I need suggestions for my new anime oc. :3

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I just created my new oc. since I was bored by drawing her. I want to ask you guys about what do you think of my oc.  and needed suggestions ( For example like  changing the color on the clothes, wings/horn, and other I should I add in ). I will keep her hair color, and her eye colors since I like the way she looks.  I also need help of what to name her since I can't decide any name that would fit her ^ ^'  ( To be honest she look like Mary Sue ). She was often a mage that summons a magical powers to attack her enemies and probably healing her allies. I may think she would rather use her wand/staff or a magican spell back as her weapon. So what do you think? Any suggestions or comments by adding or changing of my oc.? The image is below of what I just drew her to show what she looks likes. :3

 

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Fiery ( Female Titan Deadly Nadder, Level:30 )

Moonlight Sand ( Male Titan Sandwraith, Level: 28)

Flame (  Male Titan Monsterous Nightmare, Level: 29 ) 

Lighting Strike (  Male Titan Skrill, Level: 29 )

 

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( Fiery drawing drawn by Rae Didgeridoo )

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My oc. drew form other aritst ( Non-related  Httyd ) :

 

Yami Akame and Haruya drew from TosiLohi ( Thank you! ^-^ )

 

 

 

 

 

          

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Looks like a magical girl

Looks like a magical girl transformaton.

On that note, my suggestion is Haruya. Pretty Devil Haruya.
Other suggestion is Masturi or Mastuyu.

You could make her much less mary sue by giving her the Star vs the Forces of Evil treatment, where she doesn't have a good grasp on her powers and learns to use them responsibly by making mistakes.

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Voodoo, the Night Fury

 

He was picked up as an egg somewhere near Barbados. He is solitary, impulsive, and sometimes borders on disloyal. His attentions are hard to earn, but he is subject to the occassional cuddle by the hearth on a particularly cold night. He gets especially restless whenever the full moon is out. He seems to enjoy scaring, (and possibly scarring), small children. His nicknames include Witch Doctor, Skully, and Strangelove, depending on who's asking. It's not exactly clear why he has his markings, but it seems to be a unique trait among dragons from the area in which his egg was found.

 

Scritter and Desark, the Terrible Terrors

 

Like Vodoo, Scritter comes from the area around Barbados. He's a perfect little horror; in every way. He always seems to find his way into places he's not supposed to be, like at the bottom of the well with Tuffnut, in the winter storage, or creeping under your bed. He is mute, but he more than makes up for it in his misbehavior. He very rarely takes anything seriously, with the sole exception of pranks. He loves to scare adults and children alike, and compulsively chases any chickens he sees. You'll sometimes catch him during his misdeeds. If you listen very carefully, you might just hear the clacking of his claws as he sneaks up on you. Scritter was found taking a nap inside some saddlebags on a long trip home, and eventually formed a brotherly bond with Desark.

 

Desark's usually vacant stare might lead one to believe that there isn't much going on in his head. And it's usually true. Desark's head is definitely in the clouds. He is capable of following extremely specific instructions to the letter... once he finally gets around to following them at all. He usually comes back to earth when food is involved, and will occasionally grasp that certain situations are serious enough to warrant his full attention, but this is quite rare. Desark would quite happily spend entire days staring off into the distance or basking in the afternoon sun. He is a sub-species of TT refferred to as a Totemic Terror.

Xerxes, the Deadly Nadder

 

Xerxes, like Voodoo and Scritter, comes from the area around Barbados. He was found heavily injured during an intended year-long trip to the area, his hide pierced by arrows and darts covered in poison, with a dislocated wing, and his leg badly broken from his crash. Over the course of about six months of care, he was healthy enough to begin rehabilitation. After two months of rehabilitaion, he was ready to fly to his new home. He has since become a loyal member of the pack, although he is still weary toward people. His leg still bothers him, so he occassionally walks with a limp in his stride, and this gets especially bad when the wheather gets extremely cold. Xerxes is sometimes overprotective of other dragons and still displays occasional aggression toward humans. When he is relaxed, his personality will emerge. He is highly curious, adventurous, and will never pass up a meal. He will not accept food directly from any human hand. Whether this is a matter of pride of a sign of his weariness is anyone's guess. While his exact age is unknown, he appears to be quite young, and is prone to occassional impetuousness and silliness when he thinks no one is looking.

 

Bonehazard, the Rumblehorn

 

A Rumblehorn who migrated from Barbados for reasons no one really knows. A bit of an oddball, Bonehazard was first encountered in the rocky outcroppings surrounding Outcast Island. It seemed he had been there for some time, as the Outcasts had already come up with a healthy amount of superstition surrounding his mysterious patterns. Superstition that Bonehazard seemed to quite enjoy. A few attempts were made to capture him, but all ended in faliure. Bonehazard was wily enough to avoid obvious traps, and never quite flew close enough to be fired at successfully. After a few months of tormenting the Outcasts, he moved on to Berk to test his luck. Unfortunately for him, the residents of Berk weren't quite so spooked by his appearance, and were already living alongside dragons. He has since bonded with a few villagers, but he still loves to make trouble, squeezing himself into tight, dark spaces and popping his bone-patterned head out to scare passing vikings, stealing fish, and occasionally making a huge mess wherever he goes.

