Art Project ( Need Validation)

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   I made a drawing I really love- I put tons of detail into it but I need Validation and constructive criticism.

    

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        In Loving Memory of Daisy The Best Dog and Friend Anyone could ask for, My best friend is gone... 2006- 2019

 

                              Welcome to my Signature!

                                 My favorite dragon is Hypnos (Ruffrunner)! I love him very much!

                                                                                              A Secret Santa Gift Made By Silver Phantom! 8D 

                Hello! Here is a quick way to find some of my latest art! :D Dreadfall Dragon Drawings                                  Snoggletog Fury Art   Lady's Fury/Viking Art- (Art Thread?)

                                       

                                                    

                    My siggy guardian Cyclone doesn't take kindly to anyone messing with my siggy. >:D

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                                                      buddies on forums and in SoD

        Ella, Tilly, Hookless, Flitt, Sohki, DreamingSong, Anic, The Bohemian Critic, Janovia, Madoka Miyazono, Stellabertgrimborn, Warmetalgarurumon, Meeeky, twoface765 (Abyss), LissaFish, JediMasterFury, Silver Phantom, Speedyleaf, Marcella-Chan and many more peoples that I am proud to call my friends!

                             WARNING: If I see anyone being rude or intending to hurt my friends, I will not be nice about it. You dare to speak to or of my friends in a bad way, I would watch your back... I will not tolerate that behavior...  Don't mess with me or my friends or I will send Helios after ya. He's not very friendly when you mess with me or those I care about.

 

      You can call me Lady fighter, Lady, or fighter. My name is based off the medieval times when female knights were called "Lady". The fighter part of my name comes from all the times I've been knocked down from fighting my demons or things that hold me back... In the end I get back up and I fight back. I'm a fighter. I'm the Lady fighter~                       

                                                                                                                                                                      

                                                    By the ever amazing, Sohki! <3                   

                                                   

                                            Friend Code: PM me for my friend code.

 

                          My main dragons right now are,Helios (Pouncer, Night Light), Hypnos (Ruffrunner, Night Light), Nyx (Dart, Night Light),  Moondust (Light Fury), Midnight (Night Fury), Deadly Shadow ( Zippleback), Demons (Prickleboggle), Fang Blazer (Monstrous Nightmare), Hurricane (Titan Deadly Nadder), Sphera (Whispering Death), Titan (Gronckle Baby), MadamMuglug (Gronckle), Warrior (Scauldron), Bonekeeper/BoneScream (Boneknapper), Storm (Thunderdrum),  Haru ( Woolly Howl ), Saphira (Deadly Nadder), and Phoenix (Monstrous Nightmare)

                                                 

                                                   

 

                                     I am the proud Leader of The Furious Alpha Furies                                                                                                                                       The Light Fury in this banner was made by NyctToma 

                                                                                                                              

                                                        

                                                           

                                            All made by The AMAZING EmeraldHuntress65!                

 

                                                     My favorite class is: Strike!!!

                                                   

                                                         Amazing art of Helios (Pouncer)! :D  

                                                                             

                                                                                       

                                             Helios banner made by DragonRider's Fury! :D

                                          

                                                  Helios and I Made by Tosi Lohi! Also my profile picture!

 

 

 

 

 

     Helios made by TigerLi1y!

 

  Helios made my Maz!

  Helios again by Maz! 

 

                        

         

                     Amazing Banners of Nyx and Hypnos by DragonRider'sFury!!! :DDD 

                                                  

                Amazing drawings of Nyx and Hypnos the Night Lights. :3

     

 This amazing edit of me and Nyx was done by Equestwestherider! Also my profile picture!

                                                           

                                        By Dylieh!!! :D :3 

     

                     A drawing of Hypnos trying to catch me as I fall was made by Dylieh! Thanks Dylieh!

     

     

                                                    By Izzydrawsdragons. :D   

                                                              

                                                                  By Frugal. :D

    

                  By Icee Glacier. :P         

                                                                                                                           By Speedyleaf. :D

                                                                                                             

                             

                                               

 

    By AndreaEaston                                                                                                                                                                  By AndreaEaston

                                                  

 

                                                                                                            By Anic101

            

                                                By Frugal. :D

    

      By Frugal :P

  

    By Madoka Miyanzono :3

  By Madoka Miyanzono :D

   

         By EndlessNight :)

    

        By Endless Night! :D

    

         By the ZestyDragonWing

    

                       By Silver Phantom :D

      

   By VicZarSky :P

  

   By ZestyDragonWing                                                              By ZestyDragonWing

                     

                                                  Potato Nyx by Kasane lover

   

         Potato Hypnos by Kasane lover

                                                    

                                     

                               Cyclone The Windwalker by Sohki the amazing Windwalker Queen. xD   

                                          

 

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                                                                                           BackDrop  By the awesome Flitt!!!      

