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... I put almost everything I have into a drawing. My shading skills aren't that great, tho. But I would like some feedback on this, please! Like, not just the drawing, but how much it looks like a NF, or does the style I use make sense with the anatomy of a dragon? 

Thanks in advance!

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~Shakespeare


Welcome to the crazy mess that is my signature. From here down, be prepared for nothing but randomness. 

Heya! I am NightAtom. You can call me Night. I am a huge fan of HTTYD and Pokémon, plus I'm only half crazy! 



More about me:
My favorite Pokémon is Lucario.
My favorite dragon is Hookfang. Unless you count Pitch...

I won 2nd place of 400 people for a young author's award.
I'm part Welsh and part Dutch.
I have an IQ of 160.
I love comics and animated movies. 
I am good at sculpting.
I'm very persuasive.
I was born on New Years Day and the first New Years baby in the hospital I was born at.

I don't steal, cheat, or lie.
I'm always trying to stay humble and kind

 

 

 

 

 

Viking Name: RhiRees

Clan: The Scorpions (Wanna join? PM me)

Current Rank: 33

Main Purpose for Playing: Eh

Main Dragon: Pitch (Toothless. Obtained before the October update.)

Web, In-game, and real-life catchphrase: "I'm boned" or "Heya!"

Favorite franchises: HTTYD and Pokémon 

Favorite song: The Markiplier Rap

Favorite food: Macaroni!

 

 

My Drawings

 

Pitch:

 

 Titan Pitch!

 

 

He does NOT like stuff touching him 

 

 

Pitch loves to paint

 

 

  Whatchu say?

 

Examining a chick

 

That there is Pitch's crush. Her name is Sapphire and she is a hybrid between a Stormcutter and Night Fury. She is owned by sapphirenightcutter on DeviantArt.

 

 

 

 

 

Stoker:

The fiercest around!

 

 

As a baby

 

 

 

Stormnight:

 

 Stormnight loves to go flying!

Adorable Pixel Stormnight by Lululu6161. Tysm!

 

 

 

Character Bios/Info:

 

Pitch:

Pitch had a horrible history - two fathers, a deceased mother, and separation from his brother and sister for years. However, things started to get better when I found that Hiccup's dragon, Toothless, is his brother, and his sister, Tundra, lived in the poles until I found her. 


Pitch is very grumpy most of the time. Well... half grumpy. I should say in a annoyed mood. Even then, he deals with it and stays very sweet. When he is not in a annoyed mood, he is awfully lazy and will avoid doing anything physical. He is very quiet and shy. Suspicious about anyone that isn't family. He has a crush on a NightCutter named Sapphire. Pitch and Sapphire are 13 years old.

 

Tundra:

Full bio coming soon.

Note: Tundra can change colors. This is because her father was a changewing and she changes from white/rainbow to navy blue depending on where she is. Pitch shows no signs of having the same ability

 

 

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I like it!

I looks just like a night fury!

The shading looks fine.

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Dragons-

Sandwraith- Nibbles

Nibbles is my first dragon that I rescued from a cage.

by LayKary

 

Groncicle- Vexy

I found Vexy on johann's ship. I helped her find her way back to ice storm island.

 

Nadder- Lulu

I got Lulu out of the hatchery's collection of eggs. 

 

Death song- Melody

I rescued Melody from her mum's nest, after she was abandoned by her. 

 

Armorwing- Armor

I saved Armor from dragon hunters and she bonded with me. 

By FireNightSky

 

Smokebreath- Smog 

Smog is the second smoke breath I got. I won him in battle. 

 

Smokebreath- Skyfog

Skyfog is the first smokebreath I got. I also won her in battle.

By Nightfuryatom4

 

Whispering death- Groundwhisper

I got groundwhisper after finding her egg in the tunnels under Berk. 

 

Whispering death- Groundquake

I won groundquake in battle. 

 

Whispering death- Groundshake

I also won Groundshake in battle. 

 

Whispering death- GroundBurrow

I won GroundBurrow in battle.

 

•Whispering death-

I won  in battle.

 

•Screaming death- Screech

I won Screech in battle. 

 

•Razorwhip- Cut

I found Cut's egg in an abandoned ship. 

 

Razorwhip- Snip

I won Snip in battle. 

By Vospader

 

Hotburple- Grunt

I won Grunt in battle. 

