So, I Need Some eNgLuSh Help...

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Heyo.

 

So, um. Yeah, I have no intro. Just, help. Lol.

 

I'm writing a new, original Sci-Fi / Thriller novel, but whilst I'm updating and whatnot, I feel like the overall story is having a bad case of je ne sais quoi. Not to mention, spelling and grammar mistakes (not native English speaker, I need to add, but still... asdhjkd mistakes and bad plotting make me cringe). 

 

This is me kind of seeing who here can help me reviewing or knowing certain reviewers I can direct to so this novel can go off to a great start. Which is ironic, seeing as I've been a Reviewer to other writers on contests and such *insert le clown face*. But yeah, I need Grammar, Plot and/or Spelling help.

 

I do have to say, I can't show this novel here since it is more of the PG-13-esque side. If ya'll know someone or want to help me out, my PMs are open. Or, I can reply here if I can. 

 

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Did you end up getting help? XD

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Some information on me?

Sure Why Not....

Name?
 

Dylieh...

Or Dill works too...

 

Age?

 

21

Birthday's the 18th of December...

 

Main Dragon?

 

  A black and white Night Fury named Corvus... Who has the tendency to glow blue...

 

Friend Code?

 

Uhm. Perhaps message me for this...

 

Favourite Colour?

 

      Green...

Neon green to be exact... Which looks really nice on white... and black... and red... and most all the colours

 

Interests?

 

     Does Headphone junkie, concert crazy, digital artist, and occasional writer answer this?

 

Favourite area in SoD?

 

     If you're ever looking for me in game... Just... go to the highest spot of the map, and you might be

able to see me hiding on one of the ledges... Or I'm racing...

 

Current Clan?

     The Leader of the Glass Wing Riders...

 

Dragons?

 

No, I am not showing all my dragons here... I have too many. I'll just make a video of them all later....
Or make a google doc or something, Idk...

 

Where I live?

    I love maple syrup on everything...
The weather can never make up it's mind on being either warm or cold...
Does... that give it away?

 

Music Taste?

 

Hahaha... Uhmmm.....

That ranges from...

Everything...
toooo....
Everything...

This is basically a glimpse into the nutshell that is my ipod... XD

 

Chillwave/Trap/Electronic
(Empancipator, Pretty Lights, Lauren Bousfield, edIT, ect)

 

Alternative/Indie
(Rare Americans, The Neighbourhood, IDKHow, Modest Mouse, ect)

 

Post Rock

(This will destroy you, Message to Bears, Giles Corey, ect)

 

Yeah... basically all forms of Rock and most Metal
(Polyphia, Tool, Tyr, BMTH, Palaye Royale, Kaizers Orchestra, ect)

 

Every form of Punk/Ska
(Sum 41, Fidlar, Anti-Flag, Homegrown, ect)

 

HipHop/Rap/Pop
(Osoku, Gorillaz, Ren, Billie Eilish, ect)

 

Most folk styles

(Crywank, McCafferty, Barns Courtney, Charlie Winston, Harley Poe, ect)
 

Country

(Poor Man's Poison, Rusty Cage, ect)

 

Rhythm and Blues/Jazz

(James Brown, Alessia Cara, Prince, Cab Calloway, ect)

 

Nordic Folk
(Wardruna, Völur)

 

Classical

(Dvorák, Bach, Chopin, Vivaldi, Beethoven, ect)

And basically anything with a lot of strings, and a lot of wind instruments...

 Example

 

And of course...

The HTTYD soundtrack

Or anything by John Powell..

Because John Powell's an awesome composer...

 

Now... This... is only the tip of the iceberg... I'm not even including the violin songs.. the electro swing... the most out of nowhere songs... XD Idk... if you're ever looking for new music, I'll always have something XD

 

(By Emerald Huntress. Thanks :))

 

 

"Without Music, Life Would Be A Mistake"
- Friedrich Nietzsche -

 

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A Dragon's Fury
To Fly Through Time

Jewel of the Night - Revising

More HTTYD stories in the works....

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Have some character art....

 

An edit of Killieh and Corvus

 

Killieh Tyrus

 

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Aloha Lola

Someone PM'ed me, but I mean, if you want to volunteer, go for it fReNd lol

 

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XD

Sure, send me it. I'll see if I can help