOOOO much to Rebell for making this! (also my profile pic)

An incredbile animation of CloudStream by TosiLohi! (-squeels- E-)

 

About CloudStream: She is protective, loyal, and compasionate. She thinks of others before herself. She never shoots to kill, only injure if needed to protect. Cloudstream rescued her rider, Geveda, when she was attemting to free dragons out of cages in a dragon hunter camp. She was rather closed up at first, but warmed up to Geveda after Geveda proved to her she was trustwothy, and they formed a close bond. She loves speed and feeling the wind in her face, and often does stunts with her rider (however she pushes the limits of how daring they are, as Geveda is more catious than CloudStream)She, liker her rider, is very loyal. Her main and first loyalty lies with Geveda. It takes time and good actions for her to trust others. She is very determind and has a strong willpower.

Weaknesses: Sometimes she doesnt listen and does something anyway if she is determind to do it, which gets them in trouble sometimes. She does not give up easily, which can be bad if there is a need to stop.

 

Savidi

The tripple strike

 ^ This adorable and amazing dragon was made by LissaFish! Thanks!

 

Starlight

The Night Fury

  ^ By DukinaDragon, thank you!! (congrats on ur first edit! =-)

 

 

FireLilly

The Fireworm Queen

 

 ^ Thanks so much BoomBox74! I love it!!! Amazing!  =-)

 

 

Elska

the Tripple Strike

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^ This was drawn by Mystery-Venomnshift - thanks!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks BoomBox74! She's adorable!

 

 

 

Dragon Screenshots

I decided to put in on a google docs instead. It was taking up to much space:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U41ILztmSBKhJ_9rid6ntU9CIvr2fQeyKUv17c5vSNo/edit 

 

 

 

(I am a huge potter-head)

 

I am proud to be  Hufflepuff!

To Understand Hufflepuffs more, read this:

http://pottermore.wikia.com/wiki/Hufflepuff

 

My wand: 

Larch wood with a unicorn hair core, 13 ¾" and slightly yielding flexibility

My patronus: Dolphin

My Ilvermonery house: Thunderbird

 

 

 

My Fandoms/stuff I like

I pulled most of these pictures off google, so if i owe someone credit, and didn't know it, please PM me

 

 

HTTYD! (of course)

 

 

 

Everything Harry Potter, though the books are best.

 

I am always up for Harry Potter trivia. Hard ones are welcome. Bring it on! ;-)

 

Rangers Apprentice (its a book series)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THE FUNNIES:

moved to a google docs:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fJcvaIDSX0Ofe0oNd5a_hu3Rkdp9GJCOPfPT5FlKYxs/edit

ENJOY! =-)

 

 

 

-waves- THANKS FOR LOOKING THROUGH ALL OF THIS

CRAZINESS!! E) (you must have been boooored E)

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SIGNATURE UNDER CONSTRUCTION!

About me: 

My main fandoms are How to Train Your Dragon and Star Wars. (Don't ask me which one I like more, I'm undecided. They're both so amazing!) I also like Stranger Things, Studio C, POTC, Harry Potter, The Emporer's New Groove, Napoleon Dynamite, and LoTR, but this list goes on and on forever. My favorite TV show is Race to the Edge (obvioulsy) and Star Wars: The Clone Wars. Fandoms aside, I love reading, hiking, playing with my dog, writing stories and fanfics, and HICCSTRID! (More on that farther down) As far as sports, I run Cross Country and Track/Field for my school. That's pretty much it, I'm not that interesting! 

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 I AM ALWAYS WILLING TO COLLAB ON STORIES OR  TAKE WRTING REQUESTS! (if that's a thing)

 

 

 

 

I ALWAYS LOVE ADDING FRIENDS! MY BUDDY CODE IS E73RXG. I WOULD LOVE TO MEET UP ANY TIME IN THE GAME AND CHAT ABOUT RACE TO THE EDGE, HICCSTRID, HTTYD, OR ANYTHING ABOUT LIFE IN GENRAL!

A drawing of my main battle/racing dragon, Tranchant Rouge, drawn by the FABULOUS Scalefeatherz!

