The Dark Secret

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 Hey, Nessie here, I just started a story about Kent's dark secret! Here it is, and I hope you like it!

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      “I’m fine,” Kent said to Dalin as the rain fell upon him.

       Dalin snorted to say he wasn’t convinced.

       Kent sighed, “I will be fine…eventually.” I’m never going back to Berk again.

 

      “We need to land somewhere!” Kent shouted through the rain.

       Dalin focused his vision along the horizon. He saw a small island, and grunted to get Kent’s attention.

      “I can’t see a thing, go there and we will have to wait out the storm.” He held onto Dalin tighter. His dragon roared and dove toward the small dark island.

Kent had no idea that this small island would change his life forever.

 

        They walked along the rocky shore looking for shelter,  all they could find was a slight overhang against the cliff. Kent sat down with his dragon next to him.

 

        The viking got pushed awake. “Ow! What was that for?” Dalin made a low growl.  Once his eyes focused, he noticed that Dalin was alert with his spines out.

     “What is it boy?” Kent squinted at the figure coming out of the darkness. “It can’t be…”

      As the figure came closer and clearer into view, and Kent heart and mind were racing. He wanted to say that it was impossible, but the proof was slowly crawling towards him. It was a Night Fury.

 

 

Chapter One – The Fight

           Kent Sorethon sighed deeply and brushed the hair out of his face. I’m definitely not going today! I don’t care about the making of leather!  Kent  did his Nadder call to Dalin. Just after, he saw his best friend, a strong Deadly Nadder, black and neon green.  He landed firmly right next to Kent.

           “Good morning!” Kent greeted his dragon with a scratch under his chin. “You ready to go explore Dalin?”

            Dalin gave Kent a look that said you’re missing school… again?

           “Don’t give me that look! We are learning about the functions of leather!” Kent exclaimed. He mounted of Dalin and commanded, “To the woods!”

             Kent enjoyed the ride to the woods, he loved the feeling wind through his black hair. He gazed around the woods, and said, “to our normal spot, ok?”

            Dalin snorted to reply to his owner.

            Kent spent the next 3 hours observing and sketching in his notebook while Dalin dozed off next to him. He was in the middle of drawing a terrible terror when he saw a Zippleback’s shadow… with a rider.

            “Uh oh.”

            The sleeping Nadder heard this dragon coming and instantly was alert, he made a dragon groan to his viking.

            The green Zippleback landed solidly on the ground in front of them.

            “Kent!”

            “Hey… dad. What are you doing here?”

            “Looking for you! You skipped your classes again?!” Samuel Sorethon ranted, “You can’t just skip classes Kent! You need to learn! Your grades are horrible! Your mother and I are very disappointed in you!”

            “School isn’t fun dad! I can’t just be there! I need to be out here exploring! That’s what I do best!” Kent argued.

            Samuel grabbed his notebook out of Kent’s hands. “All you do is sit out here…“ he opened the notebook and saw the drawings,  “and doodle!” He looked disgusted at his son, “Do you even want to be successful?!”

            Kent tried to explain, “Yes! Yes I do! I just - ”

Samuel interrupted him, “- from what you doing, you don’t. You’re… hopeless!”

            Kent glanced at his dragon then at the ground. “Is that…really how you see me?”

            “From what I know, yes! You are useless and stupid!”

            “Well, then why don’t I just leave if I’m no use to you! Then you won’t have to care!” Kent yelled at his Father.

            “At least all our kids would be successful now!”

            “Fine!” Kent shouted while holding back tears, “I’ll just leave! There’s no point being here anyways!” He mounted his dragon and took off into the sky.

 

Chapter 2 - The Discovery

   “I’m fine,” Kent said to Dalin as the rain fell upon him.

   Dalin snorted to say he wasn’t convinced.

   Kent sighed, “I will be fine…eventually.” I’m never going back to Berk again.

    “Just keep going,” Kent said to his dragon. Dalin snorted in reply.

