Night Fury Island: Chapter one

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This story is the sequel of an old story from Toothless' perspective. I'm going to sum it up for u until I finish rewriting it: Toothless found an island filled with Night Furies and they took Hiccup and jailed him because they referred Vikings as evil hunters and Toothless was fine with that for a while until he realized that they were planning to kill Hiccup so he went back home the Night Furies followed him and attacked blah blah blah obviously Toothless' side won because of outnumbering the Night Furies and I'm not spoiling anything else :3

 

Night Fury Island

 
Chapter 1: Susé 
   
     Sunset, or Susé, slowly moved toward the goat. Night Fury Island was going through a famine, having all the prey move to the neighboring island. The Night Furys didn't have just enough food in stock to be able to make it to that island. 
 
For a neighboring island, it was rather far away!
 
    Just one goat was rare, even though this one was a runt. It would have to do; each Night Fury was for themselves. 
     Ever since Nucleus, their former chief, was defeated by a traitor that went by the name of Toothless, everything had been out of control. Most of the Night Furys followed Toothless to his island, which was full of Vikings. Vikings tried to hypnotize us dragons into being their slaves. Those who were smart stayed behind and went back to the safety of their island. 
    No one knew what happened to Nucleus. We think he was caught and killed, though there is a possibility that he escaped.     
    Nucleus was very powerful. He was born with the ability to speak with our ancestors. They helped him by sending him spirits in battle, and elemental blasts that targeted his enemies. He always tried to use his powers as least as possible, because every time he used them, he lost part of his soul. 
    That was probably why Nucleus went so crazy when Toothless escaped with his Viking. It's either that or he didn't want the Viking to reveal the location of the island to the other Vikings. Susé didn't think Nucleus was evil. He was just trying to keep our tribe safe. 
    The other tribes of Night Fury’s were all killed; the Vikings found them. Vikings are ruthless and stupid, charging on the backs of dragons into their deaths. The poor dragons always hidewith the Viking, the rule is. That's why we try to avoid them. 
     It was hard to hide for Susé—she glowed. That's why they called her Sunset. Susé was “sunset” in   Dragonese. None of the other Night Furys glowed. She was different from everyone else. Susé found pride in this, though. She liked the attention. More dragons to talk to. 
    Her color was also different. Her wings were bright yellow and faded to red towards the tips. Her body was mostly neon orange, but her snout, feet, and ears all had a red fiery look to them. Her belly glowed the brightest. It was an even brighter yellow than her wings, and made her look like her belly was on fire. Her eyes were yellow, with blood-red pupils.
    The goat noticed her. It let out a little noise for help, but it was left behind by the rest of its herd. There was no way they could save the goat anyway—it was already in Susé's mouth. She specifically suffocated it without damaging its body. She was hoarding as much food as possible for the travel. 
    Susé moved around trees gracefully, her skinny body like a snake. She stopped at a small cave. That was her home. The cave was shaped like an egg, with a little moss hanging into the entrance. In the right corner of the cave was a little pile of animal skins and grass; her bed. In the left corner was a pile of three or four dead animals, not including the goat that was just added.
    Susé slumped onto her bed, thinking about how much she'd miss her cave when they were on the other island. She was born and raised in here, and her mother and father died in here too. They were killed by a Viking hunter, their skins being used as armor for the Viking's camp. That was why Susé hated Vikings so much, and she'd kill any Viking in sight.
    Susé heard a noise outside. A rush of happiness came from her stomach to her head. More prey! she thought, What a lucky day!
   Susé slowly moved outside, crouching. There was something out there. A pig, perhaps. She couldn't remember the last time she had a pig for food. Susé moved slowly toward the rustling. She realized that it was much too big to be a pig.
 
It had to be a Viking. 
    
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
I will be will be posting each chapter seperately ;3
 
NOT YOUR STORY. PLAIGERISM IS ILLEGAL. It's sad I have to say this. ]:/
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    Greetings and salutations! If you are one of my friends, you'll be hearing that a lot. It's my signature greeting! Well, that's what I call it, at least. Anyway, to those of you who think my name is Alex: it's ALEXA!!! I get so annoyed when people call me Alex, haha. Oh boy, now I'm gonna have people tease me about that, aren't I? Oh well; they'll see the wrath of the Almighty Dragonfire and then I will be teased no more! Uh oh, I sound like my obnoxious dragon, Savina... Anywho, I'm completely open to new friends, so if you need someone to talk to, I'm your Viking! I'm socially awkward, but still social, apperently. Honestly I don't know what I am. 

