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... I put almost everything I have into a drawing. My shading skills aren't that great, tho. But I would like some feedback on this, please! Like, not just the drawing, but how much it looks like a NF, or does the style I use make sense with the anatomy of a dragon? 

Thanks in advance!

Night~

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"I'm always happy. You know why? I don't expect anything from anyone. Expectations always hurt."
~Shakespeare

Hi! I am Rhiannon. You can call me Night. I am a #1 fan of HTTYD and Pokemon (throw FNAF in too). I make art of both and do some collecting, too!

Come join me for a bite... 


Facts about me:
My favorite Pokémon is Lucario.
My favorite dragon is Hookfang. Unless you count Pitch...

I won 2nd place of 400 people for a young author's award.
I'm part Welsh and part Dutch.
My personal symbol is actually a dragon:
I am powerful, smart, and very tall. This makes me a bit intimidating. My family describes me as sweet, loyal, kind, stubborn, selfish, but somehow trustworthy. I'm a friend till the end! 
I have a IQ of 160.
I love comics and animated movies. 
I am good at sculpting.
Teachers praise me for some of my writing.
I'm very persuasive.
I was born on New Years Day and the first New Years baby in the hospital I was born at.

I don't steal, cheat, or lie.
I'm always trying to stay humble and kind

 

 

 

 

 

Viking Name: RhiRees

Clan: None

Current Rank: 33

Main Purpose for Playing: Eh

Main Dragon: Pitch (Toothless. Obtained before the October update.)

Web, In-game, and real-life catchphrase: Woomy (from Splatoon)

Favorite franchises: HTTYD and Pokémon 

Favorite song: Join us for a Bite (FNAF)

Favorite food: Macaroni and Cheese

Favorite actor: Chris Pratt

Favorite Dragon Character: Hookfang and Toothless are tied XD

 

                                                                            My Drawings

 

Pitch:

 

 Titan Pitch!

 Pitch does NOT like stuff touching him XD

 Pitch loves to paint

 On a morning flight

 Pitch: Wut?

 These two are best friends 

 Examining a chick

Pitch's personality in one drawing:

 

Stoker:

 The fiercest around!

 As a baby

 

Stormnight:

 She is very sneaky...

 

 And very sweet.

 

 Stormnight loves to go flying!

 Adorable Pixel Stormnight by Lululu6161. Tysm!

 

Tundra:

 She absolutely LOVES to tease Pitch about his crush on Stormnight.

 

 

Character Bios:

 

Pitch:

Pitch had a horrible history- two fathers, a killed mother, and separation from his brother and sister for years. However, things started to get better when I found that Hiccup's dragon, Toothless, is his brother, and his sister, Tundra, lived in the poles until I found her. 


Pitch is very grumpy most of the time. Well... half grumpy. I should say in a annoyed mood. Even then, he deals with it and stays very sweet. When he is not in a annoyed mood, he is awfully lazy and will avoid doing anything physical. He is very quiet and shy. Suspicious about anyone that isn't family. He has a huge crush on Stormnight, my deadly nadder, but has been too shy to say anything and she is too oblivious to notice he has feeling for her.

 

Tundra:

Full bio coming soon.

Note: Tundra can change colors. This is because her father was a changewing and she changes from white/rainbow to navy blue depending on where she is. Pitch shows no signs of having the same ability

 

 

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I like it!

I looks just like a night fury!

The shading looks fine.

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Backstory-

VexyLu's family were warriors.

They have lived on Berk for generations.

Always training, VexyLu was an expert fighter.

She was also smart, logical, strong and very pretty.

She had fought countless people, all had failed to win.

But VexyLu's parents wanted her to be even better.

She was enrolled in school of dragons, so she would be unstoppable.

As soon as she enrolled, Berk was under attack from dragon hunters.

VexyLu was there and was required to help the dragon riders.

Apon mounting toothless, VexyLu successfully helped defeat the dragon hunters.

That is when she noticed there was a trapped dragon.

VexyLu picked the lock and there was a magnificent, purple sandwraith.

VexyLu and the dragon immediately bonded.

She called her Nibbles.

And that is how VexyLu became a dragon rider.

 

Since that day, many years ago VexyLu has been on countless adventures with Nibbles.

They have helped many Vikings around the school and Berk.

They have dealt with many enemies like; a death song, dragon hunters, green death, and more.