    They flew for hours through dark thick clouds, and rain started to sprinkle. After three minutes of rain, Dalin growled to get his owner’s attention.

    “What is it boy?” Kent questioned.

    Dalin growled again in a slightly lighter tone.

   “Then what should we do Dalin? There’s no land anywhere!” Every second that passed, the rain got thicker and thicker. Kent was soaking wet, and he was blinded for the water poring upon him.

    “We need to land somewhere!” Kent shouted through the rain.

     Dalin focused his vision along the horizon. He saw a small island, and grunted to get Kent’s attention.

   “I can’t see a thing, go there and we will have to wait out the storm.” He held onto Dalin tighter. His dragon roared and dove toward the small dark island.

    Kent had no idea that this small island would change his life forever.     

   They walked along the rocky shore looking for shelter, all they could find was a slight overhang against the cliff. Kent sat down with his dragon next to him.

     The viking got pushed awake. “Ow! What was that for?” Dalin made a low growl.  Once his eyes focused, he noticed that Dalin was alert with his spines out.

     “What is it boy?” Kent squinted at the figure coming out of the darkness. “It can’t be…”

       As the figure came closer and clearer into view, and Kent heart and mind were racing. He wanted to say that it was impossible, but the proof was slowly crawling towards him. It was a Night Fury.

   Kent gasped. “Night fury….”

   The dark dragon did a low angry growl. Kent had always imagined that all Night Fury’s were all black. He was definitely wrong. This Night Fury had neon green markings on him, sort of the color of Dalin, his Nadder.

    Dalin stepped in front of Kent and let out a deep warning growl.

   “No!” Kent said to quiet his dragon, “maybe he will let us be friends.”

    The angry dragon stared into Kent’s eyes and growled loudly.

 

This next part of the story is told by a different character: Iris Kayline

 

Chapter 3 -Izlandai

 

      Iris Kayline was only seven years old when her family was banished from Berk. She, her father, Tartarus, and her mother, Tala, took as much as they could when they sailed off to find their new home.  They eventually came across an ice-covered island, which is now called Izlandai. They built a new home and started a new life.

 

      No one knows if it was the ice that froze their hearts and made Berk as their enemy or the hatred for the chief who banned them. Iris, being so young, didn’t fully understand why they left, but she did know they were never going back.

 

      As Iris reached her 10th birthday, she became of age to have her own dragon, shortly after she left the house eagerly and went off on a journey to find her own dragon. But the little girl, would never realize what she would find would change her life forever.

 

      “Good bye father,” Iris said while hugging Tartarus. She next went to Tala, “Goodbye mother.”

 

      Tala had tears in her eyes and questioned, “You have everything, right?” The worried mother took her daughter’s bag and rummaged through it.  “Food, water, an extra blanket, the book, a map, and – “

 

      “ – Yes, yes and all yes’s” Iris cut her off and looked her mother in the eyes, “I will be fine mother, don’t worry!” She glanced to her dad and back, “I’ll miss you!” She turned to the door and rushed out.

 

      “Be safe…” Tala said quietly.

 

      “She will be fine,” Tartarus said as he wrapped his arms around his wife. “She is a smart girl, she can do it. He stared out at the tracks his young girl had left with an assured look.

 

      On Izlandai, dragons were scarce due to the below freezing weather.  She searched around the frozen island for for 3 days. Iris was losing hope, and was running out of food. She saw many dragons in many caves, but none of the dragons made a bond with her.

 

      As she came to another cliff, Iris sighed. “There are no dragons here for me.” With a discouraged heart, she sat down on what she rested against the nearest rock.  A tear rolled down her cheek, “I’m so sorry… I have failed.”

 

      Suddenly and Iris was wiping her tears, something pushed her right off the rock and into the snow.

 

      Iris and turned to see what caused her to fall, and her eyes went wide to see this beautiful white dragon stand and shook all the ice off herself. The dragon yawned and then looked at the young girl curiously. She stared back, and mouthed out, “Woahh.”

