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It took me 4 days to do this work...

And I finally got it done.

 

This is my main Channel art, I've chosen 30 of my own OCs: 28 are Uribian OCs, 1 HTTYD/Monsuno OC, and 1 Halo OC.

 

Again it took me 4 days to make this so I kinda worn out to make more art.

 

This is fairly large, I had to cram all these 30 OCs into the right spot- Sizes are random for instance, Kiziel (The turquoise dragon on the right) is supposed to be smaller then The Execution (The red dragon on the right). I wanted to get this done, but a little less perfect is perfect... For me.

 

OCs Featured:

Cats

-Tatus

-Tebone

-Tak

-Nyka

-Phoebe

-Mick

-Kru

-Ceterus

-Laurah

-Nate

-Chief Foadah

-Ivon

-Zippy

 

Dogs

-Kuba

-Vuru

-Kaado

-Bella

-T (wolf)

-Vector, Hector, and Nector (cerberus)

-Eilasa

 

Dragons

-Evie

-Kiziel

-Piku

-The Execution

-Cuba

-Hurricane (HTTYD)

 

Other

-Bubba (Elite: Halo)

-Jen (rabbit)

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Welcome to my Siggy 4.0

 

Table of Contents

Lincs

OCs

Franchise Designs to Book Dragons

Other Accounts

SoD

Bases

The Bottom

 

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 Art  Chat  Vikings  FAQs(Q&A) 

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OCs

               

 

 

Other

Jaguar  Oca  Lagar  Aslan  Durkaanthurnax  Vector  Alen  Ungolf  Rhiana  Ky  Adaia

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Franchise Designs to Book Dragons

  

Pictures contain Lincs

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Other Accounts 

       

Scratch   Steam   YouTube   Deviantart   Facebook

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SoD

         

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Bases

 

Cat Bases

[Part 1]

[Part 2]

 

Dragon Bases

Wave 1    Wave 2   Wave 3   Wave 4   Wave 5   Wave 6   Wave 7   Wave 8

 

Requestable Dragon Bases

Windwalker

 

Animals

Animal Bases + a Wooly Howl base

          

 

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You reached to this point of my signature. The bottom actually. Bubba isn't doing his job very well *whispers* he's a slacker.

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There are only 2 signs before our savior returns. First, the gospel will be translated in all languages and received to all world tribes to hear the word. The second sign is all of the nations will turn against Israel and plan to destroy the Jews once and for all. As the armies arrive, Jesus will emerge as pure and fight all the armies all against one. There begins the rapture to break down the old world, then form a new one.

Today the bible has been translated to 98% of all languages, and now Obama wishes to plan offenses against Israel.

Jesus is coming back this century

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Subject? Oh where art thy subject?

Looks amazing! Definitely worth the 4 days :)

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Heyo! And welcome to my siggy! 

Good luck ;)

 

First off, my drawings! 

I love to draw and do it for fun most of the time. 

 

 

 

  

 

 Here's some info on my OC 

 Name: Francine

(Frankie)

Apperence: long red hair with bright green eyes. She wear loose, winter clothing with a large, light blue hood. Her boots are covered in snow (since that was where She grew up) and have no memory of her family. 

Weapon: Two twin swords

dragons: 

titan gronckle: Nightel

Titan screaming death: Entity

Titan razor whip: Rainstorm

Titan deathsong: whiplash

Adult Groncicle: illuminum

Adult Singetail: Windsnap

Adult Eruptodon: Smoke Rock

Adult Amorwing: Amber Gravity

Titan Skrill: Bristle tail

Titan Stormcutter: Mystery 

Titan Typhoomerang: Winter 

 Titan Hobblegrunt: River Song

Adult Wooly Howl: Pilot

Adult Changewing: Ghost

Age: 17

Distinctive features: small Scar over mouth

Personality: Loyal, Brave, wary 

Weaknesses: Family and her Dragons

pm me if u wanna RP!

