I need suggestions for my new anime oc. :3

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I just created my new oc. since I was bored by drawing her. I want to ask you guys about what do you think of my oc.  and needed suggestions ( For example like  changing the color on the clothes, wings/horn, and other I should I add in ). I will keep her hair color, and her eye colors since I like the way she looks.  I also need help of what to name her since I can't decide any name that would fit her ^ ^'  ( To be honest she look like Mary Sue ). She was often a mage that summons a magical powers to attack her enemies and probably healing her allies. I may think she would rather use her wand/staff or a magican spell back as her weapon. So what do you think? Any suggestions or comments by adding or changing of my oc.? The image is below of what I just drew her to show what she looks likes. :3

 

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( Fiery drawing drawn by Rae Didgeridoo )

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My oc. drew form other aritst ( Non-related  Httyd ) :

 

Yami Akame and Haruya drew from TosiLohi ( Thank you! ^-^ )

 

 

 

 

 

          

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Looks like a magical girl

Looks like a magical girl transformaton.

On that note, my suggestion is Haruya. Pretty Devil Haruya.
Other suggestion is Masturi or Mastuyu.

You could make her much less mary sue by giving her the Star vs the Forces of Evil treatment, where she doesn't have a good grasp on her powers and learns to use them responsibly by making mistakes.

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Alright thank you for the suggestions! ^ ^ I pretty much like Haurya  that can kind of fits her name as well! ^ ^

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I think she looks fine just the way she's now ! ^^

just one thing... where the heck are those wings coming from? They're so lowwwwwwww

Like if you're asking for opinions, mine is that you put them at least a bit higher up :D

 

And if you're worried about her becoming Mary Sue, remember that it's mainly the powers and nature of the character, not just looks ;)

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Star vs. the forces of evil - A series of unfortunate events - Gravity falls

Little witch academia - Ninjago - JoJo's bizarre adventures (<-- is the best one)

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Thanks! About her wings, I lowered her wings a little bit down since based on the anime character that I like her designwas Jibril from No Game No Lifem, and her wings does not come out from her butt^ ^'. - scratches head - (Some artist likes to put wings on many ways ) 

 

Here is what Jibril looks like!

 

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I see ^^ They just seem a bit too low in my opinion .. ^^

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I love it so much ^^ you did

I love it so much ^^ you did a wonderful job my friend ^^

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   Species: Monstrous Nightmare

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Ashley

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Age: 19

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  Other: Job:  Crafts/Invents furniture and other housefly items

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   Species: Night Fury

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Viky

  Age: 12

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Isabella

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Samuel

Age: 36

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Kate

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  Age: 14

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  Other: Spends a lot of time with Iris at the Isle of Night

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Maybel

  Age: 12

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  Other: Found her thought to be dead, twin sister and her chagewing, they got together and saw how great of a team they are. But Maybelle wanted to stay away from Berk, and stay back with her Changewing pack. 

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Maybelle

  Age: 12

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   Species: Changewing

   Personality: Very caring, knew what was wrong with baby Maybelle and took her and raised her as her own.

 

           

Maggie

  Age: 8

  Personality: Wants to be a grown up, tries her best to prove herself.

Main Dragon: Zac

   Species: Gronckle

   Personality: loves to play and explore with Maggie

 

Alice

  Age: 15

  Personality: Happy and outgoing, spends all her time exploring with her one and only adorable Nadder.

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   Species: Deadly Nadder

   Personality: Extremely adorable behavior, loves and obsesses over shiny things, the only way to draw him away is with brown trout. 

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  Age: 13

  Personality: Dark and violent. Loves spending time in Whispering Death Tunnels. Prefers to be alone.

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Thank you! ^ ^

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Wow, that's really good! I wish I could draw like that...

I love the color scheme too, very pastel. It suits her.

 

If you want suggestions, I would say raise the wings and shrink or remove the ponytail. If you like the position they're in, you could make the base of them near her shoulders and have them in a half-down position similar to or the same as the one they're in now. The ponytail is just a bit illogical too, and while I understand anime hair typically has no boundaries, it does look slightly strange. She'd look adorable in a pixie cut though, you might want to consider that!

 

So that's just my opinion. Feel free to do whatever you want, it's your OC!

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