 

      The icy dragon circled the child that laid in the snow with awe and hidden fear. Iris voice cracked when she said, “Hi.” The beautiful dragon stopped and sniffed the girl. My name is Iris Kayline, uhh..” she lifted her arm when the dragon nudged her side. Iris took a deep breath and tried to pet the dragon, when she touched her cold scales she smiled, “You are….amazing… I’ve never seen any dragon like you before.”

 

      The dragon gave her a prideful look.

 

      Iris reached in her handbag and pulled out her notebook and flipped through the pages. “Neither does the dragon book… Are you all alone?” she asked the dragon and the dragon snorted in reply.

 

      “Me too, uh, I mean, my family lives on this island, but other than that there isn’t anyone else.” She approached cautiously to move closer to the mysterious dragon. After she fully embraced the dragon she asked hopefully, “Can I take you home?”

 

      The white dragon roared into the sky then bowed and let Iris climb on her back.  

 

      “You don’t have to be alone anymore,” she said patting the dragon. She smiled as she thought, and now I don’t have to be lonely.

 

      The new pair took off and glided above the snow-covered mountains. She guided the dragon back to her hut and landed and jumped off happily to tell her parents.  

 

      She threw open the door and blurted out, “I found a dragon!” Iris took a breath, “I found a dragon!” Iris added after throwing herself in her parent’s arms, “I’m not sure what species she is though.”

 

      Her parents gave each other a nervous glance and went outside to see their daughter’s new friend.

 

      “I’m going to call her Nyssi.” Iris said proudly and hugged her dragon.

 

 

 

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  Relationship Status: Married to Sarah

  Personality: Strong, Brave, caring, wants what’s best for his family, also a hard worker.

  Other: Chief of the Sorethon clan. 

Main Dragon: Gale

   Species: Skrill

   Personality: The chief of the Sorethon dragons, so strict, but caring

 

Sarah

  Age: 50

  Relationship Status: Married to Cedrick

  Personality: Also known as “Mother Sorethon” Has all the best characteristics of a Mother. The Sorethon clan is very important to her.

Main Dragon: Venus

   Species: Gronckle

   Personality: Loving and caring

 

Ethera

Age: 23

  Relationship Status: Married to Shadow

  Personality: Very competitive, a great warrior, uses brawn before brain in battle, but uses great battle tactics.

  Other: Spends most of the time in the training arena. Got expelled from school for murder.

Main Dragon: Comet

   Species: Monstrous Nightmare

   Personality: Stubborn, loves training.

 

 

Ashley

Age: 19

  Relationship Status: Widow - Tragically lost her love

  Personality: Athletic, loving, caring, stands up for her friends always. Takes the lead, but is polite and respectful to others

  Other: Adopted by the Sorethon’s after her parents died. At that time Ashley was best friends with Rashel, and thought of the Sorethon’s of her “second family"

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   Species: Deadly Nadder

   Personality: Loves speed flying and chicken eggs. Leader of Ashley’s dragons. Married to Sharpflame with 3 kids

 

    

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Age: 19

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   Species: Night Fury

   Personality: Loves to help, always at Rashel’s side. Not picky or stubborn, and has a great sense of humor and love

 

Viky

  Age: 12

  Personality: Loves to explore, draw, and hang out with friends.

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   Species: Deadly Nadder

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  Age: 9

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  Other: Her parent’s were killed in a Dagur ambush, and was adopted by the Sorethons

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   Species: Thunderdrum

   Personality: Loves flying, never wants to touch the ground.