VexyLu has helped discover an ancient Viking civilisation.

Along the way, VexyLu has trained many other dragons.

 

VexyLu joined the Berk guard.

Every time an enemy ship approaches, it is taken down quickly.

She often rescues dragon eggs from the sinking ships.

 

VexyLu has a hut on dragons' edge.

She lives partly there, and partly at Berk.

 

In her spare time VexyLu enjoys hanging with her friends, racing, helping new students, and of course training.

She is an even better fighter than before and her parents are proud.

 

You can often find VexyLu at the training grounds, Berk, the edge, or ice storm island.

She often patrols these areas, looking for dragon hunters.

TBC

 

Dragons-

Sandwraith- Nibbles

Nibbles is my first dragon that I rescued from a cage.

 

Groncicle- Vexy

I found Vexy on johann's ship. I helped her find her way back to ice storm island.

 

Nadder- Lulu

I got Lulu out of the hatchery's collection of eggs. 

 

Death song- Melody

I rescued Melody from her mum's nest, after she was abandoned by her. 

 

Armorwing- Armor

I saved Armor from dragon hunters and she bonded with me. 

 

Smokebreath- Smog

Smog is the second smoke breath I got. I won him in battle. 

 

Smokebreath- Skyfog

Skyfog is the first smokebreath I got. I also won her in battle.

 

Whispering death- Groundwhisper

I got groundwhisper after finding her egg in the tunnels under Berk. 

 

Whispering death- Groundquake

I won groundquake in battle. 

 

Whispering death- Groundshake

I also won Groundshake in battle. 

 

Screaming death- Screech

I won Screech in battle. 

 

Razorwhip- Cut

I found Cut's egg in an abandoned ship. 

 

Razorwhip- Snip

I won Snip in battle. 

 

Hotburple- Grunt

I won Grunt in battle. 

 

Snafflefang- Fangsnaffle

I won Fangsnaffle in battle. 

 

Flightmare- Frightmare

I won Frightmare in battle. 

 

Moldruffle- Mold

I won Mold in battle.

 

Speed stinger- Sting

I won sting in battle. 

 

Fireworm queen- Helios

I won Helios in battle. 

 

Shockjaw- Helpfulwarrior

I won Helpful warrior in battle. I named her after one of my friends.

 

Hobblegrunt- Wobbles

I won wobbles in battle.

 

Snafflefang- Fangsnaffle Jr

I won fangsnaffle in battle.

 

Eruptadon- Flare

I needed help, and didn't have a dragon that could fly into the depths of a volcano, so I got Flare's help.

 

Singetail- Frizzle

I saved Fizzle from being auctioned by dragon hunters.

 

 

 

Thanls to all the incredible artists who made these pictures for me!-

(Fireflash)

 

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(Bluemoon20523)

 

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(Flowercrystal)

 

(1flower)

 

(Scarfywings)

 

(Scarfywings)

 

(Bavelly)

 

(Alicornbrodie)

(Nightfuryatom4)

 

 

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Thanks :)

Thanks :)

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No! Bad Tigerus and Euphrates!!! Do not eat my subject!!

That's Pitch, right? It's really good!

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Hello! I am Shamara30! I am new to the forums but I've been watching and I have read a few fanfics too!

I plan to do more with this but for now meet my OCs! (Profile pic made by the talented VexyLu! Thank you!)

 

My OCs

 

Name:Shamara

 

Age:17

 

Backstory: http://forum.schoolofdragons.com/content/how-i-trained-my-dragon-1

 

Appearance: working on it!!!

 

Weapon:A gronkle iron staff that the ends light on fire. It can also split in half the long way to reveal a leather sheet that works like her own version of Hiccup's flight suit.

 

Personality: when Shamara sees something she has to know how it works. This makes her good at quite a few things because she knows about them.

 

Skills:fighting,singing,and flying with Carmen

 

Dragon:Carmen

 

Species:deathsong

 

Unique traits: just as chicken makes Stormfly go faster eel makes Carmen go faster. It brings her speed from 17 to 19 and natural training makes it 20

 

Pet Dragon

 

Name: Coal

 

Species: terrible terror

 

Colors: black with a grey underbelly and highlights

 

Other: Shamara has a thin scar across her left eye. She made matching necklaces in the shape of a music note for her and Carmen. She is the leader of a team of Dragon Riders called The OS Dragon Riders.