 

Senegal, the Stormcutter

 

By far the oldest and most mature dragon in the group, Senegal is often the voice of reason. He is the only one capable of exerting any form of control over Scritter and Voodoo, and his dissaproving glances even sometimes set young vikings straight. Or perhaps just scares them stiff. He was already old by the time he migrated to Berk, and sort of just fell in with the crowd. He has a few old scars here and there, and some of his back spines are broken, but he's had plenty of experience fending for himself. Senegal seems to enjoy the company of small children (at least those brave enough to approach him), and rarely gets into conflicts with anyone. Despite his relaxed demeanor, a life of struggling has left him weary, and his guard is almost always up. He is undisputably the "alpha" among the members of the pack. He is the one other pack members look up to and respect.

 

Midas, the alpha Speed Stinger

Midas came to Berk after having stashed away on a boat. The boat eventually met up with Trader Johan, who unknowingly took this speed stinger back to Berk along with him. Midas had not come alone. He had brought the single sole surviving member of his pack with him, who has been nicknamed Bayter. Midas has never been truly tamed, but he has started a new adopted pack of speed stingers and has become accustomed to the presence of people. He is not above stealing food, but he rarely becomes defensive unless approached by a human weilding a weapon. While he is the alpha of his adopted pack, he acknowledges Senegal as his alpha, and will usually aquiesce to his wishes and demands. Midas is quite cunning and is a compulsive shiny object hoarder. He is very cautious, probably because of losing most of his original pack.

 


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Silverswift and Terrorscale, my Greater Banded Geckus. Created by themasterplan47. Adopt one HERE.

My Nightmare fury, Saerin, and my Dream Eater, Monochrome.

 

 

Hanfeng Tian (Hanfeng (cold wind)?, Tian (field)?), and Suifeng (wind-borne)

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Imperial and Iseul, my OCs, revamped versions of Amberleaf's Banded Featherlure. Concept belongs to amberleaf7, revamp itself done by request (I'll take revamp requests via PM out of boredom =D)

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Icefire, my Ashed Fire

Deepscale, (unnamed species) OC

Grave, my Goat Furred Ram

Goldrust, my (unnammed species)

 

Nightgale, my Spiritwalker (Concept by 1Fairy/Scoubidous, revamp by me.)

 

Leilani, my Frilled Parrotbeak. Adopted from Cerebellum.

 

Seagrass, the chibi Seashocker, adopted from Nova.

 

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He's my current satirical icon.

I just wanted to draw something derpy, so I went at it with just my mouse and phoroshop's brush. Thus, Shivless came to be. He is Shivless because my friend told me he looked like he would shiv us in our sleep. Must be something about the vacant eyes.

 

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Alright thank you for the suggestions! ^ ^ I pretty much like Haurya  that can kind of fits her name as well! ^ ^

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I think she looks fine just the way she's now ! ^^

just one thing... where the heck are those wings coming from? They're so lowwwwwwww

Like if you're asking for opinions, mine is that you put them at least a bit higher up :D

 

And if you're worried about her becoming Mary Sue, remember that it's mainly the powers and nature of the character, not just looks ;)

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Oh, you made it this far? Well, I'm not a big fan of long siggys... but mine is gonna be one too :D

 

Here's what shows I'm watching (feel free to freak out about 'em with me anytime)

The adventures of Puss in Boots - Race to the Edge - Trollhunters (I 100 per cent recommend this one)

Star vs. the forces of evil - A series of unfortunate events - Gravity falls

as you might notice I watch mainly netflix 

 

(also overwatch is a thing that I like)

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Thanks! About her wings, I lowered her wings a little bit down since based on the anime character that I like her designwas Jibril from No Game No Lifem, and her wings does not come out from her butt^ ^'. - scratches head - (Some artist likes to put wings on many ways ) 

 

Here is what Jibril looks like!

 

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I see ^^ They just seem a bit too low in my opinion .. ^^

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I love it so much ^^ you did

I love it so much ^^ you did a wonderful job my friend ^^

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Cedrick

  Age: 52

  Relationship Status: Married to Sarah

  Personality: Strong, Brave, caring, wants what’s best for his family, also a hard worker.

  Other: Chief of the Sorethon clan. 

Main Dragon: Gale

   Species: Skrill

   Personality: The chief of the Sorethon dragons, so strict, but caring

 

Sarah

  Age: 50

  Relationship Status: Married to Cedrick

  Personality: Also known as “Mother Sorethon” Has all the best characteristics of a Mother. The Sorethon clan is very important to her.

Main Dragon: Venus

   Species: Gronckle

   Personality: Loving and caring

 

Ethera

Age: 23

  Relationship Status: Married to Shadow

  Personality: Very competitive, a great warrior, uses brawn before brain in battle, but uses great battle tactics.

  Other: Spends most of the time in the training arena. Got expelled from school for murder.