 

Samuel

Age: 36

  Relationship Status:  Married - Married to Kate

  Personality: Very stubborn and strict, expects everyone to put forth their best

  Other: Is next in line to rule over the Sorethon Clan

Main Dragon: Der & Rick 

   Species: Zippleback

   Personality: Stubborn but a hard worker if they put their minds together

 

 

Kate

  Age: 34

  Relationship Status: Married -  Married to Samuel

  Personality: After she lost one of her twins daughters, she dedicated her life to the practice of healing

  Other: Head Healer of Sorethon dragons and vikings 

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   Species: Hobblegrunt

   Personality: Helps everyone and loves everyone

 

 

Kent

  Age: 14

  Relationship Status:  Currently dating a recently found, long lost best friend, Iris Kayline

  Personality: Sensitive, loves to sketch and spend time outside in the woods, doesn’t try in school, and is a bit lazy

  Other: Spends a lot of time with Iris at the Isle of Night

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   Species: Deadly Nadder

   Personality: Lazy, but very alert and protective when it comes to caring for Kent

 

Maybel

  Age: 12

  Personality: Born for pranking. Takes part in the Trouble Makers Clan, makes a great team with her twin sister.

  Other: Found her thought to be dead, twin sister and her chagewing, they got together and saw how great of a team they are. But Maybelle wanted to stay away from Berk, and stay back with her Changewing pack. 

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   Species: Thunderdrum 

   Personality: Really quiet and agile for a thunderdrum. Really good at pulling away Maybel from the scene of action.

 

Maybelle

  Age: 12

  Personality: Was very sick at birth, and was stolen by a Changewing, leaving everyone to think she died at birth. She was found by her twin Maybel and together makes great pranks. Only a few people know she’s alive. 

  Other: Lives on a classified island with the Changewings that raised her, stays invisible in Berk, never being seen, but in the few cases she has, she looks just like her twin.

Main Dragon: Marissa

   Species: Changewing

   Personality: Very caring, knew what was wrong with baby Maybelle and took her and raised her as her own.

 

           

Maggie

  Age: 8

  Personality: Wants to be a grown up, tries her best to prove herself.

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   Species: Gronckle

   Personality: loves to play and explore with Maggie

 

Alice

  Age: 15

  Personality: Happy and outgoing, spends all her time exploring with her one and only adorable Nadder.

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   Species: Deadly Nadder

   Personality: Extremely adorable behavior, loves and obsesses over shiny things, the only way to draw him away is with brown trout. 

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  Age: 13

  Personality: Dark and violent. Loves spending time in Whispering Death Tunnels. Prefers to be alone.

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I like your start.  You have

I like your start.  You have my attention.  I think you should continue.

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The Mystery of Shadow Mountain

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Here are links to the chapters of my fan-fic, The Clue of the Missing Socks.

Chapters 1 and 2                         Chapter 3                                       Chapter 4

Chapter 5                                      Chapter 6                                        Chapter 7

Chapters 8 and 9                        Chapter 10                                     Chapter 11

Chapters 12 and 13                     Chapters 14, 15, and 16             Chapter 17

Chapter 18                                    Chapter 19                                      Chapter 20

Chapter 21 and 22                      Chapter 23                                     Chapter 24 and 25

Chapter 26 - There is a hidden surprise.  Can you find it?

Chapter 27                                   Chapter 28, Part 1                         Chapter 28, Part 2

Chapter 29                                   Chapter 30                                       Chapter 31

Chapter 32                                   Chapter 33                                       Chapter 34

Chapter 35                                   Chapter 36                                       Chapter 37

Chapter 38                                   Chapter 39                                       Chapter 40

Chapter 41                                   Chapter 42                                       Chapter 43

Chapter 44                                   Chapter 45, Parts 1 and 2

 

Here are links to my sequel fan-fic:

The Mysterious Frozen Fire

Chapter 1         Chapter 2         Chapter 3         Chapter 4         Chapter 5         Chapter 6

Chapter 7         Chapter 8         Chapter 9         Chapter 10       Chapter 11       Chapter 12

Chapter 13       Chapter 14       Chapter 15        Chapter 16       Chapter 17       Chapter 18  

Chapter 19       Chapter 20      Chapter 21        Chapter 22, Part 1       Chapter 22, Part 2 

Chapter 22, Part 3

Epilogue/Preview for my Third Story!