 

Name: Vanessa

 

Age:18

 

Backstory: no one can know. When Vanessa was five years old her village was attacked by dragons. Her father sent her and her mother into the woods to hide while he defended the village. On their way to the safe house they had built they were attacked by a monstrous nightmare. Sadly Vanessa's mother died protecting her. Ever since then her father has hated dragons. Even worse he blamed her for what happened. He disowned her. While living on the streets she befriended a singetail and named it compass. This made matters worse between her and her father. Now he not only banished her from his life he also seeks to kill her. Vanessa is on the run when she comes across an ally who is also her father's worst enemy. But they cannot know her secret. Everything she had built up would be lost if they knew the truth. She would be cast out if they knew who her father really was. 

 

Haha! Now you must live with this until I write it!!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

 

Appearance: black hair, Brown eyes

 

Weapon:sword from her father

 

Personality:keeps to herself and in constant mental pain 

 

Skills:sword play, herbal medicine and cooking

 

Dragon:Compass

 

Species:Singetail

 

Unique traits: he always knows which way is north which is why he is called Compass

 

Name:Addi

 

Age:15

 

Backstory:Addi lives on berk a year after httyd 2. Life is good for Addi and her friends Shey, Robin and best friend Gustav but when they are enrolled in Dragon training their lives are turned upside down. 

When a dangerous enemy approaches berk and the dragon riders call on them for help they must learn the true meaning of friendship and see how far they will go for each other.

 

Ha! Again!

 

Appearance: strawberry blond hair cut to shoulders, bright green eyes

 

Weapon: Shield like Hiccup's

 

Dragon:Silver

 

Species:Shockjaw

 

Colors:Grayish turquoise with silver fins.

 

And lastly...

 

Name:Naomi

 

Age:17

 

Backstory:the dragons have left many years ago and many don't believe anymore. But one girl does. When the dragons return led by an angry Toothless Naomi befriends him. Together they begin the search for Hiccup. Will they find him? (Not all the kinks worked out in this story.)

 

Appearance:Brown hair, eyes that appear to be changing color

 

Weapon:none

 

Skills: understanding dragons, sword play

 

Dragon: ha! You may not know yet!!!!!!!!

 

And now, meet my newest OC!

 

Name:Alyssa (Aly)

 

Age:20

 

Backstory: Aly's parents died when she was a baby leaving her  in her uncle's care. One  day, when she was five, her uncle took her in a fishing expedition but the boat was attacked by wild dragons. Her uncle sent  her off in a small rowboat and Aly was never sure what  happened to her uncle. After many  days  floating around(the oars had been lost to the dragons) she fell asleep. When she awoke she found  herself surrounded by dragons and a young woman. She learned that  the woman's name was Valka and she lived with and trained dragons.

Valka nursed Aly back to health and after  that the thought of leaving never entered her mind. She grew up among dragons and even bonded with a yellow  and green triple stryke which she  named Hunter. 

At the time of httyd 2 Aly was on a trip to find  more dragons wounded by Drago Bludvist and take them to the sanctuary.

 

Appearance: she dresses like Valka and had similar hair.

 

Weapon: stick thing like Valka's.

 

Skills: Training dragons and thankfully, cooking.

 

Dragon:Hunter (triple stryke)

 

 

                     Dragons I hope to get

 

Name: Echo

 

appearance: (both done by The talented VexyLu. Thanks!)

 

 

Here is baby Echo by nightfuryatom4! TSYM! 

 

 

And here is my first Dragon, Skyfire! (Also by VexyLu;-)

 

Okay! I plan to do a lot more with this but thank you for reading my OCs!!!! So long dragon riders!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

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Yea it is Pitch, and thanks!

Yea it is Pitch, and thanks!

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Wow, that's really awesome-looking! And I feel you with the shading, I'm horrible at that. Top of my siggy is a pretty good example of that...

 

To me, that looks just like a Night Fury! The head is, I think the best part, but you got the proportions pretty darn good.

 

The one thing that I will say is a bit 'weird' is the random patch of scales on his ear flaps. I like the scales at the nose and wing tips because they're at the edges, but the ear flap scales, where they are, don't make much sense to me.

