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... I put almost everything I have into a drawing. My shading skills aren't that great, tho. But I would like some feedback on this, please! Like, not just the drawing, but how much it looks like a NF, or does the style I use make sense with the anatomy of a dragon? 

Thanks in advance!

Night~

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Viking Name: NightFuryAtom

Clan: The Scorpions (Wanna join? PM me)

Main Purpose for Playing: Entertainment before boredom hits

Main Dragon: Stormnight the deadly nadder 

Fandoms: HTTYD, Pokémon, Undertale, Wings of Fire, Steven Universe

Favorite song: Peace and Love (On the Planet Earth)

Favorite food: Macaroni!

Age: 14

 

 

 

 

My OCs

 

Pitch:

 

Gender: Male
Mate: (1st)None, (2nd) Shadow
Cubs: None
Length: 14'
Wingspan: 28'
Likes: Chicken, macaroni, games, puns, friends
Dislikes: Fighting, physical activity, sunsets
Fears: Spiders, heights (more like falling), decisions
Attributes: Four spikes on head and front feet, protective of trainer, dislikes fish, tolerates contact with eels, likes some fruit, drawing in dirt, mild temper, can get offended easily depending on the subject, doesn't like being wrong, has lots of insecurities, is a lot smaller and a bit faster than usual, doesn't eat much (sometimes)
Pitch was "born" on a small island not known to anyone but dragons. His egg was tiny, thus considered a runt by his parents. He did not seems suitable for the war they were preparing for. They threw his egg away, only to be rescued by his sister, Tundra. As she was sent away by their parents, a giant Monstrous Nightmare swooped in and killed Pitch's mother while his father fled with three extra eggs. Not seeing Pitch's egg, the nightmare left as well. However, two humans riding atop a disabled Night Fury found his egg. One of them took his egg home, hatched, and cared for him. When he was about 11, he ran away from home after accidentally setting his trainer's home on fire. Pitch came across a Green Death while he was away, which gave him a damaged eye and leg, but also the discovery of his Titan Form. Pitch now resides on an island he calls "The Dragon's Nest", with his trainer and a few close friends. 

 

 

 

 

Clay:

 

Gender: Male
Age: Exact unknown;juvenile
Mate/Love interest: none
Size: About the size of an under-average house cat
Likes: Meeting new people, hanging out with friends, learning about his species, food, play fighting
Dislikes: His family, being followed, creepy stories
Fears: Falling

 

Description: Clay is a jumpy young Canavis with lots to say. Whether it be about something he likes or hates, he can talk about it for a long time. He doesn't like flying with friends because he has a fear that he will bump into them somehow and fall. He is extremely friendly unlike most of his species, but can be shy at times. He can get mouthy, but only when he is frustrated. While he does like being around others, he tends to be a lone wolf, either because he wants to be or he is afraid of someone teasing him about his looks.

 

 

Art by yours truly~

 

 

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I like it!

I looks just like a night fury!

The shading looks fine.

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*UNDER CONSTRUCTION* - Lots of WIPs

 

WELCOME TO MY SIGNATURE- *signature banner will go here*

 

My Viking:

*Backstory will go here*
 

Art of VexyLu by others:

 

By FireFlash

By TosiLohi

 

By TosiLohi

By Bluemoon20523

By Werewolfgirl1253

 

By BoomBox74

 

By DuskDayBreak

 

By the ecliptic eight

 

By Arrowalker

 

By FireNightStar

 

By ScarfyWings

 

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*WORKING ON DRAGON BACKSTORIES*

 

Dragons-

Sandwraith- Nibbles

Nibbles is my first dragon.

It was my first day at school of dragons, when Viking hunters were attacking Berk.

With the help of Toothless, and the other riders, we were successfully able to stop them, but not before they captured a few dragons.

With my axe, and brain, I managed to unlock Nibbles from the cage she had been trapped in.

We bonded then, and were set to start our journey at the school, together.

Since then, Nibbles has become a ruby crystal sandwraith.

by LayKary

by Durgonhunter

 

Groncicle- Vexy

Trader Johann was late for his arrival at Berk one day, so I was sent to look for him.

I found his ship, destroyed and covered in ice, near Berk, in the ocean.

On the shore was Johann, explaining what had happened.- a little dragon had hopped on his ship.

I named her Vexy.

I helped Vexy find her way home, back to her family.

I watched her grow, and as she did we bonded.

By ShiroKageFox

 

•Groncicle- IceWind

IceWind is Vexy's little sister, who I rescued when Mildew through her, and her other silblings off the edge of a cliff, and into the water.

Vexy and her mother where so thankful, they let me keep one.

 

Nadder- Lulu

I got Lulu out of the hatchery's collection of eggs. 

 By FloofQueen

 

Death song- Melody

I rescued Melody from her mum's nest, after she was abandoned by her. 

 

Armorwing- Armor

I saved Armor from dragon hunters and she bonded with me. 

By FireNightSky

 

Smokebreath- Smog 

Smog is the second smoke breath I got. I won him in battle. 