A screen edit of Tranchant Rouge (sorry, I love this dragon) made by the super talented Blackwolfen!

About my Viking: 

Name: EllietheSavage

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Apperance: She has medium-length sandy blonde hair, which she always keeps up in a messy bun. Tan-ish skin, with sea green eyes and a scar on her left. Though she is short, she doesn't let that stop her even when it means she can't reach that one thing on the top shelf. 

Personality: EllietheSavage is a very ambitious, stubborn, adventerous, brave, and intelligent viking. Most days she prefers to act first and think later, which can sometimes land her in trouble. She will never hesitate to stand up for anyone, and watch out, because she can roast you faster than a Stoker class dragon. Despite this, she is kind and social, and loves people almost as much as her dragons. 

Likes/Disklikes: She likes FF, TRR, talking to friends on the sea stacks in the Training Grounds, inventing stunts with her dragons, and shooting at Trader/Traitor Johann even though it never actually does anything. EllietheSavage does not like the Lab (sorry Heather), hackers, Johaan, and the thought of dragons leaving in HTTYD 3.   Ellie prefers to fight with a Bow and Arrows, but she is also very skilled at sword fighting. 

Level: 

1 Gold Star

Adventurer Level: 35

Fishing Level: 26 (RIP the time I actually went fishing) 

Farming Level: 27

Trophies: 425 (I know, I suck at TRR, and I never see people to verse in FF)

My Dragons: 

Firehorn: Level 30 Rumbelhorn, rescued from Drago's Army (Male)

Firethorn: Level 30 M. Nightmare, hatched from the Hatchery (Female)

Dawnfire: Level 30 Groncicle, trained on Icestorm Island (Female)

OiOiOi: Level 30 M. Nightmare, prize box in Loki's Mirage (Male)

ChickenandMacey: Level 30 H. Zippleback, bought from Johann's trading post (Female)

SquittheLit: Level 17 Gronckle, prize box at the school (Male)

Snake Spine: Level 11 W. Death, rescued from the tunnels under Berk (Male)

Valkyrie: Level 11 Deadly Nadder, prize box on Icestorm Island (Female)

Tranchant Rouge (French name meaning Sharp Red): Level 4 Razorwhip, rescued from the Ship Graveyard (Female)

XxStickyVickyxX: Level 10 Death Song, trained on Melody Island (also thank you to typhoomarangmaster338 for this name, it made me laugh!) (Female)

Pictures of Dragons: 

Firehorn, who is gruff on the outside but soft on the inside

Firethorn, a motherly and headstrong dragon who excells at Fireball Frenzy

 

Dawnfire, who is cautious and caring. Loves racing around Icestorm Island

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OiOiOi, the most stubborn and competitive of all the dragons

Chicken and Macey, who, like most zipplebacks, do not know the meaning of responsibility or well behaved

 

Squitthelit

 

Snake Spine

 

Valkyrie

 

XxStickyVickyxX

Tranchant Rouge, fiercely loyal and protective, also my main battle and racing dragon

 

CLAN:

I am a proud elder in the clan Hiccstrid Forever! We are an invite only clan, but anyone who ships this pairing is welcome, as long as you have a decent amount of trophies! (We've been recently getting alot of submissions with 0 trophies, and its really bringing down our rank, but if you really like Hiccstrid and just can't get any trophies, you're still welcome!)

(Picture to come once I figure out how to add it in)

We are a clan dedicated to the greatest OTP (and winner of 2017's best couple in fandom) ever, and "We fight together no matter what!" Our wonderful clan leader is Fasterid, and we have several amazing elders! If you ship it, and are looking for a clan, send in your submission; we'd love to add you!

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Ships/OTP's:

Hiccstrid!!! (If that wasn't obvious :))

 

When I first watched HTTYD, I thought that they were a cute couple, and I lked the moments that they had together. Two years later, when I got into the fandom, I watched Blindsided with my sister, who thought it was disgusting but I thought it was adorable. I don't know just when, but I guess a week or so later I realized they were my new OTP!

