Me and my Dragon -Pt 1-

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This is my back story and how i trianed my dragon.

 

I was a little lass three to be exact and i remember being taken away from family and home in Berk. When i got taken away it was during a dragon attack by a large dragon. My Twin brother and i were sitting inside the house while our father was helping the village.

After what seemed like for ever the dragon took me to an island it seemed lonley and deserted, perfect for the large stormcutter to just kill me, but he didn't.

The next day came by and the dragon left. I never understood why, all i knew was that i was left with no protection, warmth or food and was all alone, Or was i...... 

That night i heard a Roar and i thought, ' He came back!' so i decided to go check it out, but what i found wasn't what i was expecting.

I was frozen in my tracks, i couldn't move because what i saw was heartbraking. I saw a mother dragon dying from battling a large Monterous Nightmare as she was trying to protect her baby, It was then i relised that the baby dragon and its dying mother were Night Furys.

 

To be continued.....

 

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You made a few mistakes-

First line 'trianed' is spelt wrong

First line 'i' should be a capital

Second line 'lass' should have a comma after it

Second line 'exact' needs a comma after it

Second line 'i' needs a capital

Third line should have a 'my' in it

 

I will continue editing it later.

 

General feed back-

It seems like an interesting story so far, and I can't wait to read the rest.

Just watch out for mistakes.

It could use a little more description. Eg. I heard a LOUD rawr.

 

I will continue editing this later

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Backstory-

VexyLu's family were warriors.

They have lived on Berk for generations.

Always training, VexyLu was an expert fighter.

She was also smart, logical, strong and very pretty.

She had fought countless people, all had failed to win.

But VexyLu's parents wanted her to be even better.

She was enrolled in school of dragons, so she would be unstoppable.

As soon as she enrolled, Berk was under attack from dragon hunters.

VexyLu was there and was required to help the dragon riders.

Apon mounting toothless, VexyLu successfully helped defeat the dragon hunters.

That is when she noticed there was a trapped dragon.

VexyLu picked the lock and there was a magnificent, purple sandwraith.

VexyLu and the dragon immediately bonded.

She called her Nibbles.

And that is how VexyLu became a dragon rider.

 

Since that day, many years ago VexyLu has been on countless adventures with Nibbles.

They have helped many Vikings around the school and Berk.

They have dealt with many enemies like; a death song, dragon hunters, green death, and more.

VexyLu has helped discover an ancient Viking civilisation.

Along the way, VexyLu has trained many other dragons.

 

VexyLu joined the Berk guard.

Every time an enemy ship approaches, it is taken down quickly.

She often rescues dragon eggs from the sinking ships.

 

VexyLu has a hut on dragons' edge.

She lives partly there, and partly at Berk.

 

In her spare time VexyLu enjoys hanging with her friends, racing, helping new students, and of course training.

She is an even better fighter than before and her parents are proud.

 

You can often find VexyLu at the training grounds, Berk, the edge, or ice storm island.

She often patrols these areas, looking for dragon hunters.

TBC

 

Personality-

TBC

 

By FireFlash

By TosiLohi

By Bluemoon20523

By Werewolfgirl1253

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*WORKING ON DRAGON BACKSTORIES*

 

Dragons-

Sandwraith- Nibbles

Nibbles is my first dragon that I rescued from a cage.

 

Groncicle- Vexy

I found Vexy on johann's ship. I helped her find her way back to ice storm island.

 

Nadder- Lulu

I got Lulu out of the hatchery's collection of eggs. 

 

Death song- Melody

I rescued Melody from her mum's nest, after she was abandoned by her. 

 

Armorwing- Armor

I saved Armor from dragon hunters and she bonded with me. 

 

Smokebreath- Smog

Smog is the second smoke breath I got. I won him in battle. 

 

Smokebreath- Skyfog

Skyfog is the first smokebreath I got. I also won her in battle.

By Nightfuryatom4

 

Whispering death- Groundwhisper

I got groundwhisper after finding her egg in the tunnels under Berk. 

 

Whispering death- Groundquake

I won groundquake in battle. 

 

Whispering death- Groundshake

I also won Groundshake in battle. 

 

Whispering death- GroundBurrow

I won GroundBurrow in battle.

 

Whispering death-

I won  in battle.

 

Screaming death- Screech

I won Screech in battle. 

