The legend of the.. Sun Fury!!

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(Adallia narrating

 

It was a wonderful summer day on Berk. Not one viking noticed a yellow glow flying around. You see, this was the warmest and longest day on Berk, it was very special. Let me tell you the whole story. Feel yourself as the vikings on Berk, feel the warm summer glow on your face. Not noticing the Sunfury flying around.Picture yourself as the main character. Picture that YOU are the one to discover the Sun fury and TRAIN it.Picture that you become famous for training a sun fury, that you have a more powerful dragon than a Night Fury, picture yourself telling everyone its in stoker class, and the shock on everyones face when you train it! and picture that you are a dragon master. A master of dragons and only YOU can train a sun fury. No- picture that you can train thousands of them! They are attracted to you, not because your caring, kind, and love the sun as much as they do, but because your special. You have a magical power. You are not just an ordinary viking my friend.. you have the Spirit of the Sun Fury.Your best friend in this story is a girl named Adallia, (my viking) and she will take you on a journey you'd never imagine!

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Chapter 1: The Sun Fury.

 

A girl named Adallia skipped by you. "Oh, Hello." you said as she twirled around. "Hi, my names Adallia, you must be the new student?" Adallia said to you. "Yes, I am." you said. "My name is Sun," you shyly played with your hair and pushed around at the dirt with your boot. "Nice to meet you Sun! you can call me Ad." Your new friend said to you "Hey, do you have a dragon yet?" Ad asked you. "no," you said "which breed should I get?" you asked Ad. "Oh, I have a deadly nadder named Thalis, shes a great dragon, shes kind, swift, and loves a good race! Her soul reflects my own, its like I got lucky and found the perfect dragon! Maybe you'll find one that loves the sun too?" Ad asked you. You nodded. "Well Sun, wanna head over to the great hall with me? I only got here a few weeks before you, so I'm newer too. Maybe we can train dragons together?" You happily said "Okay, I'd like that

 

 

 

editing soon guys! just want this chapter in the forum.

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http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/legend-sun-fury Click here to read the legend of the sun fury, where the story is about a viking named Sun- I'll give you a hint- its you! The story where you're the main character. Read the adventure with your new friend Ad, and find your dragon, and find out that your different from most vikings!

 

http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/melody-isle-home-melody-firewing click here to read Melody Isle: home of Melody Firewing

 

 

 

http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/second-red-death#comment-178894 Click here to read The Second Red Death

 

http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/mermaid-guardians Click here to read The Mermaid Guardians

http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/mystery-woodland-stone

 Click above to read Mystery of the Woodland Stone

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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'Come with me as we go into the waters of Berk, We honor dragons, are YOU up for the challenge to explore the coral reef?'

 

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chapter 2: Ad's friends

When you and Adallia get to the great hall, you talk about dragons with her. "One time I faced a Monsterous Nightmare, and got a scar," Adallia said, and then waved over another girl. "Hey! over here Jaguari!" Jaguari sat down at the table, and a boy came over as well. "Mr Jeffy, Jaguari, this is my friend Sun." They waved at you and you waved shyly back while glancing away for a second. "Shy huh?" the boy sitting next to Jaguari said. He rolled his eyes, only to get a painful elbow-to-side from Jaguari- whom he called Jag. another friend came over, and Ad introduced you to her. "This is Bes, but we call her Ash. These are my friends, some are old friends, that I've known since I watched Toothless" Adallia said, tilting her head quickly  towards Jag. "and some are newer, like Mr Jeffy, I met him when the flightmare pack came to Berk, and Bes is a newer friend too, I met her earlier though, when Jag and I were being chased by a wild monsterous nightmare." Adallia said smiling. You knew at that moment Ad and her friends would be your new best friends, and this was only the start of a brand new adventure. You got lost in thought and were very startled when Mr Jeffy said "hellooooooooooo?" while waving his hand in front of you. Despite the mask that was, eternally on fire he wore, it didnt feel very hot, and all Ad's friends were in the same clan as she. "Hey Jag, you know who'd make a great new addition????????" She asked. "No, who?" Adallia smacked her palm against her forehead. "Sun would!" Ad said. You got to know Tiki, and Phantom, who were Jags nadders, Thalis, who was Ad's, and Ash's dragons and Mr Jeffy's as well. You and your new friends talked about dragons, training them, and the hard parts, such as making sure not to fall off in flight, cleaning the stables, and --- suddenly there was a roar outside. You ran out with your friends. Adallia's long wavy blonde hair blew from the wind that a yellow-orange winged thing was making. It landed by you, and somewhat looked like a night fury, only yellow, with orange tips on its wings and orange fire. Its wings had a pattern of gold (the color) and its fire was of silver with the faintest streaks of red. You somehow knew what it was. You reached your hand out, and he put his snout into your palm, which made Mr Jeffy laugh as he thought it looked somewhat like the face-palm Adallia had done earlier, but knew it was time to stop laughing when he recieved a glare from Ad that looked like she thought she was a wild dragon.... it made him laugh again, and Adallia just ignored the laughter. You named your new friend Phoenix, and called him Nix for short (note: if you want it to be a girl, just read the hims and hes as her and she, and we'll call her Nixie for short, but the name will still be Phoenix)