                                                       

                                                  FireStorm done by the Amazing Andrea!

                              

                          

                              FangBlazer by the talented Peregrinecella

 

 

                              

                                              FangBlazer by the awesome Icee Glacier!

 

                                          

                                               FireStorm by the talented Peregrinecella

                                             

                                                     MugLug done by the awesome ZestyDragonWing!

                                                

                                                              Deadly Shadow done by the AWESOME Icee Glacier!

 

                                                          

                                                                                     Phantom by Speedyleaf

                                                                    

                                                            Saphira done by the amazing Izzydrawsdragons

                                                   

 

 

 

 

                                                                 

                                                       

           

 
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That's brilliant!!! I can't find anything to criticise

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Some of my favourite books: Eragon, Talon saga, The Last Dragon Chronicles, The Erth Dragons, any Terry Pratchett book (Good Omens!), any Diana Wynne Jones book, Lionboy, Halo, and many more.

Favourite colours: sunset orange and dark green.

Favourite bands/singers: Coldplay, 2CELLOS, Queen, Mumford and Sons, P!nk, random songs...

Favourite Dragons: Flightmares, Deathgrippers, Titan Woolly Howls, Hobgobblers, Stormcutters, Furies, Skrillknappers.

Hobbies: writing, drawing, listening to music, wood carving, daydreaming, procrastinating.

The Grimogrunt, Grapplemora and Grimogrounder by Chame! TY!

 

Discover the Dragonbloods in the links below...

I Am Dragonblood: Fury's Friend {Book One}

I Am Dragonblood: Alpha and Chief {Book Two}

I Am Dragonblood: Secret Uncovered {Book Three}

I Am Dragonblood: The Grim Beast {Book Four}

A Dragonblood's Gift

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Thank you, everyone, who has made art for me! The darn forums got rid of it here, in my siggy, in one fell swoop. I have it saved and it is BRILLIANT.

Dewi, by belubel! Ty!                              Xenon, by Frugal. Ty!!            

Pearl and Twitch, and Pyxis and Thumper, by Moonfyre! Tysm!

Edit of the General, by Ninja. Ty!                            Solly, by Neo! Tysm!     

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Puzzle the Marshrunner, by Speedyleaf! Tysm!           Pedasgell, by VicZarSky! Ty!         

The Goremare, Quamarang, Zippledeath and Woollyder by Chamieshida! Ty!

       Nightreaper, by Derpy. Ty!!                       Ryx in human form by Frugal! Tysm!

      Ortowdoch, by Frugal. Tysm!                      Eleven, adopted from Chamieshida! Ty!

Ryx! By Silver Phantom. Tysm!          My yet to be named Ikran-Fury! By Toothless0602. Tysm!

Grown up Wholight, edit done by Era! Ty!

     

Wholight, edited by Inky! Tysm!!

Paradox the paradox causing Terrible Terror! Created by Senate! Ty!

Ængel, my hyman OC, drawn brilliantly by Tosi! Tysm!!     Dr. Lupin! My brilliant secret santa gift from Maz. tysm!

Uhhh, what have you done, Paradox?! Done by Era! Ty!!

 

 

I take art commissions and art trades! 

I can do digital and traditional drawings. Dragons from HTTYD, Dragonvale and Flight Rising are all good, and so are hybrids. Be warned though, I will not draw boulder class, nadders, scuttleclaws, deathgrippes or groncicles. I can't get their heads right. BUT, I can always have a go at them in an art trade if you want to practice something you're not too good at yet (but you will be! You will always be amazing! :D)

I CAN have a go at drawing humans, even though I'm not particularly good.

Examples can be found on my DeviantArt page.


PM me if you would like art, or I can be found on Discord at Flitt Locke#7968

I may be slow due to rl stuff, but I WILL get it done. If you want to know where you are on the list, then you can find a request list here.



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  Thank you Flitt! I am so proud with how this piece turned out! :D

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Spooptastic!

Absolutely adorable!!

It's such a cute artstyle, I love it!

 

My only issue is the legs looking a tad robotic, but they come with practice. Legs are hard.

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I'm what you'd call... a lazy artist.

Click on the "artworks" title to head to my Discord server. Can't wait to see you there!

Spoons are the most deadly weapon, when left in the wrong hands. 

What's this? I've actually improved something? 

nah, can't be me.

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The left one was done in July. The right one was done in August.

 

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Oh, so, you've come down this far now, have you?

Well then, I'm amazed. My art usually turns people away...

or just makes them fearful of me, lol.

 

Anyways, some info about me!

Just in case y'all wanna know a little more about me.

 

Name: Calista (it's a pen name)

Nicknames: Cali, Madoka

Age: 18

Likes:

Reading books

Watching anime at silly hours of the morning

Sketching the same three characters over and over and over again.

Playing games

Jigsaw puzzles

Chatting with y'all

 

Dislikes:

Pushy people

THose who demand

Being tired

Sitting around for too long on one project

Boredom

Trashy music

 

Favourite OC: Lawrence the Woolly Wraith and Valerio would be my top 2. I can't really pick a fav between them.

 

Favourite Franchises:

HTTYD

Hollow Knight

The Legend of Zelda

Sonic the Hedgehog

Harry Potter

Throne of Glass

My Hero Academia

Demon Slayer

The Promised Neverland

Undertale/DeltaRune

Bendy and the Ink Machine

 

Fav Characters to Draw:

The many incarnations of Link

Hornet

The Hollow Knight

Sammy Lawrence

Assorted other anime characters (The list would be a long one if I were to list them all)

 

 

If any of y'all claim you know nothing about me, I'll direct you here. So if you're one of those people, I guess it's a "told ya so!"?

 

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  I plan on coloring it in sooner or later- Might take the robotic feel away. But at least I added joints for the legs. :') I am so proud of how this piece turned out that I can't help but smile! :D

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Amazing!

That looks awesome, I love the dream-like feeling of the background especially!

 

Pretty much the only thing I can find to criticize is that the wings look a bit disproportionate. It looks like the left wing is much longer than the right wing. Maybe you could shorten the tip of the left wing a little, making it end at the same height as the last hind leg?

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About me:

Name: Moonfyre. Moon's good too

Age: Old enough to know better, young enough to do it anyway

Gender: I'm a she

Where: Nine hours ahead of forum time

Feel free to pm me about anything!

 

I don't play SoD anymore, I'm mostly here for chatting and roleplaying.

 

 

Still very much a work in progress...we'll start with art

 

My Night Lights Lagune and Andromeda, by AndreaEaston

 

Adorable Secret Spring Santa gift, by Lady Fighter

 

Ruffrunner, by Frugal, for correctly guessing Australia

 

Jinna, my Magic Floof, and Moni, my Zodiac Floof, both by AndreaEaston

 

My mysterious Death Song baby, found in a box labeled "FEED WITH FISH" during Speedyleaf's Forum Egg Hunt

 

My floofy ball, pretending to be a dragon, by Iamthesenate

 

I like reading/watching:

How to Train Your Dragon (duh)
Game of Thrones/ASOIAF
The Inheritance Cycle
Watership Down (NOT the 2018 version)
The Dragon Prince
Dark Crystal: Age of Resistance
Lord of the Rings
The Hobbit
Lucifer
The Witcher
The Big Bang Theory

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  Okay- I can try that approach- I didn't notice. I am very tired yet I can't sleep. :')

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Summer melody have you seen... DON'T EAT THAT I NEED IT!

The style is adorable! The joints on the legs look a little odd to me, I would advise flipping the joint curve next time, or if you plan on adding shading to just use that to show where the joints are.

And I would also suggest not drawing so heavily before you completely decide how you want something to look. I can see where you erased the wings at. Doing light pencil work is also good if you want to know the lines in.

You did a very good job though, and I absolutely love those clouds in the background!

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Summer Melody and Spinner, by me.

Summer melody head sculpture. By me.

 night shade. Made by witcherforever.

 

 

 seafoam, my glow fury, thank you princess of the night furies

 

 wave song, my ocianic seasong, by adopto66

 

 

pond and lake, my glitched mudraker of hideous mud cutter.

 

 

 kaytla, my female albarator. By megaboltphoinix.

 

 zeke, my male albaraptor

 my female indominus rex, streak.

 

 

 

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Running around aimlessly, what about you?

Hey! I like it!

The ears seem a little bit large comared to the rest of the head, but besides that, it's really nice!

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Welcome to my Siggy! Watch out for flying tacos, scales, and fire.

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Heyo!

You can call me Drake, and I’ve played SoD from the times of old, when the only dragon newbies got was the hatchling they picked, no free 2nd adult dragon. I missed this game SO much when I went on Hiatus and I promise to try to not leave it behind again. (Well, at least not for a while anyways.)

 

I love to hang out at the school, andnow that i've discovered these forums, i'm here to have fun with my dragon pals.

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- Flight Rising: https://www1.flightrising.com/lair/483461

- Furry Paws: https://www.furry-paws.com/kennel/index/1512948

- Toyhou.se: https://toyhou.se/DrakoTheDragon/art

- Lioden: Symbah (#205491)

A cool (random) on-paper drawing: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/sites/default/files/9C372EDC-3319-452F-B17E-3FD35D2D0F81.jpeg

 

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This is Drakor the Fangback. He's the guardian of my siggy and welcomes you with open paws (as long as you don't make a mess!)

 

-- Thank you Flitt for doing an amazing job drawing him! --

(Fangback Species made by me)

https://i.imgur.com/DE4FGYc.jpg

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http://www.furry-paws.com/main/index/1512948

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SOD DRAGGO ART :D

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NAME: Wisp

SPECIES: Flightmare
ARTIST: Izzydrawsdragons

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NAME: Spike

SPECIES: Deadly Nadder
ARTIST: Iamthesenate

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OC-DRAGGO ART :)

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NAME: Pitch

SPECIES: Fludmorph (Alien OC) - Deadly Nadder Form
ARTIST: Oda

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NAME: Pitch

SPECIES: Fludmorph (Alien OC) - Stormcutter Form
ARTIST: Carolinalina

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ABOUT ME

 

NICKNAME: Drake

IN-GAME NAME: ErikaTheWild

FRIEND CODE: Private (for now)

In-Game Age: 14

MAIN DRAGON: Adult Flightmare - Wisp

FAVOURITE DRAGON CLASSES: Stoker class and Strike class

FAVOURITE DRAGON SPECIES: Was once Monstrous Nightmare, now it's Deadly Nadder

ALL DRAGONS: * Wisp - Adult Flightmare

                        * Spike - Adult Deadly Nadder

                        * Boulder - Gronkle Hatchling

GENDER: Female

FAVOURITE IN-GAME THINGS TO DO: Flying, exploring, fishing, getting new dragons, experiments, 'destroy the enemy ship' events, and racing.

FAVOURITE SCHOOL SUBJECT: Tech

FAVOURITE ACTIVITIES: Swimming, flying, and drawing.

FAMILY: 1 Little Brother, 1 Mom, 1 Dad, 3 Fish, and 1 Cat.

(VIKING) FAMILY: Younger brother: Draco

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validation?  I would love to give that. 

 

Your style is super cute and I absolutely love the designs you incorporate.  This piece would look absolutely stunning if you digitalized and colored it. I can imagine the mixing of greens and turquoise to form a nebula and the glowing stars. You should seriously try it! I recommend using a program called  "paint.net" i am pretty sure that it is completely free. Then zoom in real close and on a new layer trace your lines with a mouse. :D

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Medibang is also pretty great. It's got an extract lineart feature aswell.

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  Thank you so very much! I've been needing a new art program and I would love to digitalize this piece so very much to make it look even better! :D

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That's pretty cute!

 

Some concrit:

The proportions on the character could be a little bit better, considering where the neck attaches to the head and the lack of difference between the front and back legs. The perspective/angle is a little bit confusing as I'm seeing front, side and multiple 3/4 angles in the body's posing, and the front-facing face seems to be viewed from a more bird-flight-like angle despite the character standing on a hill. A more frog-like perspective would be more appropriate.

 

For the lines, what would work imo is to make sure you want to put your focus into focus. What I mean with that is, as you can see, the line thickness, darkness and hardness is the same throughout your drawing, meaning that there isn't much of a front- or background,  making everything flatter than intended. Using different line hardness and thickness can really help you bring something to the foreground or background. For example: The planet in the background is very dark and also happens to be the only object in the drawing with so much black space, which brings it to the front and makes it a focal point for your drawing- which I'm sure is not your intention! The grass is also very dark, and is the second part my eyes drift toward. What works is to lighten either the subject or the background/surroundings (background I'd say in this case) to make the character pop out more to show everyone it's the main subject of the drawing (unless it's not supposed to be, if so my bad!)

 

What also works with creating good focal points is composition (will be necessary at one point), but that's an entire can of worms that's best left looked up on the googlebingdex or so.

 

For the rest, I think there'd be a better flow if the swirls on the clouds themselves had some kind of flow to them as a whole. They look fine individually, but once I take in the entire picture it becomes a bit messy due to their random angles and directions. Evening that out will also define wind direction, allowing you to play with that with the rest of the surroundings.

 

And lastly: There's a lot of different shapes in there! Rounded lines, angled corners, rhombi, pentagrams, swirls, waves etc. It's a little bit restless and I think the drawing would do well with some more consistency in shapes!

 

Hope it helps!

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   Thank you for the tips. The 'planet' was the moon- I'll make it lighter next time. I honestly have no idea what you mean't in the rest of your concrit - Could you explain it or show examples? I tend to understand better that way. I apologize, it might be my tired brain- Or it might be because I am self taught. I will take everything in consideration though and try to understand as I want to improve. Its an ambition of mine right now, every little bit of critism is important to my success.

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Ahh I'm sorry, I don't think I can explain it in any other way-- however there's websites that teach art basics with visual examples, they'll probably do a better job than I can.

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I got you, Varku. Haha. My mother taught art class when I was little. I picked up on a lot of stuff.

 

Okay. So what Varku is trying to explain to you is called "composition". It is the placement and arrangement of shapes and objects in your art. 

Basically.  Artists are tricky in the sense that they like to mess with your brain and hack it to make you look where they want to look. So how do they do it? How do they control your eyes? 

With composition!  Lines, shading, shapes and le gasp, perspective!

Take a look at this image.

What is the first thing you noticed? 

Id be willing to bet that it was that little white circle. 

That is because the artist of this image purposefully directed your eyes to that point. This is called the "focal point".

Photography does this by blurring out the background of images. 

 

Of course. That isn't the only way to get a focal point. Let's go back to the example of the first image. 

Notice how the artist uses colour. Everything has a colour. And if it does not have a colour then it is black. The only instance of white ever showing up is in that white circle. That alone immediately draws your eye. 

The photograph depicted above does the same thing. Notice how there is a lot of greens and tans in the image. But the only little bit of yellow is that flower. 

The pop of colour instantly directs your gaze straight for it. Making it the first thing  you see. 

 

Another way to establish a focal point is with shapes. Go back to that painting from earlier. Do you notice how all of the lines drawn are going to or radiating out from the focal point AKA that little white circle? 

That draws your eye as well. It makes you follow the colour's path with your gaze until you land on the focal point.

 

There are many, MANY other ways to establish a focal point but these two i mentioned are the most basic and the ones that Varku was talking about  (because perspective is a whole other thing that in of itself is kinda complicated). 

So let's go back and look at your image. Mmkay?

 

Given what you now know about how colour plays a role in composition,  can you figure out why the moon is the focal point of your piece and not your super adorable dragon?

 

 

 

 

It's because your moon is so dark while everything else is very light. Remember earlier with the yellow flower? The fact that the flower was the ONLY yellow thing in the photo immediately drew your eye. 

In your drawing, the moon is the largest object that contains a colour different to all of the other colours. So that is the first thing that draws your eye. The second is the grass because as Varku said, it is the second thing that utilizes that dark colour.

you See how dark the moon is compared to your dragon? Your dragon just kind of disappears into the lines and textures around it because it is so light.

 

Which beings me onto the second point Varku made. 

Too many shapes.

The best way I can describe this is that it feels cluttered. Like there is a lot going on and not a lot of places to rest your eye. Which for the record. Is a COMPLETELY legitimate style.  Think Picasso.

He used tons of different shapes and colours in his art, connecting them to create that super unique signature style. You would recognize his work anywhere.  But notice how even Picasso used composition and focal points. 

Because in these bright lucid colours,  your eye is immediately attracted to the woman's face. Her frown of despair and her mouth. Again. This is because this is the only area where very bright colour was not used. Instead white was used. Which is more of a shade than a colour. 

 

But i don't think that you were going for cubism or surrealism in your art work.  So while it is nice to have some juxtaposition (fancy word for contrast) in your art, too much can make it feel cluttered. 

In your example with the dragon. 

Notice how the moon, the dragon, and the clouds behind her are these very graceful swooping lines.

But then the stars are more boxy and jagged. Rhombus and what not. It's best to pick a primary shape type and work with it. This establishes your style and signature look while also making your work feel more thought out and composed.

 

 

And uh. That is the basics. I hope I got most of that right, lol. I haven't been in an art class since high school. 

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  Okay- I get it now. Not too many shapes so it isn't cramped, make the dragon darker so it's the focal point, lighten the moon and grass so it doesn't become the focal point, and use less contrast. Okay I will look into this for a future drawing. :)