 

Razorwhip- Cut

I found Cut's egg in an abandoned ship. 

 

Razorwhip- Snip

I won Snip in battle. 

 

Hotburple- Grunt

I won Grunt in battle. 

 

Snafflefang- Fangsnaffle

I won Fangsnaffle in battle. 

by dogloven

 

Snafflefang- Fangsnaffle Jr

I won fangsnaffle in battle.

By FroztWulf

 

Flightmare- Frightmare

I won Frightmare in battle. 

by Scarfywings

 

Moldruffle- Mold

I won Mold in battle.

by Umbreon27

 

Speed stinger- Sting

I won sting in battle. 

By Okamisusi

 

Fireworm queen- Helios

I won Helios in battle. 

 

Shockjaw- Helpfulwarrior

I won Helpful warrior in battle. I named her after one of my friends.

 

Hobblegrunt- Wobbles

I won wobbles in battle.

 

Eruptadon- Flare

I needed help, and didn't have a dragon that could fly into the depths of a volcano, so I got Flare's help.

 

Singetail- Frizzle

I saved Fizzle from being auctioned by dragon hunters.

 

Flamewhipper- Firelash

Firelash stowed away on my dragon, after my journey on impossible island.

 

Snowwraith- Blizzard

Blizzard is my racing dragon.

 

Typhoomerang- BurntSwirl

I won BurntSwirl in battle.

 

 

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Hi guys!

The following part of my signature is currently under construction.

I plan on doing a lot more with the art I have drawn for me.

I am currently looking for people to draw my dragons, so if you think you can draw one, please DM me.

Thanks!

 

Adoptables-

*Im working on including names, etc

 

Scenseredshocked, my Shellfire, by Bluemoon20523

 

Hibiscus, my Sequin Wing, by Flowercrystal

 

Amethyst, a FriendFriend draggo, by 1flower

 

Stormrider, a Stormchaser, by Scarfywings

 

Sunfly, a Gardendigger, by Scarfywings

 

Galaxywhip, a Vesupa, by Bavelly

 

Peach, an Infertide, by Alicornbrodie

 

DeathSky, a baby nightfury, by Nightfuryatom4

 

Mysterystripes, a Marshtiger, by themasterplan47

 

PurpleFuzz, a Woolly Howl, by Wutend Bonfire

 

GreyShell, a Shelleye, by GoldenWraith

 

Issie, a Mountain Jackoat, by Scarfywings

 

Kiki, a Hyeagle owl, by Scarfywings

 

Ziggy, a Ratagator, by Scarfywings

 

Keja, a Foxret, by Scarfywings

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Thank you to all the amazing artists who have done art for me!

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Just a question

Didn't you post a thread with the exact same thing just the other day? Just wondering. 

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Arrowalker Orion                                   

           

 
Name: Arrowalker Orion
 
Nickname: Arrow
 
Friend code: PM me
 
*Appearance* : Arrow is a brunette, with light blonde streaks littered around her hair. She has pale, ivory skin. Rosy cheeks, nose and very light freckles across its bridge. She has a normal female build, maybe a tad more toned, and is rather short. 5'4" to be exact. She is usually dressed in a deer skin cloak accompanied by a hood, baggy wool pants, rabbit fur lined boots, matching bracers and a leather chest piece overtop a dark, wolf skin shirt.  (This is her primary outfit, as she is usually in a cool climate.) Yet when the warmer weather arrives, she removes her cloak and thick shirt, and wears a tan ruffled blouse under her chest piece. She carries her messenger bag filled with keepsakes her and Pheonix find along her travels, as well as a compass and a few medical supplies. Her hair has two "dreadlocks" near her right ear and she bares an amethyst necklace, given to her by her parents. A small scar stretches over the bridge of her nose, disturbing a few freckles, and reaches to the front of her cheek. She always carries her axe, made by her with the help of her creative uncle. A large knife is strapped around her left thigh, as well as three throwing knifes on her right boot. 
 