 

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Very nice Ad! It is a tiny bit confusing at times, but quite good overall. A few errors were made in spelling and some other thngs, but if you write something and leave it, then come back later and read it over, you can probably catch most of your mistakes. I bet soon you will be a very good writer. Keep practicing and keep up with these awesome stories :)

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Yeah its pretty good, the

Yeah its pretty good, the only thing i would say is she finds the dragon pretty quick, yeah she has the sun spirit and all but did it finds her , and if so why didn't it come years ago, why did it just decide to come now? Everthing else is pretty good, Keep up the great work ;)

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MR JEFFY FOR THE WIN

Good Job Fluffy! You are such a good writer.

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thanks guys, i noticed mistakes but edit button is not there to
  • it didn't come sooner because it draws its power from the sun. At night, Phoenix is vulnerable, and cannot fly, swim, shoot fire, or run away from danger. Without sun-power, Phoenix and his/her kind can't fly to get away, and are easily trapped without the sun power. Much like a skrill, it (as said above) draws power from the sun, though it can't store the power like a skrill. The Sun fury only is seen at night, as its yellow glowing skin (like a fireworm) shines brightly through the darkness of the night. it came soon in the chapter because it was in need of help.
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  • ''Sun'' couldn't find it because he/she were away from the island, and without sun-power Phoenix can't fly and he/she is stuck on the ground without protection.

 

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Your new friends stared at you in amazement. "Wow!" Adallia said. "Thats a sun fury. A Night fury mixed with a fireworm. You've TRAINED one!" Mr Jeffy looked confused. "Toothless is the only night fury. He didn't have eggs with a fireworm did he?? Was it the fireworm queen? how'd he fly to find her? shes on fireworm island, and toothless cant fly. Did Hiccup--" You motion for him to be quiet, and Adallia pointed at the fury. "His color, its fading." (or her) The fury fell to the ground. "Oh no! Phoenix!" you shout as you drop onto your knees beside the dragon and comfort him (or her :D) "We need fireworms-fast!"'

 

 

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Chapter time!!!

Wow, it's been a LOOOOONG time since I edited this story!!! sorry!!

 

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"We need fireworms!" you said. "Phoenix's sun power is running out!" Ad whistled. "I may be new to Berk, but I have a few dragons up my sleeve..." everyone looked confused. "No, not really!!" Adallia said, shaking her head. A fireworm landed. "This," Adallia said, while pointing at the dark green fireworm queen, "Is Lady." Lady started to glow, and she wrapped her long tail around Phoenix, giving him more energy. Mr Jeffy decided to touch Lady. "Ouch!" he said pulling his hand back. "Yeah.." Adallia said while nodding slowly. "She's a fireworm." You slowly get up as Phoenix does. "He's okay! Oh Nix!" you wrap your arms around Phoenix's neck, and he wraps his wings around you. You see Phoenix is getting fired up, (literally) about something. "He wants to tell me something." you say. "Oh, you speak dragon?" Ash asks. "How do you know?" Jaguari chimed in. "Well actually.. I" you start you say. "You speak dragon? whats mine saying? is he saying how great of an owner I am?" Mr Jeffy asked you. "Guys!" Ad shouts. "Let Sun talk!" You smile. "go ahead, how do you know?" Adallia asks you. "Well, I, just do." Ad turns around to her friends. "Guys, Sun's dragon needs help." she says. "I'll go" You say. Ad looks back at you. "No." Adallia turns back to look at her friends. "Guys... Lets saddle up." Adallia says, her eyes gleaming with joy of a new adventure.

 

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confusing

It was confusing at first, why did she find the dragon so fast? Why couldn't she find it after weeks of searching for the right dragon. She could have found it in a cave or forest when it was injured, you need to learn how to add spice to it and make it last longer. And choose your words correctly, the things you said were very confusing until I got the idea of what you meant. You need to work on it and make another story, one that is improved. Other than that, good job.

