Night Fury Island: Chapter one

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This story is the sequel of an old story from Toothless' perspective. I'm going to sum it up for u until I finish rewriting it: Toothless found an island filled with Night Furies and they took Hiccup and jailed him because they referred Vikings as evil hunters and Toothless was fine with that for a while until he realized that they were planning to kill Hiccup so he went back home the Night Furies followed him and attacked blah blah blah obviously Toothless' side won because of outnumbering the Night Furies and I'm not spoiling anything else :3

 

Night Fury Island

 
Chapter 1: Susé 
   
     Sunset, or Susé, slowly moved toward the goat. Night Fury Island was going through a famine, having all the prey move to the neighboring island. The Night Furys didn't have just enough food in stock to be able to make it to that island. 
 
For a neighboring island, it was rather far away!
 
    Just one goat was rare, even though this one was a runt. It would have to do; each Night Fury was for themselves. 
     Ever since Nucleus, their former chief, was defeated by a traitor that went by the name of Toothless, everything had been out of control. Most of the Night Furys followed Toothless to his island, which was full of Vikings. Vikings tried to hypnotize us dragons into being their slaves. Those who were smart stayed behind and went back to the safety of their island. 
    No one knew what happened to Nucleus. We think he was caught and killed, though there is a possibility that he escaped.     
    Nucleus was very powerful. He was born with the ability to speak with our ancestors. They helped him by sending him spirits in battle, and elemental blasts that targeted his enemies. He always tried to use his powers as least as possible, because every time he used them, he lost part of his soul. 
    That was probably why Nucleus went so crazy when Toothless escaped with his Viking. It's either that or he didn't want the Viking to reveal the location of the island to the other Vikings. Susé didn't think Nucleus was evil. He was just trying to keep our tribe safe. 
    The other tribes of Night Fury’s were all killed; the Vikings found them. Vikings are ruthless and stupid, charging on the backs of dragons into their deaths. The poor dragons always hidewith the Viking, the rule is. That's why we try to avoid them. 
     It was hard to hide for Susé—she glowed. That's why they called her Sunset. Susé was “sunset” in   Dragonese. None of the other Night Furys glowed. She was different from everyone else. Susé found pride in this, though. She liked the attention. More dragons to talk to. 
    Her color was also different. Her wings were bright yellow and faded to red towards the tips. Her body was mostly neon orange, but her snout, feet, and ears all had a red fiery look to them. Her belly glowed the brightest. It was an even brighter yellow than her wings, and made her look like her belly was on fire. Her eyes were yellow, with blood-red pupils.
    The goat noticed her. It let out a little noise for help, but it was left behind by the rest of its herd. There was no way they could save the goat anyway—it was already in Susé's mouth. She specifically suffocated it without damaging its body. She was hoarding as much food as possible for the travel. 
    Susé moved around trees gracefully, her skinny body like a snake. She stopped at a small cave. That was her home. The cave was shaped like an egg, with a little moss hanging into the entrance. In the right corner of the cave was a little pile of animal skins and grass; her bed. In the left corner was a pile of three or four dead animals, not including the goat that was just added.
    Susé slumped onto her bed, thinking about how much she'd miss her cave when they were on the other island. She was born and raised in here, and her mother and father died in here too. They were killed by a Viking hunter, their skins being used as armor for the Viking's camp. That was why Susé hated Vikings so much, and she'd kill any Viking in sight.
    Susé heard a noise outside. A rush of happiness came from her stomach to her head. More prey! she thought, What a lucky day!
   Susé slowly moved outside, crouching. There was something out there. A pig, perhaps. She couldn't remember the last time she had a pig for food. Susé moved slowly toward the rustling. She realized that it was much too big to be a pig.
 
It had to be a Viking. 
    
