I am Rosemary the Rider Chapter 1-2

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Chapter 1

Tag’n’Talk

 

As you run through the forest dashing after your friend, Viola. She runs around a tree, but you stay right on her trail. Finally, you catch up to her and tap her on the shoulder and you say “tag”. You immediately turn and run in the other direction. You stop abruptly and stare at the sky as you watch your brother, Hiccup, and his friends Astrid, Fishlegs, Ruffnut, Tuffnut, and Snotlout riding their dragons. You wish you could ride a dragon too. You were lost in thought when your friend tagged you “hey, soon to be sixteen-year-old.” Said Viola. “Aren’t the dragon’s amazing!” You say excitedly. “Back to the birthday, are you going to have a party or just spend it with your brother and dad?”  Viola asked. “Probably a family birthday or maybe I’ll hang out with Hiccup and his friends.” You say uncertainly. “Well back to tag. You are it!” You say. You run and she chases you. “It’s getting late I’d better get home.” Stated Voila sadly. “Oh, I should probably head home too.” You replied.  As you both walk off you wave goodbye to each other.

 

Chapter 2

Home

 

When you arrive home there is no one there. You figure that hiccup is out doing dragon stuff with his team and that your dad is doing chief duties. You decide to make your “famous” yak chops, so you get out the ingredients and start cooking. Your dad arrives home just as you finish cooking. “Mmmmm that smells good! What’s cooking?” He asks. Before you have time to answer a thud on the roof of the first floor tells you that hiccup is home.  Hiccup comes down the stairs and asks “what’s for dinner dad?” dad looks at me and I answer for him, “yak chops with just a pinch of garlic.”  “Sounds good, rosemary” Hiccup replies. You all sit down to the chops. “This is Delicious, rosemary” your dad says.  As you finish eating you gather the dishes. You go outside to clean them. Once you’re done you go back inside and put them away. After that you quietly go up the stairs and turn the corner. Toothless is awake and he walks over and nudges you. You pet his nose, say goodbye, and leave he growls his goodbye as you walk out the door and down the stairs. Then you made your way to your bedroom and slipped into bed. “Goodnight dad.” You call . “Good night rosemary.” dad replies. “Goodnight hiccup.” You call. “Night rosemary.” he replies. Then, thinking of dragons, you drift off to sleep.

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 My Oc is Rosemary. Her dragon is a Opal-colored dragon named (guess what!) Opal and a Night Fury named Shadow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
 
Thanks a MILLION to Arrowalker for a AW-MAZING Pic of Rosemary!
 

 

request  by Dragnolia-returns

 

Thanks to jada for making me these pic's of my Oc, Rosemary.

 

 

 

 

 

Wolf made by Wherewolfgirl

 

Vesupa adoptable named: OceanSwirl

Credit to Bravelly, Thanks sooooo much Bravelly

 
 
 
Thanks to Zikta for this amazing pic of my Razorwip Opal
 
 
 
 
 
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This is me and a few members of the wulf Pack!
 
 
 
If i ever get a Triple Stryke I am going to name it Patience! XD!
 
Shadow and my Oc, Rosemary, drawn by me
 
My little sister's Oc, Violet Unknown and her Sand Wraith Shimmer Shores, Drawn by me
 
My sand wraith, Desert Beauty (As a baby), Drawn by me
 
My sand Wraith Desert beauty, drawn by me
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I'd love to know what you think, being this is my first book I have ever written. post away!

 

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i do

I do i think it's really good. :D I'm writing some myself :D

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My Night Fury Luna ( Drawn by me )

 

 Me- Charlotte Haddock ( Drawn by me )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I do i think it's really good. :D I'm writing some myself :D

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Cool I'd love to read your

Cool I'd love to read your story!

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Ok, interesting story so far! I will gladly continue reading! However I for find a few mistakes. Please don't take this the wrong way.

Don't forget to capitalize names.

The way you make it so that the reader is Rosemary is very interesting! You can really get inside the character's mind! However it can be very hard to write. I personally write as though the main character is talking the story.

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My OCs

 

Name:Shamara

 

Age:17

 

Backstory: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/how-i-trained-my-dragon-1

 

Appearance: working on it!!!

 

Weapon:A gronkle iron staff that the ends light on fire. It can also split in half the long way to reveal a leather sheet that works like her own version of Hiccup's flight suit.

 

Personality: when Shamara sees something she has to know how it works. This makes her good at quite a few things because she knows about them.