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         My name is Taylor Beth, I'm independent but mostly rely on my dragons. I would rather throw my axe at my enemies then ask questions later. Unlike most vikings, I have short white hair and live mostly in the wild but make frequent visits to Berk for supplies and other things. I'm armed with an axe I made myself and several daggers.

   Hate: other people (mostly cause they tease me cause of my looks)

  Love: Dragons- they're my only friends except for Hiccup

  Talents: Axe throwing, dragon taming, dagger throwing

  Need to work on: social skills, fitting in (though I'm just too cool to change myself)

 

 

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   Fan Fictions:  Timberheart: Story of a Timberjack

                         Ghostwing: Story of a White Nadder

                          Amber-song the Death Song

                         Gold Flame of the Monstrous Nightmares

                          Fight of the School of Dragons

                              I Choose You! (A Pokemon version of How to Train Your Dragons)  https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12162784/1/I-Choose-You-A-Pokémon-version-of-How-to-Train-Your-Dragon

 

My dragons

 

     Ghostwing: Species: male Nadder  Was my first dragon that I got when I hatched him, has white scales, has a daughter that he cares and worries a lot about her daughter after his mate died in a battle.

     Ghostfly: Species: female Nadder   Ghostwing's daughter, has purple with tints of blue, just like her mother, and white like her father. She's headstrong and stubborn, wonders if her father will ever let her go. 

 

      Pebbles: Species: female Gronckle   Loves all dragons and vikings, has a purple color with blue speckled spots, she cares for the young dragons.

      Sandstone: Species: male Gronckle   Loves to race, has a sandstone color, loves his mate Pebbles and his daughter.

     Hope: Species: female Gronckle   Has the love of other dragons and vikings like her mother, has a sandstone color mixed with purple, helps her mother take care of the hatchlings, has one wing that is shorter than the other and is working on flying.

 

     Sparker and Gaser: Species: male Zippleback    Likes to explode things, cause havok, and fight eachother in the islands I travel to, has a green and lime green color, it is not true with the expression "two heads are better then one" with this Zippleback.

     Bolderstrike: Species: female Whispering Death     Used to be a wild dragon until I taimed her, has a dark color of purple and red, is mated to Screamstone and sometimes can get rambuctious.

 

     Silverstrike: Species: male Skrill     Is the alpha of his Skrill clan, has a silver color, wise but always looks for a challenge, has a mate named Ultra Light.

   Ultra Light: Species: female Skrill    Is the Alpha Female of Silverstrike's clan, is black colored with dark purple color, usually makes Silverstrike see reason but still loves him. 

 

     Gold Flame: Species: male Monstrous Nightmare    Male, hardheaded and hates saddles, has a gold color, used to live in the wild.

     Midnight Flame: Species: female Monstrous Nightmare     Sweet, mate to Gold Flame, has a black color with blue designs, was born in captivity.

     Midnight Gold: Species: female Monstrous Nightmare     Free spirited and stubborn like her father, has the color of night like her mother, likes to have adventure and very headstrong, loves a good hard challenge anyday.

    Boomshocker: Species: male Thunderdrum    Very loud, like to speak out to everybody, has a blue-green color with light blue.

    Ocean Wave: Species: female Thunderdrum    Best friend to Boomshocker, has purple with sky blue designs, has a cripple wing so she can't fly, still a mystery on how she crippled it.

 

    Night Wraith: Species: male Woolly Howl    Loves to race with other dragons and competetive, black coloring with white mane.

 

     Shiverfrost: Species: female Shivertooth     Kind and loving, blue with light blue and white, helps Pebbles look after the hatchlings.

     Neolion: Species: male Hobblegrunt    Expressive and shy, but likes to see hatchlings smile, Golden color with a blue frill and purple spots.

 

     Electra Shock: Species: female Shock Jaw    Likes to "shock" the audience (if any) with her tricks, Golden color with blue fins and white tips on her wings, is full of grace and loves the sunset.

 

     Razor Sting: Species: male Speed Stinger    Loves to run and try to win races where he runs on the ground while the other dragons fly, green with pale purple underbelly and bright red fin on his head.

 

     Little Sting: Species: female Speed Stinger    A little smaller than the rest of the pack of Stingers. Has a pinkish-purple coloring with blue fin and red stinger. Loves to race Razor Sting.

 

   Frozenwing: Species: male Groncicle    Loves fetch as long as it's in cold weather, blue with white fins, he is very alergic to warm weather and prefers freezing cold winter.

    Cold Fire: Species: female Groncicle    A good friend to Frozenwing, light blue with dark blue coloring.