I write fan fiction for them,(never fan art, I cannot draw to save my life) but I never publish it anywhere; I'm to shy. Most of it is on the side of school worksheets, but I always write it down on the computer later. I rotate every day between watching the Hiccstrid moments on YouTube. I think I'm past the point of no return, but they're so cute!!! For sure my OTP, not just for HTTYD but for fandom in general.

I really hope that they get married either in HTTYD 3 or in a wedding short. I was kind of dissapointed we didn't get to see Hiccup propose, but maybe Viking society just works that way. Either way, I'm glad we got to see more in Season 5. Of course I would never say that enough was enough; that's just me. 

If I had to choose a favorite Hiccstrid moment,I would say when he tells her that "there will always be a Hiccup and Astrid", and then tried to kiss her. I think that this was such show of support and bravery to confess his feelings like that! Second would definatley be either the end of Sandbusted or Blindsided. Ok, I'll stop with the rant. But they're so cute!

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Sorry for the long and unesscary rant!
Other ships I like from HTTYD are
StoickxValka (Stakla)
 
HeatherxFishlegs (Heathlegs)
 
SnotloutxHis"S"... lol
 
From other fandoms, my OTP's are: 

 

Star Wars-

HanxLeia

AnakinxPadme

ObiWanxSatine

AhsokaxLux

KyloRenxPainfulDeath

 

POTC-

WillxElizabeth

 

Stranger Things-

MikexEleven

Steve HarringtonxHis Nail-Bat thing ;)

 

My Star Wars Section: 

(Because I have to have something)

I can't even begin to talk about Star Wars without making this annoying, so I'll keep it short. When I was 12, I was finally allowed to watch all the movies out at that time (Star Wars 1-6) In ten minutes, I had forgotten even my own name because I was so engrossed in the movie. The lightsaber fights, the story, the skywalkers, the weapons, the lore, the fandom, the romance, the plot twists, THE LIST GOES ON AND ON!! Okay, I need to calm down now. But man, Star Wars. Is. My. Life. I know EVERYTHING about it, including all the obscure charecters and blaster names. 

Favorite Movie (of Star Wars): Episode 5: The Empire Strikes Back

Favorite Charecters: Han Solo, Jyn Erso, Padme Amidala, Princess Leia, Anakin Skywalker, Ahsoka Tano, Captian Rex, Poe Dameron

Favorite Part: I love you, I know or No, I am your father scene

Also, I am the co-preisdent of the I.R.H.K.R. club (I Really Hate Kylo Ren), founded 12/18/15. We are dedicated to hating Kylo Ren for killing Han Solo and being an overall dissapointment. 

 

 

Other things I like: 

#viggoprotectionsquad-he is amazing!

Save Shattermaster!

Thinking of painful ways to end Johann and Drago

TIMBERJACKS!!!!!
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THE REST IS STILL UNDER CONSTRUCTION! MORE ADDED LATER!

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Really random, but Toothless is so cute!

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Links to my chapters are below along with links to my other three fan-fics.

 

On the Edge of Mystery

Finally posted links to Chapters 17-24 in the threads and my signature.

Chapter 24 - Sudden Turn of Events

On the Edge of Mystery, my fourth fan-fic in two years!  Updates every Friday Night!

 

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Here are links to the chapters of my fan-fic, The Clue of the Missing Socks.

Chapters 1 and 2                         Chapter 3                                       Chapter 4

Chapter 5                                      Chapter 6                                        Chapter 7

Chapters 8 and 9                        Chapter 10                                     Chapter 11

Chapters 12 and 13                     Chapters 14, 15, and 16             Chapter 17

Chapter 18                                    Chapter 19                                      Chapter 20

Chapter 21 and 22                      Chpater 23                                     Chapter 24 and 25

Chapter 26 - There is a hidden surprise.  Can you find it?