 

Snafflefang- Fangsnaffle

I won Fangsnaffle in battle. 

by dogloven

 

Snafflefang- Fangsnaffle Jr

I won fangsnaffle in battle.

By FroztWulf

 

Flightmare- Frightmare

I won Frightmare in battle. 

by Scarfywings (animated by mrizky)

 

Moldruffle- Mold

I won Mold in battle.

by Umbreon27

 

Speed stinger- Sting

I won sting in battle. 

By Okamisusi

 

•Fireworm queen- Helios

I won Helios in battle. 

 

•Shockjaw- Helpfulwarrior

I won Helpful warrior in battle. I named her after one of my friends.

 

•Hobblegrunt- Wobbles

I won wobbles in battle.

 

Eruptadon- Flare

I needed help, and didn't have a dragon that could fly into the depths of a volcano, so I got Flare's help.

 

•Singetail- Frizzle

I saved Fizzle from being auctioned by dragon hunters.

 

•Flamewhipper- Firelash

Firelash stowed away on my dragon, after my journey on impossible island.

 

Snowwraith- Blizzard

Blizzard is my racing dragon.

by TosiLohi

 

•Typhoomerang- BurntSwirl

I won BurntSwirl in battle.

 

 

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Hi guys!

The following part of my signature is currently under construction.

I plan on doing a lot more with the art I have drawn for me.

I am currently looking for people to draw my dragons, so if you think you can draw one, please DM me.

Thanks!

 

Adoptables-

*Im working on including names, etc

 

Scenseredshocked, my Shellfire, by Bluemoon20523

 

Hibiscus, my Sequin Wing, by Flowercrystal

 

Amethyst, a FriendFriend draggo, by 1flower

 

Stormrider, a Stormchaser, by Scarfywings

 

Sunfly, a Gardendigger, by Scarfywings

 

Galaxywhip, a Vesupa, by Bavelly

 

Peach, an Infertide, by Alicornbrodie

 

DeathSky, a baby nightfury, by Nightfuryatom4

 

Mysterystripes, a Marshtiger, by themasterplan47

 

PurpleFuzz, a Woolly Howl, by Wutend Bonfire

 

GreyShell, a Shelleye, by GoldenWraith

 

Issie, a Mountain Jackoat, by Scarfywings

 

Kiki, a Hyeagle owl, by Scarfywings

 

Ziggy, a Ratagator, by Scarfywings

 

Keja, a Foxret, by Scarfywings

 

Eza, an Impatypus, by Scarfywings

 

Rei, a dingorse, by ScarfyWings

 

Deathsky, and another nightfury, by Wutend Bonfire

 

GreySky, a Muddicry, by chameishida

 

VioletWraith, a White Mamba, by Megaboltphoenix

 

WinterBreeze, a Svalbard Howl, by Okamisusi

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Thank you to all the amazing artists who have done art for me!

 

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Thanks :)

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No! Bad Tigerus and Euphrates!!! Do not eat my subject!!

That's Pitch, right? It's really good!

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Name: Star The Navigator
 
Age: 18
 
Gender: Female
 
Appearance: Star has incredibly long Chestnut brown hair that when in a braid reaches down to her waist. Her skin is a light Carmel color and sure has a few freckles on the bridge if her nose. She has a slight scar across her left eye, but thankfully it does not affect her vision. She has amethyst purple eyes. 
 
By BoomBox74^^
 
 
By FireNightStar^^
 
Designed by Arrowalker, Vanilia Viking and I. Drawn by Arrow
 
Winter
 
Her shirt is a long sleeve olive green shirt with gold borders. She wears a brown leather chest piece and coyote fur wrapping around her waist. Her boots, wristbands and cape are lined with coyote fur also. Her pants are brown with deep brown buckles and she keeps her messenger style bag with her at all times. 
 
Summer
 
When summer comes she changes to a green three quarter length sleeve shirt with gold borders. Her wristbands are no longer lined with fur, and so are her boots. She removes the fur from her waist and only wears her cloak on the colder days or when flying. 
 
Background: Star was 9 years old when she joined the school of dragons. 
 
Upon joining she made many friends. She Trained many dragons and because of her, Snow Wraiths were welcomed​into the school. But still, something was calling her. 
 