*Personality* : Arrow is a unique individual. If there is any possibility of an adventure, she steps forward, dangerous or not. She has the tendency to be curious, as well as mischievous (this has got her into trouble a few times over.) And she is undyingly loyal to the ones she loves and is particularly close to. She is closed and can come off as cold if you don't know her, but if you break her walls, she has a kindred spirit and doesn't mind cracking a few jokes every once in a while. Arrow never backs down from what she feels is right, and holds on to her beliefs. Stubbornness is one of her, "highly used" qualities, if you will. She is independent and introverted, but after she discovered the bond she truly had with Pheonix, she couldn't live without her by her side. If she sees a poor soul in trouble, she will swoop right in to help, but this can also be a negative trait as she is rather gullible. Arrow inherited her creativeness from her uncle, as growing up she saw the different inventions he managed to muster up. Arrow can be as hard as a rock due to the fact that she grew up without her parents, but if you really try to look beneath her hardened persona, you'll see a broken individual, who desires to care for others and to be cared about deeply. 
 
Strengths:  Arrow is great in battle, as having the ability to use a variety of weapons she would be a great asset in war. Though, you never see her without her "modified" axe. Arrow is particularly stealthy, and can track like nobody's business. She is great at solving puzzles, and loves to try and uncover a good mystery every now and then. She is a great dragon flyer, but mostly on Pheonix, as this is the dragon she has gotten used to. Arrow is persistent, cunning and a good thinker. She can talk her way out of many situations, and is good at keeping secrets (as she has many). She can find her way around any new island, as she was taught how to use the sun and stars for direction if she gets lost. 
 
weaknesses: Arrow can be too stubborn at times, this has sometimes gotten her into near death situations. She is gullible and can be tricked easily. She can be too trustworthy of new people, and doesn't get to know someone before she risks her life for them. She has sometimes put Pheonix and her uncle in danger with her "adventures" but she has learned from her (many) past mistakes. She can be too sensitive at times, taking things too seriously and getting but hurt over the simplest things. 
 
*Weapon of Choice*: Krisalax (name created by mechfighter)
 
Description: Her axe looks normal on the outside, besides a handle protruding out of its shaft near the end of the base. On the inside, there is a spring, where a small spear can lock into place and be released by pulling out the hammer at the end of the axe. The spring is attached to the hammer and when pulled it acts similar to a slingshot. There are small spikes to aim the spear, and the protruding handle helps to steady the weilders aim. 
 
Strenths: Can be used in a multitude of different ways, can be thrown due to the equal weights in each end, due to the strong spring the spear can travel up to 40 mph, depending on how far it is pulled back 
 
Weaknesses: Spear can't reach over 50 yrds, if broken will be extremely hard to duplicate 
 
^by me^
^by the amazing, mechfighter! Thank you so much!^
 
Side weapons: Besides her trusty Krisalax, she carries a large knife strapped around left thigh, as well as three throwing knives on right boot.
 
Clan: The Dragon Racers
 
Enjoys: Cloudy and cold weather, Early morning and late night flights, Having a quiet, dewy morning walk with Pheonix, Dragon Racing, Winter, Spring and fall
 
Dislikes: Intentional ignorance, lack of common sense, un-needed sarcasm, rude language & Summer (I know, idk what's wrong with me either .-.) 
 
Main Dragon: Pheonix- female- Woolly Howl
 
(credit goes to mechfighter for coming up with the name for my weapon, and sketching it. )
 
             
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Cold Outfit 
 
 
 
Warm Outfit
 
^both by me^
 

                                                                                                 

* Themesong *

 
 
https://youtu.be/xJzCZaMkjqg
(Just copy and paste it if you want to hear it) 
 
 
Pheonix
 
Species: Woolly Howl
 
Gender: Female
 
Rider: Arrowalker Orion
 
Appearance: She has a dark brown back, tan skin and pale pink, almost white underbelly and wings. A scar makes its way across her snout, between her nostrils and reaches her bottom lip. A scale in the center of her forehead is a cream white. Her eyes are a deep purple, the same amethyst color as Arrow's necklace. She is rather large for a strike class dragon, but her large wings help with sharp turns. 
 
Personality: Pheonix is a caring dragon, but to others besides her rider can seem like a typical brutal beast. To Arrow, Pheonix is a gentle giant. Helping her when she's in need and protecting her on their adventures. Their a team through and through. Her loving personality however can quickly turn deadly if her rider or anyone she cares for is threatened. 
 
 
Strengths: Pheonix is a fast and agile flyer, being able to dive at phenomenal speeds and turn on a coin. Her hail blasts are powerful and can create a small amount of snow if it's a foggy day. (That's always fun.) She is strong, and can withstand harsh weather. Her sturdy structure however can prove to be difficult in tight spaces. She is loyal to her rider yet very stubborn. Even more so than Arrow. Her heart is as big as, well, her. And she will protect her loved ones, even if it puts her own life in imminent danger. 
 