 

 

Anyways, so wanna get to know me? here's some fun facts! 

 

1. I'm a girl (obviously)

2. My favorite hobbies are listening to music and reading books

3. My birthday is June 1st

4. I have a 40 gallon salt water fish tank

5. I'm a Christian

6. My favorite band is Imagine Dragons (well and a lot others >~<)

7. Favorite movies are HTTYD, HTTYD 2, and if the hunger games, Supernatural, Merlin and many others

8. I love Cats!

9. I'm a rower (not  canoeing -_-)

10. I like food :3

And finally, 11. Nope, I don't support LGBTQ, but I don't hate the person, I hate the thing that they're doing 

 

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Lots of OCs

The background is a bit to dark,but other than that it looks great.

Question: What exactly is a "Uribian OC" ?

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                                               Welcome to my signature!       

                                                          Hi, I'm Jade queen.

My dragons:

Screech the Deadly Nadder (adult) female.

Snapper the Whispering Death (adult) male.

Tremble the Whispering Death (adult) male.

Terrorfrill the Screaming Death (adult) male.

Razorrin the Razorwhip (adult) female.

Laluby the Death Song (adult) female.

Bolder the Gronckle (adult) male.

Zig and Zag the Zippleback (adult) male(males?)

Iceberg the Groncicle (adult) male.

Sheld the Armorwing (adult) male.

(Originally I was trying to name him "Shield" but I forgot the "i")

Tideline the Sand Wraith (adult) male.

Scorching Fang the Singetail (adult) male.

Rocky the Eruptadon (adult) male

Shimmer Sting the Speed Stinger (adult) female

Pyroite the Monstrous Nightmare (adult) male. (His name is a combination of "Pyro" meaning fire and "Pirite" also know as Fools Gold) 

Skrilla the Skrill (adult) female

 

The Doubles: One day I logged on to SOD and most of my dragons had glitched out of their stables. I then got three of the notices that you get when you earn/train a dragon in one of the expansions,they said I had gotten a Groncicle,a Deathsong and an Armorwing. I thought they were my original Deathsong,Groncicle and Armorwing that I had been re-given and so I named them the same names as my originals. I was upset because the original three dragons had disappeared and the new ones were not the same. My original Armorwing,Deathsong and Groncicle were still displayed in my dragon list,but I could not make them active. I eventually figured out how to make the original three active through stable quests and then I placed each of them in a stable and everything was back to normal... except for the three extra dragons that I had gotten. 

Doubles: 

Iceberg the Groncicle adult male 

Sheld the Armorwing adult male 

Laluby the Deathsong adult female (The only Double I like. I call her Limelight)

                                                                         

Eggs: 2 Gronckle, 1 Rumble Horn, 1 Groncicle, 1 Deadly Nadder, 1 Shockjaw, 1 Hobblegrunt/Threadtail, 1 Smothering Smokebreath, 1 Scaldron, 1 Mudraker. 

 

Clan:

My clan is called The Screech Dragons. I named it after my first dragon Screech the Deadly Nadder. 

                                                            We care for dragons 

                                                            We respect dragons

                                                              We love dragons!

                                                      We are THE SCREECH DRAGONS 

 

In-game:

My account is called Jade queen. 

Appearance: Green hair, green eyes. Wears a snow wraith hood,a light brown shirt and a brown fur skirt,tall white boots as well as thermal wrist warmers and thermal shoulder pads. Wears a feline grace mask (I was really going for a cat look). Occasionally I change her outfit around,but this is what she wears most of the time. 

Friend code: Pm me for it

I hardly ever really play the game anymore,mostly I just hang out on the forum. 

 

                                                                          ~Adoptables~

Somethin' or Other the Chiropan. Made by the talented NightmareRebuff!

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Bubba just scuffed at me. Does that mean he wants a subject?

An Uribian OC is my own OC from a novel series I made.