She went on many journeys​ to find what was calling her, but she never found it. She did find, however​, many different islands. Including, an island with a mountain in the middle. The mountain is hollow and covered in ice. Star decided it was the perfect place for all of her dragon companions.
 
 During the summer months Star stays on the islands to keep her ice dragons healthy. 
 
Personality: Star believes in following her heart more than anything. She sees the world at a different angle and because of that has traveled FAR beyond where any Viking has gone before. 
 
Star has not limited herself to Dragons. She is the proud trainer of a pack of wolves, a bear, a pod of Orcas, several birds and even a family of rabbits​!
 
As you might have guessed, star does things very differently.
 
Weapon: 
Drawn by Mechfighter^^
 
Other: Star has a necklace with the chiefs symbol ingraved on it. 
 
Dragons
 
Name: Skyfire
 
Species: Deadly Nadderhead
 
Gender: Female
 
Appearance: 
 
By FireNightStar^^
 
 
There was some confusion. She's red and not pink. Still an amazing edit!
 
By Rrepetti^^
 
Personalize: Skyfire does not tolerate sarcasm in the wrong moment. Nor does she allow games when they are on a mission. Wish she is given a task she will get it done THEN play. Unless of course someone throws something. Yay if her only weakness: Fetch. She cannot resist retrieving things. Which she gets made fun of by Star's other dragons for.
 
Favorite activity: Fetch
 
Biggest fear: Eels
 
Origin: Star received Skyfire as an egg when she first joined the school of dragons. 
 
 
Name: Polaris
 
Species: Snow Wraith
 
Gender: Male
 
Appearance: 
 
By BoomBox74^^
 
Personality: Polaris is playful as can be. Once you get to know him or he sees that Star trusts you, he is caring as can be. But before you​ gain his trust, he might come off as cold (Pun Intended) He is playfully competitive and will not refuse a competition. 
 
Favorite activity: Snowball Fight
 
Biggest fear: Cabbage
 
Origin: During one of Berk's coldest Winters​ travel to the wilderness was banned due to a report of seeing Snow Wraiths. Star followed her heart and trained one anyway and aided Hiccup in defending the School from dragon hunters. Since then Snow Wraiths have been welcomed into the school. 
 
 
Name: Wolf
 
Species: Woolly Howl
 
Gender: Male
 
Appearance:
By ScarfyWings^^
 
By FireNightStar^^
 
 
 By Arrowalker^^
 
 
Personality: Wolf is very protective of Star and the rest of her dragons. He is undyingly loyal to Star and overly protective. 
 
Favorite activity: Flying
 
Biggest fear: Dragon Hunters
 
Origin: Star found Wolf when she was in captivity in the dragon hunter's base. Wolf was trapped as well and had received a scar across his snout
 
Name: Journey
 
Species: Night Fury
 
Gender: Female
 
Appearance: 
By BoomBox74^^
She has leaf green eyes. 
 
Personality: Journey loves to annoy people more than anything. She will play jokes (that aren't​ really funny) as is sarcastic. 
 
She is incredibly competitive and (just because is bugs Skyfire) will challenge Polaris to races all the time. However, she will do most anything to save Star.
 
Favorite activity: Racing 
 
Biggest fear: Losing everyone she cares about​.
 
Origin: Star found Journey on one of her trips. This time she flew farther than ever before. After weeks of travel she found a large section of land. It was too big to be a island. Upon exploration she made a surprising discovery, and met Journey. 
 
 
The leaders of Vivvore
 
 
Name: Sonda
 
 
Species: Titan Sand Wraith
 
 
Gender: Male
 
 
Appearance: 
 
 
Personality: Sonda is short tempered and hot headed. He is stubborn and has a wry sense of humor. 
 
His firmness is good for some aspects of leading, but he can be to harsh, so he needs some others to help balance his personality.
 
 
Favorite activity: Sleeping
 
 
Biggest fear: Hurting Star and letting her down. 
 
 
Origin: Star met Sonda when he stole Moana the Tide Glider's eggs. Star recused the eggs and in the process befriended the Tide Glider. 
 
After a long adventure trying to find the answer to why Sonda was stealing her eggs, Star found out that his family died when he was young, and so he was lonely and jealous of Moana. Star invited him to Vivvore, where he grew to in unofficial leadership position. Star saw this and officially​ made him the leader.
 