Weaknesses: Pheonix is agile in the air, but if she has to make a run for it on land, she won't get far fast. With her shorter legs and bulky frame, it's hard for her. Her fur like scales can get waterlogged, so she tries to avoid getting in water if she has to make a quick getaway. Her loyalty for Arrow can prove to be dangerous, as if anyone lays a hand on her in a threatening way she won't hesitate to warn them, or even attack them. If Pheonix is parted from Arrow, it proves a difficult task for her to function normally as she becomes panicked. She is independent, but if frightened can depend too much on another soul. This is why her and Arrow are usually never apart, as they both need each other equally. 
 
Saddle: A leather saddle that has a chest strap and lower belly strap. It is lined with wool so it doesn't harm her back, and has two saddle bags near the base of her tail. A handle that can lock into place if pushed forward far enough, and a back rest for when Arrow is lazy or injured. There are foot rests on each side so Arrow can stay in place and guide Pheonix a tad easier. 
 
 
               
 
 
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^by Grumpy^
 
 
Finnviðr Véurr
 
(He's being worked on currently)
 
 

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^Arrow as an "elegant" 1800s era woman, with Pheonix as an amethyst eyed crow^
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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                                              Pheonix(main)-Woolly Howl- Female- lvl 30

Ironwing- Rumblehorn
Hosscobi- Rumblehorn
Frostbite- Deadly Nadder
Cherryblossom- Deadly Nadder
July- Singetail
Dug- Gronckle
Yukon- Groncicle
Chiko- Groncicle
Qaletaqua- Woolly Howl
Jatayu- Death Song
Nikhita- Razorwhip
Alo & Arel- Hiddeous Zippleback
Baloo- Eruptadon
Atsadi- Armorwing
Kanuna- Hobblegrunt
Miya- Hobblegrunt
Mizuko- Sandwraith
Amadahy- Sand Wraith 
Motega (2nd main) - lvl 30
Honovi- Monstrous Nightmare
Yaholo- Whispering Death
Atlacoe- Moldruffle
Azuala- Flamewhipper
Ambu- Scouldron
Gola (3rd main) - Shivertooth - lvl 20
Chakotay- Thunderdrum

                                                                                        

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 Motega 
 
Species: Skrill
Gender: Male
Rider: Arrowalker Orion
Appearance: Dark plum colored skin, gold highlights and white underbelly
Personality: Loyal, Independent, Caring, Aggressive, Introverted
Strengths: Strong, can fly in harsh storms, intimidating to enemies, intelligent, agile in the air, good listener 
Weaknesses: Can be too aggressive if loses temper, can't run fast on land, can't swim well, loses all firepower if in water
Extra: Motega is a wise dragon for his young age, rescued by arrow when he was just a hatchling, they have a strong bond. He knows his way around and mostly helps berk gather fish before storms or for festivals. 
He wears no saddle unless he is being ridden which is rare due to his independence.
 
^absolutely STUNNING drawing of Motega by Archery and Dragons, thank you!^ 
 
 
 
 Gola
 
^Amazing drawing by dogloven^ 
 
 
 
 
 
                                            
 
 
 
 
 
 

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yeah but i decided to put it

yeah but i decided to put it all into on thred/post

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Okay, desha vu was hitting me

Okay, desha vu was hitting me ha.rd. XD

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-pt 2-

As I stood there not knowing what to do, the mother Night Fury looked at me with pleading eyes, I knew i was the only one that could help. I slowly walked over to her and tried to calm her ' It's ok i'm going to try and help' I said. The mother knew she was dying and wanted me to look after her baby when she was gone, she looked at her baby, then looked at me as if trying to say ' Look after my baby for me.' 

I picked up the Baby Night Fury as best I could and took her to the cave around the corner and placed her in a blanket, I then walked back to the mother and said ' I'll take good care of her i promise.' That night the mother flew off the island as best she could so she could die.

The next morning rolled around and i woke up with the little dragon sleeping on me. Not long after i woke the baby did too, I descided to go get some food for the both of us and then i thought. " Hmmm I need to call you something.... how about Luna?" The little dragon started jumping up and down with excitement, " Ok then Luna that's what we'll call you.