Chapter 27                                   Chapter 28, Part 1                         Chapter 28, Part 2

Chapter 29                                   Chapter 30                                       Chapter 31

Chapter 32                                   Chapter 33                                       Chapter 34

Chapter 35                                   Chapter 36                                       Chapter 37

Chapter 38                                   Chapter 39                                       Chapter 40

Chapter 41                                   Chapter 42                                       Chapter 43

Chapter 44                                   Chapter 45, Parts 1 and 2

 

Here are links to my sequel fan-fic:

The Mysterious Frozen Fire

Chapter 1         Chapter 2         Chapter 3         Chapter 4         Chapter 5         Chapter 6

Chapter 7         Chapter 8         Chapter 9         Chapter 10       Chapter 11       Chapter 12

Chapter 13       Chapter 14       Chapter 15        Chapter 16       Chapter 17       Chapter 18  

Chapter 19       Chapter 20      Chapter 21        Chapter 22, Part 1       Chapter 22, Part 2 

Chapter 22, Part 3

Epilogue/Preview for my Third Story!

 

Here are links to my Tri-quel fan-fic:

Thoughts of Guilt

Chapters 1 and 2          Chapters 3 and 4          Chapter 5          Chapter 6          Chapter 7

Chapter 8          Chapter 9          Chapter 10          Chapter 11          Chapter 12, Part 1

Chapter 12, Part 2          Chapter 13         Chapter 14         Chapter 15         Chapter 16

Chapter 17 and 18         Chapter 19         Chapter 20         Chapter 21         Chapter 22

Chapter 23         Chapter 24         Chapter 25         Chapter 26         Chapter 27

Chapter 28         Chapter 29         Chapter 30         Chapter 31         Chapter 32

Chapter 33         Chapter 34         Chapter 35         Chapter 36 and 37

Chapter 38, Part 1         Chapter 39, Part 2         Chapter 40, Part 3         Chapter 41

Chapter 42, Parts 1 and 2         Chapter 43         Chapter 44

Chapter 45, Part 1         Chapter 45, Part 2

 

On the Edge of Mystery

Chapter 1          Chapter 2         Chapter 3        Chapters 4 & 5    Chapter 6, Parts 1 and 2   

Chapter 7          Chapter 8         Chapter 9            Chapter 10       Chapter 11        Chapter 12

Chapter 13        Chapter 14       Chapter 15          Chapter 16        Chapter 17       Chapter 18

Chapter 19        Chapter 20       Chapter 21          Chapter 22       Chapter 23      Chapter 24

Chapter 25        Chapter 26       Chapter 27         Chapter 28        Chapter 29 Parts 1 and 2 

Chapter 30       Chapter 31       Chapter 32 and 33                         Chapter 34 Parts 1 and 2 

Chapter 35 Part 1         Chapter 35 Part 2        Chapter 35 Part 3        Chapter 36

 

The Secret Symbol

Chapter links coming soon!

A quick google or forum search with title of the book, chapter, and chapter number will get you to the chapters.

 

 

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My Favorite Cars Character

 

I love Thunderdrums!

 

 

My awsome Grapple Grounder made by Sleepyraccon

Request your own at:  http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/make-your-own-grapple-grounder

 

Awesome Windsong by goldenfury360.  Go read his fan-fiction: Alpha and the Shadow.  It is epic!

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New read posted! Happy reading! <3

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"Cows live in herds, you unyielding maniac."

Tracking~

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There's a super-secret code hidden (well, not really hidden) somewhere in my signature. PM me if you solved it and tell me what it says, and we'll see about a prize! ;)

 

Disclaimer: This signature is image and fandom heavy. Approach with caution and a shovel.

 

Hi, I'm Squiid~

Female|Writer|Roleplayer|Comedian|so, so tired

 

"Who needs other people when you can have puns?"

-Storm

 

My FAQ!

Ask me really dumb questions.

 

I like...dragons and memes and stuff

And if I'm being honest all I do in life is play Star Wars: The Old Republic and scream and cry about kids' shows :,) Oh and I like...write stuff I guess? 

I'm a Christian, and always willing to chat! 

If you're ever having a bad day, just PM me. I have a whole list of really bad dad jokes and some terrible puns if you want them.

 

 

DISCO GIRL

*wheezes*

 

"Yeah, I am a loser, but I am the coolest loser you will ever meet."

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"They open fire, we set a galactic record from zero to space dust."