 

     Stormcutter: Species: female Stormcutter   Loves flying in racing and always stays beside my side, purple body with blue and grey.

 

     Screamstone: Species: male Screaming Death    Alpha of the Whispering Death's and ruler of kingdom of tunnels, white with black spikes, mate with Bolderstrike.

 

     Snow Flame: Species: male Snow Wraith    Loves to visit Icestorm Island and likes to race with the other dragons, white with blue spots and purple frozen spikes.

 

     Nightstar: Species: female Rumblehorn    Loves to fly and have adventures, like the sunrise and sunset, black, purple, and silver white coloring, she sticks by my side always because I rescued her when she was a hatchling. Her nest was destroyed by other dragons, she was the only survivor.

 

     Thorntail: Species: male Prickleboggle    Heals any ingured of sick dragons, light blue with white spots, he heals mostly the dragons who get into more trouble (Sparker and Gaser).

     Sweet Tooth: Species: female Sweet Death     Is really bonded with me, has a gold color, loves flying with me and is very sensitive because people call her an "ugly dragon" but she's really the best dragon and is part of our family.

 

     Super Sonic: Species: male Sliquifer    Loved to race other sea dragons in the water, has a Dark blue body with regular blue wings, people misjudge his size for strength and speed.

 

     Sharpstar: Species: female Razorwhip    Loves to race and protect me from other dangers, is a silver color with blue green (but you can hardly see it through the silver color).

 

     Leaf, Fall, Green, Snake: Species: male Snappertrapper    Hydra is their other name they can be called, fights, like any other mutiple headed dragon but is good at working together if choose too. Has a neon green color with blue spots.

 

     Amber Song: Species: female Death Song    She's really nice and doesn't like to eat dragons for she is good souled. White body with light blue spikes and dark purple fins.

 

    Rumble Quake: Species: male Catastrophic Quaken    Very grumpy and eats a regular diet of fish rock sandwhiches, black with dark green spots and white and black wings. 

 

    Timber Heart: Species: female Timberjack   Usually left out because of her size and gets bullied. Has a big heart and filled with kindness. A dull strawberry color with silver horns and silver tips on wings.

 

      

 

A big fan of Pokémon too

 

 

 

XYPokémon theme song (lyric translations and vocals by Mark de Groot)

 

 

 

Hey, just like a morning sun that's shining brightly over Kalos

(Our burning hearts are hotter than a flame charge)

Yeah, we're all prepared so you'll never see us run from chaos

(Breaking the mold will let our passion discharge)

All of our feelings overlap, yeah we are always synchronized

Because we have formed a bond that will never disappear

And I know that I will never shed a tear

As long as you are here

 

So let'z go! We're growing as the battle's raging on

And you know! That defeat's an opportunity

To grow! We're never giving up

Our determination is what makes us strong

Yeah, determination is what makes us strong

 

Hey, there will be times where we'll be forced to blaze through our opponents

(If there's a roadblock stopping us, we'll tear it down)

Look! The victory star is right ahead so take a sprint and grab it

(Our steadfast hearts will lead us to our glory now!)

Sometimes I wonder how much time there's left where we're a unity

And the fear of being alone may sometimes knock me down

But I get the strength to get back up again

When you reach for my hand

 

Now let'z go! Strong rivals will be waiting up ahead

And we'll show! We knock them down with just one hit 

So I know! There's no way I can lose

Cause my heart and dreams are always here with me

And I know that you'll always be with me, yeah!

 

Let'z go! If there's a fight that we can't seem to win

Yeah, let'z go! I know that you will be there for me

So let'z go! You'll always have my back

With our strength combined we'll deal the last attack

 

So let'z go! We're growing as the battle's raging on

And you know! That defeat's an opportunity

To grow! We're never giving up

Our determination is what makes us strong

 

Now let'z go! We will fulfill this dream with all we have

So let'z go! And we'll prove that we can catch 'em all

Let'z go! Keep fighting with your heart

And you're certain that your future will be bright

When you see yourself transcend to unknown heights, yeah!

 

So! Let'z turn it up now

(Shock them like a thunderbolt)

Go! Keep standing tall and if we're fighting as a team

Stronger than a hyperbeam

We will be surpassing our dreams!

 

(Now hear his voice for yourself, check him out on YouTube along with more of his great covers)

 

 

 

 

 

 

That's the end of my Signature, thanks for reading!

 

 

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i have many fanfictions.

i have many stories, most in my signature.

Sun didnt find it, it found sun. In my next chapter, you'll see that Nix needs help, so he or she had to go right away. Being a Sun fury, Phoenix can ONLY travel during day, and is weak, and vulnerable at night.

 

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