 

Smokebreath- Skyfog

Skyfog is the first smokebreath I got. I also won her in battle.

By Nightfuryatom4

 

Whispering death- Groundwhisper

I got groundwhisper after finding her egg in the tunnels under Berk. 

 

Whispering death- Groundquake

I won groundquake in battle. 

 

Whispering death- Groundshake

I also won Groundshake in battle. 

 

Whispering death- GroundBurrow

I won GroundBurrow in battle.

 

•Whispering death- GroundSmasher

I won GroundSmasher in battle.

 

•Screaming death- Screech

I won Screech in battle. 

 

•Razorwhip- Cut

I found Cut's egg in an abandoned ship. 

 

Razorwhip- Snip

I won Snip in battle. 

By Vospader

 

Hotburple- Grunt

I won Grunt in battle. 

 

Snafflefang- Fangsnaffle

I won Fangsnaffle in battle. 

by dogloven

 

Snafflefang- Fangsnaffle Jr

I won fangsnaffle in battle.

By FroztWulf

 

Flightmare- Frightmare

I won Frightmare in battle. 

by Scarfywings (animated by mrizky)

 

Moldruffle- Mold

I won Mold in battle.

by Umbreon27

 

Speed stinger- Sting

I won sting in battle. 

By Okamisusi

 

•Speed stinger- Goldie

I won Gol hidein battle.

 

Fireworm queen- Helios

I won Helios in battle. 

By Scarfywings

 

•Shockjaw- Helpfulwarrior

I won Helpful warrior in battle. I named her after one of my friends.

 

•Hobblegrunt- Wobbles

I won wobbles in battle.

 

Eruptadon- Flare

I needed help, and didn't have a dragon that could fly into the depths of a volcano, so I got Flare's help.

 

Singetail- Frizzle

I saved Fizzle from being auctioned by dragon hunters.

by Arrowalker

 

•Flamewhipper- Firelash

Firelash stowed away on my dragon, after my journey on impossible island.

 

Snowwraith- Blizzard

Blizzard is my racing dragon.

by TosiLohi

 

•Typhoomerang- BurntSwirl

I won BurntSwirl in battle.

 

Titan Stormcutter- BreezeHopper

BreezeHopper is my fast storm cutter 

By Arrowalker

 

•Silver Phantom- Soar

Soar is my teen Phantom

 

•Raincutter- Splash

I won Splash in battle

 

•Triple stryke- Amethyst 

I was given Amethyst from her mother, for saving her.

By Wutend Bonfire

 

•Grapple grounder- *currently hatching*

 

Eggs:

1x Groncicle

1x Sandwraith

1x Triple stryke 

 

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Adoptables-

*Im working on including names, etc

 

Scenseredshocked, my Shellfire, by Bluemoon20523

 

Hibiscus, my Sequin Wing, by Flowercrystal

 

Amethyst, a FriendFriend draggo, by 1flower

 

Stormrider, a Stormchaser, by Scarfywings

 

Sunfly, a Gardendigger, by Scarfywings

 

Galaxywhip, a Vesupa, by Bavelly

 

Peach, an Infertide, by Alicornbrodie

 

DeathSky, a baby nightfury, by Nightfuryatom4

 

Mysterystripes, a Marshtiger, by themasterplan47

 

PurpleFuzz, a Woolly Howl, by Wutend Bonfire

 

GreyShell, a Shelleye, by GoldenWraith

 

Issie, a Mountain Jackoat, by Scarfywings

 

Kiki, a Hyeagle owl, by Scarfywings

 

Ziggy, a Ratagator, by Scarfywings

 

Keja, a Foxret, by Scarfywings

 

Eza, an Impatypus, by Scarfywings

 

Rei, a dingorse, by ScarfyWings

 

Deathsky, and another nightfury, by Wutend Bonfire

 

GreySky, a Muddicry, by chameishida

 

VioletWraith, a White Mamba, by Megaboltphoenix

 

WinterBreeze, a Svalbard Howl, by Okamisusi

 

 

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Thank you to all the amazing artists who have done art for me!

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Thanks :)

Thanks :)

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No! Bad Tigerus and Euphrates!!! Do not eat my subject!!

That's Pitch, right? It's really good!

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Look who's actually doing something with this again!

 

 

 

Profile pic was done by the fantastic Katarile! TYSM!!!

 

 

I just wanna start off by saying, I have no idea what I'm doing. Help me. 

 

I heard that ya peeps don't like it when people have a ton of pictures because it uses more data, so I put my signature in a Google Document. Plus, it's easier for ms to edit then. 

 

So just click the link if you actually care.

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1i1Bb53Jo6aLM5N4P-cw88WAR4Iu52FDDSb_e1-hxjow/edit?usp=drivesdk

 

For the rest of you...

(probably most of you honestly. I've never been the "interesting" type.) 

 

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Yea it is Pitch, and thanks!

Yea it is Pitch, and thanks!

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Wow, that's really awesome-looking! And I feel you with the shading, I'm horrible at that. Top of my siggy is a pretty good example of that...

 

To me, that looks just like a Night Fury! The head is, I think the best part, but you got the proportions pretty darn good.