 
 
Name: Moana 
 
 
Species: Tide Glider
 
 
Gender: Female
 
 
Appearance: 
 
 
Personality: Moana is compassionate and forgiving. Perfect to contrast Sonda's harshness, although occasionally they will clash. 
 
 
Favorite activity: Searching the depths of the ocean for treasures. 
 
 
Biggest fear: The dark
 
 
Origin: Star met Moana when Sonda stole her eggs. Star rescued the eggs and in the process earned her trust. 
 
 
 
Name: Pompeii
 
 
Species: Eruptadon
 
 
Gender: Female
 
 
Appearance:
 
 
Personality: Pompeii is a gentle giant but can also be firm. She does not find Sonda's sense of humor funny and will call him out on it. 
 
 
Favorite activity: Watching the hatchlings play
 
 
Biggest fear: Swimming
 
 
Origin: Star found Pompeii when she needed to fly into the depths of a volcano. None of her dragons could take that kind of heat, so Pompeii helped out.
 
 
 
 
Home Island
 
 
Name: Sivard 
 
 
Size: Small 3/10
 
 
Inhabitants: Omar, Carlil, Afnan, Lex, Star, Foxtrot, Azariah
 
 
Appearance:
 
 
Location: Not to far East of Berk
 
 
 
Name: Berk/The School
 
 
Size: Medium 7/10
 
 
Inhabitants: Too many to list
 
 
Appearance:
 
Berk^^
 
The School^^
 
Location: Um, Berk. 
 
 
Name: Dragons Edge
 
Size: Small 5/10
 
Inhabitants: The Dragon Riders, Star and any other students who have moved in
 
Appearance: 
 
Location: Outside the Archipelago
 
 
Name: Vivvore
 
Size: Large 9/10
 
Inhabitants: Star, Skyfire, Wolf, Polaris, Journey, and the rest of Star's dragons
 
Appearance: 
 
Location: Far South of Berk
 
 
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Yea it is Pitch, and thanks!

Yea it is Pitch, and thanks!

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Wow, that's really awesome-looking! And I feel you with the shading, I'm horrible at that. Top of my siggy is a pretty good example of that...

 

To me, that looks just like a Night Fury! The head is, I think the best part, but you got the proportions pretty darn good.

 

The one thing that I will say is a bit 'weird' is the random patch of scales on his ear flaps. I like the scales at the nose and wing tips because they're at the edges, but the ear flap scales, where they are, don't make much sense to me.

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Hi, I'm Stormstriker.
You can call me Storm, or Stormy.
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Some stuff about me:
I'm female (if you couldn't guess).
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I don't really have a life.
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And that last one’s a biggie. If I've ever not done something that I said I would, just send me a PM. It probably just got lost on the massive mountain known as Things I Need To Do. It terrifies even expert climbers.
 
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I am not perfect. Please don't expect me to be perfect. I will disappoint you.
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I'm a fangirl. And a shipper. Right now, I'm obsessed with Doctor Who, Merlin, Sherlock, Harry Potter, How To Train Your Dragon, Percy Jackson (and related), Warriors, various cartoons, and probably countless other things that I forgot to list.
 
I'm a proud Hufflepuff!
FBAWTFT is amazing, let me tell you. And Newt Scamander. ‘Nuff said.
 
Well, if you've kept going this far, then I guess that means I haven't bored you to death yet. Or maybe I have…
Anyway, now we get into some of the interesting stuff.
 