 

Skills:fighting,singing,and flying with Carmen

 

Dragon:Carmen

 

Species:deathsong

 

Unique traits: just as chicken makes Stormfly go faster eel makes Carmen go faster. It brings her speed from 17 to 19 and natural training makes it 20

 

Pet Dragon

 

Name: Coal

 

Species: terrible terror

 

Colors: black with a grey underbelly and highlights

 

Other: Shamara has a thin scar across her left eye. She made matching necklaces in the shape of a music note for her and Carmen. She is the leader of a team of Dragon Riders called The OS Dragon Riders.

 

Name: Vanessa

 

Age:18

 

Backstory: no one can know. When Vanessa was five years old her village was attacked by dragons. Her father sent her and her mother into the woods to hide while he defended the village. On their way to the safe house they had built they were attacked by a monstrous nightmare. Sadly Vanessa's mother died protecting her. Ever since then her father has hated dragons. Even worse he blamed her for what happened. He disowned her. While living on the streets she befriended a singetail and named it compass. This made matters worse between her and her father. Now he not only banished her from his life he also seeks to kill her. Vanessa is on the run when she comes across an ally who is also her father's worst enemy. But they cannot know her secret. Everything she had built up would be lost if they knew the truth. She would be cast out if they knew who her father really was. 

 

Haha! Now you must live with this until I write it!!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

 

Appearance: black hair, Brown eyes

 

Weapon:sword from her father

 

Personality:keeps to herself and in constant mental pain 

 

Skills:sword play, herbal medicine and cooking

 

Dragon:Compass

 

Species:Singetail

 

Unique traits: he always knows which way is north which is why he is called Compass

 

Name:Addi

 

Age:15

 

Backstory:Addi lives on berk a year after httyd 2. Life is good for Addi and her friends Shey, Robin and best friend Gustav but when they are enrolled in Dragon training their lives are turned upside down. 

When a dangerous enemy approaches berk and the dragon riders call on them for help they must learn the true meaning of friendship and see how far they will go for each other.

 

Ha! Again!

 

Appearance: strawberry blond hair cut to shoulders, bright green eyes

 

Weapon: Shield like Hiccup's

 

Dragon:Silver

 

Species:Shockjaw

 

Colors:Grayish turquoise with silver fins.

 

And lastly...

 

Name:Naomi

 

Age:17

 

Backstory:the dragons have left many years ago and many don't believe anymore. But one girl does. When the dragons return led by an angry Toothless Naomi befriends him. Together they begin the search for Hiccup. Will they find him? (Not all the kinks worked out in this story.)

 

Appearance:Brown hair, eyes that appear to be changing color

 

Weapon:none

 

Skills: understanding dragons, sword play

 

Dragon: ha! You may not know yet!!!!!!!!

 

And now, meet my newest OC!

 

Name:Alyssa (Aly)

 

Age:20

 

Backstory: Aly's parents died when she was a baby leaving her  in her uncle's care. One  day, when she was five, her uncle took her in a fishing expedition but the boat was attacked by wild dragons. Her uncle sent  her off in a small rowboat and Aly was never sure what  happened to her uncle. After many  days  floating around(the oars had been lost to the dragons) she fell asleep. When she awoke she found  herself surrounded by dragons and a young woman. She learned that  the woman's name was Valka and she lived with and trained dragons.

Valka nursed Aly back to health and after  that the thought of leaving never entered her mind. She grew up among dragons and even bonded with a yellow  and green triple stryke which she  named Hunter. 

At the time of httyd 2 Aly was on a trip to find  more dragons wounded by Drago Bludvist and take them to the sanctuary.

 

Appearance: she dresses like Valka and had similar hair.

 

Weapon: stick thing like Valka's.

 

Skills: Training dragons and thankfully, cooking.

 

Dragon:Hunter (triple stryke)< Other:Aly speaks dragonese since she grew up with dragons. /p>

 

 

                     Dragons I hope to get

 

Name: Echo

 

appearance: (both done by The talented VexyLu. Thanks!)

 

 

Here is baby Echo by nightfuryatom4! TSYM! 

 

 

And here is my first Dragon, Skyfire! (Also by VexyLu;-)

 

Okay! I plan to do a lot more with this but thank you for reading my OCs!!!! So long dragon riders!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

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Thanks I will try to fix

Thanks I will try to fix those and other errors. Thanks for the feedback!

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Thanks I will try to fix

Thanks I will try to fix those and other errors. Thanks for the feedback!

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