 

The one thing that I will say is a bit 'weird' is the random patch of scales on his ear flaps. I like the scales at the nose and wing tips because they're at the edges, but the ear flap scales, where they are, don't make much sense to me.

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I put the read on scales

I put the read on scales there because that's how I've mpbeen doing it since I started drawing NFs... I think I was 8.... and I put them where I thought they were the most noticeable on the dragon XD

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Looks great! :D

Looks great! :D

What you could improve on though are the wings. The part where the bones hold the wings together could be less skinny and short and could look more like this:

So all I am saying is that the wings need more support in them and maybe the neck could be a little more thicker too. Exelent job though, keep practicing :D

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Do you know how much that

Do you know how much that bothers me about the wings? XD I'm usually pretty good at getting them right, like here:

 And even then, my dragon is a bit skinnier in some parts and fatter in some parts, cuz he is 13. So I draw them how I think a 13 year old dragon would look! Also thanks for the feedback!

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Whoop, here comes an art

Whoop, here comes an art student:

 

So the actual artistic look is good. Not trying to blow your face off with 200 different colours and neons, softened by the background which is very pleasing to look at, and the few little dashes of red make for nice little focal points across the piece.

 

Anatomy, a bit iffy but then again I have very high standards. The head could be a tad longer or thinner, the neck could use a little bit of thickening- it's about the same width as the base of the skull- and having a clearer transition between the chest and neck would be nice. The wing arm could be much thicker- don't be afraid to let things go off the page. The wing elbow could have gone much further down, and maybe the shoulder could start a little bit behind the arm.

The muscle indentations/lines are in good spots, but the scales could use some work. It's better to draw them as slightly darker spots rather than having outlines, or having very thin broken outlines.

Eye shape is very nice, I like that bit most (wow what great english i can do?)

The ears could be dropped down a little, and flattened, with even spacing between them, and maybe add a few more along the lower jaw and curving around a bit. The mouth is nice, but some distinction between the lips on the edge would look really nice.

Spines could begin a bit higher up and have some spacing between them, and the point could be dulled a bit.

But all in all, pretty good!

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The Alpha Trilogy

Reign of the Deep Queen | Refuge of the Blue King | Age of the Midnight Prince

https://image.ibb.co/ji115w/trilogy_card.png  

(haha see i can edit)(sort of)

We know that Vikings settled in the Archipelago a little over 500 years ago, but what stopped them before that? In the Dragon Nest, a stolen child must try to overthrow a tyrant. Her descendant, a volitile soul, runs from revenge until he cannot go any further. His son, a strong-willed leader, takes on a new name and builds his own empire until the past catches up with even him.

(Progress on this will be slowing down since I've become comfortable with my writing skills and styles and I am moving into original works and more ambitious projects. AotMP will be finished in the same style it is currently in, but RotDQ and RotBK may be shorter and lower priority, if I decide to do them)

 

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Characters!

 

Ebony and Flies With Storms

(is this a self-insert-babies-first-oc type character?)
(absolutely, what do you think i am???? quality content creator?? u fool....)

https://i.imgur.com/KntmXPM.png

by me(left), and Chameishida (right)

Dramatic and petty with no impulse control to speak of, some would say her intelligence is wasted on revenges over small things, always done in very unique and specific ways. That’s not to say she’s a bad person, or easily angered; but with an oddly selective memory, she can sometimes have a (unintended) threatening presence. Storms, on the other hand, has a far more calm demeanour and often acts *begrudgingly* as a vent for Ebony, be it random ideas or long-winded complaints.

- Working on detailed design of Ragus (her sword)

 

--BACKSTORY UNDER WORKS--

 

 

Pallus- the liberated Roman

- has a terrible memory (especially with dragon species names)

- generally avoids conflict

- has absolutely become an epic bard that parties hard

- trapped in a permenant state of i-kinda-know-what-im-doing-but-not-really-so-its-awkward

 

 

Yzar and Lochiel

https://i.imgur.com/gb2HP12.png

- hey who wants some immortal quakens?

- thats right, these lovely ladies have surpassed mortality to be together

- only got art for Yzar so far, but Lochiel will be gettin some tasty eye-treats soon

- i love them so much.

 

Sir Edmund

By Silvernight

The draconic embodiment of a middle class victorian era man, with extra RUFFIAN SPANKING ABILITY

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Awesome! This is just what I

Awesome! This is just what I was looking for! Thanks!

(I wish I could be a student artist, but I don't think I'm old enough...)

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Don't get too excited it's

Don't get too excited it's just yr11.

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Don't worry. I just like it

Don't worry. I just like it when people give me awesome feedback. Everyone who replied did, sooo....

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A lil side note, the thing

A lil side note, the thing that helped me most with the head shape is that it is a corn kernel shape. A kinda squarish trapezium...

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I listened to you guys and

I listened to you guys and did a bit more changing to the original. I didn't fix the ears, though....

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VER NICE That wing elbow

VER NICE
That wing elbow could come down alot further though- each limb segment should be about the same length