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I put the read on scales

I put the read on scales there because that's how I've mpbeen doing it since I started drawing NFs... I think I was 8.... and I put them where I thought they were the most noticeable on the dragon XD

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Looks great! :D

Looks great! :D

What you could improve on though are the wings. The part where the bones hold the wings together could be less skinny and short and could look more like this:

So all I am saying is that the wings need more support in them and maybe the neck could be a little more thicker too. Exelent job though, keep practicing :D

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Do you know how much that

Do you know how much that bothers me about the wings? XD I'm usually pretty good at getting them right, like here:

 And even then, my dragon is a bit skinnier in some parts and fatter in some parts, cuz he is 13. So I draw them how I think a 13 year old dragon would look! Also thanks for the feedback!

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Whoop, here comes an art

Whoop, here comes an art student:

 

So the actual artistic look is good. Not trying to blow your face off with 200 different colours and neons, softened by the background which is very pleasing to look at, and the few little dashes of red make for nice little focal points across the piece.

 

Anatomy, a bit iffy but then again I have very high standards. The head could be a tad longer or thinner, the neck could use a little bit of thickening- it's about the same width as the base of the skull- and having a clearer transition between the chest and neck would be nice. The wing arm could be much thicker- don't be afraid to let things go off the page. The wing elbow could have gone much further down, and maybe the shoulder could start a little bit behind the arm.

The muscle indentations/lines are in good spots, but the scales could use some work. It's better to draw them as slightly darker spots rather than having outlines, or having very thin broken outlines.

Eye shape is very nice, I like that bit most (wow what great english i can do?)

The ears could be dropped down a little, and flattened, with even spacing between them, and maybe add a few more along the lower jaw and curving around a bit. The mouth is nice, but some distinction between the lips on the edge would look really nice.

Spines could begin a bit higher up and have some spacing between them, and the point could be dulled a bit.

But all in all, pretty good!

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Characters and Art

 

Behold Sir Marvelous! Edit by VoSpader, original concept art by Cory Strader

Species: Sea Dragon Leviathan

Gender: Male

Story(not to be taken seriously, intentionaly bad)

Marvelous was a good SeA dragn, not like the others!!! He was in a fight with a warper one day and damaged it, and it accidently teleported him to berk!!! luckily the people liked him and now he lives peacefully with poeple and helps catch fish! But he is afraid that he took the carar desease with him... because why else would the warper attack him?

 

Amelia

Sister of Whales

http://i.imgur.com/P2L3Org.jpg

(Art by me)

Regal and full of herself, Amelia isn't the easiest to be around. She has few friends and makes sure to choose them wisely, but even then she will often believe they need her help with anything when it's obvious they don't

A decendant of a long-dead clan of Furies that learned the song of whales, she discovered her gift to communicate with the ocean giants at a young age. During her teens, she had her first encounter with humans- Hunters that managed to catch her unaware of the danger out at sea, and when a harpoon got ensared in her paw, she called out in desperation. Luckily, a stray humpback whale calf answered the distress call and managed to roll the boat. This did rip the harpoon out, however, and that caused her to lose the paw. Grateful and sad for the lost calf, she watched over him until he could survive on his own, but he chose to stay with her despite the difficulties of not migrating. Named Mud for his vibrant dark brown colouring, the two close friends explore the lands in search of Amelia's history, and maybe some entertainment in between.

When around others, Amelia likes to keep Mud as much of a secret as she can unless she absolutely has to call on him. This is mostly to keep him safe, but also for an element of surprise during potential battles. When she communicates with him, others will hear it as strange gurgling, humming, moaning, clicking and other assorted noises. This often leads dragons (and people) to think of her mentaly impaired until they see who's on the other side of the line

 

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Awesome! This is just what I

Awesome! This is just what I was looking for! Thanks!

(I wish I could be a student artist, but I don't think I'm old enough...)

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Don't get too excited it's

Don't get too excited it's just yr11.

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Don't worry. I just like it

Don't worry. I just like it when people give me awesome feedback. Everyone who replied did, sooo....

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A lil side note, the thing

A lil side note, the thing that helped me most with the head shape is that it is a corn kernel shape. A kinda squarish trapezium...

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I listened to you guys and

I listened to you guys and did a bit more changing to the original. I didn't fix the ears, though....

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VER NICE That wing elbow

VER NICE
That wing elbow could come down alot further though- each limb segment should be about the same length