 

Here are links to my Tri-quel fan-fic:

Thoughts of Guilt

Chapters 1 and 2          Chapters 3 and 4          Chapter 5          Chapter 6          Chapter 7

Chapter 8          Chapter 9          Chapter 10          Chapter 11          Chapter 12, Part 1

Chapter 12, Part 2          Chapter 13         Chapter 14         Chapter 15         Chapter 16

Chapter 17 and 18         Chapter 19         Chapter 20         Chapter 21         Chapter 22

Chapter 23         Chapter 24         Chapter 25         Chapter 26         Chapter 27

Chapter 28         Chapter 29         Chapter 30         Chapter 31         Chapter 32

Chapter 33         Chapter 34         Chapter 35         Chapter 36 and 37

Chapter 38, Part 1         Chapter 39, Part 2         Chapter 40, Part 3         Chapter 41

Chapter 42, Parts 1 and 2         Chapter 43         Chapter 44

Chapter 45, Part 1         Chapter 45, Part 2

 

On the Edge of Mystery

Chapter 1          Chapter 2         Chapter 3        Chapters 4 & 5    Chapter 6, Parts 1 and 2   

Chapter 7          Chapter 8         Chapter 9            Chapter 10       Chapter 11        Chapter 12

Chapter 13        Chapter 14       Chapter 15          Chapter 16        Chapter 17       Chapter 18

Chapter 19        Chapter 20       Chapter 21          Chapter 22       Chapter 23      Chapter 24

Chapter 25        Chapter 26       Chapter 27         Chapter 28        Chapter 29 Parts 1 and 2 

Chapter 30       Chapter 31       Chapter 32 and 33                         Chapter 34 Parts 1 and 2 

Chapter 35 Part 1         Chapter 35 Part 2        Chapter 35 Part 3        Chapter 36

 

The Secret Symbol

Chapter 1    Chapter 2    Chapter 3    Chapter 4    Chapter 5

Chapter 6    Chapter 7     Chapter 8    Chapter 9    Chapter 10

Chapter 11    Chapter 12    Chapter 13    Chapter 14    Chapter 15

Chapter 16    Chapter 17    Chapter 18    Chapter 19    Chapter 20

Chapter 21   Chapter 22   Chapter 23   Chapter 24 and 25

Chapter 26    Chapter 27    Chapter 28    Chapter 29 and 30

Chapter 31    Chapter 32    Chapter 33    Chapter 34    Chapter 35

Chapter 36    Chapter 37    Chapter 38    Chapter 39

Chapter 40 and 41    Chapter 42    Chapter 43, 44, 45, and 46

 

The Legend of Shadow Mountain

Chapter 1    Chapter 2    Chapter 3    Chapter 4    Chapter 5

Chapter 6    Chapter 7    Chapter 8    Chapter 9    Chapter 10

Chapter 11    Chapter 12    Chapter 13    Chapter 14    Chapter 15

Chapter 16   Chapter 17    Chapter 18    Chapter 19    Chapter 20

Chapter 21    Chapter 22    Chapter 23    Chapter 24    Chapter 25

Chapter 26    Chapter 27    Chapter 28    Chapter 29    Chapter 30

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Totally

I think you totally should continue writing! Your story is great! Keep writing, I like it when people write a good story! d:

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thanks! (:

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Can't wait for more (:

Can't wait for more (:

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Kent's Dark secret. Great

Kent's Dark secret. Great title =) 

All I have to say about your story is that it caught my attention. =)

So.. a Night Fury, is that Toothless?

Continue. I'm following.

 

Put that aside, I'm surprised the lot of you still have time for this. Aren't you guys participating in the tournament? I bet it's a fierce competition by now. *sigh* Yeah, I'm one to talk. I sit this competition out due to the biggest problem that I'm still facing.. I sure miss those days..

 

Anyway, Yeah, continue on Nessie. I would love to see your character involvement with the Hero Dragons. =)

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thanks!You'll see! (;yeah,

thanks!

