School of Rebels- SoD and Star Wars crossover unlimited RP

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((Sorry to be rude, but, you are godmoding my characters, could I ask you to go back and edit your post? I mean, I get that's its your roleplay, but controlling my characters and their reactions will really bug some people, could you fix that please?))

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Oh, sorry about this, I

Oh, sorry about this, I didn't mean to offend your characters. I don't know if I can fix it, but if I can't, let's just say that this post never happened.

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The post 50 events never happened. Godmoding error. Also the practice part is skipped, for godmoding avoiding.

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"What you get isn't your choice,what you do with it, is"

I smiled at the other girl "Sounds good."

 

It was a week later, and after excessive training, in which Yashia and Feaflena had offered to help not only me, but Iris and the newer boy too. I smiled at Valka as she bid us adeu. I didn't know when we'd be returning, as most likely the Hunters would try and find us after what we would be doing. With all the practices, I hoped the missionwent well. I turned to the others, and Yash gave me a half smile.

"Ready to go Mask!" She called. Giving a thumbs up from on Stoneflames back, I nodded and smiled. "What about you three?" I asked Rhayleen, Iris, and Sorren. "You all ready to go?"

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Event: The attack

The attack team flew to the agreed point, with Valka joining us. The sun was setting and it would be difficult for all of us to see, so we depended on our dragons. After a little, Drago's shipment came. Valka gave the signal and we shot the ship. As expected, the surprised soldiers ran away from the burned point. We landed on the ship and some of the men, jumped in the sea. Sandstorm and Shock wiped off the rest of them. Valka ordered Cloudjumper to lift the cage while we grabbed as many supplies as we could. While we were flying back to the base, Sorren and Shock burned the ship for good. Now it was time to learn which is the dragon in the cage.

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Attack

IIf the hunters had expected us to come at all they probably expected reconnaissance, that didn't happen. We flew in hard and shot at the ship. Metal and wire was everywhere, but so was ash and charr. Sorren and Iris shot hard at the ship, as Yashia and I landed on board. The hunters ran for the escape ships, and for a moment the two of us where tempted to chase them. But that wasn't why we where here.

"Look for weapons." Yash whispered harshly. I nodded and signaled Stryker to wait for me. We scouted over the ship with the others a second, finding plenty of supplies and weapons. A part of me I thought was dead kicked in and I grabbed some credits as well. Who knew when I would need them. 

Once we had all we could carry, we climbed back in the saddle and flew off after Valka.

I frowned as we approached the cage. What could Drago want with such a small dragon? It had to be only the size of ours to fit INA cage Cloudjumper could lift.

I turned to Yash, behind me quite a bit, and used a series oif hand signals to ask her what she thought. She shrugged. I frowned. And then a thought hit me. What was Drago going to do with this dragon anyway?

"Hey Iris, Sorren. Any idea what this is?" I ask.

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Sandstorm! Give me back my subject!

When we returned to the School, everyone welcomed us as heroes. But no one stayed to see which dragon was in the cage, except for a few. I got something, I took from a soldier, and must be the key. I went quickly to try it and it fit perfectly. I unlocked it and slowly opened the hatch. We saw something horrible: the dragon was hit with a dragon root arrow and on the walls of the cage were hanged eels. Poor dragon! Valka looked surprised. She whispered something we didn't understand. Then she said softly, almost whispering again."It can't be true... Toothless", and the dragon walked out.
It was medium-sized, four-legged and jet black. It was a Night Fury! But no ordinary Night Fury. It was Toothless, the dragon of the former chief of Berk! It is Toothless!

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What the heck!!!!!!!

We landed, cheered on by our fellow rebels. But  soon as congratulations where over, everyone left.I was surprised. And so was Yash. "You'd think they'd want to see what we scored." She huffed. Feaflena ran over and hugged me tight. "Great work Rhei! Knew you could do it!"

"Hey other half of the team here." Yash said, half smiling. Fea grinned and shook her hand.

"Toothless." I turned at the name and was surprised to we our great alpha come limping out of the cage. I gasped, hearing the same coming from both my friends. Fea fell to her knees looking sick, and Yashia turned away to shield her eyes. I frowned, anger alighting in my eyes enough to make me appear with, and hurried over to the wounded dragon. He bared his teeth and growled at me.

"Hush bud,  its me Rhei, you remember me." He calmed some and his pupils reverted to their larger form, indicating his trust. I gently waved my fingers over his snout and gently rubbed his head as Valka had shown me. It didn't work and the dragon mother had to do it for me. But Toothless was soon asleep.

I pulled a satchel from my belt and opened it, the nightfury was in awful condition. 

I poured a blue liquid from a bottle onto a rag from the satchel and gently wiped it over the wounds. Cutting out the arrows and then pouring clean water in the cuts. Even asleep the great beast squirmed in pain, and I felt tears censored my eyes as I rubbed his ear flaps. Just like Hiccup had done. What had they done to him?

I started as I felt Fea's hand only own. Her own face was streaked with tears, but she smiled sadly and took the rag from me. Carefully cleaning his wounds.

This hurt. Cleaning the wounds of the Great Alpha Dragon, having to we him by n such a state.brought on such a wave of emotional pain for the two of us.

Inside the cage we could here Yash venting out her own hurtNd pain as she slashed the eels and anything else inside to pieces.

 

As soon as we had done all we could, which surprisingly Valka said was a masterful job. Toothless was moved very carefully to a clean and comfortable stable. Valka employed another riders prickleboggle to sit with him, calling it the "healer among dragons".

