So, I Need Some eNgLuSh Help...

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Heyo.

 

So, um. Yeah, I have no intro. Just, help. Lol.

 

I'm writing a new, original Sci-Fi / Thriller novel, but whilst I'm updating and whatnot, I feel like the overall story is having a bad case of je ne sais quoi. Not to mention, spelling and grammar mistakes (not native English speaker, I need to add, but still... asdhjkd mistakes and bad plotting make me cringe). 

 

This is me kind of seeing who here can help me reviewing or knowing certain reviewers I can direct to so this novel can go off to a great start. Which is ironic, seeing as I've been a Reviewer to other writers on contests and such *insert le clown face*. But yeah, I need Grammar, Plot and/or Spelling help.

 

I do have to say, I can't show this novel here since it is more of the PG-13-esque side. If ya'll know someone or want to help me out, my PMs are open. Or, I can reply here if I can. 

 

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Did you end up getting help? XD

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Aloha Lola

Someone PM'ed me, but I mean, if you want to volunteer, go for it fReNd lol

 

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Sure, send me it. I'll see if I can help