Main Dragon: Comet

   Species: Monstrous Nightmare

   Personality: Stubborn, loves training.

 

 

Ashley

Age: 19

  Relationship Status: Widow - Tragically lost her love

  Personality: Athletic, loving, caring, stands up for her friends always. Takes the lead, but is polite and respectful to others

  Other: Adopted by the Sorethon’s after her parents died. At that time Ashley was best friends with Rashel, and thought of the Sorethon’s of her “second family"

Main Dragon: Megan

   Species: Deadly Nadder

   Personality: Loves speed flying and chicken eggs. Leader of Ashley’s dragons. Married to Sharpflame with 3 kids

 

    

Rashel (My Main Viking)

Age: 19

  Personality:  Loves and cares for everyone, very cheerful, loves art, a bit cautious, but loves exploring,

  Other: Job:  Crafts/Invents furniture and other housefly items

Main Dragon: Ultra Violet

   Species: Night Fury

   Personality: Loves to help, always at Rashel’s side. Not picky or stubborn, and has a great sense of humor and love

 

Viky

  Age: 12

  Personality: Loves to explore, draw, and hang out with friends.

Main Dragon: Mya

   Species: Deadly Nadder

   Personality: Loves to have fun, and pretty protective of anyone that encounters Viky. Of coarse, with the exception of her friends.

 

Isabella

  Age: 9

  Personality: Loves to map and create charts of the ocean. Can be a troublemaker at times.

  Other: Her parent’s were killed in a Dagur ambush, and was adopted by the Sorethons

Main Dragon: Anna

   Species: Thunderdrum

   Personality: Loves flying, never wants to touch the ground.

 

Samuel

Age: 36

  Relationship Status:  Married - Married to Kate

  Personality: Very stubborn and strict, expects everyone to put forth their best

  Other: Is next in line to rule over the Sorethon Clan

Main Dragon: Der & Rick 

   Species: Zippleback

   Personality: Stubborn but a hard worker if they put their minds together

 

 

Kate

  Age: 34

  Relationship Status: Married -  Married to Samuel

  Personality: After she lost one of her twins daughters, she dedicated her life to the practice of healing

  Other: Head Healer of Sorethon dragons and vikings 

Main Dragon: Ericka

   Species: Hobblegrunt

   Personality: Helps everyone and loves everyone

 

 

Kent

  Age: 14

  Relationship Status:  Currently dating a recently found, long lost best friend, Iris Kayline

  Personality: Sensitive, loves to sketch and spend time outside in the woods, doesn’t try in school, and is a bit lazy

  Other: Spends a lot of time with Iris at the Isle of Night

Main Dragon: Dalin

   Species: Deadly Nadder

   Personality: Lazy, but very alert and protective when it comes to caring for Kent

 

Maybel

  Age: 12

  Personality: Born for pranking. Takes part in the Trouble Makers Clan, makes a great team with her twin sister.

  Other: Found her thought to be dead, twin sister and her chagewing, they got together and saw how great of a team they are. But Maybelle wanted to stay away from Berk, and stay back with her Changewing pack. 

Main Dragon: Kora

   Species: Thunderdrum 

   Personality: Really quiet and agile for a thunderdrum. Really good at pulling away Maybel from the scene of action.

 

Maybelle

  Age: 12

  Personality: Was very sick at birth, and was stolen by a Changewing, leaving everyone to think she died at birth. She was found by her twin Maybel and together makes great pranks. Only a few people know she’s alive. 

  Other: Lives on a classified island with the Changewings that raised her, stays invisible in Berk, never being seen, but in the few cases she has, she looks just like her twin.

Main Dragon: Marissa

   Species: Changewing

   Personality: Very caring, knew what was wrong with baby Maybelle and took her and raised her as her own.

 

           

Maggie

  Age: 8

  Personality: Wants to be a grown up, tries her best to prove herself.

Main Dragon: Zac

   Species: Gronckle

   Personality: loves to play and explore with Maggie

 

Alice

  Age: 15

  Personality: Happy and outgoing, spends all her time exploring with her one and only adorable Nadder.

Main Dragon: Wyler

   Species: Deadly Nadder

   Personality: Extremely adorable behavior, loves and obsesses over shiny things, the only way to draw him away is with brown trout. 

Sage

  Age: 13

  Personality: Dark and violent. Loves spending time in Whispering Death Tunnels. Prefers to be alone.

  Other: Very good at training Whispering Deaths

Main Dragon: Viper

   Species: Whispering Death   Personality: Stays and protects Sage

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Thank you! ^ ^

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Wow, that's really good! I wish I could draw like that...

I love the color scheme too, very pastel. It suits her.

 

If you want suggestions, I would say raise the wings and shrink or remove the ponytail. If you like the position they're in, you could make the base of them near her shoulders and have them in a half-down position similar to or the same as the one they're in now. The ponytail is just a bit illogical too, and while I understand anime hair typically has no boundaries, it does look slightly strange. She'd look adorable in a pixie cut though, you might want to consider that!

 

So that's just my opinion. Feel free to do whatever you want, it's your OC!

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