Once he was comfortable, we all met outside the stables.

"How is he?" We all asked, worried.

"He's resting, and with luck, he will be healed soon."

I sighed in relief.but it was short lived. "This couldn't have happened, not if Hiccup was around. Not unless...." I winced. Hiccup, like Valka had been like family to me. Having taken me in when I first came. Letting me into their honeand tending to me and my fears so kindly. They made me who I am today. And the very thought of trouble befalling one of them was enough to make me sick. And Yashia's comment raised a dozen questions.

Without asking I called Stryker, in a moment I was attaching his saddlebags. "Rhei where are you going?" Fea asked. I frowned. "If this is how Toothless looks. How much worse off will Hiccup be? We have to find him!"

Fea's eyes widened in border, and both she and Yashia hurriedly mounted their dragons. Valka brought me my sabres. "I would go with you, but the school needs someone to watch it. The students here need me. Even more then my son might."

I nodded and clasped her hand in mine. "Alright. And I npromise I will do my best."

Valka tried to swallow a tear, only to embrace me tightly. "Be safe daughter."

I started a bit, feeling tears once again censored my eyes at the word I hadn't heard in years. The word I wanted so much, followed by something I had hungered for even more. "Remember I love you, and Hiccup too."

I nodded, to choked up torespind with more then a weak "Thank you."

Valka gently touched my check and backed away. I mounted Stryker and turned away to wipe my eyes.

Fea smiled sadly,  few tears dripping down her face. It had been a very emotionally taxing day. First watching us leave without knowing if we would return, then seeing her Alpha Dragon in so poor a state. And finally this. Even Yash had to descreetly wipe a tear away.

She turned to those around and shouted quite loudly. "So is anyone else coming or not!!!"

I smiled wannly. She really didn't know the first thing about asking for help.

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(Note: Please remember that in this scenario, Drago conquered Berk. It means that Toothless didn't defeat the Bewilderbeast and he didn't become an alpha.)
It is about two weeks since Toothless was rescued from that ship. He was in a awful condition. I was thinking: Toothless can't fly alone, so it means that he couldn't survive. If he made it till now, it might mean that Hiccup and the Dragon Riders are alive! If we found them, we might defeat Drago. But right now, Berk really needs us, we can't leave now, we can only wait.
I was hanging out with Sandstorm, when Valka and Toothless walked out of the stables. The Night Fury looked better than the last time. Those girls and Valka did very good job with healing.
-He still needs some rest, but he can walk around as long as someone watches him. We let him explore the island.
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Later that day, was foggy. We were kept on our toes, because we might got not ready if we were under attack. The owner of a Buffalord, shouted, pointing the horizon. We saw some flying figures, coming to our direction. We got our dragons ready to shot. Who was coming?

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We were looking at the horizon. Some figures were coming towards us. As they came closer, we saw that they were dragons, ready to land. Valka gave us the signal to stop. We were about to shoot the unknown dragons. They landed, and we gave a look. They were rider-less. There was a Hotburple, a Razorwhip and a Rumblehorn. The dragons seemed to be tamed and not under Bewilderbeast's control. To me they were strangely familiar. And I understood why.
The next day, the fog was almost gone, but still existed. We were looking for something as mysterious as the previous day's. Hours passed. Nothing. But then, a boat was seen. In a few minutes it was here, and three people walked towards us. The dragons were impatiently waiting for them.
-Disarm your dragons. We are coming in peace, a familiar voice was heard. Then the three people were better seen. They were Gobber, Heather and Eret.
-What are you doing here? You were supposed to be on Berk., Valka asked surprised.
-There's nothing for us anymore. And the rebellion needs some help, says Gobber.
-Eret? Aren't you with Drago's side?
-Drago kicked me away... Because of you rebels. Because the Night Fury didn't arrive in his army, he says looking at Toothless, who gave him a suspicious glance
-And the Rumblehorn?
-It followed me for some reason, and sees the Rumblehorn rubbing on him.
Valka laughs.
-He liked you. Anyway you can stay, but we will keep an eye on you. Come on, I will show you the place.
We watched them walking to the base. It's good to know that at least there's someone with your side and they will also they will fill the gap. That's why I was feeling the school empty...

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I am so sorry

I am going to try andsay this in the most non hurtful way possible. You are talented, you have great potential as a writer, but this roleplay isn't working for me.

Every time I address your characters, you skip to another scean. And whenever I try to act independently e.g. having my characters go to search for Hiccup. You say I can't act independently. It honestly feels like my characters are just shadows who follow your characters around. And when you do new things I am not given time to respond to say, Sorren's arival. Also, you keep skipping forward in time, which makes it really hard for me to keep up with you.

 

That said you are an amazing writer. And your talent is unmistakable. I was so shocked when Toothless appeared,I was not expecting that at all!

But, it could apearthat my characters are just tag alongs, who have no independent actions. This morning I logged in and read your post, and I will be honest. I was frustrated. You said my ideas didn't count. Usually in roleplays, that's how it works, those playing can create small adventures on the side. 

Im not trying too hurt you, but I'm gonna have to say that you should write this as a fan fiction instead. When a friend heard about this she said it would be best for me to leave stating "so she's writing a story and pretty much allowing you to tag along" and to be honest, that is how it feels.

So I am sorry, I am going to have to drop out. 

But please, don't give up writing, because you have talent!