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
I will be will be posting each chapter seperately ;3
 
NOT YOUR STORY. PLAIGERISM IS ILLEGAL. It's sad I have to say this. ]:/
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Clan Rank: Leader (on clan board I'm the elder, but I let my friend take over since I wasn't going to play for a while, but she won't give it back to me ;-; )

 

Main dragon: Savina (Death Song). Female. Current level: 17

Savina in my Titan DeathSong concept: 

Savina is the all-powerful most beautiful greatest dragon you will ever see! Shes so pretty and dangerous and superior — SAVINA STOP WRITING IN MY SIGNATURE! — UH UH andsheissocoolandshehastogonowbecauseAlexahasheraxeoutsorememberthatsheissobeautifulbye! — Ugh, sorry about that, Savina got a hold of my signature. Anyway, if you havent already noticed, Savina is narcisistic, well, i should say extremely narcisistic, and never listens to a word i say unless we're in a serious moment, or i run at her with an axe in my hands. Dont get me wrong, shes a pretty good dragon! She can be a lot to handle, but shes smart and protective, and thats good enough for me.

 

Secondary Dragon: Lightning the Skrill. Male albino. Current level: 20

Lightning is serious and extremely protective. Being albino, he usually doesnt hunt at night (Alexa always lets her dragons 

go outside on their own because she doesnt want them to feel contained) and hides in the clouds during the day. Hes fast and loyal, but not the most loyal im the group. He sometimes disobeys to do the thing he feels is right, and Alexa respects that.

 

Razor the Razorwhip. Mal. Current level: 23

Razor is the most loyal of Alexa's dragons. He lives her and is dedicated to agreeing with everything she says. The red on his back is actually a mass of bloodstains from all the dragons hes been forced to battle in an arena before Alexa and Savina rescued him. 

 

Queen Screech the Screaming Death. Alpha female. Current level: 26

Queen Screech is aggressive, fierce, and ,ost definitely not loyal. She will attack everything and everyone, even her own kind. The only exception is her mate, King Scream. Neither of them are actually royal, but they refer to themselves as royalty to intimidate challengers.

 

Hunter the Deadly Nadder. Male teenager. Current level: 7

Hunter is a skilled hunter (hence the name) and is very curious. He spends most of his time in forests and the wilderness.

 

Alpha the Shockjaw. Male albino. Current level: 10

Alpha is always the first one to take charge. He is dimwitted and overly optimistic, but makes friends easily. He doesnt always know what to do in certain situations (aka all of them) but has great luck, so that makes up for it. Right?

 

Deathwing the Whispering Death. Male. Current level: 17

Despite having an intimidating name and a daunting appearance, Deathwing just loves to have fun. Hes a comedian and a prankster, and definetly enjoys a good scare. His disobedience level is 9.

 

Majesty the Fireworm Queen. Female royal. Current level: 11

Majesty takes being a queen to heart. She cares for all dragons and treats them like theyre her children. Shes basically an underdeveloped Marry-Sue.

 

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Hi Alexadragonfire!

Nice work, but I prefer them on the same tropic. I love to look from dragon POV.
Why do you write "NOT YOUR STORY. PLAIGERISM IS ILLEGAL." Well everyone knows that. Does people usually steal?
You could do like this: Night Fury Island © 2017 Alexadragonfire All Rights Reserved, but make sure that no one has used this title before. When I was younger I was a volonte whose task was to make sure that nothing like that happened on a site. © - copyright, CC - share alike. Two important thing to know of. To make sure that the readers know that you are serious you can add a link CC that describe the licence. I don't have any link to © cause I didn't work much in that section.
Good luck with your story, we look forward.

Regards
Jas

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Moduffle
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Subject is annoying XD

Thank you! I have a deviantart account and things have been stolen before, they all ended up ok but i just dont want anything to happen to anything else on here. This book is one of my favorites that ive made (ive made this an actual series and several books on this storyline) and i just dont want anyone using it as their own, even though i find it rare that the things ive made are worth stealing lol

 

thanks for being so helpful to me!