After Brekfast we played games and had a little fun little did we know that we were bonding....

 

To Be Continued....

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-pt 2-

As I stood there not knowing what to do, the mother Night Fury looked at me with pleading eyes, I knew i was the only one that could help. I slowly walked over to her and tried to calm her ' It's ok i'm going to try and help' I said. The mother knew she was dying and wanted me to look after her baby when she was gone, she looked at her baby, then looked at me as if trying to say ' Look after my baby for me.' 

I picked up the Baby Night Fury as best I could and took her to the cave around the corner and placed her in a blanket, I then walked back to the mother and said ' I'll take good care of her i promise.' That night the mother flew off the island as best she could so she could die.

The next morning rolled around and i woke up with the little dragon sleeping on me. Not long after i woke the baby did too, I descided to go get some food for the both of us and then i thought. " Hmmm I need to call you something.... how about Luna?" The little dragon started jumping up and down with excitement, " Ok then Luna that's what we'll call you.

After Brekfast we played games and had a little fun little did we know that we were bonding....

 

To Be Continued....

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-pt 2-

As I stood there not knowing what to do, the mother Night Fury looked at me with pleading eyes, I knew i was the only one that could help. I slowly walked over to her and tried to calm her ' It's ok i'm going to try and help' I said. The mother knew she was dying and wanted me to look after her baby when she was gone, she looked at her baby, then looked at me as if trying to say ' Look after my baby for me.' 

I picked up the Baby Night Fury as best I could and took her to the cave around the corner and placed her in a blanket, I then walked back to the mother and said ' I'll take good care of her i promise.' That night the mother flew off the island as best she could so she could die.

The next morning rolled around and i woke up with the little dragon sleeping on me. Not long after i woke the baby did too, I descided to go get some food for the both of us and then i thought. " Hmmm I need to call you something.... how about Luna?" The little dragon started jumping up and down with excitement, " Ok then Luna that's what we'll call you.

After Brekfast we played games and had a little fun little did we know that we were bonding....

 

To Be Continued....

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-pt 3-

 

15 years have passed and Luna is a fully grown adult as well as I am. I have never celebrated my birthdays before but today is a special day, today I turn 18.

'Morning Luna!' I said as I got out of bed. ' Want to go for a ride today?' As soon a I asked Luna started jumping up and down and getting ready to go. ' Okay we'll leave soon i just need to see something first' I walked over to my bag and took out a note, a note writen by my mother. The note read.

 

' Dear my sweet Charlotte. I am sorry i can't be here for you and your brother, i wish i could i really do. I am sorry my Stormcutter took you, I was upset by not having you both here, These are direction to Berk go there when you are ready and at your own pace, ask for Stoick and Hiccup. 

Your loving mother Valka.

 

' I'm ready...'

 

To Be Continued.....

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Ehhhhh

I'm really not fond of OCs related to main characters, or with really rare things (like a nightfury). However, personal preferences aside, your story needs to be worked on some more.

 

Your grammar, puntuation and spelling is a bit off. Whilst it can be put down to various factors outside your control, it's generally considered polite to try to have it as best as it can be. If you need help with this, I'm willing to write it out correctly if you DM me, and I'm sure many other people here would be happy to help as well!

 

Right, here's some criticism about the actual story itself. For your first part, you completely missed out when the stormcutter went into their house. Furthermore, what happened to the stormcutter and Valka? Was she taken at the same time, but put on a different island? Did the dragon return for some reason?

 

I'm going to put this next point bluntly; that's not how 3-year olds act. 7-year olds, maybe, but 3-year olds? They would  not be able to survive in the wild at all. They aren't self-sufficient, and can barely look after themselves, let alone a baby night fury. They would also not be able to read or speak properly as they hadn't been taught it, and 15 years without being around other humans would make them act rather wild. Also, d.ead mother cliché!

 

How come Valka didn't come to help Charlotte at all? You haven't really covered that. She didn't go back to Berk because she thought that they still didn't like dragons, but she wouldn't have that sort of philosophy with a 3-year old daughter. 

 

 

 

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I agree with all of it.  I'd

I agree with all of it. 

I'd love to help as well! I'm not a great writer, but I need something to do sometimes just for the heck of it.

As Cresela said, your grammar and aspects related need work. 

And as I said in your first story thread, you need to capitalize your I's.

Thats one thing that bothers me to the extreme. XD