You'll see! (;

yeah, well, i was taking breaks from racing everyonce in while... and did that xD

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I DEMAND YOU TO CONTINUE!!!

I DEMAND YOU TO CONTINUE!!! XD

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*sarcastic tone* WELL!

*sarcastic tone* WELL!

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love it!

Jennifer Fire wrote:

I DEMAND YOU TO CONTINUE!!! XD

I LOVE IT XD

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love the story or the

love the story or the response?

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The story! ^^

The story! ^^

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You know, your a REALLY good

You know, your a REALLY good writer ^^

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thanks(:

Thanks(:

The countless hours spent in my creative writing class finally paid off! 

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Awesome! So I guess the first

Awesome! So I guess the first part (prologue) will come somewhere in the middle of the story right? Anyway, keep up the good work ^^ awaiting the next chapter (:

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thanks(:

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Awesome and amazing! love this story! keep it up ash :^)

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THANKS :D

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WOOT WOOT

 

I love it!!! you have to keep writing!

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really?! :D

 

I will! :D

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Chapter 2 is now availible!

Chapter 2 is now availible!

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Oooooh! You are definatly

Oooooh! You are definatly grabbing my attention! XD. keep up the good work!

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Thank you!!! :D and I'll try!

Thank you!!! :D and I'll try!

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wow

You are a really good writer and I really wanna read more.
 

Only one word can describe this story

 

 

WOW

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awww (:  thank you!

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Oooh, a night fury with neon

Oooh, a night fury with neon green markings?  How interesting!  (I wonder if it has a hard time blending in and staying hidden?)  What will happen next...?

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you'll see! its gunna be

you'll see! its gunna be AWESOME (x

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Can't wait for part 3...!! ^^

Can't wait for part 3...!! ^^

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Chapter 2 was really good.

Chapter 2 was really good. With all that desciption about that moment/tension when he witness another Night Fury. ...You really like to leave us with cliffhanger, don't you?

Waiting for chapter 3 =) 

Don't rush, though. Take as much time as you need.

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Very good Nessie.

Very good Nessie.  Neon green is an interesting, but a great color.  Of any neon color, I like green the best.  Keep going!

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Thank you!! :D

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hello everyoneI started

hello everyone

I started school back up again so its going to be harder to write

please bug me about this, i will keep forgetting, so if you want more.. tell me xD

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I want more! XD

I want more! XD

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I have a problem... What

I have a problem... What should I do in my free time? Continue the Sorethon houses on SIms 3 or focus on finishing chapter 3?

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Ch. 3 ^^

Ch. 3 ^^

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Chapter 3!! Well that's just

Chapter 3!! Well that's just my opinion. You can do anything you want!

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Glorianna was just flying around brainstorming on her thunder drums new name. "Hmm....." said Glorianna,she pulls out a piece of paper and a sharpend pencil. You write what you think! Glorianna's thunder drum writes this on the paper: I want my name to be Nightweaver,and your brother,Kent, is over there. We are about to bump into him sooooo........ Glorianna grabs the paper. "Ok then Nightweaver,park us next to Kent,he is crying!" Nightweaver  pulls up next to Kent and Dalin. "Whats wrong Kenny?"said Glorianna.By the way Glorianna trained her dragon how to write and calls Kent Kenny sometimes. "Its dad Glory! He said I was useless and stupid!" Kent cries louder. "Dad's scared of me,I'm a worrior, remember?"Said Glorianna. "Oh yeah!" Kent stops crying. "Let's play a prank!" Nobody tells MY little brother he's stupid! "Thanks Glory!" The children explore till it is sunset. "Well,I am gonna get some dinner and get you some! I can already tell that you don't wanna come home! hahahahahaha! Well later!" "BYE GLORY!!" Kent yells as Glory flies away on Nightweaver.

 

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Chapter 3 Posted! I hope you enjoy it!

