FanFiction Tips?

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I have been in the process of writing a new fanfiction related to my viking on School of Dragons. It follows her adventures at the school. The first chapter is when she gets enrolled at the school. It follow the early storyline (when Hiccup was still young. Yeah, I've had my account for more than a few years.). That's also when she's introduced to her first dragon: a Deadly Nadder called Crystaline.

 

But why am I here? Where is the chapter. Well, it is still in the process. I just wanted some input from you writers to help me lengthen the chapter. I think I need more details and better wording to help the story flow, and be less choppy. So go ahead and leave some of your tips below.

 

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the soul of a dragon."

 

-Valka to Hiccup


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My Dragons

Crystaline-----------------Deadly Nadder

Pinky-------------------Whispering Death

Lemon-----------------Whispering Death

Salmon-----------------------Sand Wraith

Shadow------------------------Flightmare

Asmund-------------------------------Skrill

Emerald---------------------Hobblegrunt

Swift------------------------Speed Stinger

Windbeam------------------Thunderdrum

ZipZap---------------Hideous Zippleback

Bloof-----------------------------Buffalord

Skully------------------------Sweet Death

Flurry----------------------------Groncicle

Enigma--------Night Fury (Sand Wraith)

Sarafina-----------------Fireworm Queen

Darkstryder-------Monstrous Nightmare

Orchid--------------------------Raincutter

Slasher----------------------------Singetail

Garth-------------------------Triple Stryke

Boreas------------------------Snow Wraith


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