STORMY’S OCS
 
Copperblaze Freyhelm
(also known as ‘that former self-insert that somehow developed a personality’)
by Fireflash
Copperblaze grew up in the midst of the Dragon War, near-miraculously surviving and staying completely intact through the chaos of it. Not one for pessimism, she did her best to cheer the village up through something she learned early on: pranking. While certainly never able to rival the infamous twins, Copperblaze was soon regarded as one not to mess with unless that Viking wanted their best axe tied to the rear end of a particularly grumpy yak.
But don't get her wrong, she wasn't really a wild, raucous prankster. Well, okay, maybe a little. Or a lot, actually. Secretly a kind, quiet, and empathetic individual at heart, Copperblaze could often be found reading and drawing. Of course, that was when she wasn't doing her best to cause mayhem and laughter, which took up most of her time.
Then the chief’s son saved the village on a Night Fury, and the world turned upside down. Dragons… were the friends of Vikings now. Copperblaze could barely contain her excitement. So many new possibilities had opened up! And not just for pranking, either.
While her pranks had done their job to make the village an overall happier place, they sometimes ostracized her from others her age. Now, this was her chance: to form a strong, lasting bond, to have and give everlasting trust, to have real friends, for once in her life!
Sadly, dreams didn't always come true. Though Copperblaze was among the first to enroll at the newly-established Dragon Training Academy, no dragon there seemed… right for her. Nadders were too vain and flighty, and the Gronckles were too lazy and slow. Nightmares? Too fiery. And don't get her started on the Zipplebacks. That had not been a fun week. 
Even that time she'd been offered a Whispering Death egg, still nothing happened. No bond formed. No realization of ‘this is my best friend’. Well, she'd managed to develop a serious phobia of the species in general, but Copperblaze didn't like to talk about that. You know, at all.
Alone again, Copperblaze resigned herself to her grounded fate. Until one day, in an abandoned clearing in the middle of the woods, she encountered a young, purple Skrill… but that's another story...
 
...which can be found here!
 
 
Thanks so much, IrishMexicanViking! It's so awesome, I literally can't put it into words!
Seriously, read it. It's the best.
 
Raika
by Vanilia Viking
No one knows who Raika’s birth parents are, not even Raika herself. All she knows is that if the teal Stormcutter that raised her from the egg isn't her mother, then something's seriously wrong with the world.
An excitable hatchling, Raika was always bouncing from one thing to the next, curious about everything around her. Getting into all sorts of danger was her best skill, and she'd frequently ticked off older dragons in her frequent mischief.
Raika wasn't old enough to understand why her mother suddenly separated the pair from all contact with other dragons, but she certainly was old enough to understand that she didn't like it one bit. Chalking it up to Windchaser’s overprotectiveness, Raika did her best to convince her mother that the bigger dragons weren't going to harm her, but to no avail. Windchaser would not budge.
Then a Prickleboggle came across them one day, informing the pair excitedly that the War had ended and the Queen was dead. Raika was confused. Windchaser, wanting to shelter her from the terrible War, hadn't told her anything about it, other than Vikings should be avoided at all costs, and so should unfamiliar dragons.
Then, for the first time that Raika could remember, her mother willingly left her side, with instructions to stay put and to not go looking for trouble. But of course, Raika didn't follow that. Curious about what her mother was doing, she decided to secretly tail her. Windchaser knew her way through the thick fog that surrounded Dragon Island. The problem was, Raika didn't.
Lost and disoriented, the young Skrill landed on a Viking-inhabited island that she'd never seen before, needing to give her tired wings a rest. It was there that, in a clearing she thought was unoccupied, Raika met a young Viking girl- starting off a new generation of mischief-making that no one was prepared for.
 
Windchaser
by Vanilia Viking
The day Windchaser found an abandoned Skrill egg would change her life forever, but for better or for worse? Often, she wasn't quite sure.
Having escaped the rule of the tyrannical Queen, the Red Death, Windchaser had left behind everything she held dear, including her beloved mate and any chance for hatchlings of her own. So when one was given to her, out of the blue, the motherly Stormcutter couldn't have left it behind if she tried. 
She couldn't, no, she wouldn't, leave the egg to the horrible fate of growing up without a family. And small though the family was, Windchaser vowed to do her best to take care of the Skrill hatchling.
Unfortunately, that particular Skrill hatchling proven to be very hard to take care of. Raika was continually getting into trouble of all sorts, and it was all Windchaser could do to keep her at least marginally safe. And when the little dragon learned how to fly, all Helheim broke loose.
When word was received that the Queen was searching for her former subject back, a desperate Windchaser was forced to take them both into hiding, an act that she feared would crush her young daughter. While thankfully that was not the case, Raika’s naturally attention-seeking personality caused her to focus most of her attention to her mother. It was a good day when Windchaser didn't want to tear her wings off from the frustration, and those good days were rarely found.
When a Prickleboggle (generally trusted among dragons, no matter their loyalties) told Windchaser the news that the War was over and the Queen was dead, she was naturally shocked. The Queen was invincible, she couldn't have been killed- could she? Hopeful, but not willing to take the news for granted, she flew to see it for herself, ordering her daughter to stay behind and not get into any trouble.
Confirming the formerly wild statement, Windchaser was overjoyed. She couldn't wait to tell Raika that their self-imposed exile had ended, and went to tell her immediately.
So when Raika wasn't where she'd left her, Windchaser naturally flew into a panic. Frantically searching every empty island in the area, her search was turned toward some of the not-so-empty ones, eventually finding her wayward daughter- but in the company of a Viking? Windchaser’s motherly instincts kicked in. Who knew what that Viking would do to her hatchling?
Eventually, after much convincing from Raika, Windchaser was finally able to see Vikings as people just as much as dragons were. She was still protective of her daughter, but after warming up to some of the non-dragon inhabitants, was much more comfortable letting Raika spend time among them.
And of course, that Viking that Raika always hung around with was officially adopted into the family, too. With the amount of time those two troublemakers spent together- well. It'd be just silly not to.
 