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Chapter 3 - Izlandai

This next part of the story is told by a different character: Iris Kayline

 

Chapter 3 -Izlandai

 

      Iris Kayline was only seven years old when her family was banished from Berk. She, her father, Tartarus, and her mother, Tala, took as much as they could when they sailed off to find their new home.  They eventually came across an ice-covered island, which is now called Izlandai. They built a new home and started a new life.

 

      No one knows if it was the ice that froze their hearts and made Berk as their enemy or the hatred for the chief who banned them. Iris, being so young, didn’t fully understand why they left, but she did know they were never going back.

 

      As Iris reached her 10th birthday, she became of age to have her own dragon, shortly after she left the house eagerly and went off on a journey to find her own dragon. But the little girl, would never realize what she would find would change her life forever.

 

      “Good bye father,” Iris said while hugging Tartarus. She next went to Tala, “Goodbye mother.”

 

      Tala had tears in her eyes and questioned, “You have everything, right?” The worried mother took her daughter’s bag and rummaged through it.  “Food, water, an extra blanket, the book, a map, and – “

 

      “ – Yes, yes and all yes’s” Iris cut her off and looked her mother in the eyes, “I will be fine mother, don’t worry!” She glanced to her dad and back, “I’ll miss you!” She turned to the door and rushed out.

 

      “Be safe…” Tala said quietly.

 

      “She will be fine,” Tartarus said as he wrapped his arms around his wife. “She is a smart girl, she can do it. He stared out at the tracks his young girl had left with an assured look.

 

      On Izlandai, dragons were scarce due to the below freezing weather.  She searched around the frozen island for for 3 days. Iris was losing hope, and was running out of food. She saw many dragons in many caves, but none of the dragons made a bond with her.

 

      As she came to another cliff, Iris sighed. “There are no dragons here for me.” With a discouraged heart, she sat down on what she rested against the nearest rock.  A tear rolled down her cheek, “I’m so sorry… I have failed.”

 

      Suddenly and Iris was wiping her tears, something pushed her right off the rock and into the snow.

 

      Iris and turned to see what caused her to fall, and her eyes went wide to see this beautiful white dragon stand and shook all the ice off herself. The dragon yawned and then looked at the young girl curiously. She stared back, and mouthed out, “Woahh.”

 

      The icy dragon circled the child that laid in the snow with awe and hidden fear. Iris voice cracked when she said, “Hi.” The beautiful dragon stopped and sniffed the girl. My name is Iris Kayline, uhh..” she lifted her arm when the dragon nudged her side. Iris took a deep breath and tried to pet the dragon, when she touched her cold scales she smiled, “You are….amazing… I’ve never seen any dragon like you before.”

 

      The dragon gave her a prideful look.

 

      Iris reached in her handbag and pulled out her notebook and flipped through the pages. “Neither does the dragon book… Are you all alone?” she asked the dragon and the dragon snorted in reply.

 

      “Me too, uh, I mean, my family lives on this island, but other than that there isn’t anyone else.” She approached cautiously to move closer to the mysterious dragon. After she fully embraced the dragon she asked hopefully, “Can I take you home?”

 

      The white dragon roared into the sky then bowed and let Iris climb on her back.  

 

      “You don’t have to be alone anymore,” she said patting the dragon. She smiled as she thought, and now I don’t have to be lonely.

 

      The new pair took off and glided above the snow-covered mountains. She guided the dragon back to her hut and landed and jumped off happily to tell her parents.  

 

      She threw open the door and blurted out, “I found a dragon!” Iris took a breath, “I found a dragon!” Iris added after throwing herself in her parent’s arms, “I’m not sure what species she is though.”

 

      Her parents gave each other a nervous glance and went outside to see their daughter’s new friend.

 

      “I’m going to call her Nyssi.” Iris said proudly and hugged her dragon.

 

 

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Related to "The Dark Secret"

 

 

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Iris Kayline in one of the many ice storms on Izlandai

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I really like you story Ness.

I really like you story Ness.  Keep going.

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Thanks... but idk....

Thanks... but idk....

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Related to "The Dark Secret"

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