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"If you think this is bad, you should see my other personality."

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"This is a jar of dirt."

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"As someone who has spent most of their life in varying states of existential crises, I know the meaning of meaningless!"

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"The darkest thing about being an optimist is that, being an optimist, you believe it'll go away."

 

 

ART STASH!

 

Clicky clicky above to stalk my Google Docs file full of all the art the wonderful artists here on the forums have done for me. REVEL IN THE BEAUTY!

I'd like to shoutout my 12 AM brain for finding the motivation to do this. Thank you.

 

 

if you have a fandom

the chances are i will probably be able to scream about it with you.

i like a lot of stuff.

too much.

save me.

please talk to me i'm so lonely

 

 

I'm SWTOR trash.

Image result for star wars the old republic quinn I'm insecure and sensitive and I ruin everything I love

we don't talk about the Quinncident here

 

 

~Character Links~

Where you can read about my characters!

 

Stormy Jorgenson

 

Skari Stonefist (Coming Soon!)

 

Fabion Eittoh

 

Hurricane

 

Disclaimer: This user has a very weird and frowned upon obsession with villains

Please frown upon her for it so she can feel bad about herself!

 

 

Ma bois

(Aka, my faves)

 

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#TEAMHICCSTRID

 

 

And that's like...all I got. So I'll just be sipping my tea here. In silence...

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GSRH XLWV RH Z ORV.

 

 

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I have just finished the

I have just finished the girl's story, or at least all that has been written.

 

Having an interactive story like this is something I had never thought of previously.  Makes the story personalized to you while it might be different than someone else's experience.  That's the thing about writing and reading if you can get something out of doing either of those things every time you go back, that is gold.

 

I love the story and where it is headed.  I am very intrigued and cannot wait for further updates.

 

The critique that I have found is rather minor.  Because this is a work in progress, I would assume there is not much time to go back through and proofread.  I of all people understand this as I have this same problem.  Dropping words that while typing them you hear them, but your fingers don't actually type the word.  So some sentences can get rough.  Also, dropping pronouns or using the wrong pronoun.  These, in my opinion, do not take away from the story.  The fix would be to go back through and proofread/edit your story.  However, with me and how I write, I just want to get my ideas typed in first before I lose them.  Then after I am done, I stop and do other things.  Then it comes time to update my story and I continue on without going back and proofreading.

 

My constructive and major critique is that I sometimes don't know who is talking.  When a few lines of dialogue have been spoken without a mention of who exactly is speaking, it is difficult to understand what the writer wants to show who is talking.  Now, this does not mean you have to always have "he said," "she spoke," "they yelled," etc., but even in the dialogue itself this can be accomplished.  If before the conversation starts, it is already noted that Hiccup is talking to Astrid (just for an example), you could do this:

While the gang was in a circle, Hiccup asked Astrid, "So, what is your plan for Krogan?"

"Well, we don't know much about him, so I propose a recon mission."

"I like that idea." <<< Don't have to say who is talking as Hiccup was the last speaker before that of Astrid.  Whoever is the last one to speak besides the character who just spoke, you don't necessarily have to say who spoke.

"Propose?" interrupted Tuffnut.  "I thought the boy was supposed to propose to the girl.  Not the girl to the guy."  <<< Now if there is a change in a speaker from the two or more mentioned before than it would be best to indicate it as so.

Astrid looks both embarrassed and angry at Tuffnut, "I'll give you five good reasons why you should keep quiet."  Astrid held up her right hand in Tuffnut's face.  "One... Two... Three... Four... Five!" with each count she folds her fingers down to make a fist.

"I get those reasons all the time from Ruff," Tuff replies.  "But that has never stopped her from hitting me."

"You're right," Ruff said deviously.  "Those are good reasons."
Ruff proceeded to jump on her brother Tuff and they both started to fight each other.

"Ugg!" Astrid flopped her arms down in frustration.

 

I better stop while I'm ahead, or I may keep writing this.  XD

 

I found no major errors or anything along those lines in GamerKid's story.

 

I will read the boy's storyline soon.

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This kind of post should be posted on the Discussion Thread.