More coming soon!
 
ART!
(in no particular order)
Thanks so much to everyone who's drawn anything for me! I love them all!
 
 
Copperblaze by TosiLohi
 
Raika by Okamisusi
 
Raika chibi by FloofQueen
 
Dustcloud by Dragonist Hellen
 
Valentine Dustcloud by FloofQueen
 
Glowspot, my Mythical Whale Shark by Wutend Bonfire
Find his story HERE!
 
Raincloud, my Shadow Hunter by ScarfyWings
Find her story HERE!
 
Sunburst, my Vesupa by Bavelly
 
Torchburn, my Ukrainian Mistus by Megaboltphoenix
 
Peanut, my Night Hunter by Bluemoon20523
 
Copperblaze by Lululu6161
 
 
(did I miss something? I feel like I missed something... tell me if I missed something...)
 
 
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I put the read on scales

I put the read on scales there because that's how I've mpbeen doing it since I started drawing NFs... I think I was 8.... and I put them where I thought they were the most noticeable on the dragon XD

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Looks great! :D

Looks great! :D

What you could improve on though are the wings. The part where the bones hold the wings together could be less skinny and short and could look more like this:

So all I am saying is that the wings need more support in them and maybe the neck could be a little more thicker too. Exelent job though, keep practicing :D

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Do you know how much that

Do you know how much that bothers me about the wings? XD I'm usually pretty good at getting them right, like here:

 And even then, my dragon is a bit skinnier in some parts and fatter in some parts, cuz he is 13. So I draw them how I think a 13 year old dragon would look! Also thanks for the feedback!

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Whoop, here comes an art

Whoop, here comes an art student:

 

So the actual artistic look is good. Not trying to blow your face off with 200 different colours and neons, softened by the background which is very pleasing to look at, and the few little dashes of red make for nice little focal points across the piece.

 

Anatomy, a bit iffy but then again I have very high standards. The head could be a tad longer or thinner, the neck could use a little bit of thickening- it's about the same width as the base of the skull- and having a clearer transition between the chest and neck would be nice. The wing arm could be much thicker- don't be afraid to let things go off the page. The wing elbow could have gone much further down, and maybe the shoulder could start a little bit behind the arm.

The muscle indentations/lines are in good spots, but the scales could use some work. It's better to draw them as slightly darker spots rather than having outlines, or having very thin broken outlines.

Eye shape is very nice, I like that bit most (wow what great english i can do?)

The ears could be dropped down a little, and flattened, with even spacing between them, and maybe add a few more along the lower jaw and curving around a bit. The mouth is nice, but some distinction between the lips on the edge would look really nice.

Spines could begin a bit higher up and have some spacing between them, and the point could be dulled a bit.

But all in all, pretty good!

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Awesome! This is just what I

Awesome! This is just what I was looking for! Thanks!

(I wish I could be a student artist, but I don't think I'm old enough...)

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Don't get too excited it's

Don't get too excited it's just yr11.

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Don't worry. I just like it

Don't worry. I just like it when people give me awesome feedback. Everyone who replied did, sooo....

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A lil side note, the thing

A lil side note, the thing that helped me most with the head shape is that it is a corn kernel shape. A kinda squarish trapezium...

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I listened to you guys and

I listened to you guys and did a bit more changing to the original. I didn't fix the ears, though....

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VER NICE That wing elbow

VER NICE
That wing elbow could come down alot further though- each limb segment should be about the same length