    So about me... hmmm... Well, I am a MAJOR Death Song fan. I even have my own clan called Era of the Deathsong. It's basically war based, and has to do with my dream for the Death Song species to rise up and steal the spotlight as the alpha species (take that, Night Fury fanboys/girls!)! Otherwise, I'm pretty chill. I always do my best to make people laugh. Usually my comedy consists of jokes that downsize me and make other people feel better about themselves, so if I say bad things about myself, please don't mind it. I'm just trying to be humble!! I have depression, but making jokes about that makes me feel better. I'm also an artist, and a soon-to-be animator (I have to get a decent computer first).

 

PLEASE FEEL FREE TO ASK ME FOR COMISSIONS!!! JUST PM ME OR ASK ON ONE OF MY FORUM PAGES, AND PREFFERABLY SEND A PICTURE OF THE CHARACTER YOU WOULD LIKE, TELL ME THE SETTING, AND WHAT POSE! I can do humans but they take extra attention by me and usually end up a little weird looking, just so you know. (Examples of my art will be displayed later in my siggy)

 

    Yes, yes, I know: I'm STILL doing my introduction. I just have so much to say! I'm very sassy on certain days for no apperent reason, so please don't be offended by a burn or something I say: everything I say is all in good fun! If you happen to run into me ingame, please stop and chat! Go ahead and give me a friend request, because I'll accept! And if you are also one of the rar and loyal and honorable Death Song fans that are willing to roleplay and uphold the Era of the Deathsong, please, PLEASE ask to be in my clan!! It's so hard to come by anyone who's willing to fight for the Death Song! Oh, speaking of fighting, if you happen to cross paths with me, either you walking up to me or me dive bombing or shooting you, I always love a good sparring match! I practice aiming on Icestorm Island and Hobblegrunt Island (and admittedly I sometimes use random players as targets) and I already have a few battle strategies that are just waiting to be tested!

 

This is what I look like:

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Anyway, enough about me, on to introducing Savina and my dragon allies!

 

    THIS IS SAVINA AND SHE IS THE BEST DRAGON AND THE MOST BEAUTIFUL DRAGON YOU WILL EVER SEE. BOW DOWN TO HER AWESOMNESS AND WISDOM AND LEAVES YOU IN SHOCK AND AWE. SAVINA IS THE GREATEST BEING YOU WILL EVER MEET --- SAVINA! --- UH OH. OKAY REMEMBER THAT SAVINA IS THE BEST MOST POWERFUL DRAGON AND DON'T EVEN TRY BECAUSE SHE'LL MESS YOU UP --- SAVINA STOP WRITING IN MY SIGNATURE! --- UH UH iHaveToGoNowAlexaHasHerAxeOutAHHRememberDon'tMessWithTheAllPowerfulSavinaBye!    ...Ugh... Like I said: obnoxious. She's full of herself, and if you haven't caught on already, she basically thinks she's an immortal dragon goddess. 

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Hi Alexadragonfire!

Nice work, but I prefer them on the same tropic. I love to look from dragon POV.
Why do you write "NOT YOUR STORY. PLAIGERISM IS ILLEGAL." Well everyone knows that. Does people usually steal?
You could do like this: Night Fury Island © 2017 Alexadragonfire All Rights Reserved, but make sure that no one has used this title before. When I was younger I was a volonte whose task was to make sure that nothing like that happened on a site. © - copyright, CC - share alike. Two important thing to know of. To make sure that the readers know that you are serious you can add a link CC that describe the licence. I don't have any link to © cause I didn't work much in that section.
Good luck with your story, we look forward.

Regards
Jas

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Subject is annoying XD

Thank you! I have a deviantart account and things have been stolen before, they all ended up ok but i just dont want anything to happen to anything else on here. This book is one of my favorites that ive made (ive made this an actual series and several books on this storyline) and i just dont want anyone using it as their own, even though i find it rare that the things ive made are worth stealing lol

 

thanks for being so helpful to me!