Art critique

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Fireburstdreams210
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Offer your genuine criticism to my art. I know there are a lot of talented people on this forum. If so, thank you. I wanted improvement. I only do traditional art and not digital art.

The first drawing is Youtuber Apandah, while the second drawings are Youtubers Mikasacus and Pewdiepie. 

 

 

 

It's horrible, right? :)

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First of all i want to say that it's pretty brave to put your art out there!

i don't think it's horrible, it just needs some work, what i would recomend is
-find one of those how to draw books, it helps!!

-have someone you know is better then yourself (in real life) critque as you draw

-watch live streams of people drawing. 

- and PRACTICE